FF:Felonious chapter 35A-28/3/2019

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue

Panic trembling in her exhausted limbs she sprinted forward, away from the voices behind them. she didn't care if her pace has slowed down or increased, she didn't dare to turn back. The only thing which every cell in her body is screaming which she kept chanting like a hymn is escape, run, faster.


Khushi is an orphan who gets very much connected on an emotional level to a kid. When he gets separated from her she starts her search to reach him. In this process will she touch the hidden strings? Why is it so difficult to reach him? Will anyone stand by her side through this journey?

A fight between truth and love, a fight for freedom. Who will win?

The story may seem confusing at the start because it reveals all characters in different situations at different times but as you keep reading you will get connected to it so enjoy the story and do comment as it encourages me to write more.


Any resemblance of the storyline or dialogues to other is just a coincidence and please do let me know if any such thing is noticed.

Hello guys ...Do let me know your thoughts on the prologue..if I should continue or not.

I'm a very big fan of IPKKND..I'm silent reader till now but don't know what made me post the story today. I have been imagining and spinning stories around the famous couple but never dared to post.

INDEX

Prologue 2-Below

Prologue3,Chapter 1,2-page 2

Chapter 3,4,5,6-page 3

Chapter 7-page 4

Chapter 8-page 6

Chapter 9,10-page 8

Chapter 11-page9

Chapter 12,13-page 10

Chapter 14- page 12

Chapter 15- Page 14

Chapter 16- page 16

Chapter 17- page 17

Chapter 18- page 20

Chapter 19- page 22

Chapter 20- page 25

Chapter 21- page 27

Chapter 22- page 29

Chapter 23- page 31

Chapter 24- page 33

Chapter 25- page 35

Chapter 26- page 37

Chapter 27- page 39

Chapter 28- page 41

Chapter 29- page 43

Chapter 30- page 45

Chapter 31- page 47

Chapter 32- page 48

Chapter 33- page 49

Chapter 34- page 51

Chapter 35A-page53

Chapter 35B-page54

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Posted: 7 years ago
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welcome to the forum.
interesting start. continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting waiting for next update of this ff
welcome to ipkknd forum
Edited by bubulswt - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting
Khushi is running from someone it seems
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue 2

"Dad?!how many times I asked you not to exhaust yourself for trivial things?What is the use of Hari Prakash then?For fun?Even I'm at home now,you could have called me?"

"Asking for help for every work which I can actually manage myself makes me feel as a burden and reminds me of my inability to do so.I managed till now and can do so in future too.I don't need any servant."saying so he pushed his wheelchair into room.

He neither likes to argue with his child over such silly things nor want anyone to help him or keep a watch over him 24*7 as if he is a infant.



Guys...Thank you so much for your response ...I didn't expect response at such short time...
do let me know what do u think ? if there are any mistakes or is there anything i could do from my end to make the story look more interesting...criticism is very much welcome
I'm still thinking on if I have to start on the main plot or put up 1 more prologue


Edited by varanasi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue 3
Wiping sweat from forehead,she collapsed onto the nearest rock.Arms and legs all bruised and cut,clothes looked like rags tattered.It had not been long before she heard the heavy foot steps nearing them.Time to run again.Wind knocked out of her lungs when she couldn't find her companion beside.

" Huhhh... "eyes flew open to the white roof top and it took sometime to realize that she is in her room,on her bed,safe and sound.Turning to her right she found him sleeping,to assure herself of his presence,she bent forward and kissed him on his cheek.
" Khushi..?"he woke up with the feather light touch of her lips.
" I'm fine, NK."


Guys do let me know from which prologue you want me to start the story.

Edited by varanasi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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all are awesome dear
i like number 3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Alll 3 prologues are intriguing.. looking forward to read the story.. do continue soon.. best wishes and happy writing Felonious 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 1

Wiping sweat from forehead,she collapsed onto the nearest rock.Arms and legs all bruised and cut,clothes looked like rags tattered.It had not been long before she heard the heavy foot steps nearing them.Time to run again.Wind knocked out of her lungs when she couldn't find her companion beside.

" Huhhh... "eyes flew open to the white roof top and it took sometime to realize that she is in her room,on her bed,safe and sound.Turning to her right she found him sleeping,to assure herself of his presence,she bent forward and kissed him on his cheek.

" Khushi..?"he woke up with the feather light touch of her lips.

" I'm fine, NK."Leaning back on to the pillow her thoughts raced back to earlier days in life.


HOME FOR NEED-that was where she had been living since she was 2 days old. There were no details about her parents or the lady who got her admitted here seeing her vulnerable state on roadside.

The guardians of the home Mr&Mrs Manohar Gupta did all they could to provide basic needs,education,medical help to the children there. All said and done children were still able to distinguish between the quality of life if their case was otherwise.

While the couple were kind enough to take up the responsibilities of unwanted there was always emotional bond which lacked.

She still remembered the day when she first saw him. She was cleaning her wardrobe when was distracted by a commotion across her room. Running towards Mrs. Manorama's cabin she assumed what could be reason for ruckus. A new member to the existing list of unwanted.

Waiting at the doorstep she couldn't resist peeping in and the moment her eyes caught hold of his figure, it was like that love at first sight for her which they show in films . That moment she knew she found her companion , whom she will love and care for till last breath.


Italics is flashback. Riddhimaa dear as you requested...

Do let me know what do you think ? If there are any mistakes or is there anything I could do from my end to make the story look more interesting...criticism is very much welcome

Any resemblance of the story line or dialogues to other is just a coincidence and please do let me know if any such thing is noticed..

Edited by varanasi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good going
So khushi and NK are together

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