Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/Chapter 13/ (Pg-133) - Page 104

Originally posted by: Subhashini_chow

Yes Madhu His torture is equal to that ..and U r sweet Monster crossed all his Limits 😡...

he not going to more than this ..if he did we r going to plan for murder Him 😈

Mahi couldn't help him this time

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

No no dnt do that, chapter 13 is nothing infront of one update in between I dnt remember which update

Just follow the flow😆

Ouch Many more 😲

PART 9

Ohh..! And they have abducted Aastha..😲

Avdhooth is the reason😕 for them to kidnap her..God knows what the mystery is all about

Anyways Loved the way you wrote the whole chapter..👏

Now I will comment on next chapter😊

PART 10

Oh my God ..😲 Angie was also Shlok's prey ..!!! He even went to a hotel with her..

Great storyline Mahi..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️This one was quite unexpected

Anyways the ending part was really fearsome..The skull oh my god ..eeewww..🤢

You are an awesome writer dear🤗

PART 11

Shlok is one sexy devil ☺️ He knows where her weak points are and is successful in seducing her..even by his dark ways..😲

Anyways loved this update as always it was really awesome..👍🏼

The email message was spooky..😲😲😲 Anjali..?? Now where did she come from..?What has Avdhoot got to do with her..Lots of mysteries to solve my dear...I am super excited😃

PART 12

Awww poor Shlok..He has had a bitter past I guess..I felt bad for him ..😭

Aastha is getting stronger now..Good for her..

Shlok is influenced by Aastha..Hmm..Now that is a good sign..😊

Avdhoot is hiding the truth from the police and he is going to pay for that..

I am really loving this plot Mahi..Awesome creation dear🤗

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Nahi nahi, no murder pls, itseems bechara went through a lot, I want him to regret for his deeds...

I want him to crave for her after reproach😆, I know I'm expecting too much... but after this much pain we deserve atleast that..

Originally posted by: ..AngelicAnu..

Ouch Many more 😲

Mahi u hd put a danger board there na? 😕

If nt, Go and Get one for me 😆

Originally posted by: hp_2006

PART 9

Ohh..! And they have abducted Aastha..😲

Avdhooth is the reason😕 for them to kidnap her..God knows what the mystery is all about

Anyways Loved the way you wrote the whole chapter..👏

Now I will comment on next chapter😊

Originally posted by: hp_2006

PART 11

Shlok is one sexy devil ☺️ He knows where her weak points are and is successful in seducing her..even by his dark ways..😲

Anyways loved this update as always it was really awesome..👍🏼

The email message was spooky..😲😲😲 Anjali..?? Now where did she come from..?What has Avdhoot got to do with her..Lots of mysteries to solve my dear...I am super excited😃