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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Guys

Abi and I here with another story... This time it completely revolves around KVRL... We wanted to show them in a totally different perspective... Let's see how it works out... Here we go...

Pic Credits - Krithika

INDEX

Part 1 (Prologue Chapter)
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6

Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Let this be the Prologue Chapter... To give a little background info on the story...

FYI : All parts are created with equal contribution from Abi and me!

Part 1 :

Ayer : Ketti melam Ketti melam...

Maangalyam Thanthunaanenaa

Mama Jeevana Hethunaa

Kante Badhnaami Shubage

Twam Jeeva Saradadat Satam

Manapennai thottu thali katti avalai avanadhu manaiviyai aakinan Mappillai

Ayer : Rendu perum Agniyai suthi vaango...

Mappillai pennin kaiyai pidithu Agni satchiyil sutri vandhaan...

Mandhirangal solli, manamedaiyil nadathum shaasthirangal mudindha pin...

Ayer : Ponnu Mappilai periyavaa kaalil vilundhu aasirvaadhaam vaangungo...

Mudhalil maapilai veetai serndha munnorgal idam aasirvaadham vaanginaargal... Aduthu, penin veetai serndha periyavargal idam aasirvaadham petraargal iruvarum...

Thirumana mandapadhil shaasthirangal mundindha pin, thirumana jodiyai vaazhtha vandhirundha anaivarukkum rusiyaaga virundhu parimaarinargal...

Nalla neram mudiyum munn, maapillai pennai jodi aaga vazhi anupivaithargal maapillai veetirku...

Mappilaiyin thangai, thirumana jodirku aarathi sutri, iruvaraiyum vazhadhu kaal eduthu vaithu veetirkul sella sonnaal...

Mappilaiyin thai veetirku vandha pudhu maramugalai pujai arairku alaithu sendru, avalai kuthu vizhakai eatra sonnargal...

Kadavul idam aasirvaadham petra pin, avargal saatchiaaga, marubadiyum oru murai periyorgal idam aasirvaadham vaanginaargal iruvarum...

Periyorgal kura, thirumana jodi ella shaasthira sambradhayamum nandraaga mudithaar.

Kalyana veetai serndha anaivarum virundhai mudithuvittu, muzhu manadhil sandhoshamaaga pesikondu irundhaargal...

Pennin veetai sernthavargal, pirapida aarambithaar... Kadaisiyaaga manapennin petrorgal...

R Dad : Raji ma... Appo naangalum kelamburom da...

Raji : (Her eyes pool with tears) Appa...

R dad : Inga paaru... Alaadhe da... Appa va paarkanum na, oru phone adi, udane bus ah pudichu inga vandhuduren... Neeyum eppo venum naalum Appa va paarka varalaam...

Raji : Ennaku kashtama irukku pa...

R dad : Inimel idhu dhaan unnoda veedu... Pazhagiko ma...

Raji : (Reluctantly) Sari pa... Neenga paarthu poittu vaanga... Amma... neenga appa, thatha, apparom aachi ah nalla paarthukonga...

R dad : (Smiles) Nee sollave vendaam da... Ava engala nalla paaruthupa...

Raji : (Nods) Sari pa...

Raji's parents walk up to her in-laws...

R dad : Sambandhi... Veetuku orey ponnu raji adhanala romba chellam kuduthu vazhathuttom... Ava edhavudhu thappu senja neenga periya manasu panni manichidunga... Ava edhuvum thappa seiya mattaa irunthallum naan solluren...

K dad : Enna sambandhi neenga... Raji ungaluku mattum ponnu illa... Inime engalukum ava ponnu dhan...

K mom : Ava ennaku marumagal illa... Ennoda magal... Ennoda ponna eppadi parthukanum nu ennaku theriyum... Dhayariyam ah vittutu ponga...

R mom : Raji paarthu nadanthuko... Edhavadhu naa, udane phone pannu ma... (Starts crying)

Raji : Sari ma... Athai Mama enna nalla paarthupaanga... Sandhosham ah poittu vaanga...

R dad : Ey Bakkiyam... Nee oruthi... Unna paarthu Rajiyum aluga poraa... Sirichutte sollu...

Everyone smiles...

R dad : Appadiye Mappilai kittaiyum oru vaarthai sollitu kelambidurom sambandhi...

K dad : Idho kupiduren... (Raises voice to call) Karthik inga vaa... Sambandhi kelamburaanga paaru...

Karthik walks out the room...

Karthik : Mama, nallabadiyaa poittu vaanga... Athai paarthukonga...

R dad : Sari maapilai... En ponna nallabadiya paarthukonga... Ava edhavadhu thappu senja neenga dhaan eduthu sollanum... Chinna ponnu, veli ulagam theriyama valarndhutta...

Karthik gives a tight smile and slightly nods...

R mom : Apparom sambandhi, Raji kku avalo samaikka theriyaadhu... Neenga dhaan sollikudukanum... Ava seekiram kathupa...

K mom : Adhu ellam naan paarthukuren sambandhi... Innum oru maasam ingaye dhaan iruppom... Adhu kulla ellathaiyum set pannikuduthuttu dhaan povom...

R dad : Sambandhi neenga innum rendu vaaram dhaane irukuradha solli irundheenga...

K dad : Pillaingala vida velai ah mukkiyam... Ivanga rendu perakkum irundhu ellathaiyum vasadhi aaki kuduthuttu dhaan povom...

R dad : Romba sandhosham sambandhi... Naanum pudhusa kalyanam aanavanga, thaniya eppadi irupaanga nnu bayandhen... Ippo nimadhiyaa irukku... Sari sambandhi naanga kelamburom... Maapilai, poittu varom...

Karthik : Sari Mama... Poittu oru phone panni sollidunga...

K mom : Amaa sambandhi... Ooruku poi serndha udane ou phone pannunga...

R mom : Kandipaa solrom... Raji paarthu irundhuka...

R dad : Raji ma, poittu varom da...

Raji : Sari pa, paarthu poittu vaanga...

R's parents leave...

She feels sad to be separated from her family, yet doesn't show that...

Everyone comes inside the home after sending them off...

K mom : Raji... Amma Appa va vittu pirunju irukka kashtam ah dhaan irukkum... Naanum Maama vum unnoda Amma Appa maadhiri dhaan... Nee free ah irukkalaam da...

Raji : (Smiles) Thanks Athai... Neenga irukka appo ennaku enna kavalai...

K mom : Sandhosham... Edhuvaa irundhaalum thaiyangama en kitta pesu ma...

Raji : (Nods) Sari athai...

K dad : Karthik... Vishnu eppo da varaan? Ungala veetula vittutu, avan enga poitaan... ?

Karthik : Adhu vandhu pa... Avan vera house paarka poi irukkan...

K mom : Dei ennada solra? Enga kitta sollave illa?

Karthik : Adhu illa... Ippo veetula neenga, Appa, apparom... (Looks at R)

K mom : Hmm...

Karthik : Ippo nee family person, naan irukuradhu avalo sari varaadhu nnu solraan...

K dad : Avanukku uncomfortable ah irukkuradhu natural dhaan... So okay, naan edhavadhu sharing homes search pannava?

Karthik : Vendaam pa... Avan oru thani veedu paarthu irukkan... Angaye polaam nnu... Innaiku night shift pannuradhu kaaga dhaan poi veeda paarthu ready panna poi irukaan...

K mom : Thani veeda? Dei paavam cook panna kashta paduvaane da... Plus bore adikum la?

Karthik : Hmm... Sonna ketka maatenguraan...

K dad : Avalo dhaane vishayam... Naan solren daa... En pecha kettu dhaane aaganum...

Karthik : (Smiles) Eppadiyaavadhu convince pannunga pa...

K dad : (Notices the front door) Idho avane vandhuttane... Iru iru pesuvom...

Vishnu walks in and looks confused as everyone is staring at him...

Vishnu : Ennachu pa... Enna pathi pesura maadhiri theriyudhe...

K dad : Sir enga poittu vareenga?

Vishnu : Appa adhu vandhu... Oru veedu...

K dad : Theriyum da... Veedu paarka ponnae... Nee enga venaalum po... Anaa veetula periyavanga kitta sollitu poirkanum ah illaiya?

Vishnu : Sorry pa... Usually Karthi kitta solra maadhiri avan kittaiye sollitu poitten...

K dad : Naalaiku kalaila varaikkum engaiyum poga kudaadhu nnu sonnen la?

Vishnu : Sorry pa... Venum naa naan naalu thopukaranam poduren... Anaa enna ippadi kelvi ketkaadheenga... Inimel neenga enna sonnalum naan adha meera maaten...

K dad : (Smiles at K) Sari appo, paarthu vachu irukeeye oru veedu, adha cancel pannu...

Vishnu : (Shocked) Appa?

Everyone laughs at seeing his reaction...

K dad : Onnum solladhe da... Idho indha flat kku opposite la oru flat irukku... And there is one flat on the left side of this flat... Edhu venum unnaku?

Vishnu : Adhu illa pa... Siva pujai la edhukku karadi maadhiri naa?

K dad : Dei pakathu veetula irukka ennada pretchanai unnaku? Inga dhaan ivanga rendu perum irukaanga... Saapadu daily vaangikalaam... Karthi irukka naala unnakum bore adikaadhu...

Vishnu : Adh- (K dad stares at him) Sari pa...

Karthik : Eppadi pa rendu veedu irukku nnu theriyum?

K dad : Idhu enna periya vishayam... Un flat kku right side irukka neighbors kitta pesinen... Adhaan theriyum... Sari Vishnu, left side ah opposite ah?

Vishnu : Opposite okay dhaan pa... Naan poi andha veeda cancel pannitu advance inga kuduthu book panniduren...

K mom : Vishnu... Naalaiku kaalaila oru five am to five thirty am nalla neram ah irukku... Appove pudhu veetukku paal kaaichu kudichudalaam...

Vishnu : Five kke vaa? Amma adhu ennaku naduraathiri...

K mom : Ennaikaavadhu elundhirika enna pretchanai? Olunga elundhudu Vishnu... Or semma adi vilum kalangathala...

Vishnu : Sari okay ma... Naan first poi indha house ah book pannuren...

Vishnu leaves...

Raji : Athai...

K mom : Sollu Raji...

Raji : Jo enga athai?

Jo : (Shouts from her room) Anni, anni... Naan inga irukken... Room cleaning...

Raji : (Smiles) Sari okay...

K dad : Vijaya... Ellarukum poi coffee pottu kondu vaa...

K mom : Saringa.. Idho varen...

Raji : Athai, naan pottu eduthutu varen...

K dad : Vendaam ma... Neenga rendu perum first poi freshen up aagunga... Vishnu vandhadhum ellarum dinner la meet pannalaam...

KR nod and go to their room...

R sits on the bed and unpacks her luggage... She takes everything to the cupboard...

Karthik : Oru nimisham...

Raji : Enna?

Karthik : Indha cupboard la ennoda stuff laam irukku...

Raji : So?

Karthik : Idhu ennoda cupboard... Vera yaarukkum not allowed...

Raji : Appo naan en stuff laam enga vaikuradhu?

Karthik : That's not my problem...

Raji glares at him...

To Be Continued...

Precap :

Convo between KV...

KR and family at dinner... What happens...

New Character Intro...

Stay Tuned...

~~ Sush and Abi ~~

Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

SUSH n ABHI...What a Surprise!!!...😛😛

Didnt expect this..

Title...SEMA...👏👏

Prologue...first tamizh a eluthinathu romba azhaga iruku...athavuthu naalu linesla vishyatha simple n neat a solliteenga...

KR ku marriage aaiducha first e...appo ella problemum solved nu sollunga...😆

K ku sister..?...super...

Nathanar prachanailam varathula?...hehe...varavum kodathu...move it in a positive way..its my order too..😉

K's parents so sweet...

Vishnu opposite flatku vara porana?..appo jollya irukum😆

Raji samaika theiryatha avalovathu?...appa karthikoda gathi?...lol..

Karthik...romba than...appa rajioda stuffslam enga vaikaratham??...appo ivangalukulla sandaiya???...en?...ethuku??

Precap...

new char intro??..

KR dinnerku porangala?...enna nadaka pothu??

ennala wait panna mudiyathu..nalaike update venum...okay?😛

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Guys :)

Super happy you both are making a new story

Firstly All the best im know for a fact it will be amazing :)😃

now coming to the story... KR married and K doesnt like the marriage it seems, hmm different concept waiting for the story to revealed...

K's parents seem like the nice type hopefully it stays that way and R's dad meesai got to to love the caring dad and the bond between father and daughter :)

K's parents and the bond between Raji atm is nice to see :)

Happy that it revolves around our fantastic four KVRL :) super happy

KV near each other hopefully V will knock some sense into K for whatever the reason is for his behaviour loool

V and K's dad nice to see the bond between them all hopefully all stays well :)

Oh so in this K has a sister wonder how Raji's and his sister relationship will be paapom

K romba overu thaan aana funny too this reminds me of another serial scene (Sush you may guess what im referring too😆) but like the concept wonder how you will take it and wonder if Raji is bold or the crying type in your story waiting to see 😃

but theres more to be revealed and this one part wont do waiting for more and you both best update on regular basis solliten😛 only joking... whenever you can guys alongside the other ff :) but defo looking forward to this ff :) seems very intriguing :)

All the best Sush and Abi 👏👏

waiting for the next part do update soon😉 i dunno about you both but im super excited for the next part hehehehe thanks guys :) and as bro said seekrama update pannunga that meaning tomorrow😆😆😆

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kanya13

@kanya13

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi sush and abi, wow great start ..different but nice story line . K and R kulla initial ah set aagala pola ..now itself waiting for next part .. All d best sisters..

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tamilgermangirl

@tamilgermangirl

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Wooww..a new FF...👏👏

Great start abi and sush..! First part looks interesting..can't wait to read the next part ..😊

Update soon, eagerly waiting 😉😊

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Kashtame illama kalyanam? Adhukku k prachanai with r??? Idhellam romba overru ...

Nice starting:)

Cute v as usual... Avanoda l enga???

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow.. Thats a surprise from you both AbiSh..

Superb Start 👍🏼 maybe dinner la Lakshmi intro vaa? just a guess.. 😃

special mention to the title.. its nice. 👏

Already waiting for next parts 😊

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Shravya1

@Shravya1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

A new FF.. Wow! 👏

Great beginning! Everyone seems happy with each other except the leads.. It's very interesting..

K is not even ready to share cupboard.. 😆

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

superb start Abi & sush . lovely to read it.

wow jo too here really missed karthik jo combo as bro-sis well inga vanthachu super.

waiting for next part da

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