~*~ FF - Sernthirundhe Kathirundhom... (AbiSh) ~*~ Part 6 - Page 56

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Here is the Fourth Part of the story... The story actually moves a lot further than so far... Also, we'll clarify a few things regarding the story at the end of this part... That's it... 😃

Read and share your feedback Friends! 😃

FYI : All parts are created with equal contribution from Abi and me!

Part 4 :

K goes to the room... R follows... She goes in and closes the door...

Raji : (Snaps) Oru nimisham...

Karthik : Enna?

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Sodakku pottu kupidura... Thimuru...

Raji : (Sarcastically) Ungalukku naan iron panni tharattuma?

Karthik : Ey enna di over ah nadikkura?

Raji : (Smirks) Paarrah... Kandu pudichutta... Paravallaiye unnakum konjam moolai irukku...

Karthik : Mariyadhai ah inga irunthu poidu... Enna kaduppu yethadha...

Raji : Idha dhaan naan appove sonnen... Inga irunthu poidu nnu evalo kenjunnen... Nee kettiya? Ippo naan sonnadhaiye ennaku solra?

Karthik : Sonna ketka maataiyaa? Podi...

Raji : Adhukulai ah? Unna naan innum ivlo torture panna vendiyadhu irukku...

Karthik : Nee irukarudhe ennaku torture dhaan di... Idhula nee thanniya vera pannanuma?

Raji : Pinna panna vendaama ? Inimel naan dhaan da unnakku torture... Unna inga irundhu oda vidala... Naan kovilpatti Rajalakshmi illa...

Karthik : (Smirks) Edhu nee enna?

Raji : Nee enna aaga poraa nnu innum konjam naal la paarkka dhaane poraa...

Karthik : (Smirks) Yaar enna aagura nnu paarkalaam...

He leaves from there...

Raji sighs and takes out her suitcase and goes through her outfits... While she spots a white, golden bordered salwar... She slightly smiles without realizing and thinks back...

FLASHBACK :

Raji looks into the mirror, satisfied and turns around...

"Eppadi daa irukku?" she asks cutely, raising one eyebrow...

He blinked... Just merely blinked... "Semma azhaga irukka Raji... En angel nnu marubadiyum prove pannura..." he compliments her...

She blushes...

END OF FLASHBACK

Raji shakes her head puts the salwar back, gets another and leaves to get ready...

KVRL get ready for work... At the parking lot...

Lakshmi : Cha... Modhal naal velaikku pogum bodhu dhaan ippadi aaguma?

Raji : (Walks) Ennadi enna aachu?

Lakshmi : Scooty start aaga maatengudhu...

Raji : Shabbah... Nalla sagunama irukke...

Lakshmi : Nee vera vaiya vaikkadhe di... One month leave kalichu ippo dhaan first day Office kku porom... Pch...

Raji : Sari auto la polaama?

Lakshmi : Adhu ellam othu varaadhu... Late aagum...

Vishnu walks towards RL...

Vishnu : Ennanga... Enna aachu?

Raji : Scooty repair Vishnu... Adhaan eppadi office kku polaam nnu yosichuttu irukkom...

Vishnu : Enga... Neenga rendu perum Nettech Adyar branch dhaane?

Raji : Hmm...

Vishnu : Naanga Mylapore branch... Pakkam dhaan... Car la earunga, naan vittuduren...

Raji : Neenga avaroda dhaane bike la poreenga?

Vishnu : Innaiku mattum dhaane... No problem...

Karthik : (Walks to them) But I have a problem...

Vishnu : Ennada?

Karthik : Innaiku bike la porom... Avalodhaan...

Vishnu : Dei help pannuradhu thappa?

Karthik : Munnadiye idhu ellam paarthu vachu irukkanum... Irresponsible ah irukuradhu kku namba porupu illa...

Raji : (Mindvoice) Engalukkum chance kedaikkum... Appo irukku da unnaku...

Lakshmi : Illa service laam panniachu... Dhideernu yen ippadi makkar pannudhu nu theriyala...

Raji : Thevai illadha aal kitta laam edhukku vilakam kuduthuttu irukka? Pesaama vaa...

Karthik : Ey nillu di...

Raji : Ey enna vaa di po di nu laam pesura? Palla odachiduven...

Karthik : Adinga... Enna thimuru unnaku... Unna--

Vishnu : Dei machan enna da nee ippadi veliya vandhu avanga kuda sanda pottutu irukka?

Karthik : Parthala eppadi pesuraa nu...

Lakshmi : Hello... Neenga dhaan first adhigama pesunadhu...

Karthik : Naan enna pesunen?

Lakshmi : Pinna enna edho scooty repair ache nnu ninnuttu irukkum bodhu adhuvum unga friend dhaan vandhu voluntary ah drop pannuren nnu sonnaru... Adhu kku irresponsible adhu idhu nnu pesuradhu laam over...

Karthik : Avalo rosham irundhaa... Ivan ketta appove neenga vendaam nnu solli irukkanum...

Raji : Nee enga da solla vitta?

Karthik : Dho paru indha vaada poda nu solradhellam enkitta vachukkadha...

Vishnu : Amanga... Thaali kattuna purushana ippadi nadu road la vachu vaada poda nu sollalama?

Raji : Amaa da... Appadi dhaan solluven... Ennada pannuva?

Vishnu : (Shocked) Ennanga?

Raji : Sorry sorry unarchivasam pattuten... Yaarukku theriyanumo avangalukku therinjaa sari...

Karthik : Enna di indirect ah pesuraiya?

Raji : Pudikkalai naa sollu... Straight ah unna parthe solren...

Lakshmi : Raji ippa edhuku waste ah sanda pottutu irukka... Vidu raji...

Karthik : Iva ellathiyum waste ah dhaan pannuva... Dei nee edhuku innum ingey nikkura? Vaa namba office ku pogalam...

Vishnu : Appa ivanga?

Karthik : Flight pudichi poipaanga... Adha pathi unnaku enna? Nee vaa...

He starts dragging V... V turns around while walking...

Vishnu : Enga... Namba neighborhood ah vittu veliya poittu left street apparom right street la nadandhu poneenga naa anga vara first lamp post pakathula Office bus varum... Go in that...

Raji : Romba thanks Vishnu...

Lakshmi : Bus pass vachu irukkiyaa?

Raji : Last week dhaan poi vaangittu vandhen... Nee vera thaniyaa irupa la, so scooty la poga mudiyaadhu nnu vaanginen...

Lakshmi : Hmm... First Office varum bodhu naan vaanginadhu irukku...

Raji : Sari vaa, appadiye poidalaam...

RL walk to the bus stop just as the bus arrives... They get in and take the first two seats up front...

Raji : Office bus nalla dhaan irukku la?

Lakshmi : Amaa... Inimel idhulaye varalaam nnu yosikuren...

Raji : Paarkalaam di...

Lakshmi : Sari en di ippadi chinna pulla maadhiri avanga kitta road la sanda podura?

Raji : Yevanga kitta?

Lakshmi : Adhaan unnoda husband kitta...

Raji : Public place ah irukke nnu paakuren... Enkitta adi vangadha di...

Lakshmi : Naan unmai ah dhaane sonnen...

Raji : Manangatti sonna... Avan en husband ah? Avana parthale ennaku veri agudhu... Aalum monjiyum...

Lakshmi : Nee pesuradhu vedikkaiya irukku di... Naan sonnalum sollalai naalum adhaane di unmai? Inimel nee Raji Karthikeyan...

Raji : Lakshmiii konjam neram un thiru vaaiya muduriya? Avana pathi pesadhe... Ennaku veri agudhu...

The bus stops at a signal...

Lakshmi : Unna innum veri eathatum ah?

Raji : Enna di?

Lakshmi : (Points outside the bus) Anga paru un athaan ah...

Raji : Ey athaan adhu idhu nnu sonna adi vilum... Avan paatuku irukkan... Neeye kaati kudukaadhe...

Karthik was busy looking at the side mirror to correct his hair... Raji glares at him...

He looks up and notices her...

Both share an instant eyelock... With K staring at her blankly and she glaring at him...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Enga ponaalum vandhu tholaiyuraa... Cha...

Raji : (Mindvoice) Naan dhaan kaalai laye sonnen la... Unna avalo seekiram vittutu poida maaten da...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Ennadi unnala panna mudiyum... Pesaama po...

Raji : (Mindvoice) Enna venaalum panna mudiyum... Paarka dhaane poraa...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Pei...

Vishnu : Dei ennada mindvoice la romance ah?

Karthik : Ennada nakkal ah? Bike la irundhu thalli vituduven...

Vishnu : Pinna ivalo neram ah rendu perum paarthuttu mindvoice oaduche... Adhaan ketten...

Karthik : Dei... Already andha raakshashi kudukura thola pathadha? Idhula nee vera en daa mokka pottu arukura?

Vishnu : Sari... Unmai ah sonna dhaan unnaku porukaadhe... Signal vandhuduchu... Kelambu...

KV reach to work... A few hours later... Around lunch time...

Vishnu : Pasikudhu da... Vaa poi saapidalaam...

Karthik : Ennada avasaram unnaku?

Vishnu : Kaalaila un wife breakfast tharen nnu sonnanga... Adhaiyum keduthuttu ippo enna avasaram nnu ketkuriyaa? Nalla varuva da nee...

Karthik : Ava kaiyala laam saapidanum nnu enna namba thalai eluthaa?

Vishnu : Dei oru breakfast kku ivalo periyaa thathuvam laam vendaam da... Ippo lunch kaavadhu polaam... Vaa da...

Karthik : Sari va...

While they get up to leave, both look at the entrance and are shocked...

Karthik : Iva edhukku daa inga varaa?

Vishnu : Theriyala da... Oru vela nammaku saapadu kudukava irukkumo?

Karthik : Saapadu laye iru... Vera edhuvum yosika mudiyaadha?

Vishnu : Sari sari... Kochukaadhe... Vaa enna nnu poi ketpom...

Both walk up to RL...

Vishnu : Ennanga... Enga office kku laam vandhu irukeenga?

Raji : Ellam enga neram Vishnu...

Vishnu : Appadi ennanga aachu? Konjam puriyura maadhiri sollunga...

Raji : Solren...

Flashback...

At RL's office... In their Project Manager's cabin...

PM : Take your seat...

Lakshmi : Morning... Why have you called us early in the morning sir?

PM : You both are being transferred...

Raji : Transfer ah? Why all of a sudden?

PM : Don't worry... You two are shifting to the Mylapore branch only... So periyaa formalities laam illai...

RL were shocked...

Raji : (Mindvoice) Innaiku naal idhukku mela keda mudiyaadhu... Shabbah...

PM : Edhavadhu problem ah?

Raji : Adhu illa... Vera branch kku transfer thara mudiyuma?

PM : Nope... Actually the new project requires additional resources in that branch only... That's why... Besides, it is a great opportunity for both of you in your career...

Lakshmi : Enna project?

PM : GE...

Raji : Oh my gosh, that is such a big offer...

PM : Yup, and that's why both of you have to go... Formalities laam anga poi theriyum... And thanks for your cooperation at this branch so far... Good Luck for your new ventures...

RL shake hands and leave...

End of flashback...

Lakshmi : Idhaan nadandhadhu...

Vishnu : Wow... Super... Appo inimel namba ellarum onna dhaan work panna porom ah...

Raji : Vera vazhi...

Vishnu : Ennaga ippadi solluringa?

Raji : Ungala solla la vishnu... Solla vendiyavangaluku sonnen...

Karthik : Dei pasikkudhu nu sonna la... Sappada variya illaya?

Lakshmi : Sappada poreengala? Naangalum join pannikurom... HR ah paarthu formalities mudinchudhu...

Vishnu : Of course.. Neenga illamai ah?

Karthik : Naan varala...

Raji : Enna parthu ellam yarum bayapada vendaam Vishnu...

Karthik : Hello... Yaru ippa unna parthu bayapadura?

Raji : Kannadi ah paaru theriyum...

Karthik : Paarrah... Unna laam parthu bayapaduvangala? Nee dhaan enkitta bayandhu kedakkanum...

Raji : Hello mister... We are no less than you... Nee enna position la work pannuriyo, adhe edathuku dhaan we are here... Adaki vaasichuko...

Lakshmi : Raji please... Konja neram pesaama iru... Vandha modhal naal eh pretchanai vendaam...

Raji : Yaaru pretchanai pannura? Enga sollanumo anga sollu...

Karthik : Ey...

Vishnu : Ada da da... Please konjam niruthunga... Ennaku pasikudhu... First saaptu apparom themba sandai podunga...

Karthik : Naan varala...

Vishnu : Dei en daa ippadi veembu pudikura?

Karthik : Sari vaa, namba restaurant la poi saapidalaam...

Raji : Namba mattum edhukku di inga saapidanum? Let's go as well...

Lakshmi : Sari enga polaam?

Vishnu : Unnaku enga da poganum?

"Buhari" KR say at the same time...

VL look at each other and smile...

Raji : No vendaam... I change my mind... Namba Chettinaad polaam di...

Karthik : Vaa da, namba Buhari kke polaam...

KR glare at each other and walk in opposite directions with VL following them...

Lakshmi : Anaa summa solla kudaadhu di... Unnakum un husband kkum semma sync oadudhu... Ppah...

Raji : Ey... Adhu pure coincidence di...

Lakshmi : Nambittom Nambittom...

At the meeting in Conference Room...

Country Head : Morning Guys... For those who are new, I am Vishwanathan, the Country Head of Nettech Chennai... You all should know what this meeting is for... We have got hold of the GE Project... And two teams will be working on the project...

Karthik : When will we get the team information sir?

Vichu Sir : I have it with me right now... Under Susan, it will be Karthik, Vishnu, Raji, and Lakshmi...

Susan : Alright Sir...

Raji : (Whispers to L) Enndi, innoru team irukku nnu sonnanga, adhula ketu paarpoma?

Lakshmi : Try pannuvom iru...

Vichu Sir: The next team is under Sanjay... He will be coming in a few minutes... The four of you, besides Susan's team, will be working under Sanjay... Is that clear?

Sanjay team : Yes, thanks sir...

Raji : Uh sir...

Vichu Sir : Hmm?

Raji : Is it possible to change tea--

Someone knocks on the Conference Room Door...

Vichu Sir : Come in... Must be Sanjay...

Everyone turn to look towards the door... RL are shocked...

Raji : (Whispers to L) Ivanaa?

Lakshmi : Avane dhaan...

Vichu Sir : Guys, he is Sanjay... The new Project Manager from Mumbai...

All except RL : Hello...

Sanjay : Thanks Sir... Sorry for the late arrival, the joining process took up quite a lot of time...

Vichu Sir : Make sure that it doesn't repeat again... Raji nee enna ketka vandha?

Raji : Adhu... Adhu... Uh, what is the duration of this project?

Vichu Sir : We have signed the contract for two years, while there is a high probability for the project to extend...

Raji : Thanks sir...

Vichu Sir : Alright... Introduce yourselves soon... It is a huge project, a very important step in your careers... Good Luck...

Everyone shakes hands with him and he leaves... RL follow out the room without noticing the others... RL go to the canteen...

Raji : Naan resign panna poraen di...

Lakshmi : Ey enna aachu...

Raji : Edhuvume sariyaa padala... Modhala, veetula irukka gorilla va ingayum paakura maadhiri aaiyuduchu, ippo indha chimpanzee vera inga vandhu irukku...

Lakshmi : Karthik okay... But ivan edhuku vandhaan?

"Pazhaiya kanaku laam settle panna vendiyadhu irukku... Adhaan..."

RL turn and look to see who it was... Sanjay stood there...

Sanjay : Hi Hi... Naan dhaane andha chimpanzee?

Raji : (Under her breath) Idhula doubt vera...

Sanjay : Anyway... Naan thappa eduthukala...

Lakshmi : Will you shut up and leave from here...

Sanjay : Cool Lakshmi... Chill ah oru ice cream saapidu...

Raji : Get lost Sanjay...

Sanjay : Paarrah... En peru laam nyabagam irukka?

Raji : (Rolls her eyes) Vaadi namba polaam... Edhukku veena time ah waste pannanum...

RL leave from there...

Sanjay : (Mindvoice) Rendu perum oadureengala... Ponga ponga... En kitta dhaane thirumba vara vendiyadhu irukkum... En kitta irunthu neenga thappikave mudiyadhu...

He leaves to his cabin...

To be continued...

Precap :

Fun at the beach...

KR fight continues...

Stay Tuned...

~~ Sush and Abi ~~

Authors' Note -

Hey Guys

We know that you all are eager of knowing the past between KR... But, it is not a flashback to be revealed in one part... So from now on, you will see flashbacks woven into the story... At first, most would be suspense building... But will start revealing complete parts real soon... Please do wait patiently, as their flashback plays a very important role in the story as a whole... 😃

Thanks for your support Friends... Do continue encouraging us... 😉

Edited by SushK16 - 10 years ago

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Wow!! thanks for an excellent update Sush and Abhi! Its always a pleasure to watch KR fight and this part is full of that. Its nice to see how destiny has different plans for them. Poor VL, its very difficult to be around KR when they are fighting and it looks like VL need to put up with it both at home and at office now. Interesting!!

Looking forward to know what happened in the past that they are both now acting like Tom and Gerry. Always together, fighting :) You are building a lot of suspense about KR's past...who is Sanjay now? Thank you for a great job in coming up with a very interesting story line! 👏

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Dat was a wonderful update girls 👏👏.. wat a heated convo between KR dat was realy superb and d scenes wer cuming in front of me while reading.. wonderful update..

I like dat mv during bus travel of LR and KV..athu eppadi R K avolo seekiram vituruvala ena 😊

R fb reg d salwar was so nice..but appadi lovable couple la irunthutu eppadi ithe madiri fight panrange.. ena dhan rendu perum kovama irunthalum avange mv le pesaruthu rombe nalla irunthuchu..avange specialitye adhane..so am really waiting to knw wat has happend in der FB

Pavam ithule LV has to put more effort to patch up KR la.. yaru pa anthe sanjay wat he has to do with RL.. oh neenge dhan suspense maintain panreengala ok ok so hve to wait patiently na 😆😆

perfect dialogues in d correct place.. i really enjoyed dis update sush and abi😛

U girls hve done a excellent job 👍🏼

Edited by Archana03 - 10 years ago

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729619

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Interesting update! Excited to read more! Good job so far! 😊

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tamilgermangirl

@tamilgermangirl

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Adada enna sandai...😃

This part is like the first episodes of office season 1..

Nice memory..👏😊

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Lily Padawattar

@plily

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Hi dearies . Mind blowing update Sush & Abi 👏 .
Thirupi sandaiya , savalam poduranga pa KR 😆 .

FBle loving couplea irukuranga but yen ipa ipidi agithanga KR . Seri wait panuvom 😉

KV & RL same company different branch . Vishnu such a gentlemen , trying to help the girls. Atha kuda Karthik kedukuran but still Vishnu trying to help RL . So sweet 😳 .

RL in bus paardah hero heroin sidefying 😆 (Brings back our KR first meeting ) Thank you girls ❤️ .

MV yelam pinuthu pa . Super pa 👍🏼 .

Pavam Vishnuku pasikithu , breakfastkuda Karthik sapada vidule. What a surprise RL in KV office ? 😲 Yena transferva , ipotha story kala kathapogathu 😎 .

New officelayum startinga pavam pa intha VL intha KRa frienda vaichikithu ivanga padura padu iruke 🤣 🤣 .

Office matteryum include panathaku thanks .Wow Susan & Vichu sir also in .

Dears yenga irunthu pa intha wordslam pudikirunga Gorila... chimpanzee 🤣 🤣 🤣 . Yenala siripa stop pana mudiyile . Hats off Sush & Abi 👍🏼 .

Villanum vanthachu .
Romba twistlam iruku pola onu ona clear panunga pa.
Athuku me waiting .

Thank you so much for the update Sush dear & Abi ma 🤗 .

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Superb update...

Season 1 initial sequence pakkura adhey feeling...

Characterization and dialogues are very good...

Do keep writing and updating :)

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srithu

@srithu

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

wait pannalum supera update kuduthurukeenga abi and sush.. thanks.. Enaku apdiyae padikka padikka office oda season 1 tha gnaybagam vandhuchu apdiyae erundhuchu.. adhum bus scene and bike mind voice was like office la KR oda first meet share auto scene tha ... chance illa pa apdiyae reminisce panna vechuteenga ,, inimae enaku neenga flash backa lasta sonna kooda paravala andha mari feel erukku... 👏👏.. nadu roadla parapacha parkama sundai podurangapa..

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Guys superb, you guys rock

Raji and Karthi -tom and jerry thats what comes into my mind loool and the di and da loool hahahaha such immature children hahahahhahaa

vishnu and lakshmi as always stuck in the middle but slight difference supporting their best friends lakshmi standing by raji and vishnu standing by karthi good friendship

new entry dont like the sound of him but seems like there is more waiting for you to unveil it all

flashback - so they did have good moments once upon a time so why are they like this? hope all will be revealed soon

KRVL all working in the same office interesting to see, now would like to see how it works out...

susan too hope she isnt some villi in this ...

but all in all a very good update really enjoyed this all :) thanks guys

appadiye unga innora FF update pannunga time kadikarapa

(sush and abi neenga yenna thittuve innum theriyum but couldnt help it hehehehe) 😉

Edited by Gayathri30 - 10 years ago

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Thanks guys for the updates. I am waiting eagerly to find out what the flashback is and what's up with the new guy also. KVRL and KR hating each other lol, find it so funny. Curious to know why KR hate each other, have a feeling it could be because of their previous relationships (if they had any).