Here is the Sixth Part of the story... Many of you felt the last part was short, so here is one longer than that... It will be an enjoyable update... 😃
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Part 6 :
Jo : Achacho... Enna aachu ma?
She goes towards a cute little girl who was sitting on the sand and crying...
Girl : Idho unga kooda irukka uncle and aunty en castle la vizhundhu they messed it up...
Jo : Well... Sorry da... Venum naa innoru castle kattu... Naan help pannuren...
Girl : No... Avanga rendu perum dhaan build pannanum...
Karthik : Ennadhu naangala? Paapa, I am very sorry... Anaa castle laam katta mudiyaadhu...
Right then that little girl's mom comes... The girl narrates everything to her mom...
Mom : Hello... Neenga vizhundhadhu laam okay... But chinna ponnu ketkura... It would be better if you help her...
Karthik : But we've apologized... Even my sister offered to help... Anaa unga ponnu dhaan naanga kattanum nnu adam pudikura...
Mom : Enga beach kku vandhuttu ungalukku romance panna theriyudhu, but adhu naala indha kozhandhai azhuradhukku help panna mudiyalai ah?
Vishnu : (Smirks) Machaan... Idhukku mela unnala onnum solla mudiyaadhu...
Raji : Hello madam... First of all... Naanga onnum romance pannala... It was just an accident... And even if we did, that's our personal... Neenga adhukku comment laam solla mudiyaadhu...
Lakshmi : Hey vidu... Sorry madam...
Girl : Excuse me... Please uncle, indha castle ah build panni kudunga...
Karthik : Adhaan solren la da... My sister will help...
Girl : (Frowns) Enna Uncle over ah dhaan poreenga... Olunga build panni kudunga... Or naan ungala inga irundhu poga vida maaten...
Vishnu : Machan pannidu da... Paavam andha kozhandhai... Ippo paaru unna miratudhu...
Karthik : Sari vaa ma... Ellam en neram... (Glares at R)
Girl : Idhu dhaan good uncle...
K helps the little girl to build her castle... While the others are around him giggling...
Girl : Uncle, neenga build pannite irunga... Naan mom oda poittu ice cream vaangitu varen...
She leaves with her mom...
R starts laughing at K...
Karthik : Ippo edhukku sirikura? Neeyum dhaane idhukku reason... Olunga vandhu help pannu...
Raji : Mudiyaadhu po...
Karthik : Nee vandhu dhaan aaganum...
He grabs hold of R's wrist and pulls her down... She comes and falls on the castle, without balance from his pull...
Raji : (Frowns) Aahhh... Dei loosu...
Karthik : Edhukku di marubadiyum castle la vizhundha?
Raji : Nee dhaane enna pull panina... Now help me get up...
Karthik : Sari iru...
Karthik stood up and pulls Raji up... Yet again, he does it so forcefully that she comes and bumps into him... He holds her waist from falling back down... Both share an eyelock moment...
Vishnu : Ehhhmm... Dei seekiram build pannu da...
Both come back to their senses...
Karthik : Inga paaru... Olunga build panna help pannu... Naan mattum thaniyaa laam panna mudiyaadhu...
She silently nods...
Vishnu : Sari da... Neenga build pannunga... Naanga poi sea la vilaiyaadurom... Bye...
VL and Jo leave to the sea...
After a while... Both finish building the castle... Karthik got up, dusted his pants, and gave his hand for Raji to get up... She placed her right hand on his, when he noticed the ring... She realized where he was looking and blankly stared at him... He too returned the same blank look... Both remembered the same incident...
FLASHBACK :
"Adha kazhati podu..." Karthik ordered her rudely.. without even facing her...
"Mudiyaadhu..." Raji replied with the same tone...
"Nee ippo ring ah kazhattanum... No more discussing..." he enforced his order again...
She glared right into his eyes... "Who the hell are you to say that?"
"No matter of whom I may be... You have to remove that right now..." he repeated the same...
"Mudiyaadhu... And that's final..." she crossed her arms and looked away...
It was his turn to glare at her now... "Appadiyaa... Appo naane kazhatti thooki veesuren..."
He stomped towards her and pulled her arm...
"Ey... Enna thoduradhu kku unnakku endha rights um illa... Move away..." she slightly screamed...
"But I have all rights to remove that ring and I definitely will..." he tried grabbing hold of her hand...
"Mr. Karthikeyan..." she pulled away forcefully from his grip and pointed at him... "Mind your limits..."
She stormed away as he was looking on...
END OF FLASHBACK
Girl : (Walks towards KR) Thanks Uncle and Aunty... You're so sweet...
Karthik : (Ruffles her hair) You're welcome darling... Have fun...
They had a fun time at the beach... Well, VL and Jo did at least... KR shared some unexpected moments, which entertained the rest... They are still the same of course...
At Night in KR's room...
Raji gets on the bed and notices K coming in...
Karthik : (Clears his throat)
Raji : Serial la cinema la vara maadhiri naan keela laam paduka maaten... Sorry... (She places a pillow and blanket on the floor) Venum naa nee keela paduthuko...
Karthik : Ey... Idhu en room, en bed... Naan keela padukkanum ah? Never...
Raji : Thoonganum na keela padu illana...
Karthik : Illana?
Raji : Sivarathiri mathiri kanna muzhichittu iru...
Karthik : Enna di kalaikkuriya?
Raji : Inga paru naaliku naa office ku poganum... Thookam vera varudhu... Pesama light off pannitu padu...
Karthik : Ama engalukullam office illa... Vettiya irukkuom paru...
Raji : Dei padu da...
Karthik : Adinga thimira pathiya ivaluku... Ey ennadi naa pesikitte irukken... Nee pattu thoongara... Ey...
Raji : (Shouts) Dei naanum paarthuttu irukk--
Karthik comes to her and closes her mouth with his hand...
Karthik : Ey ey edhukku kathura?
Raji : Andha bayam irukkatum...
Karthik : Podi pei... Naan Vishnu veetuku poi thoonguren...
Raji : Naan pei naa nee pisaasu... Po, engaiyaavadhu po...
Karthik : Appadi naa nee monkey...
Raji : Nee donkey...
K glares, takes a pillow and leaves...
He knocks on V's door...
Vishnu : Yaaru indha nerathula? Oru vela robber ah irukkumo? Illa thoraka vendaam...
The knocking gets louder...
Vishnu : Rama... Ennaku bayama irukku... Sari yaaru nnu dhaan paarpom...
He gets up to go, and on the way sees a knife in the fruit bowl, which he takes with him for a precaution...
He slowly opens the door... And points the knife...
Karthik : Dei dei... Ennada idhu?
Vishnu : Oh neeya... Naan edho thirudan nnu nenaichuten...
Karthik : Nenaipa da nenaipa... Inneram enna kuthirupa...
Vishnu : Sari sari... Nee edhukku ippadi 11 pm kku vandhu irukka?
Karthik : Un kooda padukalaam nnu...
Vishnu : Endaa un veedu enna aachu?
Karthik : Ava irukka la... Adhaan...
Vishnu : Sari va...
Karthik : Andha ratchasi enna thoonga kuda vida mataingura da...
Vishnu : Endha ratchasi machan?
Karthik : Adhan moonu mudichi pottu kootitu vandhu irukken ne ava dhan...
Vishnu : Machan... Un pondatti ah va ratchasi nu sollura?
Karthik : Vera yara sollla mudiyum? Avalae dhan... En bed la ava paduthuttu enna keela thoonga sollura da...
Vishnu : Ama kattana purushan na ippdiya keela thoonga solluradhu... Avanga kudaye unnaiyum padukka vechi irukkanum...
Karthik stares at him...
Karthik : Podanga...
Vishnu : Seri adhuku edhuku inga vandha?
Karthik : Thookula thonga vandhen... Endaa vandha udane dhaan sonnen... Un kuda padukka vandhen nu...
Vishnu : Yenda unga amma edhuvum sollalaya?
Karthik : Amma partha dhana... Naa amma ku theriyama vandhen...
Vishnu : Seri da... Pesaama padu...
Both KV lying down...
Karthik : Machan...
Vishnu : Enna da?
Karthik : Ennaku rendu pillow illana thookame varadhu da...
Vishnu stares at him... And gives one of his pillows...
Karthik : Thanks da...
Vishnu : Irukkatum... Pesaama thoongu...
Karthik again calls him...
Karthik : Machan...
Vishnu : Ippa enna da venum?
Karthik : Ennaku night lamp venum...
Vishnu : Night lamp fuse poiyuduchu... Nee pesama thoongu...
Karthik : Ennaku thookam vara mataingudhu...
Vishnu : Un Pondatti ya nenaichittu kanna mudu thookam thannala varum...
Karthik : (Kicks V's foot)
Vishnu : Aaahh... Poda dei... Naan poi sofa laye paduthukuren... Nee inga padu...
He leaves to the living room...
"Karthik..."
Karthik : Cha... Ava voice laam ketkudhe... Sari illaiye... Pesaama thoongu... (He closes his eyes)
Her picture in which she was beautifully smiling, flashes at him...
He wakes up in a jerk and shakes his head...
Karthik : Dei dei... Ennadaa achu unnaku? Just sleep without thinking anything...
He goes back to bed and closes his eyes...
FLASHBACK :
"Ennadaa panra?" she questioned right as he called her...
"Unna nenaichuttu irukken..." he replied with a teasing tone...
She smiled at his antics... "Nambittom nambittom..."
"Ey serious ah di... Namba maata la, sari po naan phone ah vaikkuren..." he faked a childish anger...
"Ey iru iru..." she said urgently...
"Enna venum? Adhaan enna namba matingara la po..." he continued his fake anger...
"Unna nambaama vera yaara chellam nambuven?" She said in sarcastic and sugary tone..
"Unnaku vara vara nakkal kudi pochu di..." he said...
"Sari sari kochukaadhe... Ennaku nalla theriyum... Neeye enna marakkanum nnu nenaichaalum naan eppodhum un heart la dhaan iruppen..." she said with a tinge of sentiment in her tone...
He too became a bit serious... "Ey unna edhukku di naan marakkanum nnu nenaipen?"
END OF FLASHBACK
Karthik : Ippo nenaikuren... Anaa nee appo sonna maadhiri mudiyala di...
He simply sighs and fell asleep...
Next Morning :
Vishnu comes running to Karthik in his room...
Vishnu : Dei dei... Ezhundhuko da...
Karthik : (Still asleep) Enna da nadu raathiri la ippadi kathura? Pesaama poi padu...
Vishnu : Dei naaye... Kaalaila 7 am aaiyuduchu... Seekiram veetukku po...
Karthik jerks out of bed and panics...
Karthik : 7 am ah? Ada paavi... Alarm laam vaikka maataiyaa? Pochu pochu... Ippo naan veetukku ponnen naa ennaku sangu dhaan...
Vishnu : Dei ippadiye pesittu irukkadha da... Apparam unna veetula kannum nu police kitta complaint kudthudura poranga...
Karthik : Vaiya muduraa... Nee vera...
Vishnu : Dei enna thitturadhu niruthittu... Nee thittu vangama ulla po...
Karthik : Ellam unnala dhaan...
Vishnu : Amaa amaa ellam ennala dhaan... Ezhundhirchu poda...
Karthik : Dei loosu... Eppadi poradhu nnu theriyaama dhaane mulichuttu irukken... Pesaama Office kku poidavaa? Seekiram poitten nnu veetula solli samalichukalaam...
Vishnu : (Sarcastically) Ahaa... Enna oru idea... Thuu... Dei night dress oda Office kku ponaa angayum unnaku sangu dhaan... Adhukku veetukku poi thittu vaanguradhu better...
Karthik : Ada cha... Ippo enna panradhu?
Vishnu : Balcony valiyaa ulla poidu...
Karthik : Dei adhellam mudiyaadhu da... En veetu kulla naan edhukku thirudan maadhiri poganum?
Vishnu : Enna da idhukku munnadi nee appadi ponadhe illaya enna? (He asks teasingly, keeping in mind the older times)
Karthik : (Stammers) Adhu appo... Idhu ippo...
Vishnu : Sari sari... Eppavaa irundhaalum ippo unnaku vera vazhi illa... Go fast...
Karthik : (Thinks for a while) Sari poraen...
Karthik sneaks behind their flat and climbs into their balcony... He jumps in and heaves a big sigh, thanking god, that he didn't get caught...
But he gets the biggest shock of his life to see Raji standing right in front of him with a mocking smile... He stammers for a bit and tries to silently move away...
Raji : Oru nimisham sir...
Karthik : Sollunga madam...
Raji : Madam ah? Sari dhan... En vaasal dhaan vanjakame illaama perusaa katti vechu irukkangale apparam en ippadi?
Karthik : Uh... Adhu onnum illa... Pakkathu vettu uncle koopittu irunthanga nnu poi irunthen ah... Suthi vara allupaa irunthuchu nnu appadiye anga irunthe thaavitten...
Raji : Appadiya? Thuu...
Karthik : Ey ennadi over ah dhaan poraa?
Raji : Ey... Di pottu pesura velai laam vachukaadhe... Unnaku avalo rights laam yaarum kudukala...
Karthik : Un kooda irukka rights ah modhala yaaravadhu edupaangala nnu yengittu irukken... Idhula matha rights laam yaarukku venum?
Raji : Sari nee ippo balcony la irundhu vandhadhu naan Athai kitta solla poraen...
Karthik : Ey ey... Edhukku solla poraa? Enna solla poraa?
Raji : Edhukku padharura? Sir poi pakkathu veetu uncle ah dhaane paatheenga... Adha solradhu kku ippo en tension?
Karthik : Inga paaru... Ennaku Office kku kelamba time aachu... Edhavadhu pesi en time ah waste pannadhe... Thallu...
Raji : Amaa engalukku laam Office illa paaru...
Karthik : Appadiye anga vandhu velai paakura maadhiri...
Raji : Nee mattum enna pannura? Eppo paarthaalum desk laye irukka maata...
Karthik : Appo madam unga velai ah paakuradha vittutu en desk ah dhaan suthi varinga pola... So unnaku velai paakuradha pathi pesa endha rights um illa...
Raji : Amaa ivaru periyaa Mr. India... Ivara paakuradhu kku naanga thavam irukkurom...
Karthik : (Laughs)
Raji : Enna sirikura?
Karthik : Illa... Pazhasu laam nenaichu paarthen... Adhaan siripu vandhuchu...
Raji : (Stammers) Adhu vandhu...
Karthik : (Gets serious) Over ah idhukku dhaan vaai pesa koodaadhu... Ivalo dhaan nee...
Raji : Enna adhuku nu romba dhan over ah pora... Dei naa nenaicha unna enna vennalum panna mudiyum...
Karthik : Pannu... Adhaiyum parakkalam... Unnala onnum keezhikka mudiyadhu...
Raji : Hello mister... Unnoda full history en kitta dhaan irukku... Adhu nyabagam irukkatum...
Karthik : Unnala enna di panna mudiyum? Vaai la pesa mattum dhaan mudiyum... Ippaiyum adha dhaan pannuriye...
Raji : Appadiyaa? Appo vaa... Ippove Athai kitta poi pesalaam...
She tries to move... But he grabs her wrist to a tight hold...
Karthik : (Points at her) Innoru adi eduthu vacha... Nadakuradhe vera...
Raji : (Struggles) Modhala enna vidu...
Karthik : Indha blackmail velai laam en kitta vendaam solliten...
Right then Jo enters into the room to find a struggling Raji to free her wrist from the tight grip of her her brother...
Jo : (Shocked) Anna...
Both KR get shocked to see Jo there and Karthik leaves her wrist at once... Raji rubs her wrist out of pain...
Raji : (Fakely smiles) Hi Jo...
Jo : Enna aachu Anni?
Karthik : Onn- Onnum illaye... Summa pesittu irundhom...
Jo gives suspicious look...
Jo : Paartha appadi theriyalaiye...
Karthik : Illaye... Naanga summa dhaan Office ah pathi pesittu irundhom... Illa Raji?
Suddenly puts his arm over her shoulder...
Raji gets shocked at what he just did right now... But she did not deny it...
Raji : Huh... Amaa Jo... Summa dhaan pesittu irundhom...
Jo : (Pretends to be convinced) Hmm sari fine... Amma indha bag ah unga kitta kuduka sonnaanga... Adhukku dhaan vandhen...
She hands it and leaves out the room...
Karthik takes his arm away from her...
Karthik : Sorry... (He too leaves...)
Raji stood there still shocked of what just happened...
Meanwhile Jo was outside the room...
Jo : (Mindvoice) Edho sari illaiye... Enga Anna appadi laam panna maataan... Enna aachu nnu ippo eppadi therinchukuradhu?
Thinks for a while...
Jo : Hmm... Adhaan best... I will go today itself...
To Be Continued...
Precap :
Jo : Nillunga... Modhala sollitu ponga...
Vishnu : Adhaan onnum illa nnu solrom la... Nambu maa...
Jo : (Slightly shouts) Ippo solla poreengala or naan straight ah poi Anna Anni kitta ketkatum ah?
Lakshmi : Sari sari solrom... Nee edhuvum avanga kitta ketkaadhe...
Jo : Hmm sollunga...
Lakshmi : Adhu
Stay Tuned...
~~ Sush and Abi ~~
Authors' Note -
Hey Friends
First of all, hope you all enjoyed this update... Yeah, we know there is a lot of suspense being maintained here in this story... We have also been giving hints here and there... Now, it is around the right time to start revealing the flashbacks... 😛 So the next part will reveal the main part of the flashback... 😉 Again, as we said earlier, please read with an open mind as we will not let you down of any sort because of the storyline... 😃
Thank You for all the support... Do keep encouraging us... 😉
Edited by Abinaabi - 10 years ago
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