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CHAPTER 70

Jalal smiled and agreed to take a chance he moved towards the ladies who were standing in Ghunghat. Jalal took few moments and stood still he just looked around for while, Rani Mainawati was watching all of this from behind her Ghunghat . She wanted to see whther Jala can find Hira or not, Jallal took 10 steps and then he moved right he stood there for 10 seconds and then he went close to a girl looked at her for few seconds and then moved left and then lift the ghunghat of a girl and it was Hira. Everyone was surprised to see how easily jala found Hira . Hira touched Jalal's feet.

Jalal- I found you Hira , I missed you a lot , I want you to come with ,e to Agra.

Hira- You have came here to attend the wedding I hope you enjoy it. Mainawati moved toards Hira and Jalal

Mainawati- jamaisaa come and take rest you will get to see Hira at night.

Mainawati went to meet raja Bharmal , he was busy talking to a minister about Foreign policies , when the announcement was made for the arrival of Rani mainawati the minister took Raja Bharmal's leave.

Bharmal- Come in Rani mainawati It has been a longtime since we hav had a conversation about our children.

Mainawati- pranam maharaj today I am here for your most beloved daughter Hira.

Bharmal- why ? what happened she is here , now Sehensha is also here then why you are so worried, I know you was really worried when she came alone, so was I , nut now everything is fine .

Mainawati- you know Maharaj why she came alone?

Bharmal- May be she wanted to , I am sure she had sehensha's permission. Raja bharmal sat on his chair. Mainawati ment close to his chair and sat nere his knees

Mainawati- No maharaj she came here alone because she knows it all now.

Bharmal She knows what? Mainawat had teras in her eyes-

Mainawati She knows that she is the eldest princss of amber she knows that she is our daughter . raja bharml looked at her and paused for few moments ,but he the w like a normal father. He closed his eyes for few moments and did not react a lot , he is a king he can not react like that he closed his eyes for few moments. he opened his eyes and said-

Bharmal-Rani saa it was bound to happen, the truth had to come out , now we have to deal with it, we have to talk to our daughter , but we have to be prepared to face our daughter . Not as a king or queen , but as a parents who sent her away when she wanted us the most where is hira now?

Mainawati- She must be in her room.

Bharmal- Is anyone here a servant came . tell Hira Baisa that I want to meet her . The servant did a pranam and left the room

Mainawati- Maharaj how we will face her?

Bharmal-We have to face her because we as parents have been unfair to her , After few munites came in front o raja Bharmal and did a pranam to him

Bharmal- Hira how are ou? Are you enjoying the wedding? Ira gave a possetive node.

Mainawati- if you need any cloth jewellery anything you just have to ask for it .

Hira- thak you maharani saa , but I am happy with what I have.

Bharmal Why ? you are a queen .For queens cloths or Jewellery is not enough .Hira- (with a smile) I am trying to find my real identity Maharaj who am I?

Mainawati- Hira I know you know everything , no sooner hira heard this she just broke down in tears she sat on the floor in she was crying her heart out. Mainawati took a step forward to console her ,but raja Bharmal stop her .

Hira cried for few munites then she stood up and said

Hira- Why ? why both of you had to do it?You never felt how I will feel when I will know the truth? ,

Mainawati- you are right we understand but we had had our reasons,.

Hira- reasons , you kept me away from my real Identity , if had to sent me away, you would have at least told me the truth, I am not complaining about sending me in someonelse's house , they are the most loving people one can ask for but you would have told me atleast that you wrer my real parents.

Mainawati- Our royal Atrologer told us that we gave to send you away because you had life risk.

Hira- But did he told you to hide my identity. Bharmal tried to say something.

Hira- Maha raj plese give me the permission to leave , I can not take it anymore. Bharmal gave her the permission to leave the room and mainawati bokw down in tears . When Hira came out of Bharma's room Vishkah met her and told her that Panchan wants to meet her , Hira said something in her ears and Vishakha left after she heard that.

Hira was very upset she wanted to be alone she wanted to speak to her another family as well why they did not told her the truth? Everybody betrayed her .to her , The person she trusted and loved Sehensha has also lied . hira was very Angry she thought she will go the temple , she use to go everyday , but she got inturuptd by a Dasi of shivani , she told her that Shivani wants her to join in the music and dance ceremony . One week is left for her marriage so everyday in her mahal theses muci and dance functions are arranged , she insisted hira many times to tak part in theses , but she refused , but today she has told her dasi that if Hira does not come she will not talk to her in her whole life . Hira did not wanted to heart her lttle sister , so she decided to join the function .

On the other side Jalal was missing Hira very badly . he wanted to see her , but he did not knew where she is , he thought he will ask a Dasi about her where abouts , but then as a king this kind of behaviour is not expected from him. He was thinking of What he should do when lalita( another dasi of Hira ) came to him.

Lalita- Pranam Sehensha she did a pranam to Jalal. Jalal did not pay attention to her as he was thinking about Hira. Lalita cleared her throat and said- forgive me sehensha , but I think that Sehensha is thinking about his Queen Hira Bai. Jalal turned around Lalita knew she was in the right path so she couninued. If Sehensha wants I can mae his wish come true.

Jalal- if you can do that with out informing anyone , I will give you anything you want.

Lalaita- If Sehensha can trust this humble Dasi please come with me . lalita took Jalal through secret roots , Jalal reached o a Baloney , which was built in a way that Jalal can see Hira from here but Hira can not see him, It had a Jharokha . Jala was very happy he was about to give a ring to Lalita .Lalita said-

Lalita- Forgive me sehesha I don't need anything now, I am glad that an ordinary person like me can bring smile on your face. But I will ask for something when the actual time will come . lalita left Jalal alone so that he can admire Hira's beauty .

By now Hira was on the stageHerself , Hira was crying few hours before and now she have to dance because her sister wants her to dance , Jalal was amazed by two things

1 He did not knew Hira was such a great Dancer ,and she looks so beautiful when she dances

2 Hira have so much control on her emotions, he felt proud that Hira is part of his life. She is a very strong women . Jalal decided that he will explain everything to Hira tonight.

At night jalal as waiting for Hira, Hira came in her room , she was very tired , she was so tired that she orgot that she has to share the room with Jalal , when she saw Jala in her room, she remembered that Jalal is also here, she went to Jalal and touched his feet , jalap u his hand on her head

Jalal- Hira Begum you look very tired I think you had a eventful day . Hira did not say anything she went to the mirrior and she was removing her Jewelleries oJalal cleared his throat and went to her-

Hira begum I must say dancing makes a person really tired ,but it is really tough . Hira looked at Jalal she was clueless how Jala knew that she was dancing .

Hira- Sehensha how do you know that I was dancing . Jalal said-

Jalal- I runahuge administration Hira Begum I know everything. Jalal thought Hira will ask how he came to know about it, but Hira did not say anything, and she went to the bed and took her pillow and she was making her bed on the floor.

Jalal- Hira begum I know you are angry with me , you have evry right to be angry with me , but what you have done is also not right, you shold have aske for my permission before you left Agra.

Hira- She sat on the mat ,I am sorry if I broke your rules Sehensha , but I was not in a state of mind to inform anyone, I just wanted to get out of Agra.

Jalal- Hira Begum I understand what you have gone through, In your place any other person would have committed Jala could not say.

Hira- Looked at jalal and Said- suicide . I also wanted to do that, but before that I wanted to know why it was done to me .

Jalal Hira begum forget everything and let's go back to Agra I promise I will never hide anything from you .

Hira- I don't wish to go back, rather I think I will become a Nun. Jalal got shocked when she said this

Jalal- Hira Begum do you even know what you are saying? Hira lied on the mat

Hira- I know Sehensha what I am saying .

Jalal- If I tell you the real reason will you reconsider your decision ? Hira turned to Jalal

Hira- I promise If you can tell me the real reason I will rethink about my decision .

Hira turned around and closed her ees, jalal went to his own bed he was thinking how he can handel this matter in a calm and composed way , Jalal was really tired so he flln asleep, In midnight Jalal woke up from his sleep . It took him a while to adjust his eyes in this new room . After he adjusted himself he heard the sound of Hira's Payel jala followed her . He was worried about Hira's safety, though she was in her own kingdom , but still she is a women, and sh did not carry a wappen with her, after flowing her for few munites jalal saw that Vishakha accompanied her. This thing got into Jalal's nerves he followed hem both like a shadow and he reached a place where Hira was going to meet Panchanan.

Jalal could not se Panchana but he can see that Hira was talking to someone. Panchanan's face was covered with a cloth. Jalal thought that someone may be has came to hira to ask for charity , as she has done theses kind of charity before Jalal did not say anything, but he thought he will ask vishakha tomorrow about this. Jalal went back to his room.

Hira was talking to Panchana . Vishakha was keeping an eye so that no one can come here-

Panchanan- I herad that sehensha E- hind has came to Amber.

Hira- yes he is here to attend primcess Shivani's wedding.

Panchana- Did you both met each other? Panchan was talking in a very commanding tone, hira did not understand why he was talking to her like that , she took it as a friendly conversation

Hira Yes in fact we had aconversation few hours before I came here.

Panchan- Are you stying in the same room?

Hira- Yes obviously . Panchana could not take it anymore , his fave became heard he said- Oh then I an sorry that I have disturbed you.

Hira- No no Sehensha is leeping he is vey tired as he had a long journey .

Panchana I am also tired good bye Hira Begum. Before Hira could ssy anything Panchan left the garden. Hira did not understand why he got angry she came back with Vishakha.

Next morning Jalal called lalita he was curious to know about last night. Hira went to the temple , so Jalal thought his is the right time to talk to Lalita, he did not want anyone to tink that e was spying on his wife, he was not at all spying on Hira Lalita came to meet jalal.

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Edited by msbhattacharya - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Feeling sad for jodha. why did left in middle only I am feeling like cliff hanger. Please upload next part soon and please no misunderstanding between akdha.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice Update...
Jalal find his hira..
Poor Hira...she is broken and feels that not a single person is on her side..
Lalitha helps ja to see hira dance..
Hope Ja won't misunderstand hira's meeting ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice chapter dear
Thanks for pm
Update soon dear 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Nice chapter dear
Thanks for pm
Update soon dear 😛

I WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Nice Update...

Jalal find his hira..
Poor Hira...she is broken and feels that not a single person is on her side..
Lalitha helps ja to see hira dance..
Hope Ja won't misunderstand hira's meeting ..

lets see what happens😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritujajadhav

Feeling sad for jodha. why did left in middle only I am feeling like cliff hanger. Please upload next part soon and please no misunderstanding between akdha.

I left in middle , so that you waite for the next chapter😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Amazing update buddy
Ak tried to apologise to heera
And she denied him any if it
Ak got to see her dance and smile.. although fake
Oops
He saw her meet her ex
That's bad
Update asap buddy
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Posted: 6 years ago
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suicide oops...
& hira becoming nun oh god jalal...😆

why is he not telling her & bring some relief to both of them .

hira & panchanan meet , i hope its the last meeting . how will jalal react , hope things get well for them .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetiii

Amazing update buddy

Ak tried to apologise to heera
And she denied him any if it
Ak got to see her dance and smile.. although fake
Oops
He saw her meet her ex
That's bad
Update asap buddy

I will try yo update as soon as possible😛😛😛
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