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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice chapter dear
Continue soon
Thanks for pm ๐Ÿ˜›
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#22
Amazing update
Loved it
Ak waiting for heera
And she's still mad over everything
Maham confessed her deeds
Update asap buddy
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Super Updates...
Shariff well planned and removed his obstacles...
Adham death horrified hira...
Atgah khan๐Ÿ˜ญ
Hira came to know about the biggest shock ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Jalal is eager to be with her but maham spoils that...
Its good mainavati senses something...
Ruks and salima convo is nice...
Ruks gonna be a mother ๐Ÿ˜Š
Maham last moments with Ja is emotional...she admits her real face...
Hope Ja will go to amer to meet hira..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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THANK YOU DEAR . YOUR VALUABLE COMENTS MEANS A LOT TO ME๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 6 years ago
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hira is gone...๐Ÿ˜ญ
& jalal is vulnerable...first hira then MA her bitter truth & the sad demise , will hira retur to him now or jalal has to go amber !

i hv few doubts , in previous chap. it was revealed that ruqs already knew about hira's real identity & confronted jalal , almost forced him to reveal it to her then why in this chap it was surprise to her plus her pregnancy it was already known to all even too hira as well then why it was written as if the news has come out now & hira doesn't know .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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amazing dear. Feeling sad for jalal. I am sure he must have some valid reasons that's why hide her identity from her. Please bring them together fast. update next part soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry fr late comment...
The chptr was nice
happy holi belated
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thanks for the holi wish๐Ÿ˜Š. So what if you read my ff late atleast you read it and that matters the most๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 6 years ago
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HERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER OF MY FF I HOPE EVERYBODY LIKES IT๐Ÿ˜›

CHAPTER 69

Hira woke up early in the morning she had her bath and then she went to the kali temple, theses days she comes to this temple every day , she just sits on the steps of the temple for hours and then after few hours she will go back to the palace , today also after pooja she was going back to the palace someone came front of her she saw her and lot of memories came into her mind , the face have changed a lot but she can still recognise him

Hira- How are you Panchanan it has been a long when we have met last time .

Panchana- can we talk , I have a lot to say.

Hira- yes we can but not now , if you want to talk to me meet me in the garden where we use to meet . Hira left the temple and she was thinking why she agreed , she reached the palace and went to her room , she did not came out of her room whole day. In the evening she went to the garden , she had a lot of memories in this garden, as a child she use to play here with princess Shivani a smile came on to her face but she had tears in her eyes she still can not deal with the truth, she was looking at the sky when Panchanan came and sat in front of her

Panchana- How are you Hira ?

Hira- I am fine panchanan you wanted to talk to me.

Panchana- yes let's wilk like we use to talk in the past. They both started walking. Hira said-

Hira- You have changed a lot it was heard for me to recognise you. I have heard that you have became a great painter , lots of Kings want you to make there portrait but you don't have much time.

Panchana- Painting my life changing painting was yours it changed my life forever. Hira looked at him and smiled-

Hira- It had changed my life to I became the queen of Sehensha- E-hind . Panchana looked at Hira who was looking in the front .

Panchana- Ya you are a queen now your life have changed how is the life in Agra.

Hira- It is usual like any other palace in Hindustan, Servants, politics, death penalties , betrail.

Panchana- Betrail what happend to you? You have became very serious . Hira smiled and said-

Hira- I am a queen now i have to be serious ,you have also changed a lot you have became more mature by your face

Panchana- I have heard a lot of things about Sehensha. People say that he had changed your religion , but now I know it's not true I have seen you in the temple .

Hira- Lot of people say lot of things about us I know that, only I know what sehensha had done for me and to protect my faith.

Panchana- Do you still remember the time we spent with each other? Hira was going to say something when Vishakha came to her and told her that someone is coming .

Hira- I have to go bye Panchanan , Before Panchana could say anything Hira left the garden with Vishakha .

Vishakha- Forgive me Hira , but do you even know what you was doing is completely unethical.

Hira- Why? What is unethical about meeting your childhood friend . Vishakha sid-

Vishakha- He is not only your childhood friend, remember you told me that there was a time when you both wanted to marry each other .

Hira- (By then they both have reached the secrate passage of the fort ) Hira went into her room, I agree but they was a childish thing I was very young then when I think about it now I realise that I never loved him it was just a deep friendship. Hira got into the bed to sleep.

Vishkakha- then tell me Malika do you love Sehensha , has he made a place in your heart... Hira looked at her and finally confessed

Hira- Yes I love Sehensha more than anything or more than anyone in this whole world, on that special day I really wanted confess my love to him , but the truth ruined everything.

Vishakha- May be he has good reason for it you should talk to him about it at least once

Hira- Vishakha I have always known Sehensha as an honest person , he always told me that it is very important to clarity in a relationship, then he had to do it?

Vishakha- Loooked at Hira and said Vachan , May be he has given his words to someone that he wull never tell you about this. Come on Hira we don't know exactly ehat has happened so please .

Hira- I think I had enough and if you don't mind I would like to sleep now bye and good night Hira blew the oil lamp and grabed a pillow Vishakha went out of her room. Hira closed her eyes , but the word Vachan stayed with her while she went to sleep.

Next morning Hira was busy selecting jewelleries for Shivani , Shivani herself has asked her for this fever Hira is happy that she is a part of her sisters wedding, but she is also sad that she can not spent time with her like sisters do before marriage . In the mean time Rani Mainawati has called Vishakha in her room Vishakha went to her room and did pranam to her Mainawati started the conversation.

Mainawati- Ekant ( All the maids left Mainawati's room) So Vishakha do you know why I have called you here?

Vishakha- No Ranisaa.

Mainawati- What's the matter that Hira is hiding? Why she is here without Sehensha ? Theses two questions Hit Vishakha's brain like a hammer if she does not reply to theses questions it will be a crime and if she does then she will betray the trust of a princess as well of a friend .

Mainawati- Come on answer me I don't have the time of the whole day to discuss this thing.

Vishakhakept mum for a moment and then said _ She knows the truth.

Mainawati- Truth wht truth. Vishakha loked at Mainawati once and then she put her wyes down-

Vishakha- She knows she knows that she knows that. Mainawati got angry and shouted

Mainawati- Oh come on tell me what is the truth she knows. Inside her heart mainwati knows what Vishakha was going to say , but she was just hoping that iy was not that truth.

Vishaka- She knows that she is the Eldelst dauther of Raja sa and you, she knows that she is the princess of Amber . Mainwati could not take this news for a moment her eyes became big her moth was open she sat still , Vishakha got afraid by this reaction_

Mainawati- Who? Why ? When ? sje even could not complete her sentence

Vishakha- Maham Anga on her last times told her about this 3 moths back, she left Agra just after that.

Mainawati- Does Sehensha knows about it.

Vishkha( her eyes on the floor) She just wrote a letter to him and left the fort. Mainawati gotg another shock she controlled herself and said-

Minawati- Now listen to me I order you to inform that Sehensha will reach Amber by tomorrow afternoon and I want her to welcome him like a true loyal wife , and I also want her to make preparations for that

Vishkha- As you wish rani Saa .

Mainawati _and one more thing you will not discuss this conversation with anyone, not even with Rajkuwri Hira do you understand

Vishkha- Yes rani saa Mainwati instructed her to leave her Hojra . When Vihskha was going towards Hira's rrom she was lost in thought when a Dasi came to her and gave her a latter which was written by Panchanan

In the letter he insisted that Hira meet him tonight in the woods behind the temple he has a lot to say, if she does not come he will come into the palace to meet her . Vihskha realised that she is in a big trouble from both sides then she waited for a moment and decided on what she wants to do .

She got into Hira's room she has just finished her pooja Vishkha took Arti and Prasad from her and said-

Vishakha- Pranam Rani saa said that Sehensha will reach Amber by tomorrow afternoon rani want you to welcome him. Hira put down the pooka thal but did not say anything Vishkha continued She also want you to make preparations to welcome him.

Hira- What kind of preparations?

Vishkha- The preparation which a Royal wife make to melcome her king husband. Hira did not say anything she just looked at Vishakha and said

Hira- Ok I will do as she wishes me to do. Hira left her room but she could not go anywgere as Mainawati called her to meet her in her Hojra she kept Hira busy in beuti treatments dining arrangements and also she kept asking her about what Sehensha likes to have what he does not like etc.. In the evening Vishakha went to meet Panchana he was waiting for Hira in the garden . Vishakha's face was coverd with her Dupatta , she was in a ghunghat , Panchana did not saw her face and he started talking-

Panchana- I knew you would come . When you did not answer my question I knew you do not love Sehehsa , lets run away from here let's just go away from all of this , I promise I will keep you happy. Vishakha removed her Ghunghat and said-

Vishakha- It's me not Hira she is not coming . This trick by Vishakha made Panchana very shocked-

Panchana- What are you doing here? Where is Hira will she not come to meet me ?

Vishakha- No she will not , she came to meet you as a friend and you misunderstood her.

Panchana- But last time when I had a conversation with her she did not seemed happy with her marriage.

Vishakha- She is going through an emotional phrase, but that does not mean she does not love her husband , Sehensha is coming to attend princess Shivani's marriage he will be here for few days and then he they both will go back to Agra. Please panchana saa stay away from her she is not an ordinary girl, but she is a queen and a...

Panchana- And what ever she is I love her , may be she has moved on , but I haven't . I love her I won't force her but I know that she is not happy.

Vishakha- Come on panchana saa she is wife of Sehensha she is a queen, do ypu know what is the meaning of what you are saying, Sehensha will kill you if you have thought about theses things in Agra god knows Sehensha would have killed you. Just stay away from her, she conceders you as a friend just let it be like that. Vishakha did not waite for any single moment and went back to the way of the fort.

The next day Jalal finally came to Amber , lot of memories came to his mind while he was walking the Alley , he was excited to see Hira begum agagin but when he reached the entrance he was welcomed by his mother in Law Rani AMainawati , then he eneterd the Janani deuri( Ladies section) of the palace where all the ladies were in ghunghat . Jalal was interested to know that what is going on he looked at mainwati she said-

Mainawati This is a ritual when the son-in-low first comes to take his wife from her home he have find his wife from the janani Dewari from these girls and he gets only one chance , if he is successfull he spent his first night in her bedroom with herand if he fails he have stay separate form her , and also he have to give a gift to that girl who he misunderstood as his wife. But Jalal has a choice if he wants he can avoid this ritual but then he mat be get criticised by his wife by not accepting the challenge( Mainawai Laughs)

PRECAP JALA WILL TRY TO CONVINCE HIRA. HIRA TO KNOW WHY JALAL HIDE THE TRUTH FROM HER . HIRA TO MEET PANCHANA FOR THE LAST TIME .

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Edited by msbhattacharya - 6 years ago
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[I WROTE THOSE CHAPTERS LONG TIME AGO . IF YOU READ THE CHAPTER WHERE JALA GIVES RUKAYIYA THE LETTER OF HIRA YOU WILL KNOW WHY RUKAYIYA IS PREGNENT ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ AND ABOUT THIS MIS LINK THANKS DEAR I WROTE THE CHAPTER LONG TIME AGO, i MYSELF FORGOT THAT RUKAYIYA KNEW ABOUT IT THANKS FOR REMINDIDNG. AND THANKS ONCE ANAGIIN FOR YOU HONEST REVIEW๐Ÿ‘
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