Originally posted by: Anushka8722
Bhavi di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲
Kis mitti ke bane ho aap??? 😲 Nahi aaj to bata hi do.. MORE THAN 10,000 WORDS!!!!!!!!!! GOD!!!!😲😲😲 How do you do it yaar (Govinda style😳).. You're the only author I know who gives updates of 10,000 and more words.. And believe me 1 more person giving an update of that length and I'll get a shock attack..
Now.. coming to the chapter.. am gonna read this again.. definitely.. because today is one of the best days of my life.. two two masterpieces I've got to read! Preet di's and yours!😳
Seriously.. the way you described their Inner feelings.. their confused emotions.. Hats off to you and it was superrr se bhi uparrr jaise phrases phi kam lag rahe hain aapke iss update ke aage...👏👏👏
Aapke hunar ko salam... How you showed that Jalal is going crazy for her.. That his desire for her is extraordinary.. that he can't live without seeing her.. Mind Blowing..😃
He knows his limitations ( Me: Pyaar mein ko hadd nahi hoti yaar..😆😳) that he can't marry a SUPPOSEDLY bandi urf dasi..😆 Are bhavu di aap hukm karo main to yahin inke saath phere karwane ko taiyaar baithe hun..😆
He is in love with her.. no doubt.. he cares for her.. he desires her..he is crazy for her.. Uff Jalal kya karte ho tum..Jodha ke saath saath humei bh iapna deewana bana diya... hayee mai marjawa mere Romeo..☺️Full on lattu.. hun???😉 The part when he says ki he knows that.. wait main exact words quote karti hun..😃 "she will never accept me, unless I marry her officially. She is a such a strong headed, untamable, fearless woman and clear about what she wants and not afraid to speak her mind, even after seeing my anger, she is still so obstinate and has no fear before arguing with me. Even Rukaiya doesn't dare to talk to me this way... Why do I always see deep hatred in her eyes with flashes of love for me? Why I feel she is also puzzled like me? May be she is also suppressing her feelings, I think I should at least propose to her. After seeing her, I have no interest left in any other woman. "
@Red.. Beta flashes of love nahi wo bhi tujh pe full on lattu hai ekdum teri tarah...😆lekin meri koi sune tabhi to..lekin bhavi di aap ho naa.. mera ye message Jallu ko de dena.. okay?😃
@Purple..Are wo to hai hi pagal.. bewkoof apni feelings chupa rahi hain.. lekin tu propose kar de.. shubh kaam mein deri kaise..😉
@Dark Blue.. Maybe??? Abhi lagaaun ek?? Maybe nahi abhi isi waqt.. matlab agle chapter mein hi sahi lekin propose kar diyo.. warna mujhe bura koi nahi hoga..😡😡😡
Ab dekho mere passionate Jallu ki ek jhalak...😳
"She can only be mine and I WILL make her mine. I will propose to her decently to become my concubine. If she refuses then I will find some other way to get her... but I will definitely make her mine, I am Shenshah E Hindustan and she will have to surrender herself to me."
@Red.. are tere isi attitude pe to main lattu hun Jalal...
Di dekho Radha ko bura lag raha hai ki maine uski taraf se nahi likha.. koi nahi main bahut free hun abhi likh deti hun..😆
"Oh Kanha! What is happening to me? Why can't I stop smiling?" She started to clean up and organize the room, her mind was also catching up with her speed of work. "Why am I feeling so content? Why do I feel like singing? Dancing? Why am I so excited? I feel like I have butterflies in my stomach!!! Oh god... I am feeling so wonderfully happy!!!! Why his eyes always draw me towards him? Whenever he gazes at me powerfully I forget myself. Why do I always feel so weak in front of him? He is capable of making me cry; his every word impacts me so much that I can't control my tears anymore. What is happening to me?"
@Purple.. Ise kehte hain Jalal ka asar.. samjhi?😆
"Oh he wants me, he really wants me."
Yes he does.. he does want you!😃
Lekin uske baad waali lines confused me didu.. kuch kuch aise..😕"NOOO!!!, I hate him', I really do hate this merciless cruel womanizer."
@blue.. haww!😲 kuch misunderstanding hui hai yaar.. mera Jalal aisa nahi hai.. bilkul nahi hai..main jaanti hun use.. *defensive look*
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Salima, Ja and Jo aka Radha's scenario was perfectly penned down di..👏how Jalal was acting possessive of her and Salima witnessed it..😳
Rahim's scene was quite touchy and emotional..😳
Then comes Salima and Hamida convo.. dekho sab jaante hai inke pyaar shyaar ke baare mein..😳😆
Are how could I forget..The law change!!!!!!👏👏👏 Kudos to my Jallu for that!!!!See how caring he is.. and Jodha says ki he's merciless cruel aur naa jaane kya kya..😡 Bewkoof ladki!
Uske baad jo Jodha aka Radha ki shaadi ki baath uthi.. hayee main to clean bold ho gayi..😆
Over-Under kuch nahi.. Jallu ekdum perfect contender hain.. m giving expert advice in this matter😎😆
Unka message message waala khel.. hayee only you can come up with such wonderful ideas didu!!!👏😳🤗
Control freak..😆 lekin ek baat kahun, ye control freak Jodha aka Radha ki care bahut karta hai.. haina?😉Lekin bhai kare bhi to kya kare, ishq, pyaar de mohabbat jo ho gayi hai ise..😆
And the much awaited Meena Bazaar..👏⭐️ though it wasn't as I expected.. (Me: wanted Jalal to go straight to Jodha aka Radha's tent..😭)
Lekin tab bhi.. bahut khoob describe kiya tha aapne..👏
Lekin Ja-Ruks ka romance kuch raas nahi aaya..😆 aadat se majboor..😆
Why was he feeling guilty??? Accha kiya.. ab yehi Radha ke saath karta to mujhe koi problem nahi thi.. lekin Ruks.. no .. never!!!!😡😆
Main to kehti hun ki accha hi kiya ki you didn't apologize to that chudail aka Rukaiya Sultan.. Ab to uski baar baar beizzati hogi.. tu baar baar sorry bolta thodi phirega...haina?
Kohinoor.. waah.. baklool ne diya Kohinoor..😆(PS: Learned this word from Varsha didu😳)..
Salima to as usual mature aur mashallah nikli.. see I'm so partial.. Ruks de diya to uski beizzati lekin iske gift ki to main khub tareef karungi.. after all she's Salima.. and She is RUKS!!!!!!
WO har jagah gaya.. lekin meri Radha aka Jodha ke stall par nahi gaya.. haww ...Wo bhi Ruks ki wajah se.. chudail kahin ki.. mere Radha Jalal ke beech aa gayi..😡😡😡
Poor Radha was crying soo badly.. because of that Ruks and Jalal too.. haan.. haan meri puri comment Jallu ki tareef se bhari hain.. but am really pissed off at him for doing this to my Jodha aka Radha..
Not done yaar.. Bechaari kais ro rahi thi.. so broken..😭😭 Mere bhi aansoo nikal aaye..😭 Poor girl..
Jalal knows that maybe he has lost his heart to her lekin still he's ignoring her.. on the pretext that he'll be UNFAIR to other begums?
Jab Rukaiya ki baat hoti hai tab ye unfair nahi hota.. ki wo use sabse zyada ahmiyat deta hain..are wo to sirf dost hai.. lekin Radha.. Radha to uski pehli aur aakhiri mohabbat hai naa..
Aap soch rahe hoge ki maine aisa kya khaa liya jo itni bakwaas kar rahi hun.. Iske liye mere paas ek gaana hai
"Kya karun O Ladies main hun aadat se majboor"😆😆
All in all no words for your update.. am speechless.🤣God! Itna bada lecture dene ke baad speechless kehna suit nahi kar raha...😆
Longest comment ever.. m sure😎
Lekin ab is torcher ko hum seh nahi paayenge.. jaldi se update karo.. theek hai?? and this is NOT a request, an order.. (Jallu style!😎😆)
Love you bahut saara.. truckloads!🤗❤️
Aur a bear hug to you!🤗
And thanks a ton for your pm my pyari Bhavu di!😳
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