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I am very much happy to see your email. you are starting new story. very impressive and attractive start. I like many part of your new story. Beautiful pictures. I love Jodha's firey look. Story Title is very attractive . and you have got picture appropriate. Jalal character is same not much change in it. but Jodha I am very much interested to see her Strong character and prologue I read at least three time to understand. I think Jalal had done something wrong to I mean may be rape. Why he is half naked with bloody scraches on his body? Why bloody chunni? Women screem? Salp? Angry eyes? Angry crying eyes? Doe like eyes(jodha has) Why dark gloomy night will written with golden ink? that indicate Jodha is involve in. Did Jalal rape Jodha? scary, I am really worried is it true? then what jodha will do? Also Jalal remember some flashes, indicate he was given some medicine or something that is why he doesn't remember anything. So He will not remember anything? I am really looking forward for this story. I have so many questions in my mind. I try not to get involve in new story. As you have suggested I have read dead love. I am in love with that story. I have cried while reading. Thank you once again for great suggestion. keep writing. God Bless you.
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