I am feeling sleepyπ..update plzz
Read nowπ
I am feeling sleepyπ..update plzz
Read nowπ
Yaaaayyyyy...
Update aa gaya
Interesting chapter
JJ fighting their own battles
But there wasn't any face off between the duo
:(
Loved the way Jo handles these petty issues
At least ruku is not so bad untill now
Update asap buddy
A biiiiiiiggggggggg chapter
Superb chapter...
Was expecting J-J meeting...
Update sooooon... With a long n beautiful meet of our love birds....
hope jalal dosent let ego overrule his love for jo. Maha manga and adham behaving as per their aukaat. They got more than they deserved, so unable to digest it.Superb chapter...
Was expecting J-J meeting...
Update sooooon... With a long n beautiful meet of our love birds....
But whatever maham told rukku is going to be true in futureπ³. Hope to see lovebirds together. Jalal is surrounded by leeches and thorns while jo is the beautiful rose who will spread her fragrance in jalals dark life which will be remembered for centuries to comeβΊοΈ
Awesome chappy Di
Want jo and jalal scenes
Wish to see them together without any differences
Update soon Di
Thanks for Pm Di
Sorry for the late reply Di
Great update. Jo is making her place in harem. And jalal realises that his ego is coming between him and Jodha.
Canβt wait to see what he does when he comes back
Beautiful update...
I read it all in A one go from where I leftπ
It's good to see that u re still updating... I thought that many must have left the forumπ but no I was so wrong.... οΏΌ Good to be back here again
Craving for a new update already π
Wowπ I was mean to write and work on my own Stories π but here I was busy reading your masterpiece such a beautiful amazing plot π
You penned down Expertily Shinning_Stuti di π€
i seriously just read few work of yours the only FF I read till now which wrote by you was NEW LIFE πand OS
Chittor Sieze
The sky was Scarlet π
And A guest of the Night
That to to late to comment However because of Divya di π³I come to know about this one thanks to Divya di π€ it will be first time when I will give review on your FFπ³ I hope and pray it's worth
Enough of my rant time to wrote about story π
From Prologue to 46 chapters what a slow but magnificent ways to penned down about Prologue , charachter , emotion place , war and most importantly plot seriously you had done incridable job π
Our JO JA meet in disguise π³
Their time together
Then the parting time π
Their loneliness and yearning for each other π
Their battles of life
I believe you can win every battle if you have support of love one πbut here unfortunately they were fighting with own people π
Jo pain and life which turn horrific after that Swine actions to put her down her own family didn't support her π the humilation she went through was π and when they met again it was more painful cause one denied and other π
But Ja condition was no different either he was having his own battle with his people and life π the person he always held on high regard turn again him the clash between Mentor and Pupil π
I just feel so bad for BK and JA there the time when Ja was pouring his heart out before his mother was so emotional π but more then that I was happy how she sensed her son's restlessness and yearning for someoneπ
"My favourite character Maanπ³ I like him so damn muchππΌ and you had given him enough space in story to rule my heart π I like Moti so much she's truly a friend everyone need in their life π³
Coming to Jo brothers' I don't like them at all they're always to proud to see beyond their own action which cause to much troubles π€
I don't like her mother and father either no matter what they're always to harsh and bitter in my view even if they love her in own way they're just never able to make me like them sometime I find them OTT huh the lesser of them the more I like π
I felt bad for Sujamal the men suffer so much and π like Jo even he suffer so much π he was one of my favourite character in JA Maybe cause it was played by Vickey π
Anyway coming to Mughal side I like Rahim the little chap is so adorable πwhenever I read his and Ja part it's bring smile on my face π Kids and their innocence π
Salima Hamida are cool ladies to however you stopped writing about Salima and Rahim where are they I wanted to see their meeting with Jo π
Is there by chance I can get my hand on Maham and Her moron son I so want to kill both of them how π€¬ they re I just don't like them at all and the way you wrote how cruelly he acted in Malwa π was so painful to even read I wanted Ja to hung him upside down but π
and that moron lady she dare to humiliate Jo how dare she and her so called Eunch π‘ I so want them to pay for this π‘
But the Engima lady Rukaiya Sultan I don't know why but I am liking her here and most importantly cause of how you're making her get befit reply from Jo
I don't mind to read her scene if she's going to get face strong jo
Overall the story is very intriguing it's hook me from past two days and because of this I even got scolding by my friend π nevertheless it's worth spending time Shinning_stuti di it's so beautiful story
please only one request gave update soon that's it π
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