I know I am very late to post my comment but got really busy with guests at home.
As usual, there are so many things to comment in ur long (which i love), awesome chapters. Jalal taking radha to his chamber iry big deal in front of all is a very big deal and it shows that how much she has started to matter for him and i love ruq's reaction on it too. Jalal taking care of Radha when she is unconscious and making her drink water in that state without worrying what she would say was nice to c. it's more important to save a life than to save a fast. Rahim is my most fav. character after jalal and radha. His love for radha is commendable. They remind me of yashoda maiyya and kanhaiya pair. when Radha wakes up and starts blasting jalal, i was like at least listen to what he wants to say but both r egoistic so jalal told her to leave and obviously, she had to leave bec it was his order. But bec of jalal's ego and radha's anger, one was going to be far from his lvoe while other was about to fail her mission. But, thanks to hamida, radha came back. I love HB of ur story. i liked the dialogue of mohabbat ke liye siyasat. I must say this jalal is teda and she wanted hb to help him and she undersood it too. It was nice to c jalal asking other hindu workers and then changing law so it would make it seems like radha was not the root cause. Then, radha and rahim milan was so cute. Finally, i loved the entire paragraph of radha falling on jalal and their conversationa nd their tussle. I also liked how it was right amount fo everything. I LOVED their lips brushing past each other. I cannot wait to c radha's reactions when she finds out about new law.
update soon.
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