FF: Registan Ka GULAB (Rose in Desert) Thread 1 Close Thread 2 Active - Page 86

wow wonderful chapter.😃 their chemistry is awesome👍🏼

Edited:Chapter5

Chapter6:

Waah Waah! Superb! I am in urdu mood today so excuse me if i go wrong or overboard :p
Aapka hindi ka talaffuz bada hi dil khush kar deta hai mujhko bhavini di...aur ye likhawat jo hai na aapki subhanallah! Waakai mein humei dekhke yakeen nahi hota ki aap itna zyada kaise likh leti hai :O Matlab hadh hoti hai shabdo ki ginti bhi bhul jaaye insaan aapke lafzon ke ulat pher ko dekhke. Aur woh jagah jahan jalal aur jodha ek dusre pe gir jaate hai...waaahhh! Matlab waaahhh kya gazab likha hai aapne unke moments ke baare mei hai, aur iss chapter mein sabse gaur karne waali baat thi jab aapne jagah jagah yeh dikhaane ki koshish kari ki dimaag mei toh jodha apna kaam na pura hone ki wajah se dukhi hai par dil se dekha jaaye toh woh sach mein jalal ke nazdeek aa gayi hai! Which is like the best part for me, you know small small things touch me in your update...for me updates whether small or long doesn't matter until it has enough matter to really consider it as a next important step in your story! This is an indication for you that if by chance you write a small update, i am there for you XD XD
Haha keep writing di you are one wonderful writer 🤗

Meee so late lateef!
Sholly Di I just came online now!
*Holds Ears*
Sorry
But di seriously ab main kya kahun
Awesome,Fantabulous,Mind blowing,Superb ye sab I've used to describe you 😃
Meri to vocabulary hi choti pad gayi 😳
Too fir,lets say ki It was superrr se bhi upparrr type ka update tha! 👏
Sacchi mein!
OMG THEY KISSED 😲 ❤️ ❤️
Pallavi di ne sahi kaha hai, aap romance ki amma ho! 👏 😳
You've penned their feelings at seperation beautifully! Actually itta beautifully ki beautifully word bhi chota pad gaya 👏
Naa jaane aap log itta talent kahan se laate ho 😲
Mujhse bhi share karo 😉
Aww my hamida's so understanding!! Wo to dono ki hi manostithi samajh gayi 😆
Love her tonnes for that! 😃
Aur wo to chodo, I thought Radha will kill Jalal for breaking her fast.
And she really bursted on him, no doubt, lekin SHE apologised? 😲
Shocking! 😆 But indeed lovely 👏
Aww poor Ruku, when you said ki she felt like pulling her hair, I was saying " To nikaal lena Euku. Roka kisne hai?"
Aur phir wo un sab ko maar deti (as u mentioned) aur use faasi ya umar kaid ho jaati 🤣
Ameen! 😃
Hayeee why didnt it happened? Phir Radha aur Jalal ka romance to too much hi tha jii! 😳
My Radha is tooo shy
But somehwere she also likes him naa? 😃
And when Jalal questioned her ki doesnt she likes this closeness I whispered "Bade guts hai bande mein" 🤣
Radha ka reaction mast tha!
Di the way Radha was talking to him, I felt ki she likes him,not sure
Ab iss chote se bacche mein itti akal thodi hain 🤣
Jaldi update karo, phir 3 updates ek saath ho jaayenge jisme humari BELOVED 😡 RUKU ki beizzati hui!
Too excited for next update!
Hayee update soony soony! 🤗
Bada waala thank u for updating
Use bada waala thank u for pm
Aur usse bhi bada I LOVE YOU ❤️

Originally posted by: rima4ever

haw bhavini di

jodha will betray him

i will never forgive her

why only jalal has to suffer

jodha should also suffer na

when jalal really did not do any sin

why should he get punishment

so not fair

This story has lots of twist and turns... Jalal might have done something wrong unknowingly... or may be not... May be it is her misunderstanding... but whatever it is... Her mission is revenge... But day by day she started seeing his plus points... Soon there are few things will happen when Jalal will do something which will shaken and surprise her... Her heart will fall in for him sooner or later... then you will pity for her ... because she will be so confuse... it will be jung between her mind and heart... this story is intense emotional... It is going to be roller coaster for readers... so enjoy it till they fall for each other... How she will fall in love is interesting...

I know U R not forgive Radha if she betrayed him... but the question is will Radha betrayed him?

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

This story has lots of twist and turns... Jalal might have done something wrong unknowingly... or may be not... May be it is her misunderstanding... but whatever it is... Her mission is revenge... But day by day she started seeing his plus points... Soon there are few things will happen when Jalal will do something which will shaken and surprise her... Her heart will fall in for him sooner or later... then you will pity for her ... because she will be so confuse... it will be jung between her mind and heart... this story is intense emotional... It is going to be roller coaster for readers... so enjoy it till they fall for each other... How she will fall in love is interesting...

I know U R not forgive Radha if she betrayed him... but the question is will Radha betrayed him?

Originally posted by: rima4ever

whatever matter it is

when there is an issue

u have to see it from all sides

u cannot make decisions based on just what u see

so jodha should do that too

When she will sees both side of Jalal will make her so crazy confuse... which one to trust...😆

good then

Dekha hai tujhko jabse
Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya

Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
PALAT...

Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai

*sry di...bohut serious baatein ho rhi thi naa...isliye*

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

Dekha hai tujhko jabse
Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya

Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
PALAT...

Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai

*sry di...bohut serious baatein ho rhi thi naa...isliye*

i know I KNOW !!!!! M MAD😆😆

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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

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