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Posted: 10 years ago
part 6

jalal is hell worried now he is panicky and eccentric
all are looking at him strangely but he does not notice
ruq is of course super seething in jealousy
poor jalal cannot think of anything else now
jalal was in a dilemma
if he gives her water when she is unconscious
then he will commit a sin
if he does not give her water then she can die
he chooses to commit a sin to save her life
now he wants to marry her and be with her forever
hameeda is shocked to see jalal care for her
i did not get what was hameeda doing
by asking him these many questions
jodha wakes up and sees jalal and rahim
i just loved jalals speech here
she was really acting like an arrogant selfish egoistic
good jalal makes sure she cannot leave the palace
jalal went to hameeda to clear his confusion
but hameeda is being tedha to deal with him
jalal has found out about the hindu pooja
he is even ready to change the law
but he does not want people to know the reason for the change
hameeda is making her own plans
she gives him a good plan to change the rule

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg she was here with a horrible misison
now she is to stay here and make him fall in love
this is just so disastrous i cannot believe it
is she really a woman ? can she really break his heart
i will hate her if she does that to my poor jalal
hameeda comes to meet jodha and stop her
she has a plan and that works too well
she convinces jodha to stop and go later
loved the jodha rahim convo so much
i want rahim to know of her plans
i want to see his reaction when he knows
that jodha is here only to break jalals heart
rahim is so perceptive and intelligent
he understands so well that radha is irritated with jalal
loved the dek scene and how he handled managed it all
thank god she felt her self respect hurt
and she was kicked out from his house
hope her plan never succeeds
omg now they both fight and have a war of ego
uff why is she so proud and arrogant
loved their bickering even the passionate fight
aww they had an accidental kiss

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

am so sorry bhavi di

neither could i give my usual review
nor i could give it in time
please forgive me
i am in lack of time now

Yaar Rima ab tu sorry mat bolna... I understand myself... I am so much backup in commenting in many ff... but I have enjoyed reading part 5 comment... why u think not usual...yaar I loved it... and late to hota rehta hai... pata hai me to comment dene se pehle sabse pehle bina soche sorry likhti huπŸ˜† Love U sweetu
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rima... she is on a mission... From her child hood she hated Mughals and Jalal... actually in her mission their is a twist... now seem like next step is to make him fall for her... but do U think so she will be able to save her self from falling for him???? she is also confuse with him... he is also surprising her every minute with genuine care and respect for women... love for Rahim... he gave his fun night for Rahim... He change rule for old Mughal dasi in the beginning... which is really surprising for her... when she came to palace her heart had only hatred but little by little it's changing... at one point her mission will be so much difficult for her... She will trapped in her own game... and About her Arrogance... that is her character... she is more egoistic and arrogant than Jalal... that is her character... I have written in character sketch too...
Edited by shahbhavini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i know that bhavi di
but right now i am a bit angry with her
do not mind please your story is brilliant
just that she is too tough a nut to crack
normally girls are not so hard harsh and revengeful
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Tu to meri Jodha ke piche nah dho ke padi hai... bichari... se kitna kam karvaya... bathroom ka bhool gayi... tera kamina jalal us se malish karvana chata tha😑 ek to nikal diay aur phir Jallu ne taunt kyu mara... tum abhi tak mehel me kya kar rahi ho... bichari puri rat bench pe bethi thi... Aese kese bichari ko rulata hai... Jallu ko jo bhi karna tha... Radha ko bata ke karna tha na... ek to Hamida ke khandhe bandook rakh ke goli chalata hai... Radha ko yahi lag raha hai... Jalal ne utha ke fek diya mehel se...πŸ˜† Aur sabko kyu itni excitement hai jab pata chalega...ki Radha is a princes... sabse pehel uske dimag my yahi aayega ki vo yaha kyu aai hai... koi happy happy feel nahi karega...😑 Upar se usko betrayal feeling hogi... pata chalega to Radha ko chodega nahi fasi pe chada degaπŸ˜† tu jalal ka gussa janti to hai... meri pyari radha...aur tera kamina jalalπŸ˜†


Haayyee rabba 😲 ... tune toh durga ka roop le liya πŸ˜† ... haan , teri jodha agra palace mein khud hi UNGLI karne aayi hai ... toh ab jalal bhi kya kar sakta hai ...🀣 ... woh bhi bandi ban ke aayi hai ...toh bandi ke jaise hi usse treat karenge na πŸ˜† ... are taunt isi liye maara becoz ... jodha ne usse kya kya nahi bola ... toh uska ego hurt ho gaya hai ... isiliye gusse mein bol diya ... teri jodha ko bhi apne gusse pe kabu nahi rehta hai ... aur jalal bhi waisa hi hai ...

haawww 😲... gussa toh jalal ko zaroor aayega when he will come to knw about radha's identity ... becoz jodha is a spy ... so but obvious jalal will be angry ... nahi toh kya jodha ki aarti utarega spy banke aane ke liye 🀣 btw teri jodha bhi kuch kam kamini nahi hai samjhi 😑 & its very obvious that jalal will be betrayed after knowing radha's truth ... becoz radha is playing with his feelings 😭 ... ye sahi nahi kar rahi hai jodha 😑 ... aur upar se jalal is changing for good ... sab paani mein chala jayega if jodha betrayes him 😭

Mera jalal bechara hai ... kamini toh teri ye jodha hai ... jo sher ko ungli karne aayi hai 🀣
Edited by varshaakulkarni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni


Haayyee rabba 😲 ... tune toh durga ka roop le liya πŸ˜† ... haan , teri jodha agra palace mein khud hi UNGLI karne aayi hai ... toh ab jalal bhi kya kar sakta hai ...🀣 ... woh bhi bandi ban ke aayi hai ...toh bandi ke jaise hi usse treat karenge na πŸ˜† ... are taunt isi liye maara becoz ... jodha ne usse kya kya nahi bola ... toh uska ego hurt ho gaya hai ... isiliye gusse mein bol diya ... teri jodha ko bhi apne gusse pe kabu nahi rehta hai ... aur jalal bhi waisa hi hai ...

haawww 😲... gussa toh jalal ko zaroor aayega when he will come to knw about radha's identity ... becoz jodha is a spy ... so but obvious jalal will be angry ... nahi toh kya jodha ki aarti utarega spy banke aane ke liye 🀣 btw teri jodha bhi kuch kam kamini nahi hai samjhi 😑 & its very obvious that jalal will be betrayed after knowing radha's truth ... becoz radha is playing with his feelings 😭 ... ye sahi nahi kar rahi hai jodha 😑 ... aur upar se jalal is changing for good ... sab paani mein chala jayega if jodha betrayes him 😭

Mera jalal bechara hai ... kamini toh teri ye jodha hai ... jo sher ko ungli karne aayi hai 🀣

Kamina jalal parai aurat ko chuta hi...chhhiii... radha ko chodta hi nahi... chodta hi nahi...to meri Radha kya uski puja karegi... 🀣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Kamina jalal parai aurat ko chuta hi...chhhiii... radha ko chodta hi nahi... chodta hi nahi...to meri Radha kya uski puja karegi... 🀣

aur tera vo sher meri radha ke samne miyao ho jata hai🀣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Rima... she is on a mission... From her child hood she hated Mughals and Jalal... actually in her mission their is a twist... now seem like next step is to make him fall for her... but do U think so she will be able to save her self from falling for him???? she is also confuse with him... he is also surprising her every minute with genuine care and respect for women... love for Rahim... he gave his fun night for Rahim... He change rule for old Mughal dasi in the beginning... which is really surprising for her... when she came to palace her heart had only hatred but little by little it's changing... at one point her mission will be so much difficult for her... She will trapped in her own game... and About her Arrogance... that is her character... she is more egoistic and arrogant than Jalal... that is her character... I have written in character sketch too...



Yep Bhavini.. when Jodha started off with her mission, she never would have anticipated this.. lest she shouldn't have entered the harem.. πŸ˜† waise, how many chapters left before Jodha's identity is revealed?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti



Yep Bhavini.. when Jodha started off with her mission, she never would have anticipated this.. lest she shouldn't have entered the harem.. πŸ˜† waise, how many chapters left before Jodha's identity is revealed?

Sach kahu hema... I have shared entire story with Ayesha... and I tell her next track I will do that... I never planned for fasting in this story... aur uspe hi mene two three chapter ho gaye... sach kahu to abhi bahot sare track baki hai... to revel the truth... it is going to be very much tuff for Radha to act on her mission...
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