FF: Registan Ka GULAB (Rose in Desert) Thread 1 Close Thread 2 Active - Page 8

Originally posted by: baubles

Heyya Bhav di...congrats on starting a new SS!!! 🤗

Somu Darling... Thank U so much for UR COMMENT😃

Lovely characterisation...Jo is a bit different in this one...interesting!😉

YES!!! JO IS LIT BIT DIFF... INTHIS STORY...HOPE READERS LIKE IT

Looking forward to the coming chapters..and see how these characters evolve! 😳

Update soon..love ya🤗

love U sweetu🤗

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Originally posted by: ms.dhingra

superb diii...

Swati My Sweethert... Missing U ... Aaj Kal If ko bhool gayi ho...Kaha ho😃
kya likhte ho yr aap. nd ds cherry on cake z ds thread..vry attractive nd colourful. m getting attracted like a kid😆.

Swati I love colors... I am so happy U like thread... 1st story aese hi start ki thi... to socha chalo isko sajate hai😆 U R attracted like kid😆

superb start...wow jodha's character sketch z awsm. strong nd bold...mixture of 16th nd 22nd century...superb.

U right... She is tuff and strong persong

my jalal...aah again akdu, sdu, khadoos...bt i luv him as he is...wt he did with dt gal m dying to knw.

My Akdu Khadoos Jallu...😆 I only like akdu... angry and khadoos Jallu...😆 So I didn't change him... In this story Jo and Ja both are same personality... lets he see what happens...

plz continue soon.

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Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks..brilliant..please update sooon

Thank U so much😃

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

congrats for the new story...
awesome prologue...

Thanks😳

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Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

From where do u get such amazing story yaarr ...!!! i take a bow for ur thought process ... i am just out of words ... cant express ... Speechless ... i am so much in love with ur stories ,,,, GOD SAVE ME 😳

p.s - i am still reading "is it hate or love" ... thatz d best story ever written

luv u n ur work ❤️

Varsha My Sweetheart... Thank U for so much love... I love it everytime U say U love IS IT HATE OR LOVE... That story is my love too... my first baby... first time ever I wrote something... First few chapter I have kept same... I read it few days ago and I am surprise to see I have really improved in my writing... I am ready with new story... UFF... I am really sacred to start new story... Because I believe in once U start something complete it... So I a worried... and this concept with really different... People might don't like to see different Jodha... Lets hope for the best... and Thank U so much for your encouraging words... Love U sweetheart...

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

good start...liked it...

Thanks Bhavya...😃

Originally posted by: Jaisoif

Lovely start, I'm sure this is also going to be a great story just like your other one, can't wait to read the next part, as I'm totally clueless about why Jalal is in this condition, please update soon, thank you for sharing!!!

Thank U so much encouragement... I hope everyone like this story...

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Unres

This is awesome! I'm so proud of you di 🤗

My sweetheart... Thank U Jaan🤗

this story is so much different from the rest and I must say that I'm in love with this story and in pretty sure that this story is going to grow into my heart, deep inside.

Yaar ab to muje dar lagta hai... Hope me sabki expectation ko fulfill kar pau😊

What did actually happen between Ja-Jo.. I was in awe when u wrote the golden ink part, it seemed so royal and posh!

Mene bahot soch ke likha hai...iss liye wording thode better hai... I can write better when I think and write😆 par I am very impatient... Me jyada tar sochti nahi bas likh deti hu...I am glad U like my sochne wali effort😃

Loved it! ❤️Post the next part soon..

Vohi soch rahi hu... Kya update karu ... Yeh story ya... IS IT HATE OR LOVE? Me confuse

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Originally posted by: manuluvpari

its really really really very differnt
i m veri exited to read more plz jaldi

Shayar to hum hai shayari banate rahenge

aapko shayari me qaid karate rahenge

Aap yuhi likhte rahiye kahaniyaan

aapki har kahanipar ghazal banate rahenge

Manisha Sweetu😊 Thank U so much... I am glad U like this prologue... and diff story... I am excited too...lol

Originally posted by: manuluvpari

Hey di 😛
i lyk dis title registaan ka gulab
And seriously When i saw dis title some words
Came in my mind and i just jotted them.
I know dis is not suit wid
your story.
But hope u like it 😃

jodha akbar wo premkahani hai jiski gawaah ye chand taare aftaab hai

unki dastaan-e-muhabatt khud us parwadigaar(god) ne likhi ek
sunhare panno ki kitaab hai.

Agar wo shahanshah-e-hindustaan hai
to wo unki mallika-e-hind noor-e-amer registaan ka gulaab hai

yaar vow... kya soch hai... I think this will suit with my story ... They will fall in love at some point😆 Thank U so much.. I have update my main post too... added few lines from here