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nice chapter...👏...update plz

Originally posted by: hasinishashi

nice chapter...👏...update plz

thanks😃

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Res ill comment soon!!!!!!! Surely!!!

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

Res ill comment soon!!!!!!! Surely!!!

saumy to kab unres karegi😆

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Originally posted by: Pallavvi

bhaaavvvuuu...😲

Pallavviii...pallu darling... U know I am really missing ur writing.. Yaar I missing Azra... Nancy... U... Aachal... aap log sab muje chod ke chale gaye... me sad... Yaar ek os hi likh de... aur ha bata tera interview kesa raha...

tere liye kuch likha hai maine...😉

😳😳😳 Dekh me besharam sharma rahi hu...

"kya kahu tumhari writing ke liye meri romance ki amma"

"ke teri stories ke crush ne mujhe kar diya nihayati nikamma"😆

Tu na maar khayegi... Meri story ne tuje Nikamma kar diya...😕 ab computer open kar aur likhna start kar... yaar aaj kal mera bhi yahi haal hai... me bhi nikambi ho gayi hu😆 mera mind chalna band ho gaya hai😃

jokes apart...

yaar this story is far different from my fav IS IT HATE OR LOVE...

But one thing is in common...teri jodha girti bahut hai...😆

when i read this update mujhe IS IT HATE OR LOVE ki starting updates yaad aa gayi...😆

Actually UPVAS is my speciality... I do lot of fasting... I have done 30 days straight without any food fasting... I am jain... in Jain we do lot of fasting... so meri story me bhi fasting aayenge na😆

jab jodha humesha behosh ho jaaya karti thi...😆

poor jodha...yaar tu apni jodhas ko bahut suffer karati hai...😡

Yeh Jodha bahot strong hai... usko kuch nahi hone wala... uski jaban bhi utni hi tej hai don't worry😆

aur ye idiot jallu...apni feelings chupane ke liye...behaving so mercilessly with jo...😭😡

vo na pura pagal ho chuka hai😃 but soon he will control himself... yeh naya naya ehsaas hai na... iss liye

but he cant deny the fact now...that he is madly in love with this girl..

and if not love..then he is madly obsessed with this girl...

Actually he is madly obsessed... and also deeply in love so fast😳 He can not even digest it... pura confuse hai...😆

i just love your jodha...she is so determined, controlled, dignified and most important..the NEVER SAY DIE element of her...👏

what u mean by NEVER SAY DIE... me confuse😕

U know I love love this Jodha... Jisne Jalal ki nind chin li hai... abhi age age dekh ... use me kya kya karvati hu😃

i just love her spirit...jalal ko bahut problem hone wali hai beta...😉

bahut papad belne padege usko paane ke liye...

Uska to papad belne se bhi kuch nahi hone wala😆 Yeh sach me koi aasan chiz nahi hai😆 but as soon as Jalal control his emotion... Radha will see him ignoring her... he will really try his best to control over his emotion... he will get success somewhat...but me age nahi batungi... muje pata hai tuje pata chal gaya hai kya hone wala hai yaha😃

i m wondering what will he do as she is leaving the palace in three days...🤔

will he stop her...but he is a shenshah so his ego will not allow him to do so...😈

U right he will not stop her

then agar wo chali gayi to bhi panga hai...

uper se i think usko lene shayad wo king aayega...i forgot his name whom her mother has selected for her...😡

Mera time paas Surya hai... Yes he will come... Per abhi usme thodi der hai...

would love to see jalal burning in jealousy...👏😃

vo to jal bun ke raakh ho jayega😆

poor radha yaar...she is in so much worst condition...😭

but what to do...jalal will not bend his rules and radha will not give up...😡

bada complicaton hai...😭

Are Yaar me bhi confuse hu... ek taraf.. Jalal nahi juk sakta aur dusri aur Radha bhi stuck hai...

i loved the extreme concern of jalal when he saw her burned hands...😃👏

u described it marvelously...i got goosebumps while reading...⭐️👏

but jo is too tough to handle...😆

awww... I am glad u like that...Poora pagal diwana Jalal😳

even after being in so much pain she never forgot to remind him her limits...👏

really this girl has got guts...i just love her...👍🏼

Yeh aasani se manne walo me se nahi hai... 😛

and yes...that zarina wala scene...one of my fav songs...

Sach batau to vo song ke liye mene pura scene likha😆

bechari wanna seduce him...but loved the way her every line reminded him of radha...

yaar kya brilliant scenes likhti hai...👏

then drunk jalal reaching to salima's chamber...ye banda to ishq me bavla ho gaya hai...😆

i totally imagined rajat's expressions while singing "IN AANKHO KI MASTI" in a drunk tone...☺️

I am so so glad U imagine my Rajat... awww... While writing I was imagining him too😃 I am sure tuje meri bekar writing bhi pasnad aai hogi... Rajat so scene ho wo bekar ho hi nahi sakta😃

poor guy is so much dejected because of her rejection...😭

Muje uski halat dekh ke hasi aa rahi hai... bas ab jyada door nahi hai agra ke pagal khane me jane ke liye 😆

i believe he is the same person who molested jodha earlier and that is why she hates him so much...

hehehhe tu jo chahe soch le ...me nahi bataungi😆

but yet having little concern about him and blushing at his complements was surprising for me...😲

Yaar muje bhi surprise ho raha hai.. Vo vaha revenge lene aai hai... ya romance

and yes yes yes...Rukku ki beizzati...how can i forget...👏⭐️

how much i wish yaar...ke show me esa kuch dikhaye...😭

maza aa gayi..the way he supported radha and gave a tight slap on Rukku's face by announcing her as the winner...🥳

and esp mension that smirk at the last to rukku...

i seriously felt like clapping and whisking like a typical tapori at that point of time...🥳

Ek baat batau tere siva Jalal ka smirk kisi ne notice nahi kiya... I wrote it so everyone notice but... kisi ne nahi kiya Ruku ka to me aesa hal karungi... ki gin gin ke badla lungi😃

i just love it when jallu shuts rukku up...😃

Yeh Jalal kisi ki bhi nahi sunta... and he knows that ruku is mean... but he care about her ...uski dost hai na

all in all...a very emotional...and as i always say rollar costar ride type of update...👏

Roller Costar 😳

love u bhavu...❤️🤗

LOVE U TOO JAAN🤗🤗🤗

update soon..☺️🤣

UPDATE BESHARAM... LADKI... PEHLE TU UPDATE DE

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Originally posted by: justlovetv

Di! Sorry for the late comment!🤗 I had read the update but wasn't getting the time to comment!

Sweetu tu sorry mat bol... Yaar I understand U got busy in colleage

Anyways, the update was fab! I just love Radha! She is too damn fearless! Usse na Jalal na Ruqu ka dar hai!😳 I love the way she answers Jalal back!👏. But she is full-on vachan ki pakki! Jaan jaaye par vachan na jaaye! In this case, agar aur bhooki rahi toh jaan chali hi jaayegi!😲 Kitna upvaas karegi? But her mind is very strong!😳

Yap She is very strong Minded...Kitne updvas karegi... ab tak sirf tin din hue hai... bas next update me upvas done...

Ruqu toh sachmein😡. Kitna usko niche dikhana chahti hai!😡 She thought that Radha would not be able to make the food. But Radha ne kamaal kar diya with slight difficulty! Kitni pareshaani hui bechaari ko! But this gal is determined! She won't bow down to Ruqu at any cost!😃 She finally won the contest! Slap on Ruqu's face!😆

Jodha doesn't like defeat... vo bhi kafi arrogant hai... to phir easily give up nahi karti

Jalal seems attracted to her but he doesn't want to admit it to himself! That is why he keeps going to the courtesans I guess. He has many of them after all! But still, even that courtesan's dance could not help him forget about her! He ultimately landed up drunk in Salima's room, drunk!😆 It reminded me of that scene in JA, where Jallu is in tension because Jodha is hiding things from him and he lands up in her room drunk!😆 And he stayed over in the room!😳

Jalal doesn't want to admit his feelings... I am so happy while reading Rajat came in your mind...

I just hope Radha apna fast tod de jaldi! She has already landed up on the bed!😡 If she keeps doing this then mar jaayegi!😡 Par aisa bhi achcha hoga ke her health deteriorates further and Jalal takes care of her!

She will not break her fast... until devi ji farmaish puri nahi hoti😆

Meena Bazaar mein kya hoga I wonder! I hope Radha teaches Ruqu a lesson again!😆

Ruku ka bura haal hone wala hai... Radha will surprise Jalal... and Jalal will be helpless again

Btw loved the song you used di!👏😃 (mene yeh scene song ke liye hi likha tha😆)

Love you loads! And update soon! I really love this story!😳

thank U so much yaar... I am so happy U love this story😳

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Thank U everyone for reading this Story and Commenting on it

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Seeing her falling on ground, Jalal forgot that he is king of kings in front of that many kings and administrators, he screamed like someone stabbed his heart, he shouted so loud that entire dinner hall echoed back three times... Radha... Radha... Radha...

His face filled with terror, out of the blue Jalal's concern shocked each and every administrator to core. No one was looking at Radha, everyone's eyes got stuck with amusement on Shenshah E Hindustan... A heartless, cruel, dominant, control freak, egoistic, self-centered king concerned for a low class common Hindu maid. His fearful face stunned every single person in the room including Abdul, Atgah Sahib, Shariffudin and many more, who had not even single clue about who is Radha...??? The way he praise her food, the way he looked at her, the way he screamed at Rukaiya for Radha, everyone's mind started to put puzzle pieces together, Shehenshah never cared for any women, he never bothered to look same women again other than Rukaiya begum and some of his khaas begum. Everyone knew for him women are his winning trophy, they are only for his nightly pleasures, nothing more than that... He didn't even give much importance to Rukaiya in diwan e khas, also didn't allowed her in Diwan to take any decision. Rukaiya was given control to manage his harem women just because he didn't wanted to see them in day time with their problems. In his eyes none of them valued to this extent. For him women are for his entertainment and nothing more than that...

Jalal with loud roar "YELL... Call HAKIM immediately..." He carried her in his arms and walk towards his chamber. Seeing this Rukaiya felt like as if earthquake has come in her life, even in her dreams she never thought Jalal will give this much importance to this bandi... At one point, she felt like pulling her own hair and kill everyone who saw this... First Jalal insulted her for this mamuli bandi and second he carried her in his arms and took her to his own chamber where no women are allowed... She was trembling in anger... Everyone was looking at each other shocked and not able to understand what just happened...??? Who is this Radha? Why Shenshah is showing so much concern for her?

With deep stormy silence, gloomy night was glowing with gleam again today... Wind were calmer and cooler.

Jalal put her on his big royal bed carefully... Seeing her pale and lifeless body, his tears pricked out of his eyes... He is still in the shock seeing her in this condition, his mind is not ready to think about what he just did in front of so many people and any way he acts according to his desire, he never bothered what others will think of his act, he loves to amuse people with his action and power... At this time, his concern was only Radha, nothing else matters... He sprinkles some water on her face but that didn't help...

Hakim entered in the chamber to check on same bandi again... She examined her pulse... eyes...tongue... skin... with extremely worried face she said... "Shenshah, she is much weaker than last time, her pulse dropped drastically low before she could say anything else..." Jalal with angry tone, "Hakim Sahiba, hum kuch sunana nahi chahte, aap iska ilaj kijye, chahiye to aur bhi hakim bulaiye par Radha ko kuch nahi hona chahiye."

Hakim with fearful tone replied "Ji huzoor, hum puri koshish karenge, hume lagta hai yeh ladki apna bilkul dhayan nahi rakhti, uske sharir se pani ki matra bahot cum ho gayi hai, aur hum ne registan ke ilake me barso kam kiya hai, vaha par bahot sare logo ko humari ankho ke samne sharir me pani ki matra cum hone ke karan marte hue dekha hai... Shenshah gustakhi ke liye mafi par humne pichli baar jaach ke baad bataya tha ise pani ki sakat jarurat hai, kya aapne use bataya tha..." she was almost shivering while questioning Jalal...

Jalal with regretting tone... "Hakim sahiba hum bhoole nahi the... par Radha ne tin din se kuch khaya aur piya nahi hai, usne roza rakha hai..."

Hakim with worried tone "Shenshah, She needs to drink water immediately, she is sinking, her pulse has dropped drastically, her skin is extremely dry, I don't see much time left for her... if you want to save her we need to give her water immediately that is a last resource to save and I am not sure if her body will start to retain water again quickly or not... Shenshah, you have to make decision and let me know if I can give her water..."

Hearing Hakim, Jalal shaken to his core...He looked at her pale dry face, her glow was completely gone from her face, her pain was clearly visible on her face. Gradually, she was sinking, he was in dilemma, if he broke her fast in her unconscious stat then he will end up doing Gunah E Azim himself and if he doesn't do than he might lose her forever... His heart was not ready to afford this loss... In panicked sound he said Hakim sahiba "Prepare medicine for her immediately, I will feed her water and medicine, I can't let her die for her stubbornness, it is my duty to save a person who is dying in front of my eyes..." He speak softly to himself... "Allah, Iss gunah ke liye hume baksh dena..."

He took the spoon of water from the glass and did prayer to Allah and started to feed her water...Hakim amused seeing Jalal feeding her water with so much care... She instructed him not to feed her too much water at the same time and instruct him to increase water gradually and steadily her body will started to retain water again, with the request she said to Jalal, if she can leave and get some energy medication for Radha...

Jalal and Radha both are alone in his big chamber. He is looking at her pale and weak face, even in this condition her doe like beautiful close eyes and innocent pale face was glowing with her purity. He was stunned to see that for her words, her promise, she is standing near the door of the death but till last second she struggled and fight to keep her dignity...

He softly caress on her cheeks and said "Radha, hum ne tumhari jaan bachane ke liye yeh gunah kiya hai, par hum tumhe yeh kese bataye ki tum humari jaan ho gayi ho... tumhara dard humare sine mein khanjar ki tarah chubta hai... Radha kaash tum koi Shehzadi hoti to hum tumse bakayda nikah karte... tumhe apna bana lete..."

Jalal continued to feed her water every few minutes. Hakim came and gave Radha some energy ark with water for her faster recovery, she examined Radha and with happy sound informed Jalal that "she has started to recover, in few hours she will be conscious and completely out of danger..."

In entire palace rumors spread like a fire about Shenshah and Radha were the hot topic of the day, everyone started to connect dots and making up their own stories... Rahim wanted to see Radha, a little child was missing his new family, his choti ammi, his abbu... After school, he has not seen Radha was making him restless. Hamida and Rahim spend entire day together, Rahim started to get bored, he also heard gossip, few maid were talking about it... Radha got unconscious in the dinner hall... little kids heart sink, hearing about Radha's condition, Hamida also felt sad for her but she was really surprised with Jalal's behavior ... She didn't expect Jalal to change this soon...

Hamida and Rahim both went to see Radha to Jalal's chamber... Without any announcement Hamida and Rahim entered in the chamber... Hamida got shocked to see Jalal feeding water to Radha and caressing on her forehead...She got confused seeing Jalal feeding her water in her unconscious stat, while she is fasting ... She is sleeping on his bed... It was surprising for her to see change Jalal... Jalal never liked anyone enter in his private chamber... he never let anyone other than Rukaiya touch his bed...

Rahim with loud worried sound... Shenshah... And ran towards him and hugged him... and with low tone ...kya hua choti ammi ko... He was holding his tears for long... And seeing Radha on bed lying lifeless... he started to cry in fear and asked him is she going to die... Jalal carried him immediately and hugged him tight...they both were feeling somewhat same... With whisper Jalal said...shhh... Rahim... tumhari choti ammi ko kuch nahi hoga... Vo jald hi thik ho jayegi... Aur tum to bade bahadoor bache ho na...to phir chaliye Khane khana ache bache ki tarah aap chup ho jaiye... aur apni choti ammi ke paas jake let jaiye... Aaj aap humare paas hi soyenge... Rahim with smile said sachhi ... hum aapke paas yaha pe soyenge... Jalal with little smile ... ha Rahim yaha humare paas...

Jalal's eyes caught on Hamdia sitting on sofa and observing him keenly... Jalal put Rahim next to Radha, kissed on Rahim forehead softly and said... close your eyes and go to sleep... I will be with you in few minutes... he smiled and said ok...

Jalal sat across hamida... and with low tone said Adab ammi jaan... Hamida replied with adab... there was a silence for few seconds then Hamida started in questing tone: Jalal, Radha ki tabiyat kesi hai... Jalal while stealing eyes from Hamida... behtar hai aami jaan...

Hamida: usko tum pani pila rahe ho... usne to roza rakha hai na...

Jalal looking down... Ji ammi jaan... par Hakim sahiba ke hisab se Radha ko pani pilana jaruri tha, varna uski jaan bhi ja sakti thi... to hume uski jaan bachane ke liye usko pani pilaya behosi ki halat me...

Hamida with cross questioning: Jalal, Aapne Radha ko bachne ke liye kitna bada gunah kiya hai aehsaas hai aapko... Aur jab vo hosh me aayegi kya kahoge use...

Jalal with confusing and upsetting look... Ammi Jaan us vakat humne aur kuch nahi socha... bas humare zehen me sirf uski jaan ke alawa kuch soch hi nahi paye...

Hamida with serious tone: Jalal, Aapko pata hai na aap ek Shenshah hai...Aur iss tarah sabke samne Radha ko apne hojre me iss tarah leke aana... Vo apki begum nahi hai Jalal... aur vo aapki koi khas bandi bhi nahi hai... aur shayad vo hona bhi nahi chahti...

Jalal with regretting tone: Ji ammi jaan hum samaj sakte hai aap kya keh rahe ho... Par hume bhi herani hai ki hum ne kese yeh galti kardi... Jese hi Salima begum aati hai, Radha chali jayegi humari zindgi se door, bahot door... tab jake hume sakoon milega shayad...

Hamida smirk a little and said... Jalal kya aap aesa kar payenge...

Jalal with sarcasm... his tone was showing little anger and frustration, vese hume kuch karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...Radha will leave as soon as Salima begum comes... I can't change a law for a bandi and it's good she will go away from me... At least I will have my peaceful life back...

Hamida gave him disappointing stare and said... thik hai Jalal... Hum ab chalte hai.. khuda hafeez

Jalal with low tone... Khuda Hafeez Ammi Jaan...

Rahim went to sleep next to Radha... In about an hour Radha got her conscious back... Jalal is sitting on sofa next to bed resting his legs on table while sleeping... A small smile spread on her face seeing his innocent face while sleeping... She recalls last how everything suddenly started moving around her and she lost her conscious... It was middle of the night...She is sleeping on his bed and she could tell he was taking care of her and sleep took over him... Suddenly her throat was feeling content and satisfied... She felt much better than before... which amused her, what happened suddenly, why she is feeling energetic... A little tiny hand was on her stomach resting... With a big smile she turned to hug Rahim... Her little movement and her kamarband started to sing chum chum... hearing sound of her kamarband Jalal immediately awake and said Radha...

Radha moved swiftly towards Jalal... Seeing her glow on the face Jalal smirk... he could see gradually she was getting better... Jalal swiftly got up and sat on the bed next to Radha... His sudden act gave her shiver... before he ask in nervousness she said shenshah hum pehle se behtar mehsoos kar rahe hai... Jalal felt her uneasiness in her hasty sentence...

Jalal wanted to tell her he had fed her water... He was looking at her face and trying figure out how she will react to it... He was little nervous himself but decided to tell her straight...

With serious tone Jalal looked in her eyes and said... Radha to save your life, I have fed water and some ark to you in your unconscious condition... hearing that Radha swiftly sat up on the bed...her eyes widen in shock...it took her about thirty second to digest what he just said... she stare at him without any expression... Her expression little by little started to change with extreme rage...her eyes turns red in anger...she busted out loud on Jalal... HOW DARE YOU BREAK MY FAST...? Who gave you permission to do that...? Her tone got louder... You have no right on my life... I was right, you have no value of other religion or people sentiment... you are heartless, ruthless cruel king... Her entire body was shivering in anger... she almost pushed him to get up from the bed... before she could run out of the chamber...

Jalal caught her wrist... he twists her wrist in anger and pulled her towards him... and busted at her with more anger... He sounded more hurt than angry... RADHA... you are calling me heartless... But you know what you are... you are egoistic and arrogant woman... and this cruel king knows very well how to control your arrogance... Your sharp bitter tongue and your superior attitude, one day will put you in big trouble... he twist her wrist little more... in pain she screamed...Shenshah... you are hurting me... with angry push, he left her wrist and grabbed her other hand and pushed her to wall...and grasp her face with his hand tightly and squeezed her cheeks hard then painful angry tone he said... Radha, it hurt na... Realized how painful it is... Same way it hurts me too, when you said you hate Mughals... when you said you hate me from your childhood ... When I see in your eyes hatred for me, it pinches me inside my heart... your sharp words... Yes Radha, I am heartless person... Yes I am cruel... I agree I should not have save your life... I should have not done gunah e azim just to save your life... this sin is on my head... you were unconscious... you have not done anything wrong... Shenshah Jalalludin Mohammad is so cruel for his humanity to save your life... you were sinking... Hakim Sahiba told me this was last option to feed you water to save your life... He looked at her with angry painful glare then with little push he took off his hand from her face, he turned his back and in low but very firm tone said... Radha get out of my chamber... I don't want to see your face ever again... leave now... I don't want your obligation to take care of Rahim any longer. For your satisfaction, I am a husband of Salima begum and god father of Rahim... I am reliving you from your promise and duty... Till Salima begum comes back, I will stay with Rahim... pack your bag and leave this Mughal palace... He sounded more firm than angry... His words were filled with severe pain...

Radha freezed seeing Jalal's anger... His pain touched her heart... She could sense his every word was coming from his heart... As soon as she heard he broke her fast, she lost her temper... and in anger she said many bitter and sharp words which really hurt him... Every passing second she was realized her mistake more and more... his care for her... his anger... his pain... She could felt his unshed tears... Her feet felt numb... but before leaving she decided to apologies for her mistake...

In low tone with her face down she said... Shenshah, I am sorry... in anger I have said many disrespectful words... When I heard my fast has broken... and I couldn't control my anger and lost my temper... Without listening further I said unkind words... instead for appreciating your genuine care for me... I have blamed you for it. I am sorry for my mistake. Thank you for reliving me from my promise and saving my life. Once again thank you for everything you have done... As per your wish I will never come in front of your eyes again and I will leave palace immediately... Pranam Shenshah... She walk towards Rahim, kissed on his forehead ... Her motherly love cried detaching from Rahim... Slowly she whisper... don't forget your choti ammi my son... She kissed him again... finally tears trickled out of from her eyes... with heavy heart she looked at Jalal who was standing with his back towards her

Jalal heard chum chum sound, he could sense low energy in her walk... Jalal clutch his fist to control himself... He wanted to see her once for the last time... He closes his eyes and just heard sound chum chum till he could hear... Sound of her payal were giving deep scar on his soul... His controlled tears dripped slowly from his eyes... He felt he lost his all energy... His restless heart was feeling vulnerable... He sat on sofa and close his eyes... there was storm forming inside his heart... it started to affect him gradually... suddenly feeling of emptiness came back... His heart was in so much pain and suffocation...

He swiftly came out in balcony to get some fresh air... Jalal is standing their looking at gloomy night and glowing stars...

Radha with her small bag, walked towards gate of palace... Middle of the night she was walking out of the palace toward the gate, Jalal heard sound chum chum... He saw in glory of the moon... she was walking towards gate... his heart sank seeing her go away from him... Suddenly it occurred to him in middle of the night how she will go alone... He almost ran towards other side of the balcony where he can see front gate clearly...

Gateman stopped Radha and asked for permission to leave palace... Jalal felt relived because he didn't give his permission slip to go out of the palace... He knew someone will come to him to confirm... Jalal called his chamber gateman and instruct him not to disturb him no matter who comes...

Jalal heard few minute later ...someone came to receive approval... Jalal's gate man sent him back ...

Gateman to Radha: You cannot leave without permission. Shenshah is resting, he has order not to disturb him. I will confirm in the morning when he comes to diwan office.

Radha sat on corner of bench... waiting for the morning... Jalal saw her sitting her helplessly on the bench which gave him deep wound on his heart... As time passed he started to regret for not stopping her and let her leave the palace... Jalal wanted to stop her but his ego was coming in between...

It was early morning, Jalal send bandi to Mariam Makhani to inform for his arrival... Few minutes later Jalal went inside Hamida's chamber... Seeing Jalal that early she was surprised... but in a few second she realized... Hamida smirk seeing his condition... and she murmur lagta hai Radha hosh me aa gayi hai... With smile she asked Jalal... Ab Radha ki sehat kesi hai...

Jalal was feeling uncomfortable talking about Radha ...but he had no choice left... Jalal with low sound... Ammi Jaan, ab pehle se behtar hai... par...

Hamida saw his puzzling face... she asked him... par kya Jalal... Hume thik tarah se bataiye...

Ammi Jaan I have ordered to her leave palace in anger, when she came in her conscious... I told her the truth; I had to feed her water... And without listening to me she busted at me with anger... So I got angry at her and told her to leave palace immediately in middle of the night... but when she understood, I did that to save her life ... she realized she was wrong and apologized to me... but I didn't stop her and let her go... She didn't have permission to leave palace so the gateman stopped her at the gate and told to her to wait on the bench till morning... She is waiting for permission to leave palace...

Hamida with serious tone: I completely agree with you... how dare a bandi busted in anger on Shenshah... She should be punished more for shouting at you.

Jalal with confusing look and defending sound he said Ammi Jaan... You know, how she values her religion... and as soon as she heard that she lost her temper... otherwise she always stays in her limit. No doubt she is very stubborn, outspoken and has no fear to say truth but the way she took care of Rahim is commendable... In this many days Radha has given Rahim such a divine motherly love ... I am worried what will I answer to Rahim in the morning when he will ask for his choti ammi... Ammi Jaan Radha's values are not less than any princess... She is very cultured, talented, and well mannered... I think in anger I have punished her harshly...

Hamida was feeling excited inside... she felt like jumping to see this change in Jalal... She could see he is so much in love with Radha and so soon... she also understood now his shenshahi ego is stopping him to call her back but he wants her to stop her...

Hamida with serious tone: Jalal, I agree that she is very cultured girl. I have never seen any princess who was this beautiful and talented... but I think it is too late... You can't stop her ... you are a Shenshah... You cannot bend down to a bandi... but Jalal, let's say somehow I manage to stop her today but as soon as Salima begum comes she will leave the palace since she can't complete her prayer everyday...

Ammi Jaan, I completely agree with her point of view but I do not want to change law for Radha. She can't force me with her fasting like this... that's blackmailing...

I have thought about this and even I have called up few Hindu workers and talk to them about how they feel about not being able to do prayer in the palace. With a surprise, I found many have anger inside suppressed for this unfair law. Some are not even allow to leave palace... one of the cook helper who is Hindu and working for years... had tears in her eyes for not being able to follow her religion in palace. I feel it is a necessary to change this law... but I don't want anyone to know how it started.

Hamida with smile thinking... Radha you can't leave this palace... We all need you... In few days Jalal's heart started to beat for his employees... one day will beat for his riyaya... I can't let you go from his life...

Jalal ... Ammi Jaan... ammi jaannn kha kho gayi aap...

Hamida ... Nothing Jalal... don't worry I will stop Radha and today you call all hindu workers in the diwan and make sure that old lady also be part of it...Then you change the law... I want you pretend that you don't know that Radha is still in the palace...

Jalal with cheerful smile... Ji Ammi Jaan... Adab...

Hamida watching Jalal walking out... she smirks and said... Jalal you are best in politics... but very weak in love... Aaj tak humne yeh takt ke liye siyasat kheli hai...chalo ab Mohabbat ke liye siyasat ho jaye...

Hamida saw Radha while walking towards her...

Radha was sitting on the bench with depressed face... by every second her hopes were dropping ... she thought Jalal will not let her go but when her permission slip arrived... She was shaken... her face turned pale thinking she failed in her mission... She failed because of her arrogance...

She recalls the letter she received from Acharya...

I am surprised that he has not recognized you... well things happen for better... It is better for our mission... I have change of plan...Good he has not recognized you...now next step is to make him fall in love for you... More you ignore him... more he will desire for you... Don't let him come close to you... THIS MISSION IS YOUR LIFE... At any cost you have to win this battle, I know my child this is not an easy task for a princess to work as a maid but I know you for years... I know you are very determined and strong headed... I have never told you this but I will proudly say that you are my best student and your best quality is you do not give up at any cost... But don't forget to control your arrogance... that is your major weakness... You decide up to what level he can take your arrogance... it will not take a second for him to kick you out from the palace... Make sure you do not step on his nerve and cross your border in your anger... You can't afford to fail this mission... God bless you!!! Vijai bhavah !!!

Her mind was thinking about her mission... and her heart was thinking about the moment she spent with Rahim... Her motherly part of her heart was crying detaching from him... She was worried, probably Rahim will look for her and will cry for her... She recalls flashes of Jalal when he came in drunk condition... tears in his eyes... She recall how he got panic when he saw her hands burned... She recall how he praise her for her cooking in front of that many people... She felt bad ...she was not able to say last good bye to Mariam makhani... her humbleness really touched her heart... In few seconds...everything came in her mind... Whole night she was out but she had hope Jalal will call her back ... she was sad that her mission is failed but she has not realized that subconsciously She started to like his extra attention ... and her heart was crying from detaching him and when he gave permission slip in the morning her heart shatter in to pieces... ...

Sadly she looked at the palace and towards Jalal's chamber for the last time... and signed on the register... before she took her last step out of the palace... she heard Radha... Radha

Radha turned back ... and saw Hamida...

Radha with respectfully did pranam ...

Hamida with questioning tone: Radha, itni subeh subeh tum kaha ja rahi ho...

Radha with sad tone: Ji hum mehel chod ke ja rahe hai... Aur hum aap hi ke bare me soch rahe the... ki aapko ek bar milke jaye... Kanah ne humari yeh ichha bhi puri kar di...

Hamida with shocking expression...Kya... par kyu...

In low tone she said... Shenshah ne hume mehel se bahar nikal diya hai... vo humara chehra is mehel me nahi dekhna chahte...

Hamida saw her struggling in controlling her tears... She could sense her heart also broken but she has not realized it yet...

Hamida order gate man to bring water for Radha...

Radha with sober tone... dhanyavad Mariam Makhani ... Humare upvas hai... hum pooja karne ke baad hi kuch khayenge aur piyenge... ab hum aapki aaganya chahenge...

Hamida with commanding tone... Radha... tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho... Hum Jalal se baat karenge... aur tumhare bina Rahim kese rahega... ab tak Salima begum bhi vapas nahi aai hai... Jalal ka gussa nak pe rehta hai... vo aese hi gusse me bol diya hoga... aur use to pata bhi nahi hoga ke tum sach me ja rahi ho...

Radha didn't understand what was going on... with confusing tone she said... Aap sach keh rahe ho... Shenshah ko bahot jald gussa aa jata hai... Par unhe achi tarah se maloom hai ki hum jaa rahe hai unke hukum se... yeh dekhiye unho ne hamre mehel se bahar jane ki anumati ki parchi bheji hai...

Are Radha yeh chithi to Jalal ke kisi audedar ne di hai... Tum ek kaam karo chalo humare sath... humara hukum to Jalal bhi nahi taal sakte... aur aese tum hume chod ke nahi ja sakti...

Radha with hesitation ... No I can't come with you... I don't want you to be in trouble because of me...

Hamida fine you can leave the palace but not like this... I have just received a message that Salima begum is coming back today, you need to meet with her... and Rahim... Also send letter to Aasharm to come and pick you up... I can't send you like this alone and don't worry about Jalal... He will not say a word against my wish...

Radha walked with Hamida... She was feeling awkward coming back to palace... Jalal and Radha both were feeling shatter inside... Hamida with low tone said... Radha go put your clothes back in Rahim's chamber and go to Shenshah's chamber...

Radha with shockwave... where... Shenshah's chamber... Hamida with laugh... yes Jalal's chamber... Rahim is sleeping in Jalal's chamber ... can you make him ready for the school? Don't worry, I am going to talk to Jalal ... He is probably in diwan office preparing for diwan e khaas...

Rahim was awake sitting on sofa and playing with his puzzle book... As soon as he saw Radha... he ran and jumped on her... Choti Aami...aap kaha chali gayi thi... Radha sat on her knees, open her hands wide and took him in his arms... It was not in her control to stop her motherly love tears any longer...

Radha kissed him and said vow... Rahim you are ready for the school... With annoying look he said... Nadira helped me to get ready... Rahim cupped Radha's face and asked her... Choti Ammi how are you feeling now... then he looked at her hands... seeing her hands cured, he cheered in happiness... Radha hugged Rahim again for his caring behavior and saw entire chamber is messed up... Rahim's toys and books were lying all over the room... With little firm tone she said to Rahim... Look at Shenshah's chamber... you have made a big mess here... you brought all of your toys here...

Rahim with cute smile and hug... oopss choti ammi... but you know I was so mad and upset... when I ask about you to Shenshah, he didn't reply... and with annoying tone he said play with your toys... So I did that to annoy Shenshah... then Rahim smirk with his mischievous face... then he said...shhh don't tell him...

Radha with smile Rahim ... Aur Shenshah aap pe gussa ho jate to... aesa nahi karte Rahim...

Rahim with proud... Nahi vo hum pe kabhi naraz nahi hote... Choti ammi aap to kham kha hi darti ho Shenshah se...

Rahim with questioning tone ek baat puchu Choti ammi... Aap kyu shenshah se itna chidti ho...

Radha's eyes widen hearing this & with shocking tone she said... Nahi to Rahim... Aesa kuch nahi hai... aur aap baatein band kariye aur chaliye aapko hum pathsala me le chalte hai... shenshah ke aane se pehle hume yeh pura kamra saaf karna padega...

Rahim and Radha walking towards school... choti ammi... why you have to clean... tell that to maid... you don't do any work and rest... you look weak...

Radha smirk seeing... Rahim, act and talk like shenshah...

Diwan E Khaas

Diwan E Khaas filled with all administrators and Maulvis ... on other side behind the curtain some khas begums and Mariam Makhani Hamida Banoo... Only one lady was in the darbaar... Vajire Aliya Maha Manga... After announcement Jalal entered in darbar with impressive strong walk... Everyone got up to respect and welcome him in the court.

Jalal with loud announcement before we start today's court, I would like to discuss on very important matter which I recently have noticed... I have invited few Hindu workers who have been working in the palace for years... some of them have spent their entire life serving this mughal palace... Atgha Sahib announced to call hindu workers inside with respect...

Group of Hindu workers including some dasi, cook, cleaning ladies, and security guards all entered in darbar... All of them had no clue why suddenly they were called in the darbar... their faces were showing worry clearly...

Jalal immediately started seeing their nervous and confusing face... With his magnetic and powerful tone he started... First of all, I would like to thank each of you for serving for this palace for years... Salatant is very much pleased with your honesty and hardwork... I would like all of you to give me your honest opinion...

Give me one reason if you get opportunity to work somewhere else for the same amount of money you receive here... will you leave this palace?

All of them looking at each other... No one had dare to say a word against Shenshah... finally one old lady came in front and said... Shenshah... I have served for Mughals for years... I have seen Mariam Makhani came in this palace first time... I have cook for the jasan of your birth ceremony... My answer is yes, if someone gives even less money for this work, I will leave this palace in a second...

Jalal looked at Hamida and smirk a little...

Jalal with respectful tone asked her name...

She said... Lakshmi in low tone...

Jalal: Ha to Lakshmi ji, kya aap hume bata sakti hai aesa kya hai jo aap issi vakat mehel ko chod ke chali jayegi.

Lakshmi with low sound: Ji hazoor... hume iss beadbi ke liye maaf kar de... par humne pichle 35 saal me apne ishwar ki pooja nahi ki hai... Iss mehel me hum hindu majdooron ko humare prabhu ki aaradhana karna mana hai... hamara dil har din rota hai... hum upar jake ishwar ko kya mooh dikhayenge... Hum kya kahenge ki hum majboor the... Shenshah aap din me paach baar namaz padhte ho... Allah ki bandgi karte ho... To appko to maloom hi hoga ki, Jo shanti milti hai ishwar ke sameep vo kahi pe bhi nahi mil sakti... Hume yaha karya karne se lagta hai ki hum pichle janam ke paap ki saza bhugat rahe hai...

Entire court was shocked hearing her vulnerability... Most of the mughal administrator felt sad hearing her...

Jalal with sympatric tone asked other workers... aur koi hai jo inke sath matafiq hai... Few more workers came in front with lower head and agreed with old lady...

Jalal with sad look asked Mariam Makhani for her opinion...

Hamida with her witty answer... Shenshah, I know Lakshmi bai very well... she has work for the palace for years and years... I never knew that every day her heart was crying inside... I am surely aware about the law that Hindu can't do prayer in the palace... but after hearing this I feel it is not fair to stop any human to do bandgi. God guides us to do the right things and help us be a good human being... In my opinion we should allow Hindu to do prayer with certain restrictions like they do prayer in their room or if they have to do prayer in open they need to finish prayer before seven o'clock ...

Jalal asked opinion to every administrator... Majority agreed with Mariam Makhani... Maham Anga didn't like this at all but she knew Jalal was strongly in favour of this decision, so she went with the flow and agreed as well... but there were strong objections from Maulvis... But Jalal shut them up with saying ... Kuran doesn't say that we should stop others to follow their religion or force them to follow Kuran... Even Maulvis couldn't answer to this argument... Finally decision was made and law passed with everyone's agreement, Hindu can do prayer in their room and outside they can do prayer before seven in the morning. As long as it doesn't interrupt any one in their daily routine.

Jalal was not able to do his sword practice so after Diwan E Khaas he changed his clothes and went for practice... Jalal was feeling much relaxed after all this drama...

After dropping Rahim to school Radha took shower and did Kanah Aarti and prayer... she was feeling little thirsty but energy ark really worked on body like fire...

She wanted to clean up and collect Rahim's stuff from Shenshah's chamber before he comes back... She was feeling awkward, somewhat her self-respect hurt... Inside her heart she was feeling he kicked her out from his house... She went to his room and quickly started to collect toys and books... In haste she went upstairs with toys and book to get Rahim's clothes from changing room... She quickly picked up Rahim's clothes and came out of the changing room with all of his stuff... Before she take steps down... she saw Jalal coming up after sword practice... He was drenched in sweat... for a second her eyes were stuck on his topless muscular chest...

Jalal in angry tone (pretending) asked: Radha, You still in the place... his sound came grouchier than he intend to... Hearing that statement, Radha's ego got extremely hurt... she walked back two steps in shock... the way Jalal asked it directly struck on her heart... She was already feeling wounded ... he already crushed her dignity kicking her out of the palace... coming back to palace was already bothering her self-respect... this statement shook her from inside... Her eyes gleamed but she controlled her tears... Jalal immediately realized he hurt her extremely with his question...

In very deep painful tone she said... Mariam Makhani requested not to leave palace and out of respect I could not deny her... but I can't stay here any longer... with chocking words... Not at the cost of my self-respect, with all the stuff in her hand she started taking steps down... one of the toy fell from her hand and she stepped on it and lost her balance...and came crashing down on Jalal... Jalal and Radha both collide with each other and fall on the floor... Radha ended up landing on top of Jalal... Suddenly her uninvited tears flood out and drop on Jalal's face... Jalal could feel her deep scar on her heart clearly... She tried getting up but Jalal clutched her waist with one hand... with painful sad tone she said... Shenshah, let me go... I can't stay here for a second anymore... Jalal knew this time he has hurt her ego to extreme... her doe like beautiful eyes shedding tears constantly... he clutched her in his grip stronger than before... when she realized there is no way out... she screamed in anger with tears... let me go... by that time she was completely shattered... She was so emotionally disturbed she didn't realize when she gave up and broke down on his shoulders while crying... Jalal cuddle her softly and tried to calm her down... Shhh... Radha... please don't cry... look at me...

Radha suddenly realized her hands were encircling his neck and her face was under his neck... with shock she swiftly lifted her face and removed her hands from grip and in very serious and upsetting tone said ... Shenshah, release me from your grip... I can't take any more humiliation... I will go anywhere... I will sleep on road but will not stay in this palace...her tone was turning in to crabby and she was making harder effort to get released from the grip...

Jalal with loud and firm tone... almost yelled... Stop it Radha... and Listen... Suddenly his loud sound stopped her and she looked at him... Jalal looked in her eyes and said in very firm loud tone... You are not going anywhere... I will not let you go... Do you get that... His firm announcement shocked her for a second... Then in low tone he said... I am sorry Radha... I didn't mean to hurt your feelings...

Hearing this... Radha look straight in his eyes with shock... She looked at him with confusing expression and in low tone she said... Shenshah, you just questioned me minute ago... why I am still in the palace...? And now you are saying you will not let me go from the palace... What do you think I am a puppet... when you want me, you order me to stay or when you don't want me, you kick me out... I know, It is your palace... but I can't tolerate any more... the way you kicked me out of your palace... entire night I was sitting on the bench waiting to get one slip to get out... do you know how vulnerable I felt... I have never felt more disgusted than this...

Jalal with regretting tone but little angry tone... Radha... I have said sorry... I am not going to say it again... You said hurtful words to me that is why I told you to leave palace...

Radha with irritating tone: but I said sorry that time and even after that you told me to leave palace...

Jalal with louder tone... So what Radha...

Radha with serious tone, Shenshah, let me remind you again... I am not your begum... I am just a maid... leave me from your grip... don't you dare to touch me ever again...

Jalal with frustrating look... Why you keep on reminding me that you are just a maid... I know that very well... and don't you dare yell at me... then with little smirk he said...actually you fell on me... so you are touching me... you are on top of me...

Radha with maddening loud sound...but you have captured me... why don't you leave me...

Jalal smirked seeing her cute anger and in mocking sound... You know Radha, your nose and cheeks turns red when you blush, cry or get angry...

Hearing this suddenly she blush slightly... and with fake anger... Let me go Shenshah,

Jalal with playful sound... give me promise you won't leave me...

Radha... I can't...

Jalal with his stubborn answer... then I won't leave you Radha...

Radha with crabby expression... Shenshah, I really don't understand... sometime you treat me like princess and sometime you treat me worse than a maid... Against my wish you order me to prepare bath for you... and then you were screaming at me why I was carrying that hot water... It was common sense to prepare bath, I have to get hot water... seriously I doubt sometime ... how you run this saltant... god knows...

Jalal laugh hearing her last sentence and said... You know Radha, seriously you surprise me with your fearless daring attitude...

Radha with irritation... It is enough now... Leave me... do you know Shenshah, to touch women other than you wife is bad manners...

Jalal with teasing tone: As per Mughal manners... Any women who is in my harem, I can touch her...

Radha with frown expression: Then I am leaving this palace... I can't let any one touch me other than my husband...

Jalal with his one hand caressed her face... and with seductive whisper said... tell me the truth don't you like this closeness... and looked in her eyes passionately...

Seeing passion in his eyes, suddenly she realized her entire body is on top of him ... She smiled with a little blush and said... Shenshah, Are you out of your mind... do you really think with your seductive whisper and passionate gaze... I will melt in your arms... I am not one of your crazy begum... who die for your one gaze...

Jalal smirk hearing her cute angry answer... Her strong attitude with cute replay made him crazy for her... Their faces were so close just an inch apart...Jalal saw her rosy soft lips... He felt like crushing in her lips with his... by every second he was losing his control...A slight smile spread around his face...Jalal immediately notice a little awkwardness and mild flush cheeks... she saw desire in his eyes and passionate smile on his face... with suddenly self consciousness hit Radha...She felt embarrassed lying on top of him.. she tried harder to release herself without saying a word and Jalal was making his grip stronger and stronger... war continue for about half a minute... finally Jodha with low tone...Shenshah hum aapse akhri bar keh rahe hai hume Jane dijye... he smirked looking at her annoyed face... seeing his smirk she got more irritated... she put her both hands on his shoulder and pushed hard to release herself from him... His hands were still wet with his sweat... and suddenly both her hands slipped and her face fell on his face... and accidently their lips touched... both of them felt millions of sensation with this quick touch of lips... Radha with heavy shock... in firm tone she said... Shenshah hume jane dijye...

Jalal also awake with sudden kiss... and loosen his grip ... They both swiftly got up... Radha was feeling nervous... she couldn't see in Jalal's eyes... somehow she got succeed in sneaking out from his gaze... Jalal was watching her nervous reaction... She was running to collect clothes...and toys... she took big flower vase and was running out of the chamber... But before she could leave Jalal called her back... she came back slowly with her face lowered... with smirk Jalal said...Radha where are you taking this big vase... Radha's eyes widen in surprise... she was so nervous that she didn't realize that she was taking the big vase... she put vase back slowly and ran out of his chamber... Jalal smirked hearing sound of her kamarbandh... He sat on the couch and closed his eyes to enjoy the moment...

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