FF: Registan Ka GULAB (Rose in Desert) Thread 1 Close Thread 2 Active - Page 78

Originally posted by: rachana999

Hi bhavini,

Thanks for PM. u r my first friend in buddy list. 😊 .
I love this story so much that I will check at least 3 times a day to see whether u updated the story or not.
seriously I like RKG than ITHL. And, pls update regularly . last time I got so much angry 😡 on u, I started scolding u for not updating and myself for so much addiction to the story.
u don't believe , I read RKG so many times I cant count. I am sure there r many more silent readers like me who like ur story.
please update the story regularly. . Reg., story, I will say u r fabulous 👏 . I like some people in this forum. U people's command on English is really fantastic ⭐️ .
esp., bhavini, the way u write stories, I mean the ideas are very impressive. Some times, I feel the CV's can make u JA story writer 😉 .
keep going and make us happy with ur works. All the best. 😊 . Once again , do the update regularly.

Rachana

Rachana I am really speechless... You know I though people are not liking this story but after reading reviews from readers I am so happy that ppl started to like this story... Yes i remember your pm... Yaar your comment have send me to dreamland... I am so happy u love ideas... I have no words but when i see comment like this I feel that it is worth to all hard work... I spend so much time in writing... some time at the cost of lots of important stuff... I write because I enjoy it... and I love love love it when people appreciate it... thank U so much... keep comment and encourage me like this... thank U

Originally posted by: dharshu

Wowww di!! Killer update!! I luvv this ff soo much.. Plzz update soon na!! N thank u soo much fa d pm!!

Darshu ... I love killer updates... I will update soon...Update is almost ready waiting

Originally posted by: Manishi1

Hi Dear..I like this FF a lot. Your Jodha is too strong and determined. It will be interesting to see how Jalal melts into this hot Candy😛. Keep updating.

Thank U so much Manishi... I also love this Jodha ... she is not easy to handle... Jalal ko kya kuch karna padega pata nahi...

Originally posted by: sw123

superb awesome excellent update

👏

Thank U so much !!! I am glad U enjoying this story... 😃

Originally posted by: ashpat

Bhavini, sorry for late reply. I noticed how u were going to write around 5000 words but ended up writing around 9000 words. I think there is a little fault of mine too becasue when u sent it to me for review- and I was like there seems somethign missing and u felt same way and that's why ended up writing part 2 and 3.Now, i feel complete.

Are Ayesha ... Thank U so much for review and your precious suggestion for improvement in the story...

When I send it to you for review I felt it was incomplete and you also felt same... I guess ab sabko mere long update ki aadat pad gayi thai... muje bhi ek to track se satisfaction nahi hota... Pare I really enjoyed part 2 and part 3... iss bar mene bahot sare changes kiye hai... me itni confuse thi... and vese bhi long gap ke baad likhne me thoda tuff rehta hai... story ki link nhai rehti... But thanks for your true opinion. I always love it.


But i noticed u have added two or three paragraphs more when jalal ends up waking up early before radha and checks if she is alright and his resolve to stay away from her.

Ha actually muje yeh idea puri story ready hone ke baad me aaya... mene socha ki Jodha bimar hai aur itna late tak soyegi to Jalal ko worry to honi chahiye na... so I added and forgot to send it for review it... par tu bhi chok gayi yeh dekh ke😆

Anyway, back to things I liked.

I am glad i didn't do any panga in that part...😆

One thing I have LOVED about u and ur stories is the description of characters' thoughts and feelings. You don't leave anything for imagination which is a good thing. we don 't have to guess what they are feeling.

Actually U will laugh... I tried to write short story to yesterday to give for Anu's birthday yesterday... and end up writing 5000 words ... not even one third of the story... phir mene give up kar diya... samaj me aa gaya ki short story is not my cup of tea😆

I really get amazed with the way u have show jalal's kashmakash (dilemma) between heart and mind and even radha is starting to have conflicting thoughts now. I like how jalal keeps saying he won't see her or meet her but ends up near her or thinking about her.

I really pity on Jalal... He is so so so confuse with his own emotion... In his harem he has more than 5000 women and he is behind dasi... confuse to hoga na... on top of it... she is rejecting him... ignoring him... and giving her attitude... Every day she does something which make him more closer to her and confuse him

Radha is started to notice his care... started to like his care... After all he is a king of kings... who wont like this kind of personal attention and care... but she is still far away from love...

I like radha and reva's conversation about meena bazaar and also like how u described the groups and competition and also the prize of spending time with jalal. I just hope radha accept the prize when she wins rather than saying i don't want it or she could say that but then ends up spending time with him anyway.

I am glad U like the Meena Bazaar planning... Yaar I am trying to write about Meena bazar for last two chapter par pata nahi kab uska turn ayega... Mera next chapter bhi khatam ho gaya and Meena bazar ka namo nishan nahi hai😆 Me pata nahi plan ke hisab se kyu nahi likhti😆

Hope Radha accept it😉 Uske use jitne to de... Rukaiya aese hi nahi jiten degi😡

I LOVED when radha was calling ruq chudail.lol

Vo mere dil ki tamana poori kar di mene😆😳

I love jalal and radha's arguments. So, jalal wanted radha to bath him hmmm, full on GM,

Jalal ko kya maloom ke bath ke preparation me kya kya karna padta hai... Muje pata tha... sab ke dimag me bath ka soch ke GM activate ho gaya hoga...🤣 aur age muje ek do galiya di hogi😆

But, poor radha, i felt extremely bad for her that she had to carry hot water when she is so weak and on top of that she burnt her hands but must applaud her that she till kept making lep. it must have hurt her like hell. i liked jalal's concern and compassion for her when she is unconscious. Even radha was shocked with the care.

Radha is very strong and determined, She don't like to say that I can't do this... She is really out ordinary... she is not like delicate girl who cry for everything. but little by little she is going to soften as well... Her heart will melt too... so will see tears in her eyes too😕 (me confuse about that thought)

But, did i really read that jalal KISSED radha's forehead, cheeks and kiss and she got lost in it.

Are me kuch jyada hi senti ho gayi thi Jalal ke liye... Muje laga bichara kitna sad hai ... to ek kissi ki permit de di mene😆 Actually ab me likhne ke baad phir padne wali nahi hu... kyu ki phir me kuch na kuch locha karti hu... kiss ki kya jarurat thi😆

oh wow. but then suddenly both realized it so jalal let radha go.

THEY BOTH CONFUSE😆😕

And ya, i also liked how jalal kept seeing radha in zakira - although latter reminded of that witch benazir.

UFF BENZIR😡🤢🤢😡 ZEHRILI DAYAN

Uff taht ruq, how can she be so heartless but I liked radha giving tit for tat to ruq. I can't believe how radha worked this hard in kitchen for long hours but loved the way she explained the dishes and finally won and how jalal loved the food too and then she fell unconscious...

Radha is very strong... She doesn't give up... Rukaiya ko acha maza chakyana😃

update soon. u're welcome. muah.

update ... 😆

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Originally posted by: rishbala3018

I unresd on page 97 :)

Love U Sweetheart!!! hope U enjoying in Switzerland😃

Originally posted by: sireesha76

superb update👏

beautifully written

Thank U so much ... I am glad U reading this story... and enjoying it...😃

Originally posted by: taaniroyal

res thankx 4 pm n nyce cover

Thanks... Taani... Tu yeh bata kab update karegi teri comment😆 every chapter tu res karti hai😆

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

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Originally posted by: abhi786

Bhavini another wonderful FF.. JA has so many wonderful writers...

Thank U so much for your sweet comment!!! I am glad U enjoy this story

This story is so much different JO/Radha comes to Agra as a maid to take revenge on the injustice happened to her..

I was very nervous to start this story... I was worried readers wont accept Jodha as a dasi


Jalaal till now all women lattu over him, but now he is lattu on Rahda that too a maid. First he got to listen praises from others, attracted to her voice, Chum chum, her tatto, her eyes, her smile, her beauty, her love for Rahim, her attitude and also her courage, fearlessness & guts to tell him keep away from him. His heart started beating for Raha.. Just like Hamida I would also say JalaalKHUDA TUM PAR REHAM KARE...

bichara Jallu... maid pe lattu ho gaya hai... kya kare... VERY TRUE " KHUDA JALAL PE REHEM KARE"

Both Jallal & Radha hearts are taking over their minds, while Jalaal is much more quick as he is attracted to her beauty, personality as a whole, while Radha just looking the other side of Jalaal and getting attracted to him..

They both are confuse with their own emotions... Radha will not fall in so soon... it will take her long time

While HB, Rahim & Salima will support Rahda, MA & Ruku will try to make her leave Agra.. Would love to Adham who always lust after bandi's and Jallu trying his teda ways to protect Radha from him...

Yeppp... U right... there are more villain are in it... including Adham and chipu😃

The suspence is very good, it makes keep guessing what will happen next, wiating for Radha winning in Meena Bazar...

Meena Bazaar... coming soon... not next one but than after

Could you please PM me next chapter... Once again wonderful reading this FF ...

Sure I will PM you... I have sent out buddy request... I pm all buddies