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Posted: 10 years ago
Bhavini another wonderful FF.. JA has so many wonderful writers...

This story is so much different JO/Radha comes to Agra as a maid to take revenge on the injustice happened to her..


Jalaal till now all women lattu over him, but now he is lattu on Rahda that too a maid. First he got to listen praises from others, attracted to her voice, Chum chum, her tatto, her eyes, her smile, her beauty, her love for Rahim, her attitude and also her courage, fearlessness & guts to tell him keep away from him. His heart started beating for Raha.. Just like Hamida I would also say JalaalKHUDA TUM PAR REHAM KARE...

Both Jallal & Radha hearts are taking over their minds, while Jalaal is much more quick as he is attracted to her beauty, personality as a whole, while Radha just looking the other side of Jalaal and getting attracted to him..

While HB, Rahim & Salima will support Rahda, MA & Ruku will try to make her leave Agra.. Would love to Adham who always lust after bandi's and Jallu trying his teda ways to protect Radha from him...

The suspence is very good, it makes keep guessing what will happen next, wiating for Radha winning in Meena Bazar...

Could you please PM me next chapter... Once again wonderful reading this FF ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Jalal kya confuse hai. Radha ko kabhi Jalal se prem hoga kya? Aur Jalal ne Radha ke sath kya kiya hai?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayuraj

superb update
loved it

ThanksπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

loved it dear... continue soon & do pm

thanksπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
bhaaavvvuuu...😲
tere liye kuch likha hai maine...πŸ˜‰
"kya kahu tumhari writing ke liye meri romance ki amma"😳
"ke teri stories ke crush ne mujhe kar diya nihayati nikamma"πŸ˜†
jokes apart...😳
yaar this story is far different from my fav IS IT HATE OR LOVE...πŸ˜•
But one thing is in common...teri jodha girti bahut hai...πŸ˜†
when i read this update mujhe IS IT HATE OR LOVE ki starting updates yaad aa gayi...πŸ˜†
jab jodha humesha behosh ho jaaya karti thi...πŸ˜†
poor jodha...yaar tu apni jodhas ko bahut suffer karati hai...😑
aur ye idiot jallu...apni feelings chupane ke liye...behaving so mercilessly with jo...😭😑
but he cant deny the fact now...that he is madly in love with this girl..😳
and if not love..then he is madly obsessed with this girl...
i just love your jodha...she is so determined, controlled, dignified and most important..the NEVER SAY DIE element of her...πŸ‘
i just love her spirit...jalal ko bahut problem hone wali hai beta...πŸ˜‰
bahut papad belne padege usko paane ke liye...
i m wondering what will he do as she is leaving the palace in three days...πŸ€”
will he stop her...but he is a shenshah so his ego will not allow him to do so...😈
then agar wo chali gayi to bhi panga hai...πŸ˜•
uper se i think usko lene shayad wo king aayega...i forgot his name whom her mother has selected for her...😑
would love to see jalal burning in jealousy...πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ
poor radha yaar...she is in so much worst condition...😭
but what to do...jalal will not bend his rules and radha will not give up...😑
bada complicaton hai...😭
i loved the extreme concern of jalal when he saw her burned hands...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
u described it marvelously...i got goosebumps while reading...β­οΈπŸ‘
but jo is too tough to handle...πŸ˜†
even after being in so much pain she never forgot to remind him her limits...πŸ‘
really this girl has got guts...i just love her...πŸ‘πŸΌ
and yes...that zarina wala scene...one of my fav songs...😳
bechari wanna seduce him...but loved the way her every line reminded him of radha...
yaar kya brilliant scenes likhti hai...πŸ‘
then drunk jalal reaching to salima's chamber...ye banda to ishq me bavla ho gaya hai...πŸ˜†
i totally imagined rajat's expressions while singing "IN AANKHO KI MASTI" in a drunk tone...☺️
poor guy is so much dejected because of her rejection...😭
i believe he is the same person who molested jodha earlier and that is why she hates him so much...πŸ˜•
but yet having little concern about him and blushing at his complements was surprising for me...😲
and yes yes yes...Rukku ki beizzati...how can i forget...πŸ‘β­οΈ
how much i wish yaar...ke show me esa kuch dikhaye...😭
maza aa gayi..the way he supported radha and gave a tight slap on Rukku's face by announcing her as the winner...πŸ₯³
and esp mension that smirk at the last to rukku...
i seriously felt like clapping and whisking like a typical tapori at that point of time...πŸ₯³
i just love it when jallu shuts rukku up...πŸ˜ƒ
all in all...a very emotional...and as i always say rollar costar ride type of update...πŸ‘
love u bhavu...β€οΈπŸ€—
update soon..☺️🀣

Edited by Pallavvi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pallu ...love u sweet heart... I was waiting for your comment for years...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ab jake lagta hai... yeh story bhi acchi hai😳

me blushing with your shayri... I have no words... Par tu kese Nikamma ban gayiπŸ˜†πŸ€£

"kya kahu tumhari writing ke liye meri romance ki amma"😳
"ke teri stories ke crush ne mujhe kar diya nihayati nikamma"πŸ˜†
Edited by shahbhavini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Di! Sorry for the late comment!πŸ€— I had read the update but wasn't getting the time to comment!

Anyways, the update was fab! I just love Radha! She is too damn fearless! Usse na Jalal na Ruqu ka dar hai!😳 I love the way she answers Jalal back!πŸ‘. But she is full-on vachan ki pakki! Jaan jaaye par vachan na jaaye! In this case, agar aur bhooki rahi toh jaan chali hi jaayegi!😲 Kitna upvaas karegi? But her mind is very strong!😳
Ruqu toh sachmein😑. Kitna usko niche dikhana chahti hai!😑 She thought that Radha would not be able to make the food. But Radha ne kamaal kar diya with slight difficulty! Kitni pareshaani hui bechaari ko! But this gal is determined! She won't bow down to Ruqu at any cost!πŸ˜ƒ She finally won the contest! Slap on Ruqu's face!πŸ˜†
Jalal seems attracted to her but he doesn't want to admit it to himself! That is why he keeps going to the courtesans I guess. He has many of them after all! But still, even that courtesan's dance could not help him forget about her! He ultimately landed up drunk in Salima's room, drunk!πŸ˜† It reminded me of that scene in JA, where Jallu is in tension because Jodha is hiding things from him and he lands up in her room drunk!πŸ˜† And he stayed over in the room!😳
I just hope Radha apna fast tod de jaldi! She has already landed up on the bed!😑 If she keeps doing this then mar jaayegi!😑 Par aisa bhi achcha hoga ke her health deteriorates further and Jalal takes care of her!
Meena Bazaar mein kya hoga I wonder! I hope Radha teaches Ruqu a lesson again!πŸ˜†
Btw loved the song you used di!πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ
Love you loads! And update soon! I really love this story!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AkDha_Fanatic

Outstanding ... Superb ... Mindblowing ... Loved it

Thanks Neha I am glad U enjoying this storyπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 5
awesome dear...
excellent...
poor Jodha...
feel sorry for her...
Jalal is being inhuman with her...
hes confused and so troubling and torturing her...
and that Ruqaiya damn her...
Jodha should really humiliate her...
so Jalal has realized his feelings for Jodha?
cont soon dear...

Thanks Deepa... I am so happy U enjoying this story... Yes I feel sad for Jodha too..but she is very determined and strong... Jalal has fallen for her but... he is in denial phase which always harsh... Jalal is scared of himself ... He knows that her every action effect on his... and he can't see in her pain... her pain is more painful for him... thank u for your comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Bhavi di πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
aaj tak suna tha ki intzaar ka fal meetha hota hai,par itna meetha hota hai ki hum aapke update mein kho jaaye! ! Waah Waah πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

OH MY CUTIE PIE... I am glad U love this update

Standing ovation to my azeez Bhavi di! πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I am blushing😳
She's a ⭐️
Di I was totally lost in this chapter. Jalal was sooo awesome in dis chapter
The way he took care of her, his concern even Radha couldnt ignore ❀️ Such a lovely and making speechless piece it was 😳

Jalal care about her... but he is confuse with this emotion... he is also new to this feeling...and her ego and her attitude and rejection...is making him harsh...


And how our lovely Radha wanted to see him at night. She was missing him πŸ˜‰

Radha has started to feeling lit bit for him... but she is faraway from love ... it will take longer to falling love
Zarina (If I'm right πŸ˜›),bechaari Jallu ke gusse ka shikaar ho gayi. I wonder its the first time Jallu ignored her like this πŸ˜† Hayee Radha you have made Jallu crazy πŸ˜†

you right Jalal ko kahi pe bhi chen nahi... He tried everything... he drank alcohol to forget her ... he went to his fav dance didn't help.. Jodha ka jadoo jalal pe buri tarah se chada hai

Aww Jallu's entry in Salima's chamber in night, In aankho How he hugged her and asked her," Itni nafrat karti ho humse" Hum to iss line ke kayal ho gaye di 😳 πŸ‘

Poor jalal is so frusteted with her ignorance and her hatred attitutde uske dimag me sirf yahi chal raha hai... he knows inside that she hates him...


Lovely it was how his words affected Radha. How his intense emotions shocked her
It is indeed true ki nashe mein insaan sach bolta hai ❀️

You right nashe me sab sach bahar aa jata hai... Raadha also felt that he is falling in love with her... she felt his pain... but she has started to care about him... lit by little her hate is reducing...

Ruqaiya maharani chali thi Radha ko sabak sikhaane aur khud beizzat ho gayi. 🀣 Uska chehra dekhne layak hoga!!

Yeh story me Rukaiya ko to itna tadpavungi... meri sari tamna puri hogi iss story meπŸ˜†
And the precap is just testing my patience ❀️
Update soony soony, iss bacchi ki dilli tamanna hai 😳

UPDATE🀣 VO KYA HOTA HAI LOVE U CUTIE PIE

Love you endlessly β€οΈπŸ€—

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