FF: Registan Ka GULAB (Rose in Desert) Thread 1 Close Thread 2 Active - Page 27

Di i reviewed on pg 35 😃😊

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Di i reviewed on pg 35 😃😊

N where is d nxt update jaan😕

Di ap bahut lazy horahi hoo 😉😳

Lazipanti chodho n update karooo jaldhi se 😭

🤣 Lazy... lazipanti chodo...lol... Yaar u right... I will start today

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I have become lazy again!

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

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I have become lazy again!

😆SACH ME UPDATE BHI NAHI DETI😡 AB ME BHI LAZY... HO GAYI HU...😆 TANI YAAR ... UPDATE DENA PLEASE😃

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

🤣 Lazy... lazipanti chodo...lol... Yaar u right... I will start today

Bhavi Di Pls Pls Update 🤗

aap yeh ss kab update karoge 😔

Beautiful Story..

bhavini...kal mera chutti tha...so I went through the chappys...dear...what was that...it was awesome...

Hey bhavini! I am sorry for such a late reply, my exams are going on so i didn't got time to comment here. I read the two chapters before, have to say girl HatsOff! What a brilliant writing and execution :O *Claps*
The story and its concept is so intriguing and appealing that i actually wanted to comment in detail and big as you deserve every bit of it...but today i couldn't stop myself from writing here. I super like the character of radha! She is so strong and independent, her scene with the guard was wow. Plus her bonding with rahim is very sweet. Everyone was all praising about radha, her intelligence, values and beauty which in turn led jalal restless. It was all very nicely described by you!
The jungle incident is getting mysterious...radha is jodha and that man is jalal...thats why she was walking away everytime after morning puja...she is here to seek revenge i guess?
I honestly loved how you handled all the characters in these two updates. The title "Registaan Ka Gulaab" is very nice! It has a ethnic rural touch to it..so i love it. Even i belong to registaan area XD Lol i meant Jaipur :)
Loved the updates. Keep them coming!