Ooommggg di ๐What a thrilling update with lot ov suspence๐
I loved it soo much ๐
I was sooo lost in ur update. I cud visualise d every scene
I jus loved it soo much . I feel like i was reading a novel
I cant tell u how brilliantly u penned it down ๐
Take a bow foh writing it so amazingly
Loved d garden scene whr radha n rahim was playing n jallu was trying to c her..
Loved d scene whr jo was singing n hiding n controlling her tears ๐ณ
Loved d scene whr jallu changes d law in one go of radha's words ๐
Jallu was trying to remember d face but he cudnt. ๐ณ
Well all d suspence vl clear in coming updates๐๐
N lastly d DEEDAWR of radha. ๐ Haayye d way she spoke infront ov jalal v confidently abt her beauty n everything n d way jallu shout at her to remove her ghoonghat n when she didnt den d way he removed her ghoonghat n he was mesmerised to c her beauty
Juz loved it
Loved it
Lovd itโญ๏ธ
N loved it n i wascompletely lost in ur update dats y m unable to comment ๐๐
M curious to read more
Pls update asap di..๐ณ๐ณ
Love u sooo much ๐ค
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