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superb update...story z progressing really well...

jodha rahim scene ws beautifully written...i luvd her attitude.

omg maham seem lil nice in ur updt...i hope she will nt create any trouble for her.

superb superb superb...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

yeah di lil busy now a days...bs updts padhne hi aati hu. missing my old days like anything.😭...

luv u my sweet di...jaldi se updt kiya kro plz..

Heyy di 🤗

I have so many questions. This story is filled with suspense, Radha is Jodha for sure and Jalal has done something wrong with her.

SPEECHLESS! Amazing Radha/Jodha's entry, She really looked very royal and strong character. Rahim and Jodha their chemistry is so cute. Salima begum made mistake calling her CHOTI AMMI. That is big mistake, Maham Manga is also impress by her. She gave her three options. I loved that part. very beautifully written. Radha is very smart she has mentioned how talented she is but very tactfully denied for the work and kept her dignity. Peaceful prayer part and her chum chum both are really awesome. I really like this chapter, Please update soon and email me also. Thanks and big hug from Jolly.

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

let me start the review of this😛

be ready for a boring essay now

i loved the natural description

i loved the scenic beauty u described

i loved her description

u were so perfect in all this description

i loved her attitude with the guards

i loved the sound of her payal

well i understand the guard was lecherous

he had bad intentions in his mind

he is a devil he lusted after her

i loved what she did later

these men have to dealt in this way

lathon ki bhoot baton se nahi maanta

Rima Sweet Heart...Thank U so much for your beautiful detail comment... I have no word for your love... Without your comment I feel my chapter is imcomplet... I guess UR comment became my addiction😆

Originally posted by: rima4ever

i did not understand one thing

why is her name radha ?

jalal is the hero here

so should her name be not jodha ?

loved the proceeding of her entrance

i must say she is very observant

loved the maham hameeda ruq and salima conversation

poor salima has to go to her mausi

but she is worried about rahim now

err is maham good here in this story ?

from her words it seems that she is better

all of these four have a very good relation

Everything has a reason behind it... Radha name... because she loves Krishna😆... I can't tell U much about the name at this time...😉 Radha is very beautiful, smart and Royal... Maham kabhi acchi ho sakti hai... lol... Maham is very cleaver lomdi character here... She will not show her color till needed...😆 about their relation... I will say ..hathi ke dikhane ke dat and chbane ke alag hote hai

Originally posted by: rima4ever

well i could not understand why ma gave so many smirks for radha

i loved radha ma conversation too

well she wanted to test radha

by giving her the options for all the 3 jobs

i loved all her explanations

i loved the way radha told ma all her strong points

this scene was just like a modern day job interview

i hope that monster radha told is not jalal

i appreciate radha for her determination and courage

radha got a very good job to take care of rahim

RADHA hai hi aesi ki... smirk aa hi jaye... Maham ko use competition ka yaa uske power ka koi khatra nahi hai tab tak she is fine with her...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

seems ma is very impressed with radha

wow i feel she knows even psychology

she understands rahim so well

and she will handle him with great maturity

aww salima introduced radha as his choti ammijaan

how sweet and cute is that bhavini

wow even rahim si so impressed with radha

in a few seconds radha made rahim his friend

i must applause radha for this. kudos to her

wow they have a riddle session now

wow how well radha used all this to her advantage

she told rahim that she loves to do all that he loves

that made her his pakka friend

wow now rahim is assuring salima

that he will stay with his choti ammijaan

salima can travel in peace now

salima also handles rahim so well

radha assures salima that she will take good care of him

Yes Radha knows kids psychology too... CHOTI AMMI... Yes indeed sweet... Radha really smart...Salima is feeling so relived with in a hours...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

radha spends her first day with rahim

rahim has occupied her mind so well

she is so free and comfortable with him

wow so rahim is sleeping in her hojra

means he has complete trust and faith in her

both hameeda and ma are impressed with radha

seems radha has wrapped rahim around his fingers

Radha loves to be with Rahim... He is giving her peace which she really needs at this time... Hamida and Ma...salima all knock out in one day😆 Radha the genius