Omg ! Your creative imagination is beyond words to be praised my meethi ka laddu Didu ^^ 👏👏⭐️ The prologue just made me even more curious and hungry to read the story (but my shitty like button is 😡😭😭) and there I read the first part , which totally bowled me , Jodhaa's presence in Agra is still a mystery and I have strong feelings that she came to take her revenge from Jalal , he was her presumed MONSTER na? 😈😈Didu please tell na what happened that time before when he woke up to find himself in a pitous condition sleeping nowhere in jungle , and this ODHNI , the bleeding scratches on his chest 😲😲 Did he assault her drunk under alcohol's influence ? Didu , I WANT TO KNOW , WANT TO KNOW , WANT TO KNOW , WANT TO KNOW , WANT TO KNOW 😈😈 Jodhaa's fiery attitude with her dagger with those lustful guards 😎 That's why I love this Jodhaa , fear word isn't in her dictionnary 😎 Rajvanshi style ahaan 😎😎 Mari patni seems quite gentle with her here 🤔🤔 Mischievous han 😈 Her interactions with Rahim , their cute hug while sleeping , their innocent and happy moments nursing her wounds 😭😃😭 Pata na kya hua hai uske saath Laddu otherwise I am gonna put red chillies and mirchi sauce in Laddu that you gonna say PAANI PAANI and I am not even gonna give you a glass 😈😈 The pooja scene and Jalal's sword fighting scene was just sizzlingly described even if they didn't see each other but I know your story gonna follow regulary and you will reveal us all those secrets han 😈😈 Maham according lots of importance to Jodhaa aka Radha , hum hum not a really good sign 😈😈 Kabab mein haddi 😈😈 I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter my Laddu Didu cutie sweetie shweetie 🤗❤️🤗 And please try to update this week itself because my holidays are going to end at the beginning of next week but even though keep pming me despite I will not be able to give you speed reviews , never mind , I will give those on weekends and free times , when I am free promise my Didu Ditto ^^ 🤗❤️🤗 Don't be upset to see whenever you start to write a new story when they aren't any comments and likes from Sweety 🤗😳😳 You know that Sweety loves you and your stories a lot and her blessings are always with you 🤗❤️🤗 Love you my Didu ^^ 🤗 Update soon will be eagerly waiting han 😈😆😳
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