Once Upon A Navratri - ArShi OS - Page 2

Woah! I can’t believe he waited three years to find her identity. A perfect blend of mystery, tension, bromance and romance!

I came here after reading Stuti’s one shot and for a moment there, just like Raji, I think I was also wondering whether the mystery girl is a ghost!

P.S: We all have an opinion about that beard, don’t we?

Originally posted by: minakrish

Awww, this was such a cute OS Manju.😍 Arnav here was a little out of character but I think it suited this story. Lover boy Arnav is one of my favourites.😅❤️

Ahhh, as if Arnav is going to wait another year to meet her. Knowing him, he will be flying to Paris with her.😏😉

Thank you for the tag.🤗

Shiri, that cover is so beautiful. I absolutely love it.🤩🧡

Congratulations to both of you for the runners up. Looks like we had a tie in that category.😎

And Shiri, this cool cover deserved the win. Well done you!🥇👏🏻

Thank you so much, Mrina

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

In our IF world, Siri is a well-known and skilled graphicer, and the banner looks fantastic.

What can I say about the story and the author? In fact, I often raise my eyebrows in admiration as I read! This story exhibits a variety of emotions, which highlights the author's storytelling ability! You are a very good writer; we want to read more and more from you, Manju.

Thank you so much, Madhuri

You have got me humbled with all those words of praise!

And I absolutely agree about Shiri's talents

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

I like the Vibrant Dupattas in the background of the Banner and also the trendy font style and colors used for the title . Congratulations on the win Shiri

The story has humor, romance, drama and mystery as well... so it really packs everything in . I gotta agree with Akash that Arnav's overgrown beard gives him a Babaji look... really had me laughing in that moment . Khushi is an enigma, and I was waiting right along with Arnav to unravel her secret. Finding out the truth was melancholic... but it ended on a happy note and that's all we really need . A well written OS on the whole and glad that you guys won for this .

Love,

Stuti

Thank you, Stuti. Glad you liked the overall package

Originally posted by: ExoticDisaster

The story is full package 📦

Glad we won the runner up position 😃

Really enjoyed working on the cover 😁

Thank you, dear partner

Originally posted by: Doomedhell

Wow this was beautiful. Thanks for writing. Stunning writing. Do post more

Of course! Thank you

Originally posted by: x.titli.x

That was such a cute one, went through all emotions while reading this. Congrats lovely duo Shiri, the cover is so pretty

Glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you

Originally posted by: Savera84

For a second I thought Khushi is indeed a ghost. Why would anybody appear only once a year and then disappear? But the later part was a surprise. Khushi needed Arnav's help and he gladly caught the opportunity with both hands to get to know her more. A win win for both.

Wonderful story Manju and Shiri's book cover perfectly matched the story.

Cheers..

Haha got ya, didn't I? Glad you liked the win-win situation at the end. Thanks for the review

Originally posted by: Just-do-it

Woah! I can’t believe he waited three years to find her identity. A perfect blend of mystery, tension, bromance and romance!

I came here after reading Stuti’s one shot and for a moment there, just like Raji, I think I was also wondering whether the mystery girl is a ghost!

P.S: We all have an opinion about that beard, don’t we?

Haha we absolutely have a consensus on the ghost theory! Glad you enjoyed the OS

Now this we were not expecting. She comes to see her father but doesn't manage to go talk to him. Now he will have to help her bridge the gap.