Wow.. Interesting FF that you have written.
I came across this one recently and read it in one go. The most that struck me was the mystery that you have built around Arnav's character and his relationship with his family (specifically his parents). Something drastic has happened with him in his past, in school... which I guess only Akash and Krish know and no one else is aware of it. But what is that is yet to be found out and why has it affected too badly on Arnav's life. His whole personality is dependent on the past where he seemed to have suffered. This I would really like to find out.
But what I also like about this is that beneath all of this, we see an Arnav who is caring in his own weird ways, extremely family oriented... will not let anyone talk trash about his near and dear ones. He who himself thought cannot be a friend has proved over the course of his friendship with Khushi that he is the best friend one can ever ask for. I know that his relationship with Khushi is now on the borderline of turning into something more... but I still want it to happen organically.
Loved the pace of the updates and really looking forward for the next one.
Lots Of Love...😊😊
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