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Mission Love Part 6

Reyansh.Jay and Aradhana walked towards a flat and rang the calling bell.A woman opened the door.

Aradhana:Poorna?

The woman was shocked.

Aradhana:Are you Poorna.

The woman nodded.

Poorna:Yes.I am Poorna.

They smiled.

Reyansh:We are from 'Jay Rey Associates'.

Poorna:You both are very famous.So I know.

They smiled.

Jay:Won't you invite us inside.

Poorna:Yes..sure.Please come inside.

They got inside.

Reyansh:You are the one who used to write letters to Raghav.Right?

Poorna became dull.

Jay:Say.

Poorna:Yes.

Aradhana:Did you really love Raghav or were you playing with him?

Poorna became dull.

Poorna:I met him first at a musical event.Being his crazy fan,I went near him and took photographs with him.

Poorna showed them those photographs.

Poorna:But I had not revealed my name to him.Later I started writing letters to him as a fan.But in the mean time I started loving him.So I started writing love letters to him along with the love songs I wrote specially for him.Raghav also started loving me.I was not playing with him.If so,why would I tell him that we can meet?

Aradhana:But you never came to meet him.

Poorna:You are wrong.The day before what happened to him,I had met him at the Villa.We both were very happy and decided to inform our parents to get married.

Aradhana,Reyansh and Jay were shocked.

Reyansh:Then why did'nt you visit him when he was sinking in the hospital?

Jay:Maybe to avoid the media as the media reporters were all around the hospital.Atleast you could have visited him at his home.

Poorna:I wanted to visit him.But my father restricted me from meeting him.Since Raghav is the victim of a murder attempt,he was scared whether my involvement would put me in danger.So he did'nt want the public to know my connection with Raghav.I am dying every moment.I am praying for him from the bottom of my heart.But I can't meet him.

Poorna was becoming very emotional.

Aradhana felt sad and hugged her.

Aradhana:Don't worry.Raghav will recover soon.After that nothing can you from reuniting with Raghav.

Poorna:I am praying for that moment.

Aradhana:By the way did you recognize me?

Poorna:Yes.You are Raghav's closest friend Aradhana.Raghav had told me about you and you are a famous TV reporter too.Who does'nt know Aradhana Khanna?

Aradhana smiled.

Reyansh:Did Raghav tell you about having enemies?

Poorna:He has rivals in the music industry.But no serious rivalry to plan a murder attempt on him.

Jay:If Raghav does not have enemies there is a possibilty that it is a suicide attempt.

They were stunned.

Poorna:But Raghav was very happy after our meeting.Why would he attempt suicide?

Reyansh:We need to find out that.Something unknown has happened which no one knows.

Jay:Anyways it was nice meeting you Poorna.Hoping for your co-operation in this case.

Poorna:I will do anything for Raghav.

They smiled and walked out.

Poorna closed the door and rang up someone:The Advocates Reyansh and Jay had come here with Raghav's friend Aradhana.I lied to them that I loved Raghav sincerely and I had a meeting with him before he got poisoned.I even lied to them that our meeting was pleasant and we had decided to get married.I cooked up a story that it's because of my dad that I did'nt go to meet Raghav after that incident.But now they doubt whether Raghav's was a suicide attempt.That's why I am scared.If the truth comes out,we both will be caught by the Police.

Poorna was really scared.





Aradhana rang up Reyansh.

Aradhana:Hi Reyansh and Jay.I want to speak to both of you.

Reyansh:Sure.

He put the call on loud speaker.

Aradhana:My parents have gone out for a wedding function.I am bored at home.So can I come to your house?

Jay and Reyansh got excited.

Jay:Yes sure.

Aradhana:Okay...then I will come there.

Reyansh:You are most welcome.

Aradhana:Thank you.

They cut the call and looked at the messy condition of the house.

Jay:If Aradhana sees the condition of our house,she will faint.

Reyansh:Exactly.So before she comes,we will clean the house.

Jay:Yes,we will start it now.

Reyansh and Jay started cleaning the house.




After some time Aradhana reached there.They had a casual conversation.

Aradhana:I feel hungry.Can I get something to eat?

Reyansh:Oh we forgot about that as we were busy cleaning the house.

Aradhana:What?

Jay gritted his teeth.

Jay thought:Reyansh let her know that our house was dirty.

Jay:Nothing.We will order food from the hotel now.

Aradhana:No need of that.I will cook lunch for all of us.

Reyansh and Jay were surprised.

Reyansh:Since we don't cook much,only a few vegetables and vessels are there.

Aradhana:It's okay.I will manage it with what you have here.

They smiled.



Aradhana prepared lunch.

Aradhana served the food to Reyansh and Jay.

Reyansh:Aradhana,you sit with us and eat.

Jay:It will be fun to have lunch together.

Aradhana:I will eat it afterwards.First I want to know how both of you feel about my food.

Reyansh:What is there to say about it?We are sure that it's delicious.

Aradhana smiled.

While tasting the food they realized that the food was not as tasty as they expected.

Aradhana:How is the food?

Reyansh lied:It's yummy.

Jay:Superb!

Reyansh:I have eaten such a tasty food before.

Aradhana became dull.

Aradhana:What?

Aradhana:I know that I have not cooked well.Because I am not a good cook.

They were stunned.

Aradhana:But I expected both of you to openly tell me that it was not upto the mark.I wanted to know whose friendship is more sincere to tell me the truth.But both of you lied to me.

Jay and Reyansh became dull.

Reyansh:You may not have cooked well.Still the food you cooked is important to us.Because you took the effort to cook for us despite of not being a good cook.So we really loved your food.Then why should we say that the food was not tasty enough to eat?

Jay:Exactly.I agree with Reyansh.We both are your sincere friends Aradhana.We swear.

Aradhana smiled emotionally.

Aradhana:Then I will also have the lunch with both of my friends.

They smiled.

Reyansh:That's what we want.

She smiled and started having lunch together.





Aradhana noticed that Reyansh is in the kitchen.She went there.

Aradhana:Reyansh,what are you doing there?

Reyansh:It is your first visit.So I thought of making chocolate cookies for you as the dessert.Jay also wanted to make.But since he is not confident to make it and felt that he will end up ruining it,he did'nt come to the kitchen.

Aradhana was surprised.

Aradhana took the apron and wore it surprising Reyansh.

Reyansh:Aradhana!

Aradhana:I will also join you.Don't hesitate.I am good at making dessert.

He was surprised.

They both starting making cookies.

O saajna tere ishq ch beh ke

Duniya di khair main bhull hi gaya

Ishq sataye ishq rulaye

Ishq ch aake main taan rull hi gaya

Reyansh saw baking powder on Aradhana's face.He started blowing air in her face.

Akhiyian da noor tera

Dil da kasoor mera

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

Kivein samjhawan tainu

Chadha je saroor tera

Aradhana looked at him deeply.

Jeena sikhaya tune o saajna

O saajna mere o saajna

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

O saajna mere o saajna

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

Jay who came that way saw it with a shock.

Reyansh started wiping her face with his fingers.

Seh na sakunga main tujhse judayi

Aankh bhar aayi meri aankh bhar aayi

Ho seh na sakunga main tujhse judayi

Aankh bhar aayi meri aankh bhar aayi

Aradhana and Reyansh shared a deep eye lock.

Tanhaiyon mein bhi hai tanhayi

Aankh bhar aayi jab yaad teri aayi

Kyun sataye mujhe kyun rulaye mujhe

Kyun na tujhko chaah kar bhi main pa sakun

Kyun hain ye faasle kyun ashq bahne lage

Kyun na saari dooriyan mita sakun

Jay could not bear it anymore and walked away.

Coming back to senses,Reyansh and Aradhana moved away from each other.They were embarrassed to face each other.

Dil ki duaayein lab pe jo aayein

Tujhko bulaye o saajna

Kivein samjhawan tannu kyun bhool paye

Tujhko hi chaahe o saajna

O saajna mere o saajna

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

But hiding it,they focused on the process of baking the cookies.

O saajna mere o saajna o saajna

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

O saajna mere o saajna

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

Jogi banaya tune o saajna

Jogi banaya saajna(Broken But Beautiful 2


Reyansh went near Jay.

Reyansh:Jay...Aradhana and I made chocolate cookies together.It has come out really well.You come and taste it.

Jay was gloomy.

Jay:I will come Rey.

Reyansh noticed his gloomy face.

Reyansh:What happened Jay?

Jay:Nothing.I want to tell you something Reyansh.

Reyansh:Say.

Jay:As you know,in a triangular love story,only one person will succeed.I realised that I am the one who failed.You are the right match for Aradhana.So I am backing out.

Reyansh was shocked.

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Posted: 28 days ago
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Nice to see Ishita as Poorna. So Poorna and Raghav did meet. Her reason why she didn't meet him was realistic. What? It was a cooked up story? Wonder what's the truth. Hilarious that both the boys got into cleaning for Aradhana. Reyansh blurting out the truth was funny. Though her food wasn't delicious, them praising her even then was nice, good that she's understanding. Reyansh and Aradhana baking scene was romantic, poor Jay. Surprisingly Jay is ready to back out. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 28 days ago
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res for part 6. comment

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Posted: 28 days ago
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Beautiful update dear 🙂

Just amazing 🤩

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Part 6

Splendid update.... perfectly written

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Thank you for the comments.



Mission Love Part 7

Reyansh went near Jay.Reyansh:Jay,Aradhana and I made chocolate cookies together.It has come out really well.You come and taste it.

Jay was gloomy.

Jay:I will come Rey.

Reyansh noticed his gloomy face.

Reyansh:What happened Jay?

Jay:Nothing.I want to tell you something Reyansh.

Reyansh:Say.

Jay:As you know,in a triangular love story,only one person will succeed.I realised that I am the one who failed.You are the right match for Aradhana.So I am backing out.

Reyansh was shocked.

Reyansh:What are you saying Jay?I know that you love Aradhana.But you want to back out now?

Jay:Yes Reyansh.I realised my mistake in coming in between you and Aradhana.I did a big mistake by hurting my best friend for love.I was very selfish.But I want to correct myself now.

Reyansh became emotional.

Reyansh:If you were selfish,even I was also selfish Jay.You want to sacrifice your love for me.But I don't want Aradhana by breaking your heart.Because your friendship is more important for me.

Jay was in tears.

Jay hugged him.

Jay:Nothing is more important than you Reyansh.So Aradhana is yours.I don't want to be a villain in your life.

Reyansh:No.Aradhana is yours.

Jay:No Reyansh.

Reyansh:What no?I am backing out.

Aradhana who was overhearing it got irritated and went near them.

Aradhana:Stop it both of you.Why are you both saying to each other that Aradhana is yours,not mine?Am I a trophy to exchange?You both want to sacrifice me for each other.But have you both ever thought of what I want?What I feel about both of you?

Reyansh and Jay were stunned.They became upset and guilty too.

Jay:Aradhana...you knew that...

Aradhana:Yes,even though you both did'nt confess your love to me,I understood that both of you have feelings for me.I wanted to know who is the one for me.That's why I came here.But here both are conducting a competition to win me.But guys...I also have feelings like both of you.But you guys are playing with my feelings.

Jay and Reyansh felt guilty and said:We are sorry Aradhana.

Aradhana walked away emotionally.



Reyansh,Jay and Aradhana remembered their moments with each other.

Pal do pal ki kyun hai zindagi
Is pyaar ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahin





Toh khuda se maang loon
Mohallat main ek nai
Rehnaa hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jana nahi





Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai




Suhana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai



Jay imagined Reyansh-Aradhana getting married

Teri muskurahate hain taakat meri
Mujhko innhi se ummid mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan

Inmein hi sadaa hifaajat meri
Zindagaani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai


Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaayein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye

Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lautunga yahaan tere paas mein haan
Vaada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

and he wishing them a Happy married life.

Reyansh's imagination.....

Jay and Aradhana are getting married

Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai

and he was watching them emotionally.

Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai

Reyansh threw flower petals at them.

Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai

(Ek villain).



Reyansh and Jay went near Aradhana.

Reyansh:We know that unknowingly we hurt you.We apologize from the bottom of our heart.

Jay:We are really embarrassed for what we did.We are sorry Aradhana.

Aradhana:I know that.I have no hard feelings for both of you.

They smiled with relief.

Jay: We want to tell you one more thing Aradhana.If you choose one of us as your life partner don't hesitate to tell us openly.If you choose Reyansh I will support both of you as your best friend.

Reyansh:If you choose Jay,I will be there to conduct the wedding.

Aradhana smiled slightly.



The next day....

Reyansh:We should know whether Raghav had any unknown enemy to kill him or any unknown reason to attempt suicide.

Jay:For that we should go to his house and check.

Reyansh:Yes.We will leave immediately.

Reyansh and Jay went to Raghav's house.

Swarna:Did you get any clue about the culprit?

Jay:We don't have a clear idea now.

Swarna and Ajay became dull.

Reyansh:But like we promised,we will find the culprit.For that we need to check Raghav's room.

We may get a clue from there.

Swarna:Sure.You can check his room.

Swarna took them to Raghav's room.Jay and Reyansh saw Julie there.

Reyansh:She...?

Swarna:She is Julie who is Raghav's home nurse.

Reyansh:Nice to meet you Julie.

Jay:We are....

Julie:I know you both.Ajay Sir and Swarna Ma'am had told me everything.

Reyansh and Jay smiled.

They checked Raghav's room completely.



Reyansh and Jay went to a house.

They started checking the cupboard and the drawer.They found a photograph.




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Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just amazing 🤩

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Part 6

Aransh and Jay visited Poorna to inquire about Raghav. It seemed that Poorna loved Raghav with all her heart. However after Aramsh and Jay left, Poorna's revalation was shocking. She wishes the worst for Raghav. Hope the trip finds out the truth. The bonding of Aramsh and Jay lunch session was cute. The aransh kitchen scene and the song sequence were romantic. Seems that Jay decided to leave as he gave up.

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Part 7

Jay and Aradhana decided to sacrifice their love for each other. Aradhana's reaction to their conversation was natural as she also has feelings. She was right in saying both were competing to win her as they were doing it. Glad that both apologized to get and compromised. The song sequence was emotional. The trio found a photograph in Raghav's room. I guess it was Poorna.

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thank you for the pm


Part 7

Fine update.... awesomely written

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