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Posted: 10 years ago
yaay thank you for updating :)
aww i dont want viren and jeevika to be seperateddd :(
but cant wait to see what happens next :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome update
i liked virika convo
he knows is wife very well
she is not slept from 3 days
and he know it very well
and he made a trik to sleep her
and jeevika is feeling bad
dont want leave her husband
now she have no option
so she is going
viren also feeling bad
dont want to send jeevika from him
he was sending her for her happiness
he is trying to show
he is strong but from inside
he is feeling bad
total
amazing
superb
fantastic
mindblowing
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by arshiasushma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Karina di
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Di, the world best wriiter for virika and kryan..
The update was so
Cute
Loving
Touching
Heart breaking
Bond to be storng
Poor virika
Awesome
Sad
Cute
Swimming
Angry
Understandable
Mindblowing
Adoring
Out of the world
Talks
Bathroom
Sleepless
Missing
Romantic
Truely di, it was amazing .. Karan was so helpful and understandable that he knew that jeevika did not sleep so he planned everything so she can sleep for sometime... Finding a person like viren is so difficult but really sad that vrika will be seprated but m happy because i know they love each other immensly and they will forever... Thats why the sepration will make thier bond more stronger but i really hope virika will be together soon... They were so sweet swimming and eating ... And the nok jhok in the room ufff superrr cute.. Reading ur updates make my day lighten up and i love ur stories because its mixture of happiness and sadness which is called LIFE THANKS Di for the wonderful update cant wait to read for the next updateee continuee sooon.. Loveee uuu karinaa didi... <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 65

Jeevika woke up suddenly feeling so cold, yet protected in her husbands arms.

j - "I fell asleep?" she said rubbing her eyes
v - "Fell asleep, snored for almost an hour, and did some sleep talking"
j - "Your joking me right?"
v - "Not at all. I have everything recorded on my phone if you'd like to hear?"
j - "Viren you better not be serious"
v - "I'm dead serious. Next time you plan on revealing another one of my deep dark secrets to my evil-minded sister just remember the video and audio recording I have of you"
j - "What is wrong with you?"
v - "What is wrong with you? You haven't slept in days and you think I don't know?"
j - "Yeah whatever now that you're making me move I just have lots of stuff to complete"
v - "Really? Like what?"
j - "My paperwork at the lab and my scheduling. Im also in works of finding an apartment"
v - "But didn't you say they're offering you an apartment?"
j - "Yeah but I still have to choose which specific one I want and since it will take me a few days to adjust and settle in, I have to start my work on the clinical trial right now"
v - "My busy wife" he said kissing her forehead
j - "We have a flight to catch tonight, lets get moving"
v - "I'm going to miss Goa. This was such an amazing trip don't you think?"
j - "I'm sure it was for you" she said getting up.
v - "And it wasn't for you?" he asked curiously
j - "No. Had I known you were forcing me to move I probably wouldn't have even come to India in the first place or even told you about the offer. But yeah I know we're not talking about this anymore so lets go get ready" she said starting to walk towards the inside of their resort.

Vren followed her inside after putting his t-shirt on and they headed upstairs to their room. While Jeevika went to shower, Viren started getting together all their stuff and packing their bags.

j - "I'll finish the rest, you go shower" she said moving him to put her stuff in the bags.

Viren took her hands and put them on her shoulders then put his hands on her waist.

v - "I'm going to miss seeing you coming out the shower with the water dripping out of your hair"
j - "I'm going to miss coming home to two steaming cups of coffee made by my husband" she said placing her head on his shoulder.
v - "I'm going to miss you and Veera making fun of me"

Jeevika moved her head away and smiled at him.

j - "You know I was thinking that" she said looking down.
v - "What were you thinking"
j - "That maybe after you move in with me and we're together again that maybe we can uhm try"
v - "Try? Try what... Oh you mean try?"
j - "Yeah" she said blushing towards him.
v - "You think you're ready?"
j - "I just need something to look forward to right now so I can forget about the fact that we won't be together for sometime. And honestly every time I think of those two baby outfits you bought I can't get the idea of having a baby out of my head"
v - "You know something, I can't either" he said smiling really obviously. "So its a deal, after a few months when we'll both be together again we're going to try to bring a new life into this world"
j - "I can't wait now" she said hugging him again.
v - "Okay I'll go shower why don't you finish the rest of the packing then we can leave"
j - "Okay" she said smiling.

one week later (back home)...

Viren walked inside the garage and saw a bunch of boxes packed with different labels on each. He just looked at them until he heard the door open and Jeevika coming through. He put his stuff down and took the box in her hands and placed it down.

j - "Thanks"
v - "Mhmm. What else is left? I'll help you now"
j - "Actually that was the last box. My bags are packed too"
v - "You're finished with everything? Really?"
j - "Yeah why are you saying it like that?"
v - "No nothing. Uhm should we go eat out"
j - "No its okay I made dinner and you must be tired"
v - "Nope I'm fine. Lets go out and then maybe you can try talking to Veera for me?"
j - "The chocolates didn't work?"
v - "Nope she hung up on me almost five times today"
j - "Okay well we can go talk to her, but we should have dinner at home"
v - "I want to take you out though"
j - "Okay whatever you want. You better make it special though, our last dinner for a while"
v - "I'll be coming this weekend"
j - "Wait what?"
v - "Yeah I booked my flight today. I'll be leaving Thursday night from here and I'll be with you on the weekend"
j - "I didn't think you'd come this early" she said happily
v - "Well I made you a promise that I'd come every chance I could so I'm just fulfilling my promise" he said holding her hand.
j - "I'll go get ready really quickly and then we can go"
v - "Okay"

Viren sat on the couch and tried calling Veera again. He knew she would be upset with the fact of Jeevika leaving, but not this upset that she would ignore his phone calls even.

j - "Lets go Viren, I need to come home asap cause my flights early morning"
v - "Okay, by the way she didn't pick up my phone call again"
j - "Well lets go to the hospital first then"
v - "Thank You!" he said opening the door for her.

They both got into the car and Viren started driving to the hospital.

v - "You think we should go eat dinner first?"
j - "Stop being scared of your younger sister"
v - "I'm not scared" he said trying to lie
j - "Oh yes you are. She can't be mad at you forever. Well I don't blame her though?"
v - "Not now Jeevika"
j - "Okay okay. Lets just go there and you can talk to her in person"
v - "What if she sends another nurse to me and says that visiting hours are over?"
j - "Well get into the room before any nurse can stop you and look her into her eyes. Trust me, she loves you a lot to be this mad at you"
v - "Seems she loves you more. My sister has never ignored me like this in my life. She's had fights with everyone at home from mom to Virat to Bua but now I'm on her hitless"
j - "Thanks to me"
v - "Whatever. I'm too scared to go in even"
j - "Get a grip Viren. I'll wait here. If she sees us together then she will remember we aren't gonna be together anymore" she said looking down at her lap sadly.

Viren just put his hand on her shoulder trying to share his warmth with her, but he knew she was dying inside and so was he. Probably the most since Veera was ignoring him and Jeevika leaving him. Viren went inside the hospital, but returned fairly quickly surprising Jeevika. She couldn't believe Veera could possibly be this mad with her brother.

j - "What happened? Should I go and talk to her?"
v - "No she's asleep. The nurse said she was having a rough day so she ate dinner and has been asleep for a while. I don't want to disturb her more"
j - "Yeah its better not to. But I'm surprised why she didn't even message me or you if she wasn't having a good day"
v - "Because she has Armaan now and she doesn't need us"
j - "She doesn't need me, but she will always need her big bro you know?"
v - "I don't think it makes a difference to her whether I'm here or not"
j - "Oh please. You fight with the people you love the most, and you know that"
v - "Is it okay if we go home?"
j - "You okay?"
v - "No not really" he said in a jittery voice
j - "Viren please tell me"
v - "There's nothing to be told Jeevika"
j - "She will be fine and I will be fine too I promise"
v - "And me? I'm not gonna be fine"
j - "You will be fine because you will have the best of both worlds"
v - "What do you mean?"
j - "You won't have a wife complaining all the time next to you right? When you see me I'm always just gonna be happy to be with you. If you think about it we're really sugar-coating our marriage right now"
v - "If you say so"
j - "Are you hungry?"
v - "Not really"

The two of them got out of the car and went inside their home. Viren held onto Jeevika's hand and they went and sat on the couch. Viren eventually moved his head onto his wife's lap. He just closed his eyes trying to suck in the moment.


Thank You everyone for the response! Hope it will continue 😃 Probably going to be updating all three stories today so enjoy! Birthday treat for all KD fans ❤️ heheh
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Posted: 10 years ago
res <3
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WHT AN AMAZING PIECE OF WRITING IT IS
U R SUCH A GRT WRITER !
i just loved this part...
virika is abt to seprate...😭😭😭
u bettr unite them soon
i loved loved it to the core...
u make me crave fr them like too much...
i wisj i can make u sit nd write all day long !!!
just keep writing this one always
cz u know this is my most fav story...
just keep writing nd sending me...
lots of kisses to u !!!⭐️
⭐️⭐️⭐️
👏
😳
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Edited by millee18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
*unres
awww
its amazing
as always
aww superb
fantastic
wonderful
awww virika guna separate
awww
get them back together
aww
wonderful
love it
cravin for more
soo cont soon
thnx!!

Edited by sumayyah1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres

Loved the update

What can I say it was emotional

Your separating virika hating that

Love my virika together

Looking forward for the new track

Even though it's going to be an emotional one

Your writing is so addictive love it

Aww poor Viren he's sad

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u for making me smile this early on SUNDAY MORNING... LOVE YOU FOR THAT... The update was BBEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ... A PERFECT mixture of PURE LOVE N CARE <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aw, this chapter made me really emotional! It was so cute! I'm really looking forward to this new track I hope you have something special on mind. ;) I'm loving Viren! He's so supportive yet he's slowly breaking inside..it's so cute. And Veera, I hope she's well soon! Thanks for the PM, loved it Kays!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wait a min ..
One week later ??
Wat abt my kiss inside the blanket ..!! M gonna kill u carinaaa
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