after reading ur comments i can just conclude that u need some inspiration
in order to post soon u don think over the updates so much
its really good that u update on a regular basis
and seriously i look forward to ur update daily
this ff is interesting
but u just need to get some life n reality into it
like the age difference
u can show some communication gap
u can bring out some problems in the family
u don't find such happy go lucky family everywhere
plus u can show some tensions regarding work or studies
the real problems and the way out of it
something which the readers can relate to
just think over it
till then keep updating
but try to bring some twist or change
for example u can show how riddhima forgot to take precautions and then she gets pregnant
then her or armaan's happiness of becoming a parent and the other not ready for it now
the problems the fights the tension the decisions
all these u can show
and then their final decision and all
then if yes the pregnancy period and a the one who wasn't ready for it getting all ready to be a parent and all that maturing part can be shown
if no then the abortion or what to do now more fights and all can be shown
this was just an example
like this u can create good situations
and make ur ff interesting
and trust me u can continue writing and then end it after u are satisfied with your ff
if u end it because u think readers are finding it boring then you'll loose hope of writing
and if u end it even when readers want to read further then u'll have that satisfaction and the motivation to write something better
anyway continue soon
hope i didn't interfere
best of luck
keep writing
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