Rantara SS Tere Sang Yaara... (Discontinued) A Big Sorry to Readers..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi!!! I love you all... 😳

Abhi Jo main kehney wali hoon na usey sunkey I know aap sab aisa face bananey waley ho 🀒
Ab kya Karun mere kaam hi aisey hain...

Vo kya h na ye new thread meri NEW STORY ka hai... πŸ˜›
Dekho I know Ki aapko gussa AA Ra h..
Aap bologey Ki pehli waliyon ko to pura Kr ley... 😑

But ab main kya Karun ek mahine pehley tk Sa kahani set thi dimag Mein but ab ek mahina exam k chakkar Mein Sa bhool gyi... Jsey hi ideas aayengey I will continue them.. Pakka...
But I will not disappoint u this time pakka promise hai meri taraf sey coz ye story main Puri lokh chuki hoon ek jagah... Please show me your support jsey aap Sa pyari sissys ne pehley dikhaya tha..

Is kahani Mein romance thoda kam but dosti Puri hai.. 😳
Please I need your support and encouragement...
I shapath I am going to continue this aur aap sabko pasand bhi aayegi...
Neechey first chapter I hve posted...
Please read and comment if u want me to write this coz ye mere dil k kareeb hai bohot.. πŸ˜ƒ
Hogi hi na!! Pehli kahani Jo mainey puri kr daali hai...

Please please please!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Aapki apni thodi buddhu, thodi pagal SHIVI... πŸ˜›

INDEX OF STORY CHAPTERS

Chapter 1 ( below )
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
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Posted: 8 years ago
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TERE SANG YAARA... KHUSH-RANG BAHARAA
CHAPTER 1


As the morning alarm rang, she woke up instantly and checked her cell. It was 4:45am. There ws still 15 minutes to go for jogging. She went to her balcony and looked towards the ground floor flat. She was lost in some thoughts when her eyes fell on a taxi entering in the society. A bag was thrown out & a guy came out of the taxi. He paid to the cab driver and picked up his bag. He directly looked towards her. She pretended to look somewhere else. His eyes widened for for a second. But then he avoided and rang the bell of Same ground floor flat. An elderly person opened the door. He bend down and touched his feet. Both of them went inside. She also came inside her room and sat on the couch silently. After few silent moments she picked up a diary from nearby stand. She took a photograph out of it. It has two kids, a boy and girl. The boy was very cute and sweet while the girl was very chubby. He was teasing her by pulling her pony tail and she was pouting angrily towards him with specs on. She kissed that picture and said

I Miss You my Chimpanzee!! My bestie... Kahan ho yaar tum. I am so lonely without u 😭
She was on the verge of crying. She was Antara Kaul, a cardiologist by profession.She remembered that her best friend used to live in that ground floor flat. She had to leave that place 15 years back with her family bcz of her dad's transfer to Mumbai. But now when she returned two months back and was very excited to meet him. She received a shock. When she reached his him expecting him to open the door, there was some uncle whom she couldn't recognize as they were not even his parents. Later she came to know that they lived there with their son who came once in 5-6months bcz of his job. Her best friend was Raghu Naik cute yet the naughtiest creature in the whole world.
She generally go for a jogging but that day she wasn't feeling like so she just slept for few more hours with the pic in her hands coz she has to attend the hospital which was far away from her home. She usually came home by 9pm. She was living alone in her flat in Delhi. And family was still in Mumbai bcz of Job issues.

Next day she went for jogging. She noticed that the guy whom she saw last day was also there in the park and was jogging. It was their daily schedule. Coz 5am was quite early so usually no one was present in the park that time. He always has his headphones on. Sometimes when he crossed her, she heard him singing 90s songs. Sometimes she laughs on his antics. He seemed to be a funny guy. Once he noticed her laughing, he frowned at first but then passed a smile to her. They never spoke to each other but it was like their habit to greet each other with a smile everyday and then gotta busy in jogging.

One day Antara was walking Bare feet on the grass when something pierced her skin. She sat on a nearby bench. She saw a glass piece was inserted in the foot and blood was oozing out of it. She tried to remove it but it was too deep. Whenever she noticed that boy coming, she hide her foot so that he won't make fun of her by saying things like this is not your village grass kind of thing..'

(self talking)Many people have warned me not to walk on it. Its not pure thing. May have glass or iron nail but why I was so stupid. Ab bhugto

She was busy in self talking when she heard someone
Are you okay miss??

She looked up to find the same boy looking at her with questioning eyes. She noticed his eyes were deep black coloured and his hairstyle made him look cute. She somehow broke eye contact and said while hiding her bleeding foot cautiously..
Yeah!! Of course.. I am fine. By the way why r u asking this???
Nothing just itney din Mein aapko kbhi asey baithey Huey dekha nahi aur pareshaan bhi toh I thought pooch loo... Bss
Ohh!!! Nahi.. Actually aaj mood Ni h toh bss isiliye... U continue
Ohkayss

He was about to turn when his eyes caught her bleeding foot. It was badly injured. He immediately bent down. Antara understood that now she was caught lying. He looked at her with angry yet concerned way..

Are you out of your mind?? Instead of asking for help you are telling me to go. You know what you are an IDIOT 😑

(self-talk) Haww... 😲 kitna battameezi sey baat Kr Ra hai.. Aur mere KO idiot bola. I will tell you one day who the real idiot is... Stupid. Huh!!!

Kitna zyada bleeding ho raha hai... (he touched her foot and examined the wound)

Heyy!! Choro... please don't touch my feet...

It's glass damn!! Let me remove it... Aur please don't scream ohkay???

Nahi please. Bohot pain hoga please Ni na

Aur agar ye abhi Ni nikala na toh lifetime ka pain bann jayega...samjhi aap

He placed her foot on his thigh and tried to remove that carefully. During the whole time she was closing her eyes and mouth tightly not to scream and her one hand was on his shoulder. Finally after few minutes he removed it.

Do u have a hanky??

Getting no reply he raised his head and found the cutest view. Looking her in that pose made him smile. She is cute- he thought. But then he shook her and asked..

H...haann... Bolo

Do u have some hanky or cloth. I have to tie it here

Arey par pehley kaanch to nikal do

Nikaal to diyaa...

She widened her eyes with like WHAT??kind of expressions. She didn't feel any pain. She thoroughly examined her foot and then handed him a hanky which he tied carefully around the wound.

Can you walk or need some help??

She tried to walk but she was limping. He then helped her to walk. She held his hand for support.

I think you should go home and rest

Yeah!!!

They reached to the building. He saw a lady (maid working there) and asked her to help Antara. Antara was going when she turned and said..

Suno!!

Hmm... Boliye

Thanks

My pleasure Miss... And haan... Vo sorry for being rude

Its ohk(smiled) 😊

And they went to their respective flats... πŸ˜ƒ




So this was it, the first chapter. Hope Ki aapko pasand aaya hoga. Please avoid grammatical mistakes. Is story Mein aapko romance thoda kam but friendship bohot milegi. So jhel Lena please... Acha abhi aap sab log jldi sey comment krk btao na Ki how was the chapter??
I am waiting for your valuable comments
πŸ˜ƒ

SHIVI.. 😳
Edited by shivi808 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start darling...😳
Ye b meri trh apne dost ka wait kr rhi hai... 😭
Missing u shivi jaanu...πŸ˜‰

BTW chapter 1 is nice...
Lakde inne bure ni hote... help krte hai...
Pr ye bta bina drd k glass nikla kse... mereko b seekhna hπŸ˜›...hehehehπŸ˜†


Edited by surbhi53 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Are Shivi dear kamaal ki writer ho.Kya chapter hai! First chapter itna intresting aage ka wait nahi ho raha.Loved it shuru se aakhir tak.Loved the guy's intro.Woh taxi se pehle bag phek k phir bahar aane wala scene mast hai Mujhe Kabhi kushi Kabhi Gam ka Srk jab helicopter se aata hai na apne shoulder pe bag latkaye aisa hi effect tha is scene ka.Aww Antara emotional ho gayi.Pic wala scene so emitionaly cute.Pic ko achchha describe kiya tumne.Park scene bhi mast hai.Bechare se antara ka dard nahi dekha gaya.Ek shikayat hai tumse Shivi yeh kya zyada friendship zyada dosti laga rakha hai haan? are sab samjhti hoon main doosti pyaar ohhhouuuhhoo tu samajh hi gayi hogi ki main mazaak kar rahi thi maaf karna.Achha hua tune yeh kahani puri kar rakhi hai warna main Raghu k gunde dosto ko teri supari de deti LOL.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Golu,congrats for another story πŸ‘
Nice start,short sweet n simple πŸ˜ƒ
Is that guy Raghu?
Joh bhi hai caring hai,mujhey rantara ki woh jungle scene yaad aa gayee πŸ˜ƒ
Missing rantara a lot 😭
Anyways,I won't be around from tomorrow but I'll comment when I come back πŸ˜ƒ
Lovely story,keep waiting darling ⭐️
Love n hugs
~Sanju~
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its such a different and refreshing concept to read... 😳
This genre is totally new to this forum... and i would love to read this..❀️
I never believe the fact that larka larki kabhi dost nahin ho sakte... infact they can be the bestest freind ever... and so i am looking forward to read it... all the best..πŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by BabyHimavari - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey shivu.. πŸ˜ƒ
Congrats for new story.. ⭐️
I liked title.. It's from your fav song right? πŸ˜‰
Friendship ki story hai.. I like it.. πŸ˜ƒ
Woh pic main joh cute n sweet boy hai woh ground floor flat wala new boy hii haina? πŸ˜‰
Park main roz looking n smiling hoti hai jogging ke saath saath nice.. πŸ˜†
Glass piece scene ne toh jungle scene yaad dila diya yaar..😭 Rantara ki yaadein taaza hogayi..
Pura update was mast ji..⭐️
Cont soon sweetie.. πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for pm golu.. 😊
Love ya πŸ€—

Edited by Komali14 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much di... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhi53

Good start darling...😳

Ye b meri trh apne dost ka wait kr rhi hai...😭
Missing u shivi jaanu...πŸ˜‰

BTW chapter 1 is nice...
Lakde inne bure ni hote... help krte hai...
Pr ye bta bina drd k glass nikla kse... mereko b seekhna hπŸ˜›...hehehehπŸ˜†




Ldkey burey Ni hotey.. Acha ji!! Tujhey bdi knowledge h..
Tera wala helping h lgta h kaafi!! πŸ˜‰
Mr. A... Main to naam bhi bhool gyi uska.. Btaiyo zra???
Dubara Mili tu?? Sorry for the POL KHOL..πŸ˜†

Bdw thank you for your sweet comment babes!!! 😳
Lubb yaa!!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Are Shivi dear kamaal ki writer ho.Kya chapter hai! First chapter itna intresting aage ka wait nahi ho raha.Loved it shuru se aakhir tak.Loved the guy's intro.Woh taxi se pehle bag phek k phir bahar aane wala scene mast hai Mujhe Kabhi kushi Kabhi Gam ka Srk jab helicopter se aata hai na apne shoulder pe bag latkaye aisa hi effect tha is scene ka.Aww Antara emotional ho gayi.Pic wala scene so emitionaly cute.Pic ko achchha describe kiya tumne.Park scene bhi mast hai.Bechare se antara ka dard nahi dekha gaya.Ek shikayat hai tumse Shivi yeh kya zyada friendship zyada dosti laga rakha hai haan? are sab samjhti hoon main doosti pyaar ohhhouuuhhoo tu samajh hi gayi hogi ki main mazaak kar rahi thi maaf karna.Achha hua tune yeh kahani puri kar rakhi hai warna main Raghu k gunde dosto ko teri supari de deti LOL.



Thank you so much di for such a lovely comment.. 😳
Lol!! I know di that u r joking... πŸ˜†
Nooo!! Raghu k gundey friends ko meri supari Ni Dena..
I will pakka complete this one.. πŸ‘πŸΌ
Will soon continue... πŸ˜ƒ
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