Rantara SS Tere Sang Yaara... (Discontinued) A Big Sorry to Readers.. - Page 4

Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Waah Shivi Kamaal kar diya tune toh 👏.Finally Raghu ka revelation 😃.Their cute talk 😊.Tere story type/likhne ka tarika mujhe bahut pasand hai Like alag alag character k beech baatcheet k liiye different colors use karti ho & emotion or moods k hisaab se emoticon bhi sahi rehta hai.Teri mehnat k liye ⭐️.Antara kam nahi hai bas mauka mila nahi Raghu k se mazak karne ka soch liye.Bechara anjaan Raghu Antara k saamne Antara ki hi badhai aur burai kiye ja raha thaa Kachar Kachar,Akdu,Cute 😆.Antara kittu khush ho gayi apne bachpan k dost se sahi mayne mein phir se mil k.Raghu ka bachne ka bahana chuha 😆.Woh line toh mast hai doston k saath jagah aur waqt ka pata nabi chalta.Muaah baby.Aisi hi likhte jao.Thank you for the PM.Par yeh gaddi ki sound kuchh theek ishara nahi lag raha mujhe .Please kuch gadbad mat karana Shivi abhi abhi toh mile hai do dost 😳.Waiting for the next update. 😊

Thank you didu for ur lambu and sweetu Sa comment.. 😳
Mwwaahh!!! To u too di.. 😳
Hugss also..🤗
Love yaahhh!!!❤️

Gaddi Ki sound se zyada daro Mt.. 😆
Jigra bada rakho di... 😉
Jo honey wala h usk liye... 😃

Originally posted by: Komali14

Hi shivu..😃

Wow great update yaar..

Tumey chot lagi hai fir bhi you updated

Finally Dono friends mil gaye after so long..😃

Dono ne firse friendship ki..😳

He had kept drawing with him safety so sweet..

Raghu antu ke saath unki tareef kar raha tha without knowing it's her..😆

Fir lag Zor Ka jatka Raghu ko..😆

Chuha se garage scene yaad aagaya yaar hayee kiya din thay woh.. main toh dreamland chali gayi thi after tat scene

Antu chali Raghu ke band bhajane.. Lekin yeh kiya car is coming behind Raghu..😲

Hopefully he is safe..😕

Cont soon..

Luv n hugs.. Fit hojaao jaldi se🤗

Aww... Love you so much my Shona Mona di for this lovely lovely comment.. 😳
Mwwwaaahhh!!!!! 😳
Haan ji my sweetheart di.. I am going to continue it soon..
Bss tussi wekhtey Rakho.. 😃

Haaye kya yaad dila Diya di.. 😳
Garage scene.. Oh my godss. Kitna sweets Sa scenes tha more or less di🤣
Hugs didu... 🤗 from ur bholi bhaali seedhi si sister.. 😉 🤣

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

Too good updatee bacha..😳😳

the revelation is just amazing.. i mean how they came to know the real identity of each other...

LOLZ... antu literally gave panic attack to raghu...😆😆

They were playing like kids on the road.. how adorable!!

but end mein kya huya?!

Over all its such a sweet update.. more than chocolate and ice cream...😳😳

Bacha hows ur hand now?!.. TC...

Thank you so much wala di.. 😃
Ur comment means a lot se bhi zyada..

Raghu got a panic attack..😆
End sey kyun Dar Rey Ho aap sab?? 😕
Zyada nako socho Rey.. Bss intezaar krney ka.. 😉
Sweet update.. Aww.. I love you my didu..
Kissy le lo ek issi baat pe.. Mwwaaahhh!!!! 😳
Love you didu..❤️
Hugss🤗

Hand is perfect ekdum.. Bss nishaniyan reh gyi hain.. 😆
Vo bhi waqt k saath chali jayengi di.. 😃

Originally posted by: salini143

OMG shivi darling...

It's so lovely, cute and funny story...

i fell in love with this story in just 3 chapters..

Wonderful work dear..

I like emos after dialogues so much

Muuuaahhh shivi darling

Last ko yeh kya ho gaya...

Update soon

Love u

Ayeee... Divya di... 😃
Long time di.. Kahan busy Ho aap?? 😕
Aatey hi Ni.. 😕

Aww... Thank u didu for this sweet comment..
Emos lagana is my favourite kaam di 😆
Will defo update asap di.. 😃
Love u too..😳
Hugss🤗
Mwwaaahhh!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: GERUA

extraordinary update

Thank you so much di.. 😃
It means a lot. 😳
Love yaahh!!! 😳

DR. ANTARA KAUL...


RAGHU NAIK

TERE SANG YAARA
KHUSH- RANG BAHAARA...

CHAPTER 4

As she removed her hands from her face, she saw Raghu was standing facing towards car and slightly bent towards the bonnet of the car. She ran to him. Meanwhile Raghu noticed that he was safe totally.
( sissy log chalo smile maaring.. 😃 -- raghu Safe). Car was just few inches away from him. He thanked his stars and heard Antara as well as driver of car.

Abey oye!! Dekh k Ni chal sakta hai kya.. 😡

Sorry bro!! Actually I was running away from my BFF.. She was about to kill me..( he joked)

Oh!! Its ok dude!! But next time be careful. Ok

And then Antara came there. She held Raghu's hand and made him turn to her side.

Tumhey kuch Hua to Ni. Lagi toh nahi na Raghu tumhey?? 😕

She turned to driver in a full Sherni avatar.

Kya hai haan!! Dekh k nahi chala saktey kya!!!😡

Dekhiye madam.. Galti inki bhi to hai

Ohohoho!!!! Inki galti thi.. Kya baat hai!! Aur tum.. Tumhari koi responsibility Ni hai kya?? 😡

Raghu tried to Stop her when Driver replied her in irritating way.

Arey to nibha to di.. Break laga Diya na time pe vrna seedha upar jata aapka dost

As he said that Antara's eyes turned hard. And when Raghu noticed that his reaction was like SOMEBODY PLEASE TELL ME WHERE SHOULD I BANG MY HEAD.. HO GYA PANGAA..

Kya bola?? Hnn??? 😡

Antara sun baat... Vo na ye.. Y.. 😕

Nahi!! Ruko Zara tum ab.. Fir sey bol.. Bol na Jo bola tha.. Abey oye Shakal Se Kaddu and ek no. fattu. What do u actually think!! Tu isey upar pohoncha deta.. Aur Main tujhe jaaney deti..
Aisa haal krti na Ki tu kya , akkhi duniya yaad rakhti. Isi jagah dafan Kr deti tujhko. ..Baat krta hai.. Ek solid pad gya na toh..
She was about to punch him when Raghu held her from her waist. And caught her hand tightly.

Antu stop it.. Enough.. Aur tum( to driver) Aur kuch sunna hai kya tere ko ( he nodded in no)Arey toh ja na bhai.. Jaaa... ( almost begging way) 😕

As he went away then Antara busted on Raghu shouting on the top of her lungs.

Aur tum!! Bol rahi thi main road ke beech Mein nahi. But meri sunta hi kon hai.. Na bachpan Mein aur na hi aaj. Agar kuch ho jata toh... God!!! I can't even think.. ( her eyes turned moist)
Upar se itni baar pooch chuki hoon par tum ho Ki kuch bol hi Ni rahey ho.. Bolo na.. R u okay???

Haan baba... I am fine totally. Kuch Ni Hua hai mujhey... 😳

Her eyes filled with tears and Raghu hugged her. He felt that she was trembling due to fear and crying hard. 😭

Shhh...aeyy.. Bhondu.. I am perfect yaar... But agar tu aisey motey motey aansuon sey royegi na toh definitely kuch Ho jayega.. Chal abhi chup Ho..

he knew very well that how much strong she pretended but from inside she was his cute little fairy who got worried about his choti choti problems. Who cared for him the most. She was totally a baby girl from heart. He wiped her tears and kissed her forehead. 😳

Chal ab mujhe Vo teri pyari pyari Si Hansi de de fatafatt se.. I am waiting to see that..

But she didn't smile.

Okayss!! I know Ki tu aisey Ni manegi.. So I have my own ways.. 😉

And he started to tickle in her belly. She started to laugh heavily.🤣

Aayii.. Raghu please 😆dekho fir.. I will do the same..

Kr Lena.. U know that mere KO Ni hoti.. 😆

He finally stopped and few minutes of silence they again hugged.. This time a tight one.🤗

I MISSED YOU...... 😳

Me Too.. ( chuckled)

He took her palm in his hand and held it tight.

Chal!! I am not in mood to go home tonight. Just want to spend and recall my good olden days with u.. Do u want the same???

She just nodded with a wide smile on her face. He called someone to pick up his car from that place.

So... Chalo jee 😉

They went to a park. Raghu told her about uncle and aunty at his house. They are his chachu and chachi. 3 yrs back his parents passed away in an accident. So they took care of him and supported him that time. They don't have their own children so he asked them to adopt him legally. They are anges for him. He was on the verge of crying when Antara hugged him and consoled him. They talked for few hours. Teased each other. She has her head resting on his shoulder. Suddenly something came to her mind and she stood up in front of him. He gave him what kind of looks..

By the way Mr. tum aisa kon Sa Job krtey ho jo 5-6 months Mein ek hi baar aa patey ho??

I won't tell you so easily.. Tu guess kr na.. 😉

Acha par hint toh de do..

Ohkayy!!! This one was ur most favourite. U literally love to see heroes of movie in this UNIFORM

Uniform!!!

She started to think and when it stroke to her brain, her eyes widened in shock. 😲

OMG!!! Don't tell me that... Y.. You are.. I can't believe
This can't be true.. 😲

Well yes I am.. It is true 😃


But kaisey?? You are in AIR FORCE... Raghu seriously!!!

Jee haan... Kaisey kya I did hard work and now Presenting the all new FLYING OFFICER RAGHU NAIK 😃

She kept her hands on her mouth to avoid screaming. She was so happy. 🥳

Oh my God Raghu.. ( hugged him) tumhey pta hai I always wanted to see u in that uniform.. Aur tum toh sach Mein hi..

Of course I know... That's why I am here today. And I have to accept this Ki aaj main Jo bhi hoon uski WAJAH BASS TUM HO.. tu sath na hokar bhi har pal mere sath thi. Har Roz mere sapney Mein aakey mujhey daant maarti thi..

Achaa!! Kya kehti thi??? 😳

Kya kahegi aur tu.. RAGHU PADH LEY.. VRNA OFFICER KAISEY BANEGA???

And both of them laughed hard.🤣

She further asked about for how much time he was there. He informed that only one and half month is left. ( sissys I actually don't know Ki air force officers ko kab kitni holiday milti hain... Ye sabhi KAALPANIC i.e imaginary hai.. 😆) then he has to leave for duty again.

Ohh!!!

Oye tu sad kyun ho ri h.. Fir se aaunga na main vapas.. And mujhe lgta h instead of worrying about future we should focus on our present. We should enjoy these days.. Ni kya!!! 😊
Yeahh!! But tumney Ni poocha Ki main kya krti hoon.. 😕

Ismein pooch na kya hai.. Bachpan Mein u used to scold me a lot.. To I guess tu teacher hogi. 😆

Raghuuu!!!!! 😡

Antaraaa... 😆

Jaao main baat Ni karungi tumsey...

Arey I was joking yaar..
hey.. Sunnahhh.. Antu..
Arey baba acha!! Kaan pakad k sorry to my Doctor bestie.. 😉

with a flash she turned her head.

How come you know that?? Maine to hint tk Ni Diya. 😲

Not actually.. But maid usually refers u by saying TopFloor wali Doctor Madam... Toh bss usi sey 😆

Hawww... Ye galat h yaar... She ruined my plan unknowingly.. Hum Ni

U know what u look so cute and childish when u r angry.. Acha ye to bta abhi u didn't know Ki auto strike thi.. Toh subah tu kaisey chali gyi thi hospital. Hnn??? Tab yaad Ni tha

Ni Vo subah one of my friend dropped me hospital. To zarurat Ni padi thi..

He nodded and pulled her nose sweetly. They noticed that finally they reached to their society. The clock was striking 1am.

Aaj Ki Raat I can never forget

Yeah!! It was best.. Vid a bestie

Acha vsey kal kya kr ri h.. I mean by what time you will be free? I was planning for some outing.. Bta??

Good idea!! I will be free by 7pm..

Ok toh I will be there.. Address msg Kr dna bss.. Mera no. Save kr ley..

He gave her his cellphone no.

Done.. Ok bbyee Good night.. 😃

Good night 😳

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Done with this one also. Waiting for ur valuable comments. Please read and post them.. Please avoid grammatical mistakes. And Enjoy reading this average update.

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SHIVI.. 😊

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Lovely update Shivi bachha 👏.I love Rantara's nok-jhok & hasin mazak 😆.Thank God Raghu is safe he is still in single piece. 😊.Bechara wo carwala us par Antara madam ka gussa baras pada "Abey oye shakal se kaddu ek no. ka fattu" heehee.Agli baar jab Antara ko dekhege na sadak pe toh apna rasta hi badal lega. 😆.Raghu flying officer kya baat hai bahut unchi udaan bhari hai ladke ne 👏.Antu ka career k baare mein toh Raghu ko pata hai hi aur us baat ka pata lagne ka kya source hai wo maid 😆.Raghu k maa-papa 😭 chalo kam se kam uncle aur aunty toh hai aur ab toh apni Antu uski itni achhi dost bhi saath hai 😊.Shivi I love your sense of humour.Tumhara story present karne ka tareeka alag hai refreshing hai ⭐️.Chalo ab Raghu ki chutti hai toh bahut se Rantara moments ahead hai badhiya hai.Bahut mehnat karti ho Shivi. 👏.Agle update ka intezaar hai.Thank you for the pm.Bechara carwala pe abhi bhi taras aa raha hai mujhe. 😆

beautiful chapter my darling...😳😳