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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Lovely update... sweet heart...😳
Yr ye Antu to hmri trh hi shararti hai...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Bichare ko preshn kr dia... πŸ˜›

Or vo grmi se tadap rha tha... usko b thndk mil gyi... πŸ˜› thanda Thnda cool cool... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Navratan cool🀣

Hospital gyi kse thi yr vo? Auto strike thi... smjh ni aaya...

Or ye stalker.. dara dia hmri shararti Antu ko... but at last happy bhi hui usko dekh k... ki ye to jaanpahchan vala nikla...πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Yaar ye bhi koi baat h ladki k weight ka mjk bna dia🀣... lekin asi cute fights mst lgti hai...😳

Inni tnsn ajkl to hmko traffic jam ki ni h jitni isko ghr ki hai... but thank to guy... uski ye prblm b dur kr di...

Ab dekhte hai is andheri raat me... krb gaddi k sth me... inki or kinni cute fights hoti hai...

Jldi update krio nxt part...
My lovely jubbly shivu jaan...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
A great thanks to all of ur lovely and awesome comments sissys.. πŸ˜ƒ
I can't reply to your comments individually coz i have injured my hand..
And its paining.. 😭

But next time I will do that pakka promise. πŸ˜ƒ
I will try to update the story today..
But at the same time I am waiting for few more comments.. πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3


[I]NOTE: Bcz of Hand injury I can't give coloured update..
BOLD dialogue : Boy
Normal written dialogue: Antara


What?? 😲 kya kaha tumney??

Sabkuch!! Sabkuch kitna shaant hai na idhar...

Ohh!! Hmm... Kbhi kbhi ye shaanti kitni achi lgti hai..

Exactly!! And now I am loving this area, ye road aur yahan pey sabkuch 😳

He spread his hands and was standing in the middle of road when Antara warned him..

Hey!! Don't stand in the middle of road. Koi gaadi aa gyi na toh tumhey chot lg jayegi..

Naahhh!!! Abhi to merey ko kuch Ni ho skta. Coz abhi mujhey meri life ka ek bohot important kaam krna hai...

Important kaam!! Vo kya?? πŸ˜•

You know what we are not friends. So main apni personal life tumharey saath kyun share Karun m?? Hnn??

Koi baat Ni!! If u don't want then its ohkay...

Arey!! But I really want to share na...

Offoo!!! Toh ab tumhi bta do Ki kya karein?? πŸ˜• (irritating way)

FRIENDSHIP krtey haina.. Simple 😳

And he cutely forwarded his hand towards her for friendship. She also smiled and shook hands with him.

Friends... πŸ˜ƒ toh ab btao...

haan!! Actually abhi mere KO Kisi KO dhoondhna hai. Vo jisey main kayi saal se Ni mil paya hoon. But I miss her very much. Every second and every single day..

Ahem Ahem! Bachpan Ki koi girlfriend hai kya?? πŸ˜‰

Nahi!! Meri bestest friend hai.. U know parso itna khush kyun tha??
Coz finally I came to know her whereabouts. And tomorrow I am going to Land in her city..
πŸ˜ƒ

Wow!! But kahan par??

MUMBAI

Antara looked in his eyes but he was lost somewhere.

Pta hai we were the BFFs. Humesha saath rehtey they and I used to tease her a lot. (chuckles).. But a...

Antara interrupted him..

Par itney badey sheher Mein kahan dhoondhogey??

Arey we hve a common friend. He is gonna help me out. But main to ye soch raha hoon Ki jab main ussey milunga toh kya kahunga..
Ya fir kuch bol bhi paunga ya nahi..i am sure that I am going to be mad due to immense happiness...


Antara was smiling when he was narrating his story. She knew how it feels. Even she herself don't know when she will meet Raghu and what will be her reaction. And then there was silence for few minutes.

CHIMPANZEE!! Ye bulati thi Vo mujhey... (chuckles) πŸ˜†

Her eyes widened as she heard this. But how was that possible. He was... Her bestie whom she's searching for almost two months. Noo... This can't be true.. Lets confirm it. Haan this will be solution. She asked him

Vsey if u don't mind.. Then kya tumhari best friend ka naam jaan skti hoon main??

Why would I mind.. Uska naam hai.. Sabsey sweet, sabsey pyara aur sabsey unique it's ANTARA

Au... Aur.. Tum..tumhara naam kya hai??

mera.. It's RAGHU.. RAGHU NAIK

That's it. 😲 She was both happy as well as shocked at the same time. She was finding it difficult to digest that she was finally with her bestie. Suddenly she felt as if she was the happiest person alive on earth. She badly wanted to hug him tightly when an idea clicked in her mind. She controlled her jumping emotions and decided to know his views regarding her now a days. So she behaved normally. πŸ˜‰

Great!! Aur kuch btao na tum logo k baarey Mein.. Specially uskey baarey Mein.

Voo... Vo na bohot padhaku( studious) types thi.. But at the same time bohot hi zyada talkative bhi thi. Kachar kachar... Kachar kachar.. Non stop. Bss shuru honey Ki der thi.. πŸ˜†

Antara's self talking - GREEN COLOUR

Achaa bachuu!! Main talkative...Tumhey to dekhti hoon abhi baad mein 😑

Mujhe padhaya bhi krti thi. U know i used to tease her a lot. But now I have decided that I will not tease her anymore. Coz she is the best one I can ever have as my bff.. πŸ˜ƒ

Awww... Mwwwaaahhh!!! 😳

par gussa naak pey rakhti thi. Specs k saath. Kuch akdu, thodi Si buddhu aur little bit khadoos. But kbhi kbhi lagta tha jsey she was the only cutest and naughtiest girl in the world.

Khadoos, akdu aur buddhu... I am gonna kill youuu... 😑

We guys were so mad in friendship Ki humney toh apni jodi ko ek naam bhi de dala tha..

RANTARA... πŸ˜ƒ (Together)

How do you know??? (suspiciously)

Nothing just a guess!! (bit her tongue) Raghu+ Antara = Rantara.. Ni??

Oh!! Haan... We made a drawing of this name.. I had one which she made for me...Wanna see??

She nodded and he took out his wallet to show her that. He let her show that. Her eyes moistened a bit and her grip tightened on her bag. She also kept the one made by him at her home.

By the way... Miss itni baatein ho gyi still I don't know ur name..
What is your good name misS??


She gave him a evil smirk and told him that he won't be able to digest that..

Soch lo.. Kahin tumhey panic attack na aa jaye.. πŸ˜†

Really.. Is it so dangerous??

It is..

Okay!! ( raised a brow) tell me I AM ready

It's A...N...T...A...R...A... K...A...U...L...

( thinking of spelling) A..N..T... okay.. So its ANTARA KAUL.. (and realizing what he said)
What??? 😲 Antara... K..k...k...kau...kaul..(stammering)

He looked towards her with open mouth. She closed her mouth with her finger.

Mooh ko band Kr lo.. Vrna kya h na Ki Machchar ghus jayega.. CHIMPANZEE!! 😈

She smiled and winked. He was shocked like anything, not even a single word was coming out of his mouth. He noticed that she was tying her dupatta side ways on her waist. He gulped in fear. Then she came to him, kept her hand on his shoulder and said sweetly

Main thodi khadoos, akdu, buddhu... Aur kya tha/?

Of course not.. Vo to sweet , innocent and pyari aur... (fearfully in a pleading way)

Haan... Talkative.. Kachar kachar.. Right???

Ni yaar... Antu mujhe aisa kyun lg Ra h that my end is near

Coz it is... πŸ˜ƒ

Although he was very happy to see her but it was their habit to fight in this way. Seeing no option to save himself he shouted.

Antu choohaa...

Kyaaa!!!!!! Aaa... Aaa ... ( She almost jumped while screaming)

He ran away from there. Not finding him there she understood that he fooled her. She saw him laughing hard on other side of road.

Youuu... 😑 Ruko tum Zara... Abhi btati hoon...

He was running and Antara was after him. They were as cute as two little kids. Aisey hi to hotey haina dost jinkey saath kuch hosh hi Ni rehta.. Na jagah ka aur na waqt ka.. 😳

Raghu ruk jao.. Ruk jao please.

He turned to look at her. That moment Antara saw a car coming towards Raghu from his back side. She shouted.

Raghuuu... 😲

As the lights fell on her face she covered her face with her hands.

Screeeccchhh... (car sound haiπŸ˜†)

she removed her hands from her face fearfully not wishing to see something worst.

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NOTE: So I am done with this chapter also. Hope u all find it quite okay to read. Sorry for no colouring thing coz of injury in my hand. Please please please give ur valuable comments.. Bcz is baar bohot mushkil sey ye chapter type kiya hai mainey. I hope Ki meri pyari sissys meri request ko waste to Ni honey dengi bilkul bhi.. Haina.

To I am waiting for ur feedback...


Aapki apni..
Silly billy...

SHIVI

Love you all...
😳
Edited by shivi808 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Waah Shivi Kamaal kar diya tune toh πŸ‘.Finally Raghu ka revelation πŸ˜ƒ.Their cute talk 😊.Tere story type/likhne ka tarika mujhe bahut pasand hai Like alag alag character k beech baatcheet k liiye different colors use karti ho & emotion or moods k hisaab se emoticon bhi sahi rehta hai.Teri mehnat k liye ⭐️.Antara kam nahi hai bas mauka mila nahi Raghu k se mazak karne ka soch liye.Bechara anjaan Raghu Antara k saamne Antara ki hi badhai aur burai kiye ja raha thaa Kachar Kachar,Akdu,Cute πŸ˜†.Antara kittu khush ho gayi apne bachpan k dost se sahi mayne mein phir se mil k.Raghu ka bachne ka bahana chuha πŸ˜†.Woh line toh mast hai doston k saath jagah aur waqt ka pata nabi chalta.Muaah baby.Aisi hi likhte jao.Thank you for the PM.Par yeh gaddi ki sound kuchh theek ishara nahi lag raha mujhe .Please kuch gadbad mat karana Shivi abhi abhi toh mile hai do dost 😳.Waiting for the next update. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Hi shivu.. πŸ˜ƒ
Wow great update yaar..
Tumey chot lagi hai fir bhi you updated
Finally Dono friends mil gaye after so long.. πŸ˜ƒ
Dono ne firse friendship ki..😳
He had kept drawing with him safety so sweet..
Raghu antu ke saath unki tareef kar raha tha without knowing it's her.. πŸ˜†
Fir lag Zor Ka jatka Raghu ko..πŸ˜†
Chuha se garage scene yaad aagaya yaar hayee kiya din thay woh.. main toh dreamland chali gayi thi after tat scene
Antu chali Raghu ke band bhajane.. Lekin yeh kiya car is coming behind Raghu.. 😲
Hopefully he is safe.. πŸ˜•
Cont soon..
Luv n hugs.. Fit hojaao jaldi se πŸ€—

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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Yoo shivi...
Wonderful update dear...
Finally dono mil hi gye...
Or itna time baaf mile...lekin ladai to bachpn vali hi lg rhi hai...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›

Oh ho ye car kahan se aagyi...
Inni achi cute fight me...πŸ˜•
Edited by surbhi53 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
OMG shivi darling...
It's so lovely, cute and funny story...
i fell in love with this story in just 3 chapters..
Wonderful work dear..
I like emos after dialogues so much
Muuuaahhh shivi darling
Last ko yeh kya ho gaya...
Update soon
Love u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Too good updatee bacha..😳😳
the revelation is just amazing.. i mean how they came to know the real identity of each other...
LOLZ... antu literally gave panic attack to raghu...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
They were playing like kids on the road.. how adorable!!
but end mein kya huya?!
Over all its such a sweet update.. more than chocolate and ice cream...😳😳
Bacha hows ur hand now?!.. TC...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thoda jldi..
Edited by shivi808 - 8 years ago
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