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Aaj update???
Quite interesting concept... πππ and, funny also. But, loved it. Story padhte wakt jab Ariya ki bich lift ke chabi ko lekar conversation ho rahi thi tab mere dimag mein ek popular gane se inspired lines strike kiya - Hum Tum Ek Lift mein bandh ho, aur Lift kharab ho jaaye.... Aur jab tak Chhotu ka woh dialogue - Roz 7th floor tak chadna hoga, aaya thik ussi wakt mere dimag mein yeh popular gana strike kiya -- "Unchi hai building, lift teri bandh hai; kaise main aaun....". Shree ke diwali pe chhuti na milne wali baat pe dialogues bhi kafi mazedar tha.
Tnx for the PM, please continue soon, will be waiting eagerly for this story. Ek aur baat, tumhari story jitni lambi hogi tumhare loyal readers utni hi zyada khushi se usse accept karte hai aur padhte hai, so, OS sirf SS hi kyun agar FF bhi baan jaaye na toh hum toh khushi se bhangra dance hi karenge. Tum toh bas bindas likhte jao bina kisi tension ke.
πππππshare ke share namune etf mein hi h kya are thodi si akal toh use kr lekin ki goli or parakhe ki Awaaz mein fark Hota h ye officers kaise ban gye
Awesomee updt
Loved it sooo much My cheeks hurt coz of smiling throughout
Ariya's date in liftlift ko bhi nhi choda tumne
Lol Arjun dreaming of her kadhi rice daily but propose to kiya nhi ab tak
Cont sooon.. isi week me
Lovely update
Arjun toh sahi patri par hai
He even planned their wedding LOL
Arjun did good job by taking a step forward warna Riya apne Dil ki baat bolne se rahiπ
Their cute date is fantastic
Aur Arjun toh Aaj Riya se jawab lekar hi rahega
Go Arjun Go
Next part kab milegacan't wait
Thanx for PM
Iska ek aur part chahiye, lalach ho rhi hai
Me grinning wide at ariya moment uff
Totally hilarious & awesome...ππππππ
Loved it too much...β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Arre.. Arjun bhi Riya se...??? Ussne toh shadi ke baad ka bhi soch liya, hint bhi de diya Riya ko yaha lift mein kahi baar, aur toh aur Riya se ab indirectly puchh bhi raha hai ke usse kyun Arjun se baat karna achha lagta hai aur baki sab mein se sirf woh hi kyun Arjun se baat karne ke bahane hamesha dhundti rehti hai, yani ki usska kya khayal hai Arjun ke barein mein. Par Riya itni dumb kaise ho sakti hai? Itna sara hints mein se usse kya ek bhi samajh nahi aayi ya phir woh janke bhi anjaan bane rehne ka natak kar rahi hai jaise ki woh chahti hai ki Arjun hi koi initiative le usske taraf. Par ek baat kahu, jaisa khadus & angry young man attitude Arjun sabke samne dikhata phirta hai, usse dhyan mein rakhte huye maine usske yeh sirf Riya ke haat ki kadhi chawal se ekdum se ek chhote bachche jitna excited hokar uss se itni sari baatein comfortably kar lega even Roshni se related past ke memories bhi usske saath share kar lega, ye wala rup bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha. Lift mein atak ne se aise accidental date ka nazariya padhne aur imagine karne ko milega, yeh maine bhi nahi socha tha, bohot khub...bohot khub!!!! Dil khushi se garden garden ho gaya..ππ
Rahi baat baki ke ETF members ki toh woh log Police force mein aaye toh aaye kaise isske upar bhi ek background story baan ni chahiye, iss story se mujhe aisa feel huya. Matlab ki nahi inko patake ki awaz aur goli ki awaz ka pharak pata hai, nahi Morse Code samajh mein aata hai (except Ariya), nahi common sense use karna aata hai, toh phir inn ko aata kya hai??? Sirf chugli karna?
P.S. - Yeh Sameer aur Ayesha ke bich mein bhi chori chori chupke chupke sabse chhupte huye koi khichri paak rahi hai kya?
Will be eagerly waiting to know what Riya's answer will be for Arjun's question. Tnx for pm.
I am loving it di.
As always you create gems.
My cheeks are hurting while smiling and blushing.
Kaash ye khtm hi na ho.
Lovedddd it
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