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Posted: 12 months ago
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Awesome update

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Cont soon

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Part 13

Arjun(in mind): yeh saab kya hai??? Meri zindegi puzzle baan chuki hai....konsa hissa kaha jodu main....

Arjun stops the car in front of a mall

Arjun: aap car leke thoda sa wait karo.. I am coming

Driver: ji Baba

Arjun goes and changes everything....he also found that mirco chip in his shirt button....

Arjun comes

Arjun: Shukla ji ...chaliye

Arjun meanwhile trying to understand everything

Arjun suddenly ask Shukla ji

Arjun: Shukla ji...aap zyda mamaji ke sath drive karte hai na?

Shukla Ji: ha Baba....aaj se nahi....pure 30 saal ho gaye hai.....

Arjun: ha....aap toh kaab se humare sath hai.

Shukla ji: Tai...matlab apki Aai....bahat achhi thi...aur Suryakant Ji bhi.....lekin kya kismaat. Apne hi jaab.....

Arjun: Apne? Matlab?

Shukla ji: maine Shirke family ka namak khaya hai....Baba aap toh samajh hi sakte ho na....

Apke seat ke pichhe ek packet hai...

Arjun takes the packet

Arjun finds another note

" saab kuchh isme daal de...baki shukla ji dekh lenge....jo bhi maine bheja hai..sirf usi ke saath tum travel karna"

Arjun puts all the things and place it where it was

Arjun: Shukla Ji....apko saab maloom hai?kabse?

Shukla Ji: jaabse saab kuchh ho raha hai....abhi airport ane me 20 min hai....apke kapro me jo microphone tha...woh abhi disable hai..sirf tracker on hai.....apko main airport se kuchh hi dur me utar dunga...phir main chala jaunga....

Rajeev bete ne jo bhi kaha saab sach hai....aaj yeh saab tumhe bata ke main thoda halka mahasoos karunga shayad.

Arjun: aap please mujhe sara sach bataiye...

Shukla ji: bade sahab ne apne dono bachcho ko ek hi tarha ki parwarish di....lekin dono bhai behen ek dusre se bilkool alag ...jaha Tai...hamesha sach ka sath dene wali..unsool oo pe chalne wali...waha chhote sahab .....party karte huye nahi thakte the...paisa jaise hath ka maail....

Bade sahab ne company ki bag dor Tai ko soupa....Tai ke samay pe company ki khub tarakki hui....bade sahab bahat khush the....phir ekdin .... Tai ne bade sahab ko..apke baba Suryakant ji ke bare me bataya... Suryakant ji... company me leagal head the taab.aur woh bhi nishthavaan the...unsoolo wale....

Bade sahab bahat khush huye apni beti ki choice ko leke...bade dhoom dham se tai ki shaadi hui....Bade sahab ne Suryakant ji ko leagal head se company ka CEO bana diya

In saab me jiska koi faida nahi tha...woh the apke Mamaji...Upen Shirke

Mujhe bade sahab ne unke car ki duty di thi..unpe nazar rakhne ke liye....main bhi apna kaam karne laga.....ekdin bade saahb ne unko drug deal karte hue range hath oo pakad liya...police station jate hi kuchh formalities ki zaroorat hi nhi padhi..unko bail mill gayi.....do din baad bade saahb ki tabiyaat bigad gayi....unhe hospital le jana padha...undino aapki MBA ki padhai chal rahi thi....uske baad toh saab ko pata hi hai....jo baat nahi pata woh yehi hai ki BADE SAAHB KA MAUT NATURAL DEATH NAHI... MURDER THA

Arjun: kya?????

Shukla Ji : ha baba.....naukar hu nah....namak khaya hai...baimaani nahi kar sakta.....sach nahi bol paya...Apke family ka jo accident hua ..woh bhi chhote sahab ne hi karwaya tha....

Arjun: itna saab kuchh kyun Shukla jiii..... property?

Shukla ji : chhote sahab bade saahb ki will badalna chahte the....

Arjun: hai kya unke will me?

Shukla ji: Bade sahab ko Riya bitiya bahat pasand thi....unko aap dono ke bare me pata bhi tha....un hone jo sabse akhir me will banai thi....usme saree property, company saab kuchh Apki Patni ke naam kaar gaye hai.

Arjun: what!!!!!!!!!!

Shukla ji : unhone Riya bitiya ko dhyan me rakhte hue hi yeh will me change kiya thaaa....aur isiliye

Arjun: (in mind)isiliye Mamaji itna zor de rahe the ki main Mallika se shadi kar lu.....lekin isme unko kya faida.....shaadi kisi se bhi ho..unko kuchh milne nahi wala

Shukla ji: baba...Aap Riya bitiya ko galat maat samajhna....usne poori koshish ki thi...apke paas jane ki...lekin woh chhote sahab ke wajha se.....usse Mumbai chhor ke jana padha ..

Arjun: uske sath jo bachchi hai...kya aapko uske baare me kuchh bhi pata hai?

Shukla ji: nahi baba....yehi mujhe nahi maloom....hum airport ke paas hi hai....aap yaha utar jaao......Jis kaam ke liye aap jaa rahe ho....main Bappa se prarthna karunga ki aap safal ho.

Arjun: apka shukriya kaise karoonga pata nahi......abhi chalta hu.....baad me milenge

Shukla ji : aur haa ...chhote sahab, Panchgani orphanage me gaye hue hai.....unko lautne me 2 din aur lagenge

Arjun : thik hai...

Arjun leaves for the airport

Other side

Mallika: yeh Arjun ka phone kyun nahi laag raha hai???? Usse Shimla jane se mujhe rokna hi hoga......

Mallika heads towards the office

While moving there she bumped upon Rajeev

Rajeev : Hey...samhaal ke....kaha jaa rahi hoo itni jaldi me?

Mallika blushes and suddenly comes out from that

Mallika: woh.....Arjun kaha hai?

Rajeev: woh toh meeting ke liye Shimla nikaal gaya

Mallika: usse abhi bulaooo yaha.... Hospital se Riya aur Chini.....dono kidnapped ho chuke hai

Rajeev: What!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by Pankhuri96 - 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#83

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update πŸ˜ƒ

Finally Arjun learnt the truth of his uncle that how he was involved in such activities since beginning & his Grandfather use to know this

Well finally Arjun & has left for Shimla & now hopefully he finds more clues about Mr. Shirke & his deeds on time

That was a good twist so Riya & Chini are kidnapped from the hospital & now things have taken a new trun

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️


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Posted: 11 months ago
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Ek taraf shukla driver ne sab sach arjun ko bata, diya dusri taraf riya aur chini kidnapped mallika se yeh sun rajeev shocked fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 months ago
#85

Fab update... You're twisting the story very skillfully, I'm really enjoying this story so far. Now, wondering how is Arjun going to save Riya & Chini from his own scoundrel uncle & send him to the most righteous place - jail for all of his henious crimes.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 months ago
#87

Read all the parts in a day

Very captivating plot. I loved how Arjun thinks he knows everything here but in fact he knows nothing. It still puzzles me that it took so much chaos for Rajeev to come forward and help. If he had done what he did before, so much pain could've been prevented.


So chibi and Riya are kidnapped, I'm guessing Shirke found out about chini being Ariya's daughter. I liked Mallik's character. She likes Rajeev I guess. Thank God she's not a villain because I think Riya might find a friend in her.


Could you please confirm what chini's real name is because I thought it was Rai but I realize it must be a typo.


Keep writing. And Do pm me if possible ❀️

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Hello

I'm an old fan and desperately looking for a SaSha fanfic where rathore dies and aayisha leaves the ETF and works as a dance teacher

Once she performed with her team and a photographer likes her.

Anybody remember the name or have it. Please share.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Hey there

When will you be updating? Is there a schedule or something?

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Rajeev: yeh tum kya bol rahi ho??

Mallika: woh...Shirke Sir ne...

Mallika fainted

Rajeev: Mallika!! Mallika!!

After a few mins she gains consciousness.

Rajeev: Tum kaisi ho abhi?

Mallika: main thik hu...per Riya aur Chini....bahat musibaat mein hain.....Inn saab me Aur koi nhi...

Rajeev: Mr Shirke hain...

Mallika: haaa.aur unka right hand..... unfortunately mere Papa..

Rajeev: Mr Joshi????

Mallika: haan Rajeev, suru se hiii.... isiliye main aur mumma unke sath nahi rahte...but financially unpe dependent hone ki wajah se...aaj taak kuchh step nhi lee payi...lekin aab main bhi chup nahi rahungi.....

Rajeev: tum bilkool chinta maat karo...main hu tumhare sath

Mallika: isika toh darr hain mujhe...tum rahe toh tumhe bhi khatra hain...aur main yehh bilkool nahi chahti....

Rajeev: kyun??

Mallika keeps quiet

Rajeev: main Arjun ko nahi connect kar sakta....woh firse track ho sakta hai...usse aaane dooo shimla see

Mallika: kya kare aaab

Rajeev: kya tumhe pata hain unn dono ko kaha rakhaaa hain??

Suddenly a harsh voice comes from behind

Tumhe bhi le chalte hain......

Few goons take Mallika and Rajeev too

Arjun is awaiting at the Airport... suddenly few goons kidnapped him tooo

Meanwhile at some godown

Ria: kya mil raha hai yeh saab karke apko Mr Joshi??? Maine toh kaha tha...mujhe thoda time dene ke liye...hum chale jayenge...phir yeh saab kyun??

Mr Joshi: saab toh thik hi thaaa....main tujhe time bhi de deta...lekin woh Arjun toh baas tere hi pichhe padha hai....meri beti se ek baar shaadi kar leta toh ..inn saab ki zaroorat hi nahi padhti

Ria: woh zaroor karega shaadi...aap mujhe aur meri beti ko jaane do

Mr Joshi: abhi kisiko jane nahi dunga...sabke saab maroge.....ek signature tere uss Arjun kaaa..

Goons bring Rajeev and Mallika

Mallika: aap inn dono ko chhor do Papa....kya kia hain inn hone???

Mr Joshi: tu toh muh bandh hi rakh...meri beti hai tu? Apna faida nooksaan kuch nahi samajhti..... iss garib se pyar hai tujhe? Rajeev? Do take ka naukaar hai...aur tujhe yeh pasand hai??

Rajeev is not in a place where he can think about all of these.

Mallika: haa Papa,mujhe paiso se zyada honesty pe biswas hai....Apki tarha nahi sochti main ...

Mr Joshi: ussi kaa toh afsoos hai mujhe ..teri aur uss Arjun ki shaadi ho jati....

Meanwhile goons bring Arjun there

Mr Joshi: baas iski hi kaami thi .... sun Arjun...chup chap marriage registration ke paper sign kaar....aur Mallika...tu bhi karegi.....uske baad saab ....Ha Ha Ha Ha Haaaaaa

Arjun sees Riya is tightened up as well as Rajeev and Mallika...but Chini is not there

Arjun: Mr Joshi aaap bhi????? Kitna bharosa tha baba ko apke upar...aur aap?????? Kya chahiye aapko???

Mallika: Arjun yeh admi paiso ke alawa kuch bhi nahi soch sakta....apni beti ko bikane pe tule hue hai.....mujhe chhodo...Ria aur Chini ko bhi nahi chhoda....

Arjun: Chini yaha???? Uss chhoti bachchi ne kya bigada hai tumhara..???? Ria....Ria....

Ria: kuchh nahi karenge yeh Chini ko.....

Suddenly Ria sounds so calm......

Just jumped over the table and grab the gun and point towards Mr Joshi

Mr Joshi: yeh kya kar rahi ho ????...tu toh Doctor hai naa..???? Doctor hoke jaan legi??

Ria: abhi doctor nahi...ek Maa khadi hai re.tere samne Joshi.....meri beti ko chhua bhi na.....kaat dalungi yeh haaath.....

Joshi tries to give a look to goons...but

Ria: bol de apne inn gundo ko...meri beti ko abhi mere samne laaay.....nahi to teri khopdi sabse pahle ura dungi

Joshi told goons to bring Chini

They bring Chini there.....she runs towards her mom.

Ria keeps her aside.....

Ria to Joshi: baith chair pe......

Joshi sits

Mallika Rajeev Arjun....all of them are shocked after seeing Ria like this....

Ria continues

Kya laga tha tujhe? Tum log ek ke baad ek zurm karte rahoge...aur koi nahi hoga iska insaaf karne ke liye?? Tera jo boss hai nah?? Woh already police custody me hain..usko yaha laate hi honge....

Meanwhile police comes with Mr Shirke

Mr Shirke: Joshi....iss Ria ko hame pahle hi khatam kar dena chahiye thaaa ..nahi toh aaj....

Joshi: per apko kisne ??

Mr Shirke: yeh.....naya ACP ....Sameer Rathore....yeh bhi mila hua hai Ria see

Rathore: tum logo ko kya laga? Planning sirf tum log kar sakte ho???

Arjun: Rathore???? Tu???

Rathore: haa Arjun.....taab thaa bhi nahi main yaha...last year meri baadli Shimla me hui...waha maine Ria ko dekha police headquarters me medical camp me.....

Ria: abhi taak to Arjun ko bahat kuchh pata chal chuka haai....Sameer bhai..maine inko dekhte hi...saab kuchh share kia jo bhi mujhe pata tha.....

Rathore: fir humne plan karna suru kia....haar kari jodne ki.....har saboot ikattha karne me....

Ria: lekin problem hui taab...jaab mera transfer request aaya...humara plan ekdam ready nahi tha....per kuchh kar bhi nahi sakte the....hum kabhi bhi Arjun ko in saab ke beech me lana nahi chahte the....

Arjun: itna saab kuchh hua....aur main hu ki....baas shaarab ke nashe me padha raha...shame on me...lekin mujhe jitna pata hai...will Mama badal nahi paaye....

Ria: will ka pura bayaan Pujya Mama ji ko bhi aaj pata chala hai......

Arjun and Joshi: kya hain?

Rathore: Arjun agar shaadi karta hai...toh woh saab uski wife ka....aur...Mr Shirke aap hi bataiye

Mr Shirke: aur Arjun ko agat aulad hua.....toh 49% uss aulaad ka...uske 25th years taak.. Arjun aur uski wife 51% ke share holder...agar uska bachcha laayek hua toh ... poori property uss bachche ke naam pe transfer ho sakta hai...usse pahle koi bhi..kisi bhi haal pe usse transfer nahi kaar saktaa.....

Arjun: lekin mari aulaad

Ria: abhi bhi nahi samjhe Arjun??? Tumhare Mamaji ne....saab khabar leke hi...Chini pr hamla karwaya.....

Arjun: Chini?????meri beti?? Arjun laughs at joy

Arjun: meri beti hain .....Chini....mujhe pata tha....kuchh toh connection haiii....mera aur chini kaaaa........lekin Ria yeh saab tumne bataya kyun nahi?????

Ria: saab bataungi main......

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