Ariya-Twist In The Tale - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ms.Firefly

Thanks! I am glad you like it.

Also I am new to this tagging thing. How do you do it???

Welcome to the family. Even I don't know this thing... Actually naaheean explained me but yet I didn't find the said options or tabs... 😂😂 Hume quote se hi kaam chalana padega shayad🤣🤣

Hi....dear, tnx a lot for the pm. Read the chapter n it is truly awesome. Arjun loves to tease Riya n I think Riya also loved to be teased by Arjun.

Yeah, cliffhangers are really needed to hook the readers to the story more. And, yes, the chapter seemed a short one but not too short , I will want to read a much longer update next time. If you are not comfortable in writing crime scenes, case details n how the team solve those cases, you can surely avoid it, I won't mind. But, honestly speaking, I would prefer to read at least a little bit of these crime n case related things since both the show r based on crimes n criminals. And, obviously other than the case details I would love to read the Ariya scenes.

P.S. I guess, Riya has gone outside to bring her Arjun Sir's favourite cutting chai, because without having it he can't concentrate on solving case.

Originally posted by: Ms.Firefly

I am new to this tagging thing. How do you do it???

To tag someone, use the blank box named "Tag users" which is situated just below your comment box. Also, if you want to quote any specific point of others while replying then use "Quote" button beside the reply button, so that you can directly give reply to the particular quote of that particular person who commented on your story. Here also, you'll get a blank box just below the comment box named "tag users" so that you can tag other users of the forum.

P.S. I always browse through, do reading n commenting on India forums using a PC, as I do not use phone for this website (it's my personal choice), so this process may vary in phone browser settings, that's why this process may not be correct for the phone users.

Superb update

Loved the update

Interesting loved it update soon thnx

It was small but update little longer next time

sometimes cases are not that important but sometimes yes

Originally posted by: naaheean

Hi....dear, tnx a lot for the pm. Read the chapter n it is truly awesome. Arjun loves to tease Riya n I think Riya also loved to be teased by Arjun.

Yeah, cliffhangers are really needed to hook the readers to the story more. And, yes, the chapter seemed a short one but not too short , I will want to read a much longer update next time. If you are not comfortable in writing crime scenes, case details n how the team solve those cases, you can surely avoid it, I won't mind. But, honestly speaking, I would prefer to read at least a little bit of these crime n case related things since both the show r based on crimes n criminals. And, obviously other than the case details I would love to read the Ariya scenes.

P.S. I guess, Riya has gone outside to bring her Arjun Sir's favourite cutting chai, because without having it he can't concentrate on solving case.

Thanks a lott!!!!!!!

The next update will be long.

I can write crime and case related scenes but I can't write a complicated one where every small things lead to other one.

I will include it in the next update you guys hopefully like it. I know for a reason that I need to write it a bit atleast cuz the ff revolves around 2 officers and 2 teams.

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

Interesting loved it update soon thnx

It was small but update little longer next time

sometimes cases are not that important but sometimes yes

Thanks and done the next update will be longer and will have case scenes too.👍🏼

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Oh no cliff hanger but story ko further read karne ke liye baandh ke rakhta hai CID mein sab hairaan hai riya ko itna easily arjun ke saath baat karte hue yeh riya kaha hai arjun bhi worried ho gaya haan update thora short tha aur crime investigation scene read karne mein achcha lagta hai writing skill mein koi problem nahi bus thoda lenghty are we ariya fans thode greedy hai 😂 fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm hope hindi mein comment dene se koi problem nahi

Awesome update

loved it!

So Arjun is already shocking everyone with his two different attitudes as a typical Arjun

Sachin itne mein jal bhun raha hai, jab puri story pata chalegi toh kya hoga?

This is going to be fun

Personally, I would like it to be slightly longer maybe 5-6 para's more

And yes I do enjoy the blend of cases, it keeps the story alive

as far as cliffhangers are concerned, guilty pleasure soo 😆

cont soon