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Made me very emotional at the end....
Thank you.... waiting for next update....
Thank you dear ❤️
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Made me very emotional at the end....
Thank you.... waiting for next update....
Thank you dear ❤️
🤗
Originally posted by: pallavi25
Oh YES! Abir realized he LOVED her! 😃
Oh NO! He thinks Mishti loves Kunal!
Why, Why always wrong connection between these two? First Mishti misunderstood his pulling away at the hospital, now he’s misunderstanding Mishnal hug *tearing my hair out* 😡
Such gadhedas these two are 😄
When will Abir realize Mishti and Kunal are just best friends not lovers? Probably when KuKu get together
When will Mishti realize she loves Abir? When will the barriers of hurt ego and feared rejection be broken by a flood of emotions?
Please don’t make Mishti marry Kunal, as it seemed in the prologue 🥺
Continue soon
Thanks a lot dear for this analysis...
Gadhedas🤣totally...lekin drame keliye kuch toh chahiye...
Many '"mis's" coming... Mishbir too..
Do continue your support ❣️
this is awesome...
one perfect conversation needed to mishbir but they really fight in that too...
how they are craving for each other... would love to see how they will fall in love...
Ruhi dear.. thanks for the comment
@bold...🤗🤗
❣️~Terebin na lage Mera Mann~❣️
Chapter 11
"You love him a lot Kunal..."
Mishty said breaking away from their hug....
"Don't you love Kuhu that much...?"
Kunal had his one brow arched as if challenging her...
"Haan...I love Kuhu....lekin...aise intense wali Pyaar tum do Bhai hi Kar sakthe ho..mein aur Kuhu Pyaar se jyaada jhagda karthe hai..."
Mishty smiled.
Kunal was grinning wide..."haan woh toh hai.. lekin.tum dono ka ladai bhi cute hai.."
"Agar tumhe aisa lag Raha hai to tumne abhi Tak humare ladaaii nahi dekha hai..Rai badal dega ...Now let me freshen up... Kuhu thaki hogi...use Ghar aana Haina"
"No need ...just take rest Mishty....mein jaa Raha hoo hospital..Kuhu wahaan bhi rest karlegi...."
Kunal hesitated a moment...
"Aur"...
Mishty who was walking to her wardrobe stopped.
"Aur Kya Kunal?"
"Don't fight with my bhai, will you?"
Mishty sighed ..."for your information...we didn't fight like cat and dog...its...it's..."
she tugged on the towel she was holding, shifting her gaze from Kunal.
"We just....I mean...we don't..."she tried to put some words out of her mouth but something in her throat prevented her....
"Ya...I know...I know...you both don't get along well...he gave me that...!"
Kunal said in a resigned tone... doing air quotes..
"He told you that..?."
Her voice was only a little more than a whisper...the conformation of her conclusions regarding their situation....
"You won't fight tonight okay? kyunki mein Bhai ko Ghar bhejrahhaa hoo"
Kunal looked at her anticipating an assurance....
Mishty smiled weakly....
"Okay I promise...I'll be a good girl...but don't send him right away when you get there ....you can do that as a favour in return ..apne friend keliye...."
Kunal smiled ..."will try...now you get a hot bath... Mein darwaaza band Kar loonga....."
Kunal pulled on a turtleneck sweater and walked out of the room closing the door...
As he moved to the living room he spotted Abir in the kitchen...
"Abir Bhai. !! you are here already...!!"
"ha...umm...just thought of doing some work ..I see tum donon ne saara packing finish karliya ...!.You..you want coffee?"
"No...I am leaving for hospital...how's massima?"
"She is perfectly ready for tomorrow's flight .."
Abir said sipping his coffee as they walked back to living room...
"Good ...so we can relax out there ...is there a couch in her room...?" Kunal asked with his sheepish grin...
"Ya ...in fact there is two... heard Kuhu ask for an extra one..." Abir said as he booted his laptop.
"I bet she did..." Kunal smiled.
**************
Mishty changed into her black capris and her white boat necked tee...
She had time to settle herself before facing him. Mishty felt somewhat relieved at Kunal's revelation about Abir's nonexistent love life....and somehow it brought a new ray of hope into her pessimistic thoughts..
May be she should give herself a push ...try out at least once to make him see as a girl...other than his massima's daughter ...
Mishty thought of the things she should do next...she will have a double strong coffee ,order pizza, then curl up in the sofa and watch some TV ....and at the stroke of door bell she would act all sleepy and excuse herself ...
She was chickening out....!!!
She promised Kunal that she 'll behave...
Okay...she might as well prepare something for them and see that he eats properly...
Her mind was full of plans as she walked to the kitchen but her legs froze when the tall figure who was standing with his back towards her turned to face her with a steaming coffee cup.!
"I thought you might like to have some strong coffee..."
His deep voice penetrated her numb conscience ...
She was beginning to shiver a little..Mishty realised in alarm....damn...how does he manage to topple her mind with a single look...
"thh...thank you.."
She took the cup from him with shaking hands and held it with both hands....
As they walked to the living room...Abir could not take his eyes off her ...she looked so....so...
He swallowed hard ...he was not supposed to think of her in that way....
Did'nt he promise himself a while earlier that he would brush off all his feelings for her .....
But he did'nt realise then ...till now..! it was just as impossible as trying to stop breathing....
she wore a loose fitting tshirt...and the figure concealed beneath made itself known......and her shapely legs....he spotted a teal stretchable ankleband on her left ankle...and he felt a sudden urge to caress the hollow of her ankle with his lips....!
Abir swallowed hard and squeezed his eyes shut ...
It was torture....! to see her in front of his eyes was pure torment not only to his mind....but also to his body....
Mishty tried to concentrate on all inanimate things in the room.....
She found Abir''s laptop on the teatable...some files on the sofa...she tried not to look at him when she sat on the single seat farther from his place...
She put on the TV as Abir sat on the sofa ..his eyes kinda fixed on the lappy screen...
The air in the room suddenly felt heated ....a kind of closing in was happening upon her and Mishty shivered inside....
She drew her legs up and tucked them under her,trying hard to concentrate on the images moving on the LED screen ,though they appeared as of an unknown language...
As seconds ticked by Abir felt the heaviness in his heart grow and as he glanced at her taut face....a prickly sensation irritated his eyes...
Abir could not fathom the darkness into which he had plunged himself....always he kept away from girls....he had reservations about all....and he had found that the emotion of love is not used in its pure sense ...and had took decision to keep it in distance....
But the way this girl gate crashed into his well defended heart was difficult to believe even now.......
And even more tough to let her go ....
"umm... I 'll order some pizza....fancy one?"
Mishty took the cordless and looked at Abir who seemed to stare at something on his lappy screen...
"uh! Umm...but..."he started to say something but was interrupted by the doorbell....
Mishty frowned ...! Kuhu hogi....oh God ..let it be her...
"Mein dekhthi hoo"
Mishty got up and opened the door ....
"Ma'm your take out "
Mishty looked the somewhat large take out wrap in her hands in disbelief....
"But...I ..."
"I ordered ...you like Chinese no?"
His voice by her ear made her start a bit...
Abir moved past her and paid the delivery boy...
Mishty walked into the kitchen and placed the takeout on the kitchen counter.
" You okay with the food Mishty.?." Abir stood at the kitchen entrance looking at her with doubtful eyes.
"I didn't want you to take any trouble of cooking ....tumne kitne dinon se theek se Khana bhi nahi khaya ..all this heavy packing...stress...I thought I "ll give you a stress- free evening ..."
"Thank you...it was so- kind- of- you.....!" Mishty muttered trying to curb down the sarcasm in her voice.... stress free...the words mocked her.
Abir looked at her in confusion as he could not see her face...she was busy checking out the parcel...
But her attitude....she should be mad at him....but the cool way of her behaviour put him off balance....
"You seem to work a lot ....."
"uh! What?" Abir could not believe that she was actually initiating a conversation..had she completely forgot his rude behaviour?...may be she was as embaressed as him....
His thoughts angled upon the apology he was going to extend.....if she had let the matter pass was it really needed .? and by the way what excuse was he going to offer ....?..that he enjoyed their intimacy and was feeling guilty for that...!!
"I asked you that you seem to work a lot....Kunal told me that you are a born workaholic..? but why?."
Mishty was pushing her luck with the conversation....trying not to look at his face...
She had to make him see her as any other girl.....than herself...!!
The irony of her situation was mocking at her. She was prisoner of the image she had created for herself in front of him....and now she wanted him to see her as anything except the hot headed arrogant girl as he described her...
Mishty stopped at the kitchen door where he stood silent and still brooding on her question.....giving her only the required space to move out....and she needed to be out....
The way he was leaning on to the door with a careless confidance was doing something funny inside her chest,belly,even her toes curled at his look...
"ouch..."
She winced as the tender spot just above the elbow struck to the door....
"Tumhe lagi kya?"
Abir was now looking down at her with concern...
"umm....earlier.....just bumped again...."Mishty rubbed the spot where now she could see a bluish purple bruise circling her arm......
"Show me...."Abir pulled her arm and she winced again...
"Who did this?"....
Mishty was almost too much into their closeness and his touch....but the anger in his voice startled her...
"What?"
"Mishty don't play dumb.....I know you might take it as part and parcel of being a girl...but I can't have some one manhandle you like this....tell me where have you been today....and who did... Did you meet Avi??.."
"Abir..Abir...easy...." Mishty interrupted him raising her both arms....
"No body manhandled me....and I was not even aware of this till now....."
"Then how come you are bruised as if someone clamped your elbow forcefully Mishty?"
Abir's voice was harsher than intended...
Mishty sighed aloud....
"Abiirr. please.... I am very fine in dealing with men trying to manhandle me...so please don't make it your business.."
Abir looked at her intently..and Mishty realized that her voice went above a notch...
"I am....am...sorry....i....should not have yelled upon you......!"
Mishty stammered as tears bubbled up in her eyes....his presence was weakening her resolves..
" Mujhe bataao.. Mishty.."
His voice was tender..as his finger lightly moved above the bruised part ..in a caress..
Mishty sighed ....
"Tum bohot ziddi ho"
"I know I am ...and much more ...now tell me...." He said softly...
Mishty said with out thinking.......not that she was capable of thinking clearly.The way he touched her was accelerating her heartbeat to unexperienced velocities ..
"There is nothing to tell except the Rajvansh boys have exceptional physical stamina..."
Abir's eyes narrowed ....
"What do you mean...?"his brows arched in confusion and with a jolt he asked .
"Kunal? Kunal ne aisa Kiya?"
Mishty was amused by the way his pulse twitched at the side of his neck...his jaw clenching in an effort to keep down his anger..
"Well..It was my fault.. ...I managed to make him angry.... as I usually try on you...being snobbish...!!"
Mishty sat on the sofa looking cross at herself...and said in a low tone....
"So he was going all ' bromantic ' over your workaholism and nonexistent..umm..social life..and I told him not to bother about his 'cousin brother's ' personal life...Use gussa aaya ... he very well made it clear that he would never forgive any one for saying that even if she is his best friend...."
Abir was silent as he processed her previous statement...
"So..you admit that you were deliberately doing that to me..all those tantrums...if i may say?."
Abir's tone was close to mocking and all she could do was sigh...sigh ...sigh....all her armour went down the drain now....may be he can see her for herself now....!
Abir brought an ice pack and tied it above her elbow...
"Massima will get tensed when she see this....I'll bring the next when its over ...so have your rest for the time being...."
Abir said as Mishty stifled a yawn....and...droopily she saw Abir sit in front of his lappy and then she slipped off...
She woke up when she heard some one talking.....
"Yup! we are fine....and there is no need to worry ,...we'll fare well....and by the way she got a bangle bruise on her left arm...care to explain?"
so it was Kunal checking on them....!
Mishty felt a swelling sensation as she heard a note of possessiveness in his voice when he questioned Kunal about his action...but then he always did care for her...
She could sense Kunal's arguments from how Abir refuted them.....
"Okay...haa.....am doing some salad....she is dead bones with out proper food ....and ...ah!! ouch!! catch you later ....!"
*******
Damn!...Kunal had to call now!! hope he didn't wake up Mishty....Abir let go of the knife and clutched his bleeding finger..
Mishty was at the kitchen door at the first burst of pain in his voice..and clattering of some thing on the floor..
Abir was holding his left index finger and pressing the bleeding ...his phone still on his left ear... ,held by his shoulder.
Abir turned to the sink and found Mishty next to him....
"Sorry...did I wake you up...hey ...what the....!!"
His exclamations went unattended as she deftly pulled his fingers to her mouth....
Abir stood there breathless....he didn't feel any pain ...only the sweet sensation of her lips sucking his finger.....
Her tousled hair had fallen over her face and as helpless he was in controlling his actions in her influence his hand moved up to her stray strands ....
She looked up,his finger still in her mouth.....
For a fraction of a second she seemed to contemplate on their situation and abruptly left his hand....
"Uhhh!! I am sorry....many don't approve of this kind of first aid .....but i assure you this is the best one for cuts.....see...khoon behna Kam hua......"
She felt heated up.....she still didn't believe what she had done.....even when he protested..... OMG..,!!
Not finding Abir approve her action.....she felt her heart sink....
"So sorry....I didn't ask your permission....I.I'll bring the FA kit ....."
She tucked her hair behind ears and scooted from there without meeting his eyes....
Abir stood there mesmerised.....she did what..???...and he let her..!!!!
He raised his injured finger and with much envious eyes looked at it....and then he blocked away all the thoughts which alienated him from her as he brought it to his lips........
Mishty stood by the door trembling a bit as she came back with the first aid kit....did he actually.....
She saw him sucking away his finger merrily....and a knot formed in her stomach.....
Nah!...he would have washed the wound..... !! Tu aur Tera one track mind....She berated herself...!!
Mishty stepped in and Abir drew his finger out of his mouth abruptly....
"Bleeding has stopped ....! " he grinned at her ...and Mishty felt her knees going to give her away....
"Good " she managed a smile and tended the wound with an antiseptic before plastering it....
"By the way.... what are you doing in the kitchen? "
She eyed him questioningly.....
"Well my specialisation is salad preparation ...so I thought I would prepare one for us..."
"Oh!..I am not so into non veg salald ...were you making that? ungli salad. ..!?"
Mishty mocked him lightly as they headed back to the living area.....
Now to their utter amazement their conversation grew comfortable and both were enjoying pulling each others legs in silly matters.....
They had food and gave her high opinion about his salad ...
"Uh..! you like it....?"
"I loved it...waise salads Kuhu ki expertise hai... diet- Viet etc..But now I am thinking of ways to have it for a life time...."
Mishty laughed... ..Abir looked at her intently....
"Hmm...if you are at Rajvansh mansion....your wish will be granted ....but .. lifetime..??.hmm...you know....when you get married ...."
Mishty choked on the rice.....
"mmm..marriage...??!!!"
"I mean..." Abir too found himself in troubled waters.....
"Its okay....for me it is not going to happen until for a few years....." Mishty paused ...and with a meaning ful glance to the person in front of her she completed ....
"and if I am to get this for a lifetime I intend to stay in Rajvansh mansion......"
Her words made him uncomfortable..... Mishty could say that from the shadow that fell on his jovial eyes.....he was going along with her in a friendly way and see how her tongue cheated her....
Abir knew her meaning very well.....she intend to stay in Rajvansh mansion....with...
The rest of the meal was finished in occasional impersonal conversations and after cleaning up both of them retired to their rooms in an uncomfortable hurry.
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Lovely update!
Abir Mishti all alone at the apartment, their intense attraction and awareness towards each other is palpable, well portrayed by your descriptions of their reactions
Wow Kunal grabbed her hand so hard it left a bruise!!! 😲 Didn’t expect that from Kunal ....Kaisa best friend hai yeh? Abir would never hurt her like that, at least not physically
Why did Mishti say she wants a lifetime at RJV mansion? Dil ki baat bahar aa gayi 😄
But gadhedo Abir thinks she means Kunal se shadi karke
Please continue soon
Nice update.....
Uuuffff Abhirrrrr.... It's you, not Nanko!!!.... Kab samajh mein aayega isse?
very nice...
finally some improvement....
but i need mishbir romance atleast in one of their dreams....
Originally posted by: pallavi25
Lovely update!
Abir Mishti all alone at the apartment, their intense attraction and awareness towards each other is palpable, well portrayed by your descriptions of their reactions
Wow Kunal grabbed her hand so hard it left a bruise!!! 😲 Didn’t expect that from Kunal ....Kaisa best friend hai yeh? Abir would never hurt her like that, at least not physicallyWhy did Mishti say she wants a lifetime at RJV mansion? Dil ki baat bahar aa gayi 😄
But gadhedo Abir thinks she means Kunal se shadi karke
Please continue soon
Thanks yaar..
Kunal is a bit impetuous...
Aise hi hosla badhathe rehna...
Humara show toh.. Mishbir nahi de Rahi..khud hi banana pad Raha hai🤭😁
Nice update.....
Uuuffff Abhirrrrr.... It's you, not Nanko!!!.... Kab samajh mein aayega isse?
Thank you dear
@ bold....
When I wish..!!
Haha...
Soon ..may be a bit later...
very nice...
finally some improvement....
but i need mishbir romance atleast in one of their dreams....
Thank you dear..
Mishbir romance is a bit far from this point..
I can give Mishbir moments 😍😊
Do continue to read and comment..
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