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~~Tere bin na lage Mera Mann~~

Chapter 8





Tum Sach mein chahthi ho ki mein ruk jaaoo?"

Abir's voice cut her apology...

Mishty nodded...

A grin on his face blinded her senses...

"To iska Matlab hai ki tumne mujhe thodi maafi di hai......I mean...i will play dump, deaf and PH....if you want me to...stay..."


A smile came up to her lips thinking of the hollowness of his promise...


And then Abir did the unexpected...he had suppressed his guilt for Mishty's transformation and it popped up unknowingly when he saw the wind blow on to her ,pasting her silky top to mould her figure and blow her hair....


His hand went up to her hair...

how he missed her long hair...and Mishty held her breath when she saw the emotion flicker in his eyes...

His fingers rubbed the strands feeling its smooth texture....and then with a sigh he withdrew...

"Bohot der hogayi hai...so jaao.."


Before Mishty could answer a movement by the door distracted them...


"Nanko?" Mishty heard Abir mutter and walk to the door...intrigued , Mishty too followed him and when they reached the living room Kunal and Kuhu were sleeping on adjacent sofa's...


"Zyaada natak mat Kar Nanko ...c'mon get up you two spies!"

Kunal opened one of his eyelids....and then burst out into a laugh joined by Kuhu....


"Thank you Mishty ...you did it...!" Kunal hugged Mishty as Kuhu tugged Abir to sit on the sofa...

"Ha...she did it...isne mujhe maaf Kar Diya.." Abir said in a statement which immediately made Mishty defiant.

"Maine maaf to Kar Diya.....lekin itni Jaldi Sab bhoolne wali nahi hoon..!"Mishty shot back only to get 'that 'chuckle in response.


"Abir bhai..thanks a lot for staying....and tomorrow we are going to have fun...we have all things planned..." Kuhu was excited and Mishty frowned.

"Fun...? We..? "


"Yep! We are going for a hike to Rainbow falls tomorrow...! and none are excused..."


Kuhu declared with an excitement that equally matched Kunal's..


Next morning


Mishty frowned as she entered the kitchen....

"Badimaa ?! Yeh Sab Kya hai ?" she asked wide mouthed as her eyes fell on the sandwitches being stuffed into basket by Kuhu as per Rajshri's directions....


"Woh Mishty... Tum log picnic pe jaa rahe hai na to Maine Socha kuch khane keliye pack kardoo."

"Lekin Badima..itna saara...yeh sab kaun khanewala hai?"

Mishty stared at the big basket...in confusion...."surely Kunal won't be able to finish it off...!"


Rajshri and Kuhu laughed at Mishty's remark on Kunal..

"OMG .. Mishtyyou said that about Kunal..! ny ways ...we have company for the hike ... Rahul , Sneha , Sanju, Chris and that moron Avi..."

Kuhu scrunched her nose in disgust when she mentioned Avi...


"Mishty beta...Mei bohot khush Hoon ki tumne Abir se rukne ko kaha .." Rajshri said glowing ...


Mishty turned her face in a careless manner and nodded as she walked to the counter to grab a mug of coffee...

"Well .aisa nahi ki humare beech sabkuch theek hogaya.....woh mein...I am just being civil to him...as he is our guest thats all...!"


"Acha...?!..toh yeh le Coffee..use deke aa..." Rajshri struck a coffee mug in her hands .


Mishty exclaimed ...


"Kya ..?? Mein..??!..


Rajshri raised a brow in question.....

" Kyu...abhi to keh rahe the mehmaan hai..thodi mehmaan nawazi bhi Karo"

" Aisa hi bolna chahiye Dadi...yeh na Abir bro ke saath kuch zyaada hi drama Kiya tha Kal..ab bharpai bhi Karlo".

Mishty looked at Kuhu helplessly...and groaned inwardly....okay...Kunal will also be there...

" Okay Okay..mein coffee leke jaati Hoon..ek aur cup dena..Kunal keliye...."

"Kunal..woh to Jaldi uthgaya ..Meri tarah woh bhi excited hai picnic keliye..he is checking on the car and putting in the backpacks ...woh kehraha that ki Abir bro Soo Raha hai.. raat ko kaam bhi Kiya tha...Shayad ab utha hoga..."

Mishty looked at Kuhu in open alarm .. OMG!!! Now she must face Abir all alone...


" Yeh lo tumhari coffee bhi saath le jao.." Rajshri said handing over her cup.


" And No gadbads Mishty ki bachiiii...all the best!!"


Kuhu's warning ringed in her ears as she walked to his room.

She was not sure of facing him after their unexpected reconciliation ...they had.. no..she still had issues with him...!!!

She gulped a lump of anxiety as she stood by the door and mustering courage nudged the door open with her shoulder....


She spotted Abir in the balcony and her breath quickened....

he was in his blue denims and a white tee..and a towel on his shoulders..he looked as if he was just out of bath....

A giddiness started to brew in the back of her head as she shamelessly checked him out.....


It was like she was regaining her lost habits.... Mishty Agarwal would normally cast a sweeping glance at the most popular guy in the school and shrug away......

But only she knew that once she had eyes only for a boy who never seem to notice her...

And from yesterday she was finding it more than harder to keep her eyes off him than before....

Abir was on call..

"So sorry Piya...tum toh Kunal ko jaanti ho ...he is super excited with this idea of trekking...and Kuhu too..."

Piya must have asked something about Kuhu..as Abir chuckled fondly..

"Ya..woh donon toh abhi se partners in crime wale vibes de rahe hai..."

Then Mishty saw a shadow pass his face with a thud in her heart..

"Haan...haan..... Mishty...ah! yes...! Dekho mere presentation ko proof read karna mat bhoolna..Jaldi Jaldi mein Kiya tha..and for today do take Neil's help if you get any doubts....see you soon ... thanks for helping out..luv ya.....!


He turned picking the towel from his shoulders and drying his hair..but stopped as he spotted Mishty...


Surprise glittered in his eyes as a smile begin to dawn on his lips....


"Good morning Mishty..!"

Mishty bit her lips...what a fool she was ...! she would have never let him past her defences last night ....now see what it did to her .....heartburn again...!...

"see you soon...., Luv ya!"

His resonant voice into the phone echoed in her ears....he have a GF too...! It brought a crushing feeling within her and the humiliation at the thought that Abir never will think of her in that way seared her heart.

Abir walked to her confused....it was as if she was looking through him.....

He looked at the coffee mugs in her hand and then to her face...


"Mishtiii ???"


What he did now? Is wishing Good morning a mistake?

Mishty jolted back to her senses when his fingers curled on hers ....upsetting the coffee mug.

Abir firmly gripped the mug and being truly concerned with her reaction he asked "are you alright Mishty..Tabiyath toh theek hai tumhari...?"

Afraid that he would parade on his sisterly emotions to her , Mishty took a step back...

"Mein ...mein theek hoon. Badimaa ne yeh bheja hai"

She thrust the coffee mug into his hands... her face was flushed and the defiant stare was back.

Abir sighed ...this girl was never easy to deal with.....

"Iski Kya zaroorath thi.Mein kitchen hi aa raha tha....tabhi Piya ka call aaya...wait ...let me put on my shirt..."

But before Abir could finish putting on the shirt he found Mishty gone....

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Abir was angry......


Only he knew how much pride he had to swallow last night to apologise to her....and now it seemed like a futile excercise...she was back to the irritating mode ...her face an impasse...and God knows how much her attitude angered him.....


But the thing that unsettled him most was Avi's Presence....

Mishty's friends had joined them at the base camp and Abir was irritated the moment he spotted Avi among them.

Why he felt an urge to rip him off whenever he was somewhere near Mishty?!

Abir looked at all in a glance....Kunal was having fun time with Kuhu and Chris .Avi ,Rahul and Sneha walked with Mishty ,but Abir could tell that Avi's eyes were always on her.....He spotted Sanju coming his way..


Oh! Did somebody tell him hiking relaxed mind...!!


They were halfway up the steepy trail and as Mishty looked around a smile warmed her lips seeing Kunal pulling up Kuhu on his back.....

oh! Kunal ..he was such a sweet boy....and there was no wonder how both of them glued up...as far as she could remember of her childhood days in Rajvansh sadan..she could'nt think of a moment Kunal left her out of his sight.....the way he fretted for her when she fell down occasionally....


And now the same care he is giving to Kuhu..their teaming up was very much refreshing...even though it came coupled with her sense of loss..

Her mind went back to Abir...and when she raised her eyes to glance him...she burned in anger...

Sanju..!! of all the girls ,she had to lose her head over him....?

And what an accomplished flirt is he...he listened to her attentively and she heard him complementing her for her hair do... !!

OMG..! can she take this much dose of heartache in a day...

Mishty stepped her feet hard on the path...taking out her fury on the fallen twigs in their path...

"Mishtiiii..!!watchout...!!"

A sudden yell on her way stiffened her as she recognised it..Avi?!

But it was late..she had stepped on to a wobbly stone and she tripped....

Mishty saw Avi lung towards her ..and her hands groped in the air in a hope of getting hold of something ...


A clamp of strong palm held on her hand...and she clinged to the arm...

She was deftly pulled up....


Abir..??!..from where did he materialise.?..he was with Sanju.!!...and she had left them far back...!

"Sambhalke Mishtyy....dekh ke chalna chahiye na...!." Abir's voice was rough...

Oh! so it was actually her fault that the stone was wobbly...!!!

"Thank you...par Meri galthi nahi thi.....aur agar mein gir bhi gayi to girke sambhalna mujhe aata hai..I would have managed to get up on my own...! Ab...tum.....mujhe chodo...?"she stared at him defiantly..

Abir's face reddened in anger...he was about to snap out something at her...but then with a groan he let go of her arm ...

Mishty struggled a little to put her balance back..and then with the mutinous upward chin she climbed off...

Avi joined her and Abir felt like slapping himself....was that guy really blind.??.. not to notice his warning looks?

"I am ..so sorry...she was rude to you....but this is unlike of Mishty to lose her temper ..."

Abir groaned inwardly as Sanju muttered away apologies for Mishty's behaviour....

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Mishty stood petrified at the opening of the wooden bridge....

"Oh! c'mon...Mishty..you have done this before ... many times...remember....c'mon?" Kuhu called out to Mishty from the other end...


"Hey Kuhu..you mean .. Mishty ko abhi bhi..."Kunal puckered his brow in deep thought...


Kuhu shrugged ..

"Yup! She is hell scared of this sound of water rumbling under the bridge...she says..pata nahi use Kya ho jaata hai...but she manages to cross with some help....and I hate to say it was always Avi who coaxed her fear out..they were such good buddies and I hate him for ruining it...."


"Mujhe pata hai ki use Kya ho jaata hai...Hmm...so the guy was of a bit importance..." Kunal tapped his chin as he turned to face Kuhu "do you think he might give me a competition?"


Kuhu was strained a bit seeing Mishty's precarious state and was doubting if Avi could help her ....but everything vaporised in a moment when Kunal threw the question with that boyish grin and innocent eyes....

A laugh bubbled up from her throat and the next she was clutching her stomach....

"OMG! Kunal .You are impossible.and a little dense..you will end up a loser if you stand still like this instead of competing for Mishty........"


A sheepish grin crossed his face....and with a look at Mishty he took a step to the bridge...

"Kuhuuu?"

"yeah? Bataao....!"

"actually this is a tough bridge to cross...and to think of doing it twice ....you know...!"

"Kunal! You are backing out from the competition..?!

"Kuhu'ss eyes danced in merriment...it was pure ,out and out fun to be with Kunal and she was loving every part of it...

"Well not exactly...may be your Mishty ki bachi will give me another chance.."

Kunal grinned wide when he saw Kuhu roll her eyes...


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"Mishty ..c'mon...let me hold you and you put this hood on..."

Avi was directing her ...the feel of rumbling water under her feet began to sicken her more than it did in last years...why could'nt she just brush off the feeling....


And then ..Avi....somehow Mishty felt reluctant to accept his help....it was not like that before ..she had no qualms when he had held her and let her shut her ears with her palms and guide her to the other end...but not any more....

"no Avi...I'll do it...alone...."

She saw shame filling Avi's eyes as he cast them down...

"okay...if you think so, but can I be near you...?"


Mishty could not neglect his request ..after all what if her head swooned when she got into the middle...and nodded.

As she took a step on to the slightly creeking wooden plank her heart leapt into her mouth...Mishty pressed shut her eyes and inhaled hard...she need to overcome this....


"Mishty ..please ..will you trust me?" Avi's voice was full of concern and apologetic...


Suddenly she was on air ....!

Two strong hands supported her ...one behind her back and the other behind her knees...!pulling her to a wall of muscles.....


"Trust is something precious brother...ek baar Dil se woh ehsaas Gaya toh phir vapas nahi aate.."


Abir ?!!!

"Tum Kya Kar rahe ho..Abir .. mujhe neeche rakho..Abhi.."

Mishty thought of screaming all those and wriggling out of his hold....


But the assault of his scent ...the mixture of his sweat and deo...numbed her feelings...and all she could manage was a whimper of protest...

The result was too good that he held her more close.and tight...


She did'nt hear the roar of water beneath them....

Instead she heard ...she felt ...his heart beat...


She felt the heat of his body through the soft cotton of his tee..and all her pretense to him ...and to herself ....that he meant nothing to her .....lifted off in a moment just as bright sunrays did to morning mist...


From the moment she had started feeling and caring for him this was the first time she was this much close to him....and the thought of an naive 8 year old girl finding her anchor in a 13 year old boy brought a shy smile to her lips and she unknowingly turned her face to his chest.......




Mishty... Mishty.... tum safe ho.."

Abir's's voice cut into her conscience.. there was nothing tender about that statement...

So sad.....should her dreams must have such hard realistic ends...

Mishty sighed as she inhaled his scent once more before opening her eyes....


OMG.!! when did she do that?!


Mishty stared at her own arms which were now encircled around Abir'ss neck....


Unable to meet his eyes ..She snapped open her handclasp and was unceremoniously dropped down...


She opened her mouth to spit out a caustic remark but he had walked off and Kunal was now supporting her...


"Mishty tumhe abhi bhi wo dar hai??!....I.I thought you overcame it when you agreed for the hike...us incident ko itni power mat dona ...Kya tumhe.. nightmares bhi aate hai pehle jaisa??"

Mishty gave him a stern look putting her hands to her hips...

" Tum kahaan the..? Tumhe pata tha aur phir bhi mere help nahi kiya "

Kunal scratched the back of his head giving her a mortified grin and looked at Kuhu ...


"Woh Mishty.....he was kinda thinking of strategies to help you out...but before he could think of something which might work ,Abir bro brought you to him...bechare ka plan fail hogaya.."

Kuhu winked at Kunal who was blinking his eyes in disbelief....

Mishty could not help smile at his expression..


"whatever...c'mon...the guys are up..." Mishty walked ahead them as she heard Rahul voicing for them..

Kunal pulled Kuhu to his side ,and gave her a bear hug....as he dragged her with him....

"you are lovely Kuhu... Mishty ki saamne Mera izzath bachaya ....thanks a lot...!"

Kuhu looked at Kunal...she felt something strange....like her throat dying up...like her fingers trembling.....and as if all her weight was lifted off her.....she blinked at him....not at all registering the things he told her...as she walked beside him....


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Abir grunted a curse under his breath as he walked a bit away from the group with a bottle of water and granola bars .. finding a place to sit...

They had halted beside a small waterfall for refreshment ...after his interaction with Mishty by the bridge ..Abir could not bear to stand near her .....

What possessed him to take her in his arms.....!???

Last time when he did that he had heard her say that she hated him......but when she put her arms around his neck...he felt an over whelming feeling....and then he had left her abruptly....just because he dreaded her response.


He had felt an odd peacefulness with her in his arms...but ...when he moved away he had felt an unknown fist squeezing something in his chest.....and to think that he had said to her about caring for her as his sister last night .....Gosh! what he felt for her now was not even remotely a sibling affection..!!!


Abir smashed his fist on the nearby tree in frustration....

No...!..he can't...she dislikes him for sure....and her attitude irritates the hell out of him...

But when she is nearby he seem to lose his ability to think clearly....

Abir sighed ...all the more reason to keep away from her...! she had made it pretty clear ...and it will be the right decision....


A bubbly laughter caught his attention....when he turned to look ...he was mesmerised...!

Mishty was standing below the waterfall....her wet hair plastered on to the side of her face...the white v necked top clung to her body and even if it was full sleeved it gave the utmost appealing look...


And she was enjoying the play in water just like a kid who got her favourite candy....or favourite ice cream with double cherry on top...!!

If Only he had an inkling of her idea about her favourite double cherry topped icecream...!!!


Looking at her brought a warm smile on his face ....and for once in the whole day he forgot to glare at Avi...


Mishty was indeed happy.... and the urge to express her happiness was so strong that she got into the falls....and then dragged Kunal to join....followed by others....!

She was feeling lightheaded ....the way his nearness affected her was a shock .. but she felt content even though her mind warned her that he was just being protective for her from Avi and of course her fear for .....he knew it too well....

But all the reasonable thinking got clouded when the ecstacy of being in his arms dominated her brain.....heating her and she defenitly needed to cool herself..!!


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There were oohs and aahs when they reached the top....the water mist from the waterfall was magnificient in the back drop of the plush green mountains ......

The wind was blowing harder now and the sky was fast becoming cloudy .....the whoosh of the wind blowing brought wrinkles on Abir''s forehead..he looked at Rahul and Avi and found them tensed too.....

"Guys..we need to get down soon....it seems the wind is becoming stronger..."

His suggestion was accepted almost immedietly and all began their descend along the trail....

The heavy downpour was unexpected and the walking through the narrow trail was becoming difficult with wind blowing hard causing the branches to hit them...they could not even see each other and Rahul shouted to stick to a safe place till the storm passed away..

It was then the natural instincts to protect and care for the one close to heart despite of all bitterness surfaced....

Mishty was about to trip on a branch that a hand gripped her from falling...

"Easy Mishty..bohot steep hai..it's not safe to move...."Abir held her close and looked around...

"Kunal..."he called out ..and a muffled answer was heard from some distance....

Mishty was now really frightened.....and Abir knew it from the way she clutched his arms...

"Shh..Sab theek hai...mein hoon na.."

He pulled her to a tree side.as the wind blew with ruthlessness..he shielded her from the torrent with his body......

Mishty held her breath...she didn't know whether to feel grateful or irritated by his action....

Her inner mind was in a turmoil in response to his closeness and being drenched was not helping her at all....

"Kuhu..Kuhu kahhaan hai.. ...?"

"Uh? Kuhu .. Kunal..Kunal uska saath hai.." Mishty answered Abir a bit embaressed by the fact that she had forgot to think of Kuhu's safety in this dire condition.

"Hope he is sensible enough not to pull her down the trail...."Abir's voice was worried ..and Mishty felt a strong urge to defend Kunal..

"Woh aisa kuch nahi karega...and I trust him with Kuhu ..and I trust Kunal with my life .so don't worry about them...."

Abir bent a little pinning down Mishty to the tree in response to a strong wave of wind...

Her heart beat had gone erratic....this was torture....to have him close to her heart and to know that he cared for her none the less than Kuhu..!

Abir lifted his head as the wind passed and saw Mishty with her eyes shut ....his own face was close to her and their bodies were just inches apart....but...above all the emotions that were whirling within him... he felt sadness....

It had always pained him to know that Kunal possessed an important role in her life...she never said a word against him.or tolerated anything against him..and the trust she placed on him.....something that he could never achieve..

He was not jelous of his brother....he could never be ...because Kunal was such a good brother..and he knew how much his little brother loved him.....

Mishty opened her eyes...and frowned slightly at the blank expression on Abir's face....he had moved away...the wind had calmed down and the rain had weakened...

"So you trust him with your life..huh?" Abir resumed their convo and Mishty somehow felt that Abir felt let out..was he hurt..?....


"yes....hmm...and you must know ...hmm..that you both are different... for me..."


Mishty had difficulty in putting her thought into words....she had wanted to assure him that she had infinite trust in him...without arousing Abir's suspicion about the way she felt for him....how could she not trust him...? ..

Abir straightened himself and turned away...his heart crushing in an unknown weight.....

The weight of the realisation that it pained him beyond agony to know that he felt something deep for this arrogant girl ...and the weight of the truth that she had said in the most subtle way ..... Kunal was special for her...!!


Suddenly Mishty's phone rang....and she scrambled up to take the phone out of her jeans.

"Badimaa...what...?...Badimaa...Badimaa...?"


Abir snatched the phone from her .."massima..?"

The line went dead ...and lines of worry formed on his forehead...

"Woh wahaan akeli hai..kuch ho Gaya tho... Mishty humhe Abhi jaana chahiye."

Abir grabbed a bewildered Mishty and started to run...

"Abirr ...stop...!!" Mishty yelled as he moved fast past the trees.. pulling her along..


He didn't stop but with one look at her .. increased his speed... Mishty was now at her wits end....she never saw Abir so tensed and worried ..his face was dark, and she even imagined tear drops from his eyes....


She jerked away from his hold and stood still....

"Mishtyyyy.." Abir's voice was shocked ...."humhe Jaldi Ghar pohochna hai Mishty..it's urgent.."

"Kyu Abir....tell me ..why... Badima aisee hi check Karne keliye call Kiya hoga ...to check whether we are okay out here...par tum toh aise behave Kar rahe ho jaise woh koi danger mein hai...? what is it Abir...?"


Abir shifted his eyes from her apprehensively...how was he going to tell her ?

Abir's silence and his stealing of eyes made Mishty furious....

"Batao Abir...tum kyu yahaan aagaye...does this visit have something to do with badimaa's condition...?..its just the starting stage and we are confident that badimaa will overcome it ...but...."

Her frown deepened seeing his flushed face....she didn't imagine the tears in his eyes !! Of all the things she held against him she knew for sure how much Abir loved and respected his Massima...she had often wondered about the coldness he expressed to Meenakshi aunty....but with Badimaa.....he was never ever more gentle and caring.....

A thought crossed her mind like lightning....!

"is there something else...?...tell me Abir...Tum kyu itna khabraye hue ho....oh! Abiiirr.please tell me..."

Tears were rolling down her cheeks uncontrollably as she read the answer in his eyes....her whole body sagging under it's impact.....


"she lied to us.....!..Abir...she lied to us...."


Abir scooped her in his arms and hugged her tight ....

"She did'nt want to frighten you two.....now please pull yourself...we need to get by her side fast....I..I heard a sound of falling down...."

Horror appeared in her eyes as Mishty heard those words....Abir clasped her hand and without another word they were moving ...


By the time they reached home Abir had contacted Kunal and briefed him about the situation...

Mishty found Rajshri unconscious in the kitchen....the phone lay by her side ....


Everything was done quickly.... Rajshri was shifted to the hospital..and it turned out to be a minor heart attack. Abir notified the doctor who treated Rajshri that they intent to take her to New York for better treatment...and the doctor assured him that as soon as Rajshri gets stabilised she could be transported....


Rajshri was in CCU and when Abir returned from the doctor's cabin he found Mishty slumped at the door...she was sobbing ...her knees drawn to her and Abir realised with a pang that she was dreading losing badimaa.....she was drenched and cold...both of them were ....but what could be done...


" Mishty....Mishty ..utho...aise himmat math hàro...massimaa theek ho jaayega..."

He bent on his knees before her...


"Nahi...Abir..Woh bhi mujhe ....,. chodke jaane waali hai....mujse jhoot kaha.."she said between.hicupps ...


" Koi kisi ko nahi chodke jaa rahi...tum utho.." strong dependable hands pulled her up and seated her on the steel chair in the corridor..


"Abir Bhai...? massima...hua Kya tha?ab kaisi hai Woh??"

Kunal came running to him when he spotted Abir......

"She had a minor attack.."Abir said in a low tone...

"Oh GOD.!" Kunal buried his head in his hands as he dipped himself beside Mishty..


"Kunal? Kuhu kahaan hai?!" Abir's voice was barely out of his throat that he saw Kuhu walking to them..she was limping hard but her face was bewildered...as she reached them her eyes darted to Kunal,whose shoulder was heaving slightly indicating that he was crying...then to Mishty who was now blankfaced was more than enough to say about the situation....

"Abir bro....?"

Her voice was hoarse . the stupor which dawned into her seeing Kunal and Mishty in this condition was fast waning.

Abir moved to pull her into a hug but frowned in worry when Kuhu winced in pain..





Thank you dears for your encouragement

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Hope all of you will enjoy this part

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

With each chapter it is getting more intriguing to watch


I love all the characters but kuhu and Kunal especially because they are not the way they have been shown in the show

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Beautiful!!

Loved the unsaid emotions of both Abhir and Mishti.... Wish both speak their feelings towards each other than assuming....

Thank you... Eagerly waiting for y next part....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

twists and twists...

every emotion is awesome...

morethan like for mishbir but cant express it...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wonderful update, loved the descriptions of their hike, Abir carrying Mishti in his arms, their mutual awareness and attraction but still refusing to admit to themselves what’s their real feelings.

Abir in blue denims and white T shirt 😍

Mishti is terrified of bridges because of that childhood incident, is Kunal also scared for the same reason? Poor little Mishti was traumatized watching Abir get beat up, she blamed herself so her her guilt makes her treat Abir harshly even now. BM in the hospital so tragic, Mishti and Kuhu will be devastated if something happens to her!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: khanmaryamabul

With each chapter it is getting more intriguing to watch


I love all the characters but kuhu and Kunal especially because they are not the way they have been shown in the show


Thank you dear..

A kuku fan ,😍...yep...they are different from the show...but the same... without negativity...till now...

Do continue to read and comment ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mii5

Beautiful!!

Loved the unsaid emotions of both Abhir and Mishti.... Wish both speak their feelings towards each other than assuming....

Thank you... Eagerly waiting for y next part....


Thanks dear..

Unsaid emotions run the show...😜

At present they have something between them but both are not ready to acknowledge it...

If everything could be cleared by talking...,😊


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Originally posted by: pallavi25

Wonderful update, loved the descriptions of their hike, Abir carrying Mishti in his arms, their mutual awareness and attraction but still refusing to admit to themselves what’s their real feelings.

Abir in blue denims and white T shirt 😍

Mishti is terrified of bridges because of that childhood incident, is Kunal also scared for the same reason? Poor little Mishti was traumatized watching Abir get beat up, she blamed herself so her her guilt makes her treat Abir harshly even now. BM in the hospital so tragic, Mishti and Kuhu will be devastated if something happens to her!


Thank you dear ❤️

Happy to know that you are enjoying the story..

You got it right..

Childhood traumas accentuate when triggers are nearby...in Mishty''s case

"dard bhi wohi...malham bhi wohi..."

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twists and twists...

every emotion is awesome...

morethan like for mishbir but cant express it...



Thank you dear ❤️

Twists are part of FF's😜

@bold....aise hi Kahani banti hai...

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Tere bin na lage Mera Mann

Chapter 9



Abir walked back to CCU with two cups of black coffee to the isolated corridor...

It was the second night of Rajshri being admitted in the hospital.

Yesterday the doctors had said that her tumour had started metastasising....slowly but steadily invading her organ systems...

It was hard for him just listen to those words....and Mishty....she was crumbling before his eyes....


It had taken him all his will not to take her in arms and soothe away her agonies if they could alleviate them in any way....and the thought had shocked him so much that he could not bear to stand beside her....and had left her in Kunal's hands....


As he walked further his eyes fell on the tired frame of Mishty...she was sitting on the steel chair meant for bystanders, and his legs felt as if it weighed tonnes...

Mishty sat with her elbows on knees...her palm supporting her forehead.

She had much more in hands than Badimaa......

The only relief of the day was Badimaa's tired smile...Abir and she were allowed to visit her in CCU just for a couple of minutes....but it was like a lifeline for Mishty to see her badimaa fighting off the treacherous enemy within her...


Kuhu..she had a gash on her shoulder when a branch struck her hard in the storm last day and several bruises as a result of falling down a bit through the steep trail...

Abir had taken her to ER to do the stitches and made her take the tet shot...


Then her friends ,their families...all had dropped in the hospital to check on them and to comfort them.... Badimaa was so well known in her their locality for her kind and pleasant nature and Mishty could see the shock upon their faces to know that she had brain tumour...!


Her mind wandered to the conversation she had with Avi's mom....

Avi's mom was a nice woman and she had known her for some years...after comforting her about her Badimaa she had discreetly apologised for her son's actions.... then she saw Abir come with Kuhu.....


Mishty had moved to help Kuhu who looked very weak...and it was then Avi's mom asked her who he was...

"Actually aunty ...this is ...umm...Abir.. a family friend..."

She had explained shortly, trying to hide her quiver in voice...Avi's mom nodded with a polite smile to him, taking in the explanation...


But Abir had swiftly corrected her...


"No aunty, I am family..Haina Mishty?.".

The depth of his voice was synonymous to the depth of emotion in his eyes...and she was left without any words....

He was right ...he was family....wasn't he? She had chewed down the bitter feeling that welled up in her for a moment.

Mishty sighed and took out her phone...last night she had sent Kuhu and Kunal home...Kuhu wanted to stay with her...but she was in no condition to do that...she was sure that Kunal would take care of her .

But this morning Kunal had informed her that Kuhu was having fever...he had brought change of clothes for her and Abir and some toast for breakfast...and left almost immediately...


From then on she had been calling up him in every two hours to know about Kuhu''s condition...


"Ha...Mishty...bukhaar utar Raha hai.....now I don't feel the need to put wet towel on her forehead..."


Kunal said in a reassuring tone...he had picked up the phone in the first ring itself and fed her with the much needed information.


"Woh kuch khaya Kya...Kunal...Aur tum bhi...?"


"Zyada toh nahi..but I made her eat some toast...poor girl.. she is finding it hard to cope with all this...aur chup bhi nahi ho rahi....she feels bad about letting you stay in the hospital alone..."


"Use Kaho ki Meri tension mat le...mein theek hoon..ummm...Abir bhi hai na .."


"Ya..Abir bhayya is the only reason why she is not running to you at the moment...btw ...you had any food..?.waise Bhai toh tumhe bhookhi nahi rakhegi..phir bhi pooch Raha hoon"


Mishty noticed Abir walking to her with coffee cups...


"Haan mein kha loongi na..."

"Koi bahana nahi....you know your responsibility right..you need to be strong...Aur haan khane barre mein Bhai see jhagda bhi nahi karogi....Jo woh kahega tum maanogi... promise me!."


Mishty was hearing Kunal talk like that for the first time...the no- nonsense tone ....and it brought a smile on her face even in the grim situation....he is even taking good care of Kuhu.!


Well both the Rajvansh bros were too similar in that aspect... Mishty thought wryily as she put away her phone and took the cup from Abir''s hand muttering a thank you...


She found him place himself besides her...silently sipping the coffee...

He had noticed her thin smile on her lips as she toyed with her phone...

"Kunal?"

"Hmm..."

"Kuhu ...how's she feeling now?"

"Better, he says..."


And then the silence stretched , making Mishty wonder how could they be sitting by each other and sip the coffee solemnly....according to Kunal there must be firecrackers....!


Mishty stifled a sigh...how true...! firecrackers were there...! inside her...!


"umm..Parul massi has made arrangements for massima's treatment...have you given a thought about moving to New York....?"

Abir asked casually..

Mishty blinked ...itni jaldi.....!!


"But..."

"Mishty .. doctor ne bataya na. Massimaa keliye Kitni jaldi aggressive treatment start karegi utni unke ache hone ke chances hai.." Abir's's voice was low with sadness...and Mishty nodded, tears itching to spill from her eyes...


"Tum socho aur mujhe batao ki kab tak hum.massima ko New York le jaa sakthe ho."

They had their sandwitches in silence .


Abir...stretched out his limbs and plugged his airpods onto his ears....


Mishty was unaware of the whole world lost in her own thoughts...

Moving to New York....!!,

it will be temporary....she knew it somehow...tomorrow she has to clear all the bills...and . Kuhu''s college....packing....


She never knew when her eyes drooped and she slipped into an exhausted slumber.....

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Mishty opened her eyes groggily...something rough rubbed against her forehead.....she was feeling unusually warm...and cozy....!


She wore her pale blue cardigan ...but could it give such a good feel...?

She stirred and was startled when she felt a strong arm tighten around her instinctively.....


Her eyes darted to the arm holding her waist through the small of her back...then to the other side to the owner of that hand.....

Abir was sleeping with abandon..his breathing in a peaceful rhythm......


Mishty felt her heart stop right then....!!


OMG!!! She was sleeping on his chest....!! And the rough feeling.....her eyes scanned his face and a shy smile bloomed on her lips when she saw the five 'o' clock shadow of his chin.....


She turned her face slightly to allow herself a good view of his face....and her eyes lit up in a tender affection seeing him sleep peacefully...his hair fell onto his eyes, meeting with his dense lashes.....


His nose...which curved just a pinch...gave him the arrogance even in sleep...she had to suppress the urge to slide her fingers along his slightly parted lips...


Mishty felt a bit embarrassed at ogling at Abir when he was so vulnerable....but the feeling of having him so close to her ....was immensely enticing that she wanted every moment of it....


Last night both of them had not blinked an eyelid in their tensed state, and Mishty felt a rush of tears in her eyes when she thought how his presence gave her the courage to face the situation...


He had comforted her ....motivated her....


Now as she scanned his tired face she felt as if he too needed to be comforted ....but...


Suddenly their position seemed awkward to her ....if he awakens now? .what will he think of their closeness....?


Mishty put a hand on to his chest and tried to get up...Abir stirred and his brows formed a frown.....and his arm clutched her more tightly...not ready to let go...


Mishty looked at him helplessly...she knew he needed the sleep very much...but how could she move away from his hold...it will definitely wake him up...also her heart was not at all willing to part with him. For years she had told herself over and over that she will not see him again in her life and all her feelings for him were her childish fantasy.....she had shut him out from her thoughts and threw tantrums at Badimaa whenever she tried to mention Abir..and gradually Badimaa and even Kuhu stopped referring to the Rajvansh''s in front of her...


But now at this moment she felt as if his arms were her heaven....she felt a surge of excitement of stealing something that she yearned for , knowing that she won't ever get it otherwise...!she was becoming greedy....greedy for the love which was not hers....


Mishty felt her eyes prick with tears of contentment and sadness....she couldn't understand which emotion overwhelmed in her tight chest when she slowly snuggled close to him, placing her palm on his chest and resting her face ........his heart beats soothing her...Abir may hate her for doing this....but she was ready to take the risk......of all things she may have ... these moments with Abir were precious....


A single tear slipped along her cheek...forming a blotch on his white shirt which he wore beneath the half open black jacket......and then she slipped into a content sleep...


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Kuhu struggled to get up and reach the bedside lamp...

Her lips were parched and her stomach grumbled... she had seen Kunal bring a jug of water and place it beside the bedside table...but as she stretched herself pain shot along her shoulder...


Somehow she pulled herself up in a sitting position and leaned towards the lamp...a dim light filled the room and as she propped herself to lean over to get the jug..... she stopped as her eyes spotted something...


Kunal!!


Kunal was sleeping with his head on the side of her bed, his long legs all stretched on the cold carpeted floor...!


OMG! Kuhu forgot her pain when she moved to him along the bed....

She shook him forcefully..."Kunal.Kunal! Tum kyaa Kar rahe ho.?"

Kunal scrambled onto his knees ...sleep evaporating from him the second he heard Kuhu's frantic voice...

"Kuhu??..tum theek ho?...Kya baat hai ? Kuch chaahiye?"


Kunal rubbed his eyes and looked at her face with panic....

Kuhu returned his look with an glance...


"I am hungry...!"

"Oh! sure !I'll make something for you...bukhaar utar Gaya na?"


Kuhu turned her gaze from him..."i think I still have temperature..."


Kunal frowned in concern and went to the kitchen returning in record time with a glass of warm milk and toast....

He placed the tray on the bed and Kuhu scrunched her nose...


"Milk....! Yuck...! I don't want that...!"


"No way Kuhu..Tum bohot weak ho and you need this...so no argument over the food!"


Kuhu took a long look at Kunal.He shrugged and motioned her to have the food with a slight movement of his eyes....


She cleared her plate and drank the milk with irritating expression...as Kunal watched her in amusement.


"I'll clean up " He took the tray and Kuhu's eyes followed him as he walked out of the room....her prickly expression instantly melting into that of gratitude and affection...

Kunal when came back he found Kuhu still in sitting position but by the far end of the bed....he took her temperature and put on a wet towel on her forehead.

"You sleep well....I'll be here" saying this with a smile Kunal lowered himself on to the carpeted floor...


" Yeh Kya Kar rahe ho Kunal..?"

Kunal tilted his head towards her to find her face set in grim expression.

She might have sensed his confusion....


"I mean you could go to your room and sleep well..." Kuhu said in the same dry tone...

"Kuhu..lekin..!"" Tumhari tabiyath theek nahi Hain...ek side pe itna pain hoga.." Kunal sighed ""haan mein room mein jaake so saktha Hoon ..lekin"


"Then sleep here ..."

Kuhu pointed the vacant space beside her...and then looked at the shocked face of Kunal .it was hard for her to prevent herself from laughing even in her weak state.


Kunal was shocked...! But he masked the expression by letting out a false laugh...!

"uh...uh..!Kuhu.....you are not pulling my leg...!okay..!"

Kunal broadened his chest a bit as he inhaled a gulp of air to hide his nervousness when he looked at the innocent challenging eyes glued to his.

"Besharam ladki ..khud injured hai aur Mera advantage Lena chahthe ho....."

"Kya.advantage....!! TMI ..!! Yeh sab mujhse kyun keh rahe ho...tauba tauba..ek bachi ke kaanon Mein aise gande baat kaise bol lete ho"


Kuhu.. covered up her ears in mock horror...


"Bas...ho gaya drama..." Kunal said in serious tone.


"Okay...!..then fine ...go to your room and get some shut eye...and don't bother about me..."


Kuhu said with a faint shrug preparing herself to lie down as Kubal looked on at her with confused eyes as well as brain...both taking up and registering facts which never were relevant to him...


Why suddenly the night dress she wore caught his attention? He had been close to her...cleaning and applying the ointment on her wound in the evening ....never noticing the way it cling to her slender figure .!! .why the slight blush of her cheeks become more prominent when he looked into her eyes....?


And hell!! Why he was feeling nervous around her? ..


Kuhu laid down herself on the bed carefully as Kunal''s eyes followed her every move ...he winced when she flinched as the wounded shoulder touched the sheet...


"So goodnight ..."


Kuhu smiled at him with a feel of triumph. He had agreed to sleep well and she was happy...

"Okay ...good night!"Kunal said reluctantly as he walked out of the room....


She heard him opening his door and smilingly closed her eyes ...oh! The look on his face was priceless...even though she felt frightfully alone she could not make him sleep on the floor...he was tired too even if not incapacitated as herself...and a peaceful assurance that he was taking rest gave her contentment.

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Somewhere near by a door squeaked open ....


Abir felt oddly content as the bliss of sleeping so soundly began to lift off slowly.....but before he could open his eyes something moved on his body...and he was thrown out of his slumber.


At first he could not make out what he saw ....but a smile formed at his lips ...even unknown to him...seeing Mishty snuggled to his chest...


Her face held the innocence and purity which snapped open something sweet and aching within him.... then he saw her smile.....and he felt his heart beat erratically....


It took only moments for him to realise their position....his left arm was around her ...his palm on the bare skin on her waist ..beneath her cardigan! and she slept on his chest ....her palm resting on his chest, finger tips touching his skin through the gap between buttonholes....


Abir stiffened!!


No! This is not right..!!He took his hand off her as if it got singed by fire.

Mishty made a miffed sound...suddenly deprived of her protective shield of warmth.....she snuggled closer ...but her comfort had stiffened and her eyes popped open...to a pair of golden brown eyes which bore irritation....


OMG!! Just as she feared....! Mishty frantically lifted herself off from him, her fingers trembling as she tried to mask it by smoothing her cardigan...


"I am sorry...."she blurted out as that was the only thing that came to her mouth when she looked at the grim set face of Abir Rajvansh...


He looked away from her, got up and walked away....!


Mishty sat there all numb...! How could he?


And then she knew.....for sure....she could never ever even hope for something special between them...!



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