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Posted: 3 months ago
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Loved reading it

Excited for precap

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Loved reading it….looking forward to the next update!
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Will wait for next update eagerly

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Loved the update, waiting for mahir to come. Poddars are gone be stunned. Waiting for the next update. Please update soon

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Ohhhh, I had missed the detail about Abhimaan already having a child and, the one she is expecting, being the 2nd one. Thanks.

So far it seems interesting! Curious to see why Armaan left and I hope he doesn't mince his words w the "elders" of the family! I want a huge discussion about all the unfair treatment from KV, how his childhood has been, the way he was treated by the family post Rohit's return (and Rohit himself), Madhav being a failure as a father and the other PH residents flipping as to whom they'll support.

This guy has so been through so much trauma troughout his life, it only makes sense that he wouldn't want his kids to relive what he did. And especially not being given the tag of "sautela" by his own family only because they're angry at him.

If, after all these yrs away from these snakes, Armaan hasn't leant how to stand up for himself, than it would be kinda disappointing!

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Days were passing by, the entire family were hall room, everyone were getting back to normal life, with work, looking after home or to study their own matter in different light. Despite staying with Armaan and Abhira the Poddars hardly found a way to talk to them, both of them were extremely busy.

Krish: its been nearly a week we came here, surprisingly we havnt meet Armaan bhaiya just on Tuesday morning before he went to Delhi, even though Bhabhi is staying here, yet she doesnt have time to talk, to answer our questions, to share where they were, what happened, why they went away. It seems they both are for eachother but for anyone else.

Rohit: you are right, but very surprisingly, Armaan Bhiaya even if he is out of station he makes sure to come back home even if it is late night, but doesn't meet us, like we dont stay here or they are too engrossed in their lives.

They have changed so much, the people who used to care about family, each member of family are now aloof of us.

Ruhi: Sometimes, I feel I am responsible of all these, though things got over yet, it had created a rift, that cannot be seen but felt.

Weekend had just started no body was expecting Armaan & Abhira, usually Abhira had food with Armaan or Ritu is forcing stuffs in her. everyone was at breakfast table, when they saw Armaan coming down and joining them for breakfast. Ritu guided the staff to ready the table, Armaan saw Aloo puri on table, which smelled similar to Vidya's cooking, it was Armaan's favorite, when Rohit and Ruhi's son Pratham came,

Pratham: hello uncle, to which Krish said Pratham he is not your uncle but Tayaji, you should address him Tau sa.

Armaan saw Pratham and said hi and smiled at him but asked him to address him uncle, Tausa is so boring address me uncle only.

Pratham: aapko ek secret batau, mujhe Aloo Puri nahi pasand, to which Armaan said, mujhe bhi nhi pasand,

Vidya: Armaan yeh tho teri favorite hai, I made it for you.

Armaan said I dont like it anymore, my taste have changed, Abhira saw this from afar, said nothing and brought Aloo Paratha for him and Partham (she and Armaan already had a discussion about the same. Abhira had forced Armaan to take up the matter, after much deliberation persuasion Armaan agreed with a condition that Abhira will not mix with them much and nor will try to reconnect with them not force Armaan the same).

Vidya: felt bad but said nothing more than that. Atleast she was happy seeing Pratham and Armaan.

When Armaan and Abhira saw Pratham, he was such cute kid and instantly they both liked the kid,. the only one with whom both of them smiled at especially Armaan.

Abhira: Hey Pratham, I made aloo ka paratha, will you have that, yes I can have that, good boy, she served both Armaan and Pratham, one each,

Pratham: had one bite and was like yummmm,,

In six years Abhira had learnt how to cook, good food, even KP had tasted and loved the food Abhira cooked. Armaan and Pratham got indulge in paratha competition. Even though Pratham was fussy kid to eat food, even Ruhi was surprised seeing Pratham having breakfast so enthusiastically. Abhira was making and both of them were having, when Armaan asked Abhira for more paratha, and she said aur paratha nhi hai as masala khatam ho gya.

To which Armaan jokingly said masala khatam ho gaya ya tum thak gai itna kam kar kay. Everybody started laughing at that.

Days passed and court vacation also started and Abhira and Armaan were more often seen spending time with each other. Armaan made sure of Abhiras comfort. Whenever Manisha or Vidya used to come and take care of her or bring her something to eat, they used to find Armaan hovering over Abhira, either forcing her to eat something, cook for her, take her for yoga made her do exercise, or find them playing with Pratham, even chorus gang have relaxed with them, they all used to joke around like earlier times, except for Charu.

Charu got married, but her husband used to mistreat her. she had come back home, yet KP and sanjay were hopeful that she settles with her husband again. Chorus gang told Armaan and Abhira about the problems Charu was facing yet, how elders were ignorant towards her.

It was 7 in morning when a faint smell of baking was coming. the dishes were being prepared in full swing in kitchen. Vidya and Manisha comes to Kitchen and see Armaan in kitchen while Abhira was sleeping, the entire home was at fire, all the staff were at toes, in past 10 days they havnt seen so much activity at home, Armaan has been ignoring talking to KP and older gen much, though he has relaxed near Manisha and Manoj, yet even they couldnot ask Armaan the reason he left home. KP asked Ritu who was coming and why was such preparation done, but she was in so hurry that she could not answer.

At 8:30 Armaan brought Abhira to dining area, when suddenly a cute green chubby, eyed boy comes out and threatens Abhira from behind. Abhira thought it was Pratham, who scared her to find out it was Mahir,

Mahir Armaan Poddar, apple of Aramaan and Abhiras eyes. Mahir felt bad when Abhira took Prathams name and said he will have a sister named Mahira, she will be Mahir ki Mahira. so no pratham ha. Abhira hugged him tightly unable to control her tears. Armaan knew Mahir's summer camp preponed and he is coming back so he surprised a grumpy Abhira with his arrival. Mahir pressed Abhira very tightly, hence Armaan said to Mahir, gentle with mommy, Mahira will pissed at you if you hugged her too forcefully, she might kick you as well as she kicked me yesterday.

The three of them were busy in their own world. Armaan became a typical mommy said Mahir has lost weight and Abhira was like a chilled out daddy that he is perfectly fine. Everyone else saw them, they were surprised that Armaan and Abhira were already parents and that this was Abhira's 2nd pregnancy.

Suddenly Mahir saw lot of people at home, he started questioning as to who were they.

Mahir: wow aapne ghar pay party rakhi hai tne saare log ghar par hai. Abhira came forward and told him to meet everyone. Though Armaan wasnt comfortable with the same, but he let Mahir meet them,

Abhira introduced Mahir to everyone, Mahir, wished everyone with Radhe Krishna and touched every ones feet. Vidya and Madhav were very emotional seeing Mahir a replica of Armaan, they hugged him and kissed him, Manisha and Manoj were equally happy meeting him, one by one Mahir meet everyone all were emotional meeting him, Rohit and Ruhi meet him and greeted Mahir. When Mahir came towards KP, KP was equally emotional seeing Mahir like others as Mahir said her Radhe Krishna and touched her feet, suddenly KP heard Pratham crying unintentionally without blessing Mahir went towards Pratham, Ruhi came forward to see if Pratham hasnt hurt himself, KP turned towards Mahir but till then Armaan already took Mahir from there. Abhira tried to stop him but Armaan just went away with Mahir.

Precap:

Ruhi: Abhir tum yaha...

Edited by maahi11 - 3 months ago
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Posted: 3 months ago
#37

Loved the update....

Armaan would.not want Mahir to go through what he had to go through as a kid......

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Posted: 3 months ago
#38

Oh god mahir track will be good to see armaan insecurity will be more with mahir

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Love the idea of exploring Armaan's past and childhood trauma itself through his natural fatherly istinct to protect his child from the same shyte he was subjected to as a small kid!!! I want, no I need him to be as direct and hurtful as possible w KV and his parents.

Possibly even w Rohit at some later in the story and more in-depth re: the dynamics of the latters' relationship (pre & post the Ruhi debacle, the different treatment each got from KV, Madhav,Vidya), the insecurities each one has abt the other (Armaan has natural talent to take over PF and is the one all women drool over, but in the familial context Rohit was much luckier: son of KV's chosen and fave bahu, the one she imagined would one day take over the family business)... all this wo Abhira or Ruhi's involvement: the former has always good intentions but so far in the eps we've seen, her ways have been silly and unaffective. Plus, the Sharma/Birla/Goenka siblings have their own share of raita to take care of.

So far, so good! Loving it!!! This is the 1st time that I find myself, at least that I remember, giving detailed comments on a FF!

Sorry for the extra-long review! Loved it and please, be back soon w another chapter!

Edited by Kalma007 - 3 months ago
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Posted: 3 months ago
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Awesome. Waiting for abhir and curious to know why armaan left poddar house. Please update the next soon

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