Fan Fiction - Our Papa Karthik Goenka Chapter 2 updated

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He exhaled deeply; just thinking about how much work was pending , before he could close for the day . The client meeting which was supposed to be over by 6 somehow extended till 7 30 which meant he had to spend a couple of hours extra to complete reviewing the days transactions.


It was already half past nine and he knew he had to be home in the next half an hour or she would eat his head off. He wanted to be at home as well given there was nothing that mattered in the whole wide world to him than her smile and her well being. He could hardly concentrate; decided to make a rush for home before things got out of control.


27 year old Kairav Goenka dashed out of his cabin and almost was almost running to the elevator when he stopped at the last cabin and was surprised to see it was still well lit.


"Vansh bhaiya ; how come you are still here, you were about to leave home right much earlier " he quipped walking into the cabin


"Bro the research reports of our new project came and I lost track of time " Vansh yawned and suddenly looked at Kairav alarmed


" why are you still here Kairav ; you know she ll need you right " he chided him, yet his voice failing to hide the affection he had for his younger brother


"Come let's go home, we are already late". The brothers walked down the hall . It was just another hectic day at Goenka Group. While Manish Goenka had retired fully from work once Kairav and Vansh joined: Karthik Goenka now co managed the group along with Samarth Goenka and was proud of the kids involvement in the business


Karthik Goenka continued to remain in love with the only lady in his life his Naira . Years before he was pressurized by his family to marry for the sake of the kids. But he had already promised to her from the bottom of his soul. That he shall remain a mother and father for his kids. However those were the days when he slipped into deep depression forgetting sleep and food. It was finally the wailing and crying of his kids that slapped him back to reality and he realized that now he was the prime responsibility of a young child and an infant


The family soon gave up realizing his resolve and his unshakeable love for his dead wife. From then his world revolved around his children who reciprocated his love fully.


He was no more the short tempered man he pnce was. Karthik , the father was now mature toned down and learnt to deal problems with a calm and cool head. Yes, there were times when he had broken down thinking of Naira ,but mostly he had changed into a strong level headed person.


He thought twice before jumping to conclusions; more importantly he thought of Naira before taking any call.She became his guiding light and his angel.





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She was frantic and refused to calm down. She needed him; he was one person who could give her courage; after her father of course. Akshu (Akshara Goenka) was the little princess of the family and had taken after her mother. The same sparkle in the eyes; the same wavy long hair and her love for dance.


However the eyes were replaced with fear. Fear of the final year exam of the MBBS exams which were to commence the next day. She was close to tears in fear. However she was one of the brightest of her batch. Yet she drove herself and the family crazy with her exam fear each semester


Karthik walked into daughter's room with a huge plate of Kachoris and a hot pot of tea. He hated to see his children in pain be it the smallest one.


"Break time beta" he announced as he sat on the couch.


"Papa " Akshu chided and sat next to him. She laid her head on his shoulder " am so scared" she whined.


"Beta you are not to be scared. Remember you are Shernis daughter . My chotu sherni. Here have some tea and Kachoris while we wait for him to come " Karthik said affectionately patting his daughter's forehead


Kairav dashed out of his car and made a run to his sisters room He stopped at the door momentarily admiring his father and sister.


"Rightly said I was picked from the railway tracks " he sulked as he walked into the room


"Bhaiyuuu" Akshu left everything else and went straight into the welcoming arms of her brother. Kairav caged her protectively in his arms. He loved his baby sister over and above his life. He vowed to keep up his last promise to his mother; to protect Akshu always till his last breath.


"And what is worrying my sister so much " he asked cupping her face lovingly


"Exams bhaiyu.. I am worried I'll not perform well. I am scared ill disappoint you and papa. I am scared I ll disappoint MUMMA" she said and bit her tongue ; as she saw Kairav s face droop.


"Akshu ill tell you one thing. Failing an exam is not going to make me or Papa or anyone love you less. We are absolutely proud of you for what you are and not because of what you achieve in academics. " he said wiping the tears forming in the corner of Akshus eyes eyes.


"You know right? Papa and I hate to see these eyes shed water. That too for the smallest things like these.. not good chotu" he told taking pinching her cheeks with a smile


"Kairav is right beta: you are our darling not for becoming a doctor but cos you are my daughter " Karthik added

He poured out 3 cups of tea and handed over one to each of his kids before taking one for himself. He stopped drinking his tea and then fed his kids kachoris from his hand lovingly. For the karthik who was nearly 55 years old : he saw the kids as still little children.


"Akshu , whatever you do your mother will be proud of you and you too Kairav. I am proud of you both" he said hugging them


"Akshu study for some more time if you want. Ill sit with you and continue working okay " Kairav said and plonked himself on the couch to work.


Kairav was working on all his pending work while Akshu continued to study. Kairav had made a transformation from the kid he was to a responsibility adult. He had taken over the anger nerve from his father; especially when it came to protecting his sister. He had resolved to himself to burn down anyone who even thought of causing the slightest harm to her.


A couple of hours later he saw that Akshu had fallen asleep on the bed. Smiling , he walked to her made her comfortable on the bed, covered her with a duvet , switched off the lights and walked to his own room.


Kairav's day had been made. His day began with his father and his sister and ended with them. Though they lived in a big joint family with grandparents, uncles and brothers whom he loved , it was his sister and father who were very close to his heart. They had a small world within themselves after the tragic day they lost Naira.


A lone tear slipped his eye as he thought of his mother who was now a star in the sky and watching over them. The stress of work took over the better of him as he slipped into a slumber.


On the other hand Karthik had just lied down on the bed. He turned to the empty side of the bed and to the photo on the side stand.


" I love you Jaan. Our akshu is going to become a doctor soon can you believe it ? Our little little girl is all grown up" he thought and closed his eyes.


One more day closer to coming to you Jaan" he smiled as he drifted to sleep to a night filled with her memories.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Last para is so heart touching.

Love bro sis moment. It reminds me naira naksh fight.

It's amazing.Is there any part coming next?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi..


Thanks.. I shall write more parts..I really wish they had shown stories on these lines in the show..

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Amazing update👏 loved it😃. Eagerly awaiting for next update 😒 Pls pm me when you update😊

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Amazing update👏 loved it😃. Eagerly awaiting for next update 😒 Pls pm me when you update😊


Thank you so much.. Will post the next update soon and will definitely pm you..

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Part 2


Akshu was up early the next morning to complete the preparation for her exam but one more person was awake much before her . He was busy in the kitchen making coffee for his daughter.


She had just come after refreshing and found her Papa ready with coffee for her.

"Good morning Papa " she greeted him and took out her notes to prepare which Karthik immediately snatched.


"First tummy then study " he said with a smile. Akshu poured out coffee for herself and Karthik. Karthik was about to reach out to add sugar when she tapped on his hand and shook it away


"No sugar for you Papa" its already on the border. She warned with her hands on her hips

"Come on Akshu ; nothing will happen with a small quantity .. please..." Karthik mimicked a small kid begging for chocolate


"No means no papa" she said and took it away " you have a medicine student at home and still want to flout rules.. Not allowed at all " she said firmly and gave him the cup to drink


"Fine whatever u say.. " he made a face and started sipping his coffee while Akshu had a cup of coffee in one hand and her notes in another..


" Come down later beta" he said as he left the room to get ready for the day.


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"Good morning dad" Kairav chirped as he and Vansh came home from jogging

"Good morning big bro" Vansh wished his elder brother whom he was super fond of. Karthik hugged Vansh, it was this kid that kept him alive during one of the darkest phases of his life.


The elders were seated at the table for breakfast. Suhasini dadi had left over to the other side of the world when Akshu was 4 years old and the other grand parents of Naira left soon after, each after living a fulfilled life.


"Good morning dadus dadis masi and chachu" Kairav wished each one of them with a smile on his face. The home of theirs felt home because of the family.


Akshu came walking down the stairs, her face pale once again. Kairav walked over to her and brought her to the table.


"Its my dream to become a doctor and serve the needy. I hope I make you all proud" she said faintly and pushed away her plate.


Karthik crossed his hands over his chest "Akshu you need to eat to write your exam well". His voice was soft yet firm. One look at her father.. Akshu knew he meant business and was not going to leave her without eating. She gobbled down her food in silence.


"I'll drop you Akshu " Kairav said patting her head.


Akshu looked over to her father waiting for him. Karthik walked over to her, kept his hand on her head and took her into a hug.


"All the best beta, I know you will give your best to it leave the rest to God" he said and kissed her forehead.


Akshu looked around for one final round of blessing from the elders and fixed her gaze on her mothers photo before leaving the house.


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The car ride was silent. Kairav stopped the car outside Akshus college. She did not get out of the car and was sitting silent


"Akshu " Kairav called out softly as she looked at him.


"All the best dear. Mummas blessings are with you. You are going to make a wonderful doctor. I don't have any doubt on it. Go and rock the paper , I'll pick you up back " he said


"Thanks a lot bhaiyu.. I don't know what I'd do without you " she said with a smile finally breaking on her face..


Kairav watched her till she walked into the campus. He opened his wallet to see the photo of his mother smiling at him " we miss you mumma.. please bless us always " he said and drove away to work

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Kairav was impatiently waiting for her. He tapped on the steering wheel, anxiously waiting for her and hoping she had done her exams well. He needed to get back to work after dropping Akshu at home. Karthik smiled sitting next to him in the car


"Kairav patience beta patience " he said with a grin

They saw Akshu running to them from the gate. Karthik immediately scanned her face for any worries. She wore the biggest smile dismissing all his worries


"Papa... Bhaiyuuu.. it went really well.. I am happy " she shouted as she got into the car..


Karthik gave her a hi fi "Awesome beta..just a couple of more months.. and you are going to be Dr. Akshara Goenka officially" he said his eyes welling up in pride..


"Papa there is a party tonight at pujas house.. we are celebrating the end of the exams..Can I go please " she asked with her puppy eyes


"Sure beta. Why not ? You have studied so hard and you deserve some celebration " Karthik said


Kairav screeched the car to a halt " are boys coming " he asked


"Yes Bhaiyuuu my whole class is coming" she replied


"You are not going " Kairav said abruptly


"But why Bhaiyu" Akshu whined


"You don't know.. these boys behave badly at parties.. I dont want them doing the same with you.. " Kairav fumed


"Bhaiyu please... I know to handle it and the boys in my class aren't like that.. we are going to be doctors.. we know our responsibilities "


"No means no" Kairav said his voice now dangerous


Akshu looked over to her father for help


"Kairav beta let her go.. am sure she ll be responsible and aware.. she knows the kind of people she is with.. we need to trust her " he said kindly


"Of course I trust her Papa.. its just that I dont trust those boys.. what if anyone tries to misbehave with her? " Kairav fumed


"Then ill tell you Bhaiyuuu.. won't you knock them out " akshu asked

"Knock them out?? Ill kill them " Kairav said furiously

"Enough.." Karthik said sharply , yet not angry

"I ve had enough of this violence talk. I ve told you before.. a bad temper and abrupt conclusions can ruin what we have. Unless it is to protect someone or self ill not bear either of you losing temper over small things.. Akshu you are going to the party but we ll pick you up by 11 pm alright? Kairav alright?"


"Okay.. but anything at all.. you should tell me " Kairav said


"Sure" Akshu grinned


Karthik closed his eyes and thought of her " See Jaan, I handled it without losing my temper.. Just like how you would have wanted. I try not to get angry.. but this son of yours.. he is one short tempered young angry man. Just like how I was.. " he smiled


Sneak Peak : Karthik Kairav heart to heart talk


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Part 2


Akshu was up early the next morning to complete the preparation for her exam but one more person was awake much before her . He was busy in the kitchen making coffee for his daughter.


She had just come after refreshing and found her Papa ready with coffee for her.

"Good morning Papa " she greeted him and took out her notes to prepare which Karthik immediately snatched.


"First tummy then study " he said with a smile. Akshu poured out coffee for herself and Karthik. Karthik was about to reach out to add sugar when she tapped on his hand and shook it away


"No sugar for you Papa" its already on the border. She warned with her hands on her hips

"Come on Akshu ; nothing will happen with a small quantity .. please..." Karthik mimicked a small kid begging for chocolate


"No means no papa" she said and took it away " you have a medicine student at home and still want to flout rules.. Not allowed at all " she said firmly and gave him the cup to drink


"Fine whatever u say.. " he made a face and started sipping his coffee while Akshu had a cup of coffee in one hand and her notes in another..


" Come down later beta" he said as he left the room to get ready for the day.


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"Good morning dad" Kairav chirped as he and Vansh came home from jogging

"Good morning big bro" Vansh wished his elder brother whom he was super fond of. Karthik hugged Vansh, it was this kid that kept him alive during one of the darkest phases of his life.


The elders were seated at the table for breakfast. Suhasini dadi had left over to the other side of the world when Akshu was 4 years old and the other grand parents of Naira left soon after, each after living a fulfilled life.


"Good morning dadus dadis masi and chachu" Kairav wished each one of them with a smile on his face. The home of theirs felt home because of the family.


Akshu came walking down the stairs, her face pale once again. Kairav walked over to her and brought her to the table.


"Its my dream to become a doctor and serve the needy. I hope I make you all proud" she said faintly and pushed away her plate.


Karthik crossed his hands over his chest "Akshu you need to eat to write your exam well". His voice was soft yet firm. One look at her father.. Akshu knew he meant business and was not going to leave her without eating. She gobbled down her food in silence.


"I'll drop you Akshu " Kairav said patting her head.


Akshu looked over to her father waiting for him. Karthik walked over to her, kept his hand on her head and took her into a hug.


"All the best beta, I know you will give your best to it leave the rest to God" he said and kissed her forehead.


Akshu looked around for one final round of blessing from the elders and fixed her gaze on her mothers photo before leaving the house.


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The car ride was silent. Kairav stopped the car outside Akshus college. She did not get out of the car and was sitting silent


"Akshu " Kairav called out softly as she looked at him.


"All the best dear. Mummas blessings are with you. You are going to make a wonderful doctor. I don't have any doubt on it. Go and rock the paper , I'll pick you up back " he said


"Thanks a lot bhaiyu.. I don't know what I'd do without you " she said with a smile finally breaking on her face..


Kairav watched her till she walked into the campus. He opened his wallet to see the photo of his mother smiling at him " we miss you mumma.. please bless us always " he said and drove away to work

.......

Kairav was impatiently waiting for her. He tapped on the steering wheel, anxiously waiting for her and hoping she had done her exams well. He needed to get back to work after dropping Akshu at home. Karthik smiled sitting next to him in the car


"Kairav patience beta patience " he said with a grin

They saw Akshu running to them from the gate. Karthik immediately scanned her face for any worries. She wore the biggest smile dismissing all his worries


"Papa... Bhaiyuuu.. it went really well.. I am happy " she shouted as she got into the car..


Karthik gave her a hi fi "Awesome beta..just a couple of more months.. and you are going to be Dr. Akshara Goenka officially" he said his eyes welling up in pride..


"Papa there is a party tonight at pujas house.. we are celebrating the end of the exams..Can I go please " she asked with her puppy eyes


"Sure beta. Why not ? You have studied so hard and you deserve some celebration " Karthik said


Kairav screeched the car to a halt " are boys coming " he asked


"Yes Bhaiyuuu my whole class is coming" she replied


"You are not going " Kairav said abruptly


"But why Bhaiyu" Akshu whined


"You don't know.. these boys behave badly at parties.. I dont want them doing the same with you.. " Kairav fumed


"Bhaiyu please... I know to handle it and the boys in my class aren't like that.. we are going to be doctors.. we know our responsibilities "


"No means no" Kairav said his voice now dangerous


Akshu looked over to her father for help


"Kairav beta let her go.. am sure she ll be responsible and aware.. she knows the kind of people she is with.. we need to trust her " he said kindly


"Of course I trust her Papa.. its just that I dont trust those boys.. what if anyone tries to misbehave with her? " Kairav fumed


"Then ill tell you Bhaiyuuu.. won't you knock them out " akshu asked

"Knock them out?? Ill kill them " Kairav said furiously

"Enough.." Karthik said sharply , yet not angry

"I ve had enough of this violence talk. I ve told you before.. a bad temper and abrupt conclusions can ruin what we have. Unless it is to protect someone or self ill not bear either of you losing temper over small things.. Akshu you are going to the party but we ll pick you up by 11 pm alright? Kairav alright?"


"Okay.. but anything at all.. you should tell me " Kairav said


"Sure" Akshu grinned


Karthik closed his eyes and thought of her " See Jaan, I handled it without losing my temper.. Just like how you would have wanted. I try not to get angry.. but this son of yours.. he is one short tempered young angry man. Just like how I was.. " he smiled


Sneak Peak : Karthik Kairav heart to heart talk


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nice update.I would like to suggest you if possible show papa beti and kairav's childhood moment in flashback.How kartik raised up them.
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for the pm

It is an amazing update loved it😇. Waiting for next chap. update soonish😒. Kartik-Kairav both mery favorites hain

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Yaar that's lovely and beautiful...I imagined all those scenes while reading .... I exactly wanted this after naira's death...like how kartik alone will take care of his children...how time to time naira guide her ...how when after waking up and before going to bed , he will remember naira as a beautiful memory with a mixed feeling of pain as well as pleasure in his eyes.... How kairav akshu kartik will become strong , they are emotionally dependent on each other....naira is still an integral part of them... Really yaar... that's really nice piece of writing

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