Amazing update
Loved how Chakor used to listen to Suraj and his tutors.
Fiery reunion meeting and even when he's angry, Suraj felt something ❤️.
Smart Chakor got the question right and embarrassed KN.
Intriguing precap, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Thanks Mai
Hope I am able to hold your interest on.....
Thanks Sritama for always encouraging me. Means a lot
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Amazing update Sumi di❤❤👏👏👏dis story is making me so nostalgic..reviving all d golden memories❤❤so despite being in d same house Sukor stayed separated from each other.. Suraj turing rude,arrogant..Chakor facing so many hardships..her rebel nature, desire to study..her face off with KN nd d way she stopped Suraj😍❤what a 🔥🔥first meeting it was..Suraj feeling d tender touch after so long❤❤d way Chakor stunned KN in front of the media n express her desire to study..loved it..precap too was so engrossing..eagerly waiting to see how d story unfolds❤❤
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PART III
DIRTY ………………..ATTITUDE ……….. ARROGANCE……………
The Dirty Game…. Will pink bring the green?
She stood up and said hamey school jana chaahiyeee! All were stumped…. Kya??
She smiled at KN with her innocent smile……haan Maalik hame padna hai….
He was shocked but tried to cover it…
Suraj turned and looked at her….Surprised….so papa will make her study after all it’s a promise made. A promise made has to be fulfilled.
The media present were asking him .. KNji please tell us will you give education to this girl from your village.
The event management guy was packing his things. He had come along with the media guy Kaushal. There were others present but they had come along with their group while Kaushal was alone with his camera. They both planned to travel back together. I will be back in some time said Kaushal as he was filming the village.
The wicked had no alternative but to nod yes… haan I will take care.. with venom in his eyes. He did not want any from the village to study to know about the outside world. But he could not do so in front of the media
Not knowing the reality the little girl thought she will be going to the school. She was happily walking to her shed when she saw Kaushal, the media guy standing beside the big window and filming something. She was fascinated to see the camera so she went running towards him while he was drawn inside by Raam Singh and another guy… she ran towards the window fast to see something which froze her.
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Keshav was calling Kaushal but his phone was not reachable. May be he is getting more media coverage. Chalo let me go…. He walked to the bus stop and boarded the bus to Jaipur.
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KN was fuming at Raam Singh stating how can that little urchin talk like that. That too in front of the whole media. She is a bandhua . I am the Maalik and I am a famous politician. I thwart those who try to rise against me. I have killed so many without any trace. Last week too I killed that Sharad as he threatened that he will inform the Import and Export officer that I use my influence and power to ensure our articrafts goes to overseas market and the lottery method is used. He said he had evidences. Evidence!!!!…. I just made him not breathe without a trace…. Thud they heard a noise when they saw someone capturing their talks… before he could realise he was pulled into by Raam Singh.
KN was ferocious…. Itni himmat he shouted ..
Hum patrakaar hai. That girl is a bonded labour??? Slavery ???? You are a murderer?? You have killed too. You don’t know the power of media he said bold…. But poor guy could not withstand the merciless beatings of them.. .. I will go to police he said…he tried to run when he threw something towards the shed quickly before they could catch him. They chased him not long when Raam singh held him and broke his camera and KN stabbed him… Police???….. there is no police here??? this is my kingdom….. the guy shivered and fell down dead. Go bury him at the remote jungle he said.
She held her mouth….saw the man shiver while being stabbed as his mouth was closed… Maalikkkk she slowly told with her eyes wide open… she pushed something…. Chakor was witnessing it when she was running towards the window. They quickly turned to see her…Pakad us chori ko KN shouted.. Raam singh ran behind her with another goon.
She ran ran….. ran through the small lanes…. her pace was fast…. she ran into the bus which started from the small village Amarpura of Rajasthan towards Jaipur…. She hid under the seat and kept quiet when the goons came inside searching…. The event management guy Keshav was in the bus. He saw her but kept quiet as she was hiding. Something wrong he felt… but seeing the goons he kept quiet. The bus started to Jaipur….
It was dawn when the bus reached Jaipur and stopped. She got down and walked down the big road. She saw a big group of young girls in their track suits warming up… she went towards them.. There were people with health drink and biscuits.. She went to them and as it was crowded they gave her the same but told her " go change before you start and register yourself" …. She had that energy drink when she saw the others start running……
Keshav who was sleeping in the bus, got up only to find Chakor missing. Where is the girl he asked to himself......
She ran towards them and along with them….. bare foot…… she started sprinting along with the girls…
She ran ran it was a long stretch and one was looking at her from his bike which was following the girls..
She is pacing fine….. but shabby….. no shoes…….. her hands posture is perfect ……… she is razing the wind……………….. she ran not knowing anything…………..
Who is this girl??? She has no number on her???? Nobody knew her.
She ran ran when she realized she was hitting and running past a velvet ribbon…………… the man on the bike sped ahead of her and stopped infront….
Hey bachi…… ruko ruko…… you have won …… you have won…. But who are you??? Which school you are from or which club…..what is your name…..Number??
Won??? She was confused…. What have I won….. She looked upto the man who was in his early thirties, well groomed… smiling at her, patting her shoulders…. Gave her the energy drink
Congratulations you have won the 10 Km junior Marathon…..but whats your age?
Marathon???? What is marathon….. she was just not able to understand anything… by that time Keshav was coming in an auto when he saw Chakor and quickly stopped and ran to her… she was looking behind to see if anyone was following her.
Dhrona he called the man….Hi Keshav , thu… bhai when did you come you had gone to Amarpura na.
I know this girl Keshav said….Why did you hide in the bus? What happened? the goons are from your village na... He asked. She was scared and said slowly they were chasing me.
I saw them killing. WHAT Both shouted in unison…. Come on lets go home they took her to their home. Not knowing what’s the path that her destiny was taking her to she went with them….
Will the Pink city turn her life into green!!???
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Suraj was perplexed…. He ran to the shed… she was not there….She is bright indeed but how dare she hold me… she is a bandhuva….
He saw Raam Singh coming back with the other goon to KN..
Raam singh where is she he asked. Don’t know Chota maalik…. Maalik is going to be angry… she is not to be found any where.
Don’t know where she escaped to…
KN was red in anger…. He just beat Raam Singh and shoutedbring her back at any cost.
Suraj said to himself... she escaped??? yes bring her…. In his mind MINE.
How can she run away!!! He was angry….. he broke everything in his room.
The thought that she held his hand and spoke with firmness was going to his brain and was instigating his anger.
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She was young adolescent walked in into the new high school…………..
He was indeed handsome but with attitude
That’s the guy……. They pointed towards him…………..
She came in to do her 10th exam through the school……………….
….Dont copy Suraj said the invigilator…..
He kept the gun on the invigilators chest and said If I don’t pass None will…………………
He was there………………………. She applied the black color on him………………….
He grabbed her……………….. what are you doing he shouted……………………. Chup she said ekdam chup…………..
Kill him for I need the position, power, I can win
Whistle whistle sumi👌👌👌👌 dhamaka update
Mazaa aa gaya.... total entertainer... indeed thrilling and as usual can't wait for the next 🙈🙈
How they gonna meet is making me anxious😍😍 and impatient too😜
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Whistle whistle sumi👌👌👌👌 dhamaka update
Mazaa aa gaya.... total entertainer... indeed thrilling and as usual can't wait for the next 🙈🙈
How they gonna meet is making me anxious😍😍 and impatient too😜
Niki😘😘🤗🤗🤗 that's pretty fast
Taank u taank i🤗
😜😜😜 Be anxious till...... 😜 😜 😜
Thanks Sritama 😍 😍 😍
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An out n out blockbuster Sumi di👏👏👏👌👌perfect blend of high voltage drama, suspense n thrill❤brutal KN,Chakor witnessing d heinous murder..her world turning upside down..her running..d way she won that race ..it was so emotional n awe inspiring❤❤ fuming Suraj..his anger nd frustration..nd that mine in his mind❤no wonder that Chakor's throught,her escape news has created such a deep impact in his heart n mind..eagerly waiting for Sukor's first meet ..can't wait to see d sparks fly🔥🔥super exited for d next part..
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Thanks Sonia so much 😊 😊
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Just read Part 1 and Part 2
Part 1:
Nice update with good start 👌👌👌 It,s reminded me of Udaan days waiting for story unfold & how they both feel feelings for each other surely it will be interesting to read this story
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Once again super duper update 👏👏👏 Arrogant Suraj Rajvanshi,Clever Chakor & Evil Kn everything reminded me of Udaan & more missing them and u amazed us with ur stories it,s always a pleasure to read ur stories thanks a lot for writing us 😘😘😘
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Action packed👏
Chakor won the marathon at the first attempt 👏
Did Kaushal throw the camera film?
Eagerly waiting for next.
Action packed👏
Chakor won the marathon at the first attempt 👏
Did Kaushal throw the camera film?
Eagerly waiting for next.
Thanks so much Mai..
Kaushal 😀😀
Will update soon...
Thanks Smita for the lovely words
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Part 3:
Another superb, mind-blowing update Sumi 👌👌. It's good to know that though in order to get his father's attention, Suraj had made himself arrogant & rude like his father but any deception has not yet taken over his mind which I liked 👍👍& he was not yet aware of his Father's dirty game, that's why he thought that his father would fulfill his promise to let Chakor study & promise made has to be fulfilled👌👌. It has cleared that KN is associated with many antisocial, illegal & immoral acts & it's normal to become angry & furious over hearing Chakor's desire to study. The tragic end of Kaushal's life 😔 😢 , but he cleverly threw something in the shed, may be it was some evidence against KN 👍, Chakor was the sole witness to the brutal murder, her fleeing from the goons to save herself & coincidentally taking part in marathon & won👍👏👏 , her destiny had brought her to her cockshot, the thrill was intact throughout the part 👍Sumi .On the contrary her escape & the news of her not being found made Suraj out of control as he thought he had possession over Chakor & the word "Mine" was just stuck in his heart & mind. All in all a super exciting update 👌👌. So curious to know how will the story proceed & how they will meet as it will definitely create some sparkles 🔥🔥 💕💕. You have increase my eagerness, can't wait for the next update. Thank you.
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