He may have been a bit edgy but he was kind enough to get a child on his way to a better life. There are not many like him.
He may have been a bit edgy but he was kind enough to get a child on his way to a better life. There are not many like him.
shot 2
He doesn't like rains the way she does. He does have a dry sense of humor though.
He loves his camping and outdoors, but no tea for him.
She paints on canvas and his words are his style of poetry. Is sse the muse or he is?
Dhiraj is not just an abuser, he is obsessed and evil. He could not tolerate her leaving so he is out to get revenge. He doesn't care who he hurts in the process.
shot 3
For someone who has only known her for a few hours, he is quite tuned in to who she is. Way more than that scoundrel Dhiraj.
shot 4
Beautiful. They met in the middle of thunder and rain. That will always feature in their story now.
Wow so many updates. Loving it. Congrts on another new story. ☺️ Thanks for pm
It's beautiful....looks like her Amma stood by her in her struggle with dhiraj the monster..
Restraining orders mostly work and it's better to be on guard too ..
For me i came back to the city where i could lose myself easily, has a great support system and decent cops some whom I knew
I am glad she pushed herself and was happy and. Ow she has a second chance at life
Hi Iptida
Congrats on the SS!
apologies for the delay
Shot 1
Amazing update.... wonderfully written
liked that Maan cannot help but be mesmerised by Geet
well he cares of nothing at that moment than Geet
loved that she was managed to capture his heart
Past well incorporated
feeling for Geet
disgusting Dhiraj
upset that he accused and verbally abused Geet
her reaction was justified
good that she spoke up
angry that he slapped Geet
Geet should not have ignored the red flags
glad that she saw Dhiraj's reality
pleased that she ended everything
Present
Geet was surprised seeing the MSK!
Past
that's how they meet for the first time
of cos she drooled on him
at least she managed to speak to him
admire that Maan wanted to get the little boy educated
Geet's thoughts well portrayed
as expected Maan was impatient
oh Maaneet argued
can understand Maan's comments
great that Maan was impressed with Geet
not surprised that the boy was admitted to the school
Shot 2
Majestic update... greatly written
liked Maan's concern for Geet
well she realised that she damaged his shirt
Maan was clearly angry
at least she apologised
oh it started to rain
its definitely not Maan's day
of cos he does not like the rain
great that he assured her
pleased that he helped Geet
so Maan hates tea
nice that he is taking time off to relax
enjoyed their convo
glad that they got to know about each other
both are artistic
loved that she felt safe with him
wow she painted Maan
she was clearly astounded
her reaction was antipcated
his curiosity regarding her painting was justified
as expected she did not want him to see it
aww he called her Ms Cloudy
oh no Dhiraj was there
not surprised that he accused Geet
wonderful that Geet warned him
Gosh Dhiraj had a gun and wanted to shoot Maan
Geet clearly went to save Maan
Shot 3
Fabulous update.... superbly written
Thank God Maan and Geet were safe
Geet's concern for Maan was reasonable
great that Maan tried to distract Dhiraj
admire how Maan handled the situation
so they ran from there
liked Maan's protectiveness for Geet
well Maan assured Geet
glad that they managed to hide
Maan's question was justified
at least Geet opened up to Maan
Maan had a valid point that she may have not experienced true love
loved his explanation of love
pleased that he assured, consoled and motivated her
she indeed feels bad for ruining his weekend
good that he reassured her
admire what Maan is doing for Ajay
he does seem to know about Geet
he was correct that she should get a restraining order
her questions were understandable
nice that he was direct with her
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