Coffee X Thunder ☕⚡* Maaneet Short Story * ✅ COMPLETED @ Page 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 1 months ago
#11

Originally posted by: tellyme

Ipti,


I was about to post SW and saw your notification...


I know i am delayed reading in so many places... please have patience with me. I am also delayed in typing and running late schedule in posting too. Keep tagging me, I will read them one by one and place my views. 

For now want to catch up with some writing speed.


OS, SS, FF... write whatever you want, i am there to read them all and also always eager for your lovely reviews on mine.smiley36smiley2


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Hi Anu, smiley31


Can understand as my state is worse than this so don't worry. Take your time. I am always late in comments too.

I am on reader's block, a bad one. And I would be a bit inactive after updating Loveholic/MIL. So thought of bulk updating as not getting time.

Bold red - Not in my stories, I think you are up to date. smiley20 I myself haven't been able to update much as you know. The last one MFC, will take time as its a big update.

Green - Sure and thank you.smiley27


Shall be waiting for SW smiley42 And The Burnt. 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#12

Wow.. such a beautifully written story.. Coffee and thunder.. Rains and dates over coffee have always been romanticised.. and your story encompasses both..


It also shows a feminine strength to fight for yourself n stand for what’s right!!


Beautifully and artistically worded.. Enjoyed reading it!! ❤️

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Posted: 1 months ago
#13

Shot 1 


Such a Curious and Amazing Start


Firstly it seems like Geet's past was horrible 

and she was been tortured by someone whom should have loved and respected her

but then also meeting Maan besides his arrogance he certainly has a heart of gold 

giving his time to a child that lives on the street 

though both Maan and Geet were annoyed with each other on first meeting 

but I enjoyed their dynamics 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#14

Shot 2 


Mesmerizing Update 


Actually both Maan and Geet learning more about each other 

and of course she had to spill his coffee and mess his shirt with her 

pained hands , but I loved that imperfection of hers 

though Maan is arrogant he does tell Geet about himself , how he used to come

to the mountains with his grandfather and father as a little boy 

now that for me means Maan is slowly trusting Geet to talk about himself 

oh hell no !!! did  this  Dhiraj have to find Geet and again I see Maan been protective 

yet he didn't get much of a chance as Geet pushed him away to take the bullet 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#15

So romantic and best part is I could feel rain, thunder and the soothing breeze throughout the story!!

I don’t want to go to the details of the story because somehow it felt like I just watched a beautiful movie, so perfect; great work 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#16

Shot 3 


Rather Adventurous and Beautiful 


I love the fact that both Maan and Geet were saved from Dhiraj 

and now both escaped , OfCourse because of Maan's wittiness 

but again, both Maan and Geet seem to form a friendship of understanding and respect.

while both also learning a bit more about the other 

 

 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#17

emotional

maan n geet are real soulmate

both respect each other

maan help geet to come out of her pain given by dhiraj

both find solace in each other

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Posted: 1 months ago
#18

Maan and Geet are meant to be together. They find it in rain. So romantic story and beautiful writing.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#19

She was with an abuser. She may have failed to see the signs, but at least she did finally. Glad she chose to leave him. She is much better off.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#20

She is an artist. The canvas has become her healer. Those strokes of paint her medicine. The thunder and rain her solace.