Echoes of Trust * Maaneet One Shot ✅ COMPLETED * PAGE 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 2 months ago

Beautiful. Maan was not sure about his love for Geet until he saw Sameera again. He did not want to betray Geet but he needed his closure. He got it. He did not hold back from telling Geet that he was over Sameera and she is the one for him now.

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Posted: 2 months ago

Would have loved to see a dose of exorcism performed by Geet on Sameera. That would have been fun.

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Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

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Marvelous OS.... Beautifully written

Maan was clearly startled seeing his ex gf Sameera

oh Sameera left Maan for another man

Maan was indeed heart broken

upset with Kabir's suggestion

Maan's anger hearing what he did was justified

oh no Sameera is there

however Maan thought about his wife Geet

great that he berated Kabir

sad that Maan does not love Geet

hearing this Maan was upset

dismayed that Maan was ready to meet Sameera

glad that Geet's smiling face came in front of him

liked that he smiled remembering Geet

now Maan realised how selfish he has been in their marriage

good that he acknowledged Geet's efforts 

pleased that Maan denied to meet Sameera

Gosh Sameera came to meet Maan while Geet was at home

Geet is such a bubbly person

Maan's guilt was justified

nice that Maan confronted Sameera

so she now wants Maan back

nice that Maan can see through Sameera

Maan's question was anticipated

she is so disgusting

hate Sameera! 

pleased how Maan handled the situation

of cos Geet came running to her Maan

her concern for Maan was understandable

Sameera was shocked seeing Maan and Geet's closeness

happy that Maan told Sameera to leave

loved Maan hugging Geet

she was naturally shocked yet reciprocated

nice that Geet was honest with Maan that he ex fiancé called her

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

his question to Geet was reasonable

but she assured Maan that she loves him 

at least Maan knows that he had not given Geet anything

finally Maan realised he loves Geet and told her

she was really happy

adore Maan teasing Geet

not surprised that Geet trusts Maan

hmm Geet knew that Sameera was there

Maan was amazed hearing this

alas Geet fully trusts Maan

he slowly and steadily fell in love with Geet

heart felt confession

enjoyed Maaneet's banter

amazing moments!! 


perfect end..... 


hoping for another OS! smiley42

Hi, love, Thanks a lot for reading.

Bold Green - He loves her but everyone perceives he doesn't. This is why there is a question mark when his friends implied so.

Red - Indeed she is. Geet is our unique classic bubbly Geet here.

Thank you for your amazing comments as usual. I am really glad you liked the OS.

Ah yes, I have been posting a lot of OS recently & more to come. Stay tuned. smiley31


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Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by: chloebear

Geet truly made place for herself in Maan heart, very selfless and pure love it is happpy Maan realized it too, such a sweet sute story

Yeah, realization though sooner the better, yet better late than never!
I am glad you find the story sweet and cute. Thanks for reading.🌸💜



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Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by: Annupreet

Beautiful. Maan realised his love for geet after sameeras entry. Geet is cute and faithful. Sameera is selfish and want to enter in maans life. 

Hi Annupreet, I am glad you find it beautiful. Thanks for reading. 🥰💜 I miss your views on my other stories.


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Posted: 1 months ago

Very well written. Loved it. How intensely she love him. She had full trust in him.