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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 4

Lovely update....majestically written 

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Shocking to see Naina's violent behavior towards Preeti. Nice to see Sameer replacing the acid with water so it wouldn't harm Preeti. It seems that Sameer developed a soft corner towards Naina after hearing her story from Anand and Naina's parents. Sameer comforting Naina with soothing words was nice. Nice to see the change of her behavior when she slapped Raunak when he talked bad about Sameer's group.

Edited by kavitha_r - 6 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 4


Amazingly Awesome Update 

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Thank you Kavitha,taahir,khwaishfan,Goldie Abrol.



Humne chaha tumhe pagalon ki tarah..I loved you dottily..Part 5

 

Naina went to see Glittering stars.It made them angry.

 

Pandit:How dare you come to see us?

 

Swati:Are you not fed up of seeing us in the classroom?

 

NAINA:I know that you all are angry with Sameer for loving Glittering stars’ rival.But now I am not your rival.Sameer’s friends are not my enemies.

 

Preeti:Stop lying.We know that it’s your trick.You are still planning something against us.

 

So you snatched Sameer from us.

 

Naina stared at Preeti:Preeti,why are you angry with Sameer for loving me?Sameer  realized that I loved him unconditionally.He understood my importance and accepted me.

 

Preeti lost her control:Don’t talk to me like this Naina.Get out.

 

Swati:Get out.

 

Naina pushed her out of the room.

 

Swati:Because of you only we lost our friend.

 

Swati closed the door.Naina was burning with anger.Raunak laughed seeing it.

He ridiculed her.

 

RAUNAK:You slapped me for Glittering stars.Now they ill treated you.How funny!

 

Naina stared at Raunak and went near Sameer who was shedding tears.

 

Naina held Sameer's hand and said::Sameer,don’t be sad.Just forget them.If they don’t want you just ignore them.

 

Sameer :No Naina.No.For me my friends are more important.I want them back.I can't tolerate this separation anymore.

 

Naina was angry and sad at the same time.

 Naina:But they don't want you.Why don't you understand?

Sameer:That's what you think.But actually it's not like that.If we have an open conversation,they will forget all their anger towards me.That's how our friendship is.

Naina:Are you sure?

Sameer:Yes Naina.I need to talk to them now.I am going.

Sameer rushed to Glittering stars’ meeting room.They were shocked to see him.

 

Sameer:How dare you enter this room?This room is only for Glittering stars.

 

Sameer was hurt.

 

SAMEER:Please listen to me once.

 

Manoj:We don’t want to hear anything.

 

SAMEER:You all have to know the truth.Like you all think I don’t love Naina.I am just pretending to be in love with her.I swear.

 

They were shocked.

 

Sameer:What are you saying?

 

Preeti:Are you faking love to defeat her?Wow!

 

All the Glittering stars were happy.

 

SAMEER:Not to defeat  her,but to save her life..to wipe her parents’ tears by helping them.

 

PANDIT:What?

 

Sameer told them everything.They were shocked.

 

Manoj:Unbelievable.

 

SAMEER:Now tell me.Did I commit any mistake?Glittering stars have always helped others.Right?

 

Pandit hugged him.

 

Pandit:Sorry Sameer.No words can heal your wound.I hurt you that much.I even restricted our friends from talking to you.I don’t deserve pardon for doubting my best friend.I did'nt even think once that Sameer can't do this without any strong reason.But please forgive me.

The other Glittering stars:Not only Pandit..we also misunderstood you.Please forgive us yaar.

Sameer was in tears:Why are you guys talking  like this?We all are friends na?Friends fight and reconcile.

Sameer hugged all of them.

 

All Glittering stars were in tears.They got their friend back.It was the most emotional moment for them.

 

Naina came.She was surprised to see them together.

 

Preeta looked at Naina and said :Now onwards you are our friend Naina.

 

Naina was very excited:Really?

Swati:Yes.We are friends now Naina.

Naina:I am so happy.

Swati and Preeti hugged her.

Priya who passed by saw it with a smile.She clapped her  hands.
Priya:So finally like everyone wished, Glittering stars united and formed new friendships too.Glittering stars can even make the rivals their friends.

They smiled.

Sameer:Yes Ma'am.We will be always together and we will never get separated.


They all stood close to each other.
Priya smiled:So nice to see you all together like this.Be always together like this.God bless you all.


They said:Thank you Ma'am.


Naina looked at Sameer  and said:Sameer..I have a wish.

Sameer:What's your wish?


Naina:Will you fulfill my wish?
Sameer:Sure.
She smiled.
Naina:I want to do bike riding.I mean we both in the same bike.I will take a bike for rent.
Sameer:But why?
Naina became shy:Simply..for fun.
Sameer:If I wear the school uniform and ride,police will catch me.So I will wear a colour dress.

Naina:Ok.

 

 

Sameer and Naina were in casual clothes.Naina sat behind Sameer  on the bike.He rode the bike.
They enjoyed the ride very much.

 

 

Sameer,Pandit and Manoj were sitting together tired after the basket ball practice.

 

PANDIT:Valentine’s day is coming up.We should definitely rock.

 

Manoj:Sure.Sameer….who was your first love?

 

Suddenly Naina’s face came into his mind.He thought:My God!Naina….?

 

Sameer:Yet to experience love.What about you Pandit?

 

PANDIT:When I was in grade 2,I fell in love with my class teacher.She was hot.

 

Everybody started laughing.

 

PANDIT was shy.

 

PANDIT:Manoj…your first love?

 

Manoj smiled thinking of Swati.He thought:I can’t reveal it now.They will tease me.

 

PANDIT:I know that a book worm like you would not have got time to fall in love.Sameer…your first love?

 

Sameer’s face became dull.

 

Sameer was not interested to discuss about it.

 

Pandit:Sameer is thinking more about Naina.He cares for Naina.In fact he only thinks of Naina’s happiness and health.He even wrote assignment for Naina to save her from punishment.Naina is Sameer’s first love.

Sameer looked at Pandit unbelievably.

Sameer:What are you saying Pandit?Are you out of your senses?

Pandit smiled:Guess you are not in your senses,not me.You are always thinking of Naina's pain..whether she will get hurt by others.If this not love,then what is it?

Sameer was confused.

Manoj:Naina changed her personality completely for you.No one can love you more than her.So you should not cheat on her.This love drama which you are doing with her is dangerous Sameer.

Sameer became emotional.

He thought:Oh God…what should I do?


Edited by jasminerahul - 6 months ago
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Posted: 6 months ago
#25

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Part 5

Superb update... excellently written

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Posted: 6 months ago
#27

Part 5


Fabulous and so Interesting Update

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Posted: 6 months ago
#28

In the second line of this part, you wrote that Sameer asking Naiga hiw dare you come here. Is it Sameer or Pundit? In another line you mentioned Naina saying stop lying. I think it needs a slight change.


Samaina conversation after the group humiliation was emotional. Nice to see Sameer reconciling with the group and the the group accepting Naina as a friend. Their first love discussion on Valentine Day was funny. Manoj telling Sameer that his love drama for Naina will affect her health was sensible. Looks like Sameer loves Naina, but he didn't realize it. Hope Naina gets well.

Edited by kavitha_r - 6 months ago
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Posted: 6 months ago
#29

Priya got fooled on her first day but Raunak warned her about it.

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Posted: 6 months ago
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The new teacher has made quite an impression on her first day.