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Posted: 11 months ago
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Part 8

Terrific update.... splendidly written

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Meera will try to move on in life. Hopefully she find someone who will bring her happiness again.

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Posted: 11 months ago
#73

Sumeet fixed the broken piece and Ram apologized. That should bring things back to where they were.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Angad is finding ways to keep Pihu occupied and away from drinks.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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How do Raghav and Naina know one another?

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Part 8


Fabulous Update


Sumeet fixes the masterpiece and again presents it

to Namita's father

finally all is again good at Sumeet's end

while even Meera now wants to leave and has made amends with Surmmet

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Thank you Kavitha,Coderlady,taahir,khwaishfan,Goldie Abrol.




Manmarziyaan(The Heart's Wish) Part 9

Dedicated to Kavitha who gave a jodi name to Sumeet-Namita-NaMeet.







A new cook is appointed by Prachi.

As Prachi said,she prepared Raghav's favourite food items.

When Raghav reached home,Prachi told him:Raghav...we got a new cook.She is not a normal maid.She is a chef.

Raghav was surprised:Chef?But why a chef?

Prachi:Because I wanted a special cook for you.So that she can make the world's best food for you and make you happy.

Raghav:You are really sweet Prachi.You think so much of my happiness.

Prachi smiled.

Prachi:Yes..I love you and I want you to be always happy.

He smiled.

Prachi:Naina...

Naina came out of the room.

Raghav was shocked to see her.

Raghav:You?

Naina was also surprised to see him.

Raghav:Naina...how come you are here?

Prachi was stunned.

Prachi:You both know each other?

Raghav:Ya.Naina was my friend in school.

Prachi was surprised.

Raghav:You are a chef in a hotel.You may be earning quite well.Then why did you agree to come here and cook?

Naina:Because when Prachi Ma'am came to our hotel for a chef I realised that it was for you.So to surprise you I came here as a cook.

Raghav:That's really a surprise Naina.You surprised me and now onwards no need of coming here.

Naina:Why?Are you sure that my food would be bad?

Raghav:Not because of that.Why should you cook here like a maid?

Naina:No Raghav.Nothing like that.I will be happy to cook for my friend.

Raghav smiled.

Raghav:That's so sweet of you.But how will you manage both your job and my food?

Naina:I will come here early morning and do cooking.Then I will go to the hotel.

Raghav:Won't it be too hectic for you?

Naina:That's ok.But give me good salary.Sorry...I need financial stability.Money is a necessity for me.

Raghav:It's ok.You deserve salary for your hardwork.

Naina:But I promise that while cooking for you,I will be cooking as your good friend with full sincerity.

Raghav:I know that Naina.

She smiled.

Raghav told Prachi:Prachi...Naina is my friend.So now onwards she won't be a normal cook for you,but your friend also.

Prachi smiled:Sure.So Naina...call me Prachi,not Ma'am.

Naina:Sure.I am your friend also.So I will be making your favourite food also.You can give me your list.

Prachi:Ya..Raghav...come to the dining room and taste Naina's food.I already had food.



Raghav:Yes.I will have it now.

Raghav started eating food.

Raghav:This is yummy.It's really the best.

Naina smiled happily.




Sumeet was on call with his mother Parvati.

Parvati:I really feel lonely without you.I had expected it before.I allowed you to stay away from me only because you love Namita deeply.

Sumeet smiled.

Sumeet:I also miss you mom.I will come back soon Mom.Very soon I will achieve my goal.

Parvati smiled.


Sumeet told Namita:My mom misses me.I told her that very soon I will return to her by winning your father's heart and fixing our relationship.

Namita smiled.

Namita:I am always visiting you secretly.But I want you to get the freedom to come to my house to see me with full rights.

Sumeet:Very soon your father will give me the right to come to your house to see you.

She smiled.



Everyday after having breakfast Raghav started praising Naina.Prachi started feeling jealous.

Prachi thought:Why I am feeling jealous of Naina?



Ram and Priya were sitting together.

Priya:Sumeet is such a nice boy.

Ram:Yes.He is well mannered.Still I find him mysterious.Something is wrong with him.

Priya:What do you mean Mr.Kapoor?

Ram:He said that he came here for shooting a documentary.But he seems to be jobless.He just roams around our house.I find it fishy.We have to enquire about his background.

Priya became dull.




Prachi visited the Kapoor house.

Priya was cooking in the kitchen.

(Thank you Salley for the edit).

Prachi went near her and asked her:Mumma...there are so many maids in this house.Then why are you cooking?

Priya:Mostly maids cook here.But I love making special dishes for your dad.I may not be as good as the maids in cooking.But when I prepare food with love for your dad he has a special happiness on his face.

Prachi was amazed.

Priya:I did not know cooking at all when I married your dad.But that time your father was'nt that rich and he could'nt afford a maid.So I decided to cook for him.Because he came back home tired at night and I used to reach back home in the evening.So I had time.I was a horrible cook.But without any complaint he used to eat it.That was his love.

Prachi smiled.

Prachi thought:I should also cook for Raghav.He will be very happy.

Prachi cooked food and served it to Raghav for dinner.

He tasted it and said:Why the food tastes different?This is not cooked by Naina.Right?

Prachi:You are right.This is not cooked by Naina.This is cooked by me.

Raghav could not believe it.

Raghav:What?You cooked it?I just can't believe it.

Prachi smiled.

He started eating it happily.

Prachi:How is it?

Raghav:It's very tasty.

Prachi:Tell me which food is tastier?The food cooked by Naina or me?

Raghav became dull.He was silent.

Prachi got disappointed by his cold reaction.

Prachi:You find Naina's food more tastier.Right?What kind of a husband are you?I cooked with so much of effort.But you prefer Naina's food.Then go to the kitchen and have Naina's food.I have kept her food there.

Raghav was shocked by Prachi's anger.

Raghav:Prachi...calm down.

Prachi:No...I can't.Because you value your friend more than your wife.

Raghav:Please stop it Prachi.Naina is an experienced cook.She is a chef.But you cooked for the first time.So naturally she may be the better cook.But I value your food more.Because you cooked it with effort just for me.I like Naina very much.But I love you.You are my love.How could you think that I value Naina more than you?

Prachi felt guilty and upset.

Raghav:I will prove it by eating your food.

Raghav ate the food fast.He finished the whole food which was saved by Prachi.Prachi felt happy seeing him finish the food.

Raghav got up from the chair and went to his room.

Prachi started eating the food she cooked.

She became dull.

Prachi:Really Naina is the better cook.My food tastes average.Still Raghav did'nt complain.But I over reacted.

She became sad.





Raghav was lying on the bed.Prachi went near him.

Prachi:I am sorry Raghav.I don't know why I behaved like that.

Prachi thought:I can't tell Raghav that I feel jealous of Naina.

Prachi:You were trying to encourage me...eating my non tasty food for me.But I misunderstood you.I am really sorry.

Raghav:Who told you that your food was not tasty?It was tasty because you made it.

She looked at him deeply.

Prachi:You are too lovely Raghav.I really love you.

She pecked his cheek.

Raghav:I love you too Prachi.

He embraced her romantically.





Angad got irritated seeing Pihu drinking at the night party.

Angad:Enough of drinking Pihu.

Angad grabbed her hand and took her to their room.

Angad:Just stay in the room.

Pihu:You are angry with me?

Angad:How can I not be angry with you?That's how you behave.

Pihu smiled:I know how to melt your anger.

Angad:You can't.

Pihu:I can.

Angad:No.

Pihu:Yes.

Suddenly Pihu shut his mouth with her lips.He was stunned.

Yoon to solah saavan aaye gaye
Gaur nahi kiya humne
Bheega man ka aangan is martaba
Kya jaane kya kiya tumne

She removed her lips from him.He smiled due to the surprise while she blushed.


Dil mein jaage, ishq waali manmarziyan, manmarziyan..
Zid ki maari (yoon to solah) bhooli bhaali (saavan)
Mannmarziyan (aaye gaye), mannmarziyan

Angad:That means you also love me like I love you?

Abb talak se kuchh alag si manmarziyan.. Mann marziyaan..
Hum zameen pe (bheega man ka)
To falak se (aangan)
Manmarziyan (iss martaba) man marziyaan

Pihu blushed:How can I not love a husband who is so caring?I love you Angad.

Sikkon jaise hai uchhaali mann marziyan
Manmarziyaan
Zid ki maare (yoon to solah) bhooli bhaali (saavan)
Manmarziyaan, manmarziyaan (aaye gaye)

They embraced each other romantically.


Beadab si, par gazab si
Manmarziyaan, man marziyaan
Hosh khoya par sambhali manmarziyaan (yooh to solah)

They became one.

Manmarziyaan (saavn)
Zid ki maari (aaye gaye) bhooli bhaali
Manmarziyaan, manmarziyan

The next morning...

Pihu remembered their intimate moments.

Pihu stared at Angad.

Pihu:Angad...you knew that I was drunk.You took advantage of my drunken state and ....

Angad:I took advantage of you?You only initiated it.See this.

He opened his shirt and showed her the lipstick marks.

Pihu was embarrassed.

Angad:Now say who is more wild?

Pihu was shy.Angad smiled.

Pihu giggled and said:I was simply pretending to be angry to irritate you.I remember everything and I romanced you because I wanted to.

Angad smiled.

Yoon to solah saavan aaye gaye
Gaur nahi kiya humne
Bheega man ka aangan is martaba
Kya jaane kya kiya tumne

Angad:By the way now I am in a romantic mood.It's our honeymoon too.Shall we romance again?

She blushed:Is there any need to ask me that?


Dil mein jaage, ishq waali manmarziyan, manmarziyan..
Zid ki maari (yoon to solah) bhooli bhaali (saavan)
Mannmarziyan (aaye gaye), mannmarziyan


He pulled her closer and they romanced again.

Abb talak se kuchh alag si manmarziyan.. Mann marziyaan..
Hum zameen pe (bheega man ka)
To falak se (aangan)
Manmarziyan (iss martaba) man marziyaan

Pihu lay in his arms.

Pihu:Angad...now I want to live happily with you.For that drinks is an obstacle.So I want to get rid of drinking.

Angad became very happy.

Sikkon jaise hai uchhaali mann marziyan
Manmarziyaan
Zid ki maare (yoon to solah) bhooli bhaali (saavan)
Manmarziyaan, manmarziyaan (aaye gaye)

Angad:Then please take treatment Pihu.

Pihu:I am ready for the treatment.

Angad became very happy and embraced her.

Beadab si, par gazab si
Manmarziyaan, man marziyaan
Hosh khoya par sambhali manmarziyaan (yooh to solah)
Manmarziyaan (saavn)
Zid ki maari (aaye gaye) bhooli bhaali
Manmarziyaan, manmarziyan(Lootera).



Pihu started taking treatment.



Raghav put on his shirt.Suddenly Prachi came in front of him and put the buttons of the shirt.He smiled.

Raghav:You are in a romantic mood today?

Prachi:You are so sweet that anyone will feel like romancing you.

He smiled.

Naina served breakfast for Raghav.

Naina:This is our restaurant special dish.Taste and see Raghav.

Raghav tasted it and said:Wow!It's superb.

Naina smiled happily.

Prachi thought:Raghav is so sweet that anyone will fall in love with him.I hope Naina does'nt fall in love with him.





Namita went to the outhouse.She was wearing a traditional saree.Sumeet was carried away by her beauty.

Sumeet:Beautiful!Nice to see you in a traditional costume.

She blushed.

Namita:I am coming back from the temple with prasad for you.That's why I am in a saree.I prayed for both of us.

He smiled.She fed him the prasad.

Sumeet embraced Namita from behind and said romantically:You look so pretty that I am unable to control myself.

She became shy.

Suddenly somebody pulled him back and slapped him.Sumeet and Namita were shocked.


Edited by jasminerahul - 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#78

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃

Loved the romance 🤩

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Prachi making all efforts to please Raghav was nice. It is surprising that Raghav and Naina know each other. Sad that Prachi began to envy Naina, but the good side of it was she prepared the food for Raghav after hearing about Priya's story. Pihu-Angad scene and song sequence were romantic. Nice to see Pihu's decision of taking the treatment to de-addict herself from drinks. Ram appreciating Priya about Sumeet about Sumeet was nice, but sad that Ram is suspecting Sumeet of his shoot. Namita feeding Sumeet with Prasad were romantic. Nameet's hugging scenes were also romantic. Shocking that Sumeet got slapped from nowhere. I guess it could be Ram who would have slapped him

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Posted: 11 months ago
#80

Brilliant update... well written

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