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Posted: 11 months ago
#91

Aliya played on Pihu's insecurity. Pihu would be wise to not listen to her suggestions.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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All three girls are going through problems.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Lakhan claiming to be as Namita's father is shocking. Sad that he manipulated Ram when Namita told him that he lost his right to question her. Sad that Ram humiliated Sumeet. Nameet conversation was emotional. Parvati-Sumeet conversation was also emotional. Sad that Prachi was insecure of Raina's closeness. Aliya telling Pihu to divorce Angad was bad as she is discouraging Pihu that she cannot be a great support to Angad. Her decision to divorce Angad was shocking. Hope things get resolved soon.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Continue soon πŸ€—

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Part 10

Intense update.... terrifically written

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Part 10


Fantastic Update


Great that Namita's parents actually heard the conversation

between Surmeet and Namita

now her father will truly understand that Surmeet loves his daughter

while Surmeet is back home and all heart broken

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Manmarziyaan(The Heart's Wish) Part 11

The credit for the edits goes to the real editor.




Aditya said weeping:I can't believe that Pihu left us.We were so loving to her.

Brinda:She was also loving to us.Her treatment was also going well.Still she ended everything.

Aditya:I talked to Ram about it.He and Priya are also very upset.

They were very upset.Angad was numb.

Suddenly Purab entered the house.

Purab:I know why Pihu decided to divorce Angad.

Aditya,Brinda and Angad were stunned.

Purab:You all may be thinking how I came to know about your family problem.I came to know it because the root cause is in my house.Aliya is behind it.

Purab told them how Aliya manipulated Pihu to leave Angad if she loves him.

They were shocked.

Brinda:Oh no....!

Angad shed tears.Brinda wiped his tears.

Brinda told Angad:Go.. get back Pihu instead of crying like a baby.I will not leave that Aliya.

Angad nodded emotionally.




Brinda met Aliya and shouted at her:I considered you as my friend.But you broke my home itself?

Aliya:I told Pihu to divorce Angad because I care for him.Our Angad deserves a nice girl,not an alcoholic like Pihu.

Brinda:Angad's happiness lies in Pihu.So she is the best for Angad.And Pihu is not an alcoholic.She has improved a lot.Very soon she will live without touching the alcohol.

Aliya said sarcastically:Let's see.

Brinda:Yes.Let's see.




Aliya scolded Purab:You are a cheater who betrayed your own wife.I told you everything because I trusted you.But you....

Purab:My intention was not to cheat you Aliya.I did'nt want you to separate a loving couple just because you wanted one more case and make money.I love Angad like my own son.I will not let him lose his love.

Purab walked away.

Aliya was very angry:Damn it!




Angad,Aditya,Brinda and Inspector Dhanya went to the Kapoor Mansion.All were surprised to see him.

Pihu:Why have you come here Angad?We ended everything.Right?

Angad:I did'nt end our relationship.It's you who ended it.

Pihu became sad.

Angad:Don't expect me to end it.

Pihu was stunned.

Pihu:Angad!What are you expecting?

Angad:Like a fool I am not going to leave you easily.I did'nt marry you to leave you like that.

Ram,Priya and Namita smiled.

Pihu stared at him in disbelief.

Angad:You know why you left me?Because you are a fool.

Pihu frowned:How dare you call me a fool?

Brinda:Sorry Pihu.This time I support my son.

Angad smiled.

Angad:When Aliya aunty manipulated you,you decided to sacrifice me.Is'nt it foolishness?

Pihu was shocked as Angad came to know it.Ram,Priya and Namita were shocked.

Ram:What are you saying Angad?

Angad:I am saying the truth Ram papa.Pihu was made to believe by Aliya aunty that she can never be cured and so she can't lead a happy married life with me.So for my better future,she should divorce me.So tyag ki murthi Pihu decided to leave me.Is'nt it foolishness?

Ram:Pihu...this was the reason why you left Angad?

Aditya:Yes.This is why Pihu left our house.Aliya's crooked mind is behind this.

Ram became upset.

Ram:I misunderstood you.I am sorry beta.

Pihu became emotional.

Pihu:Papa...no please.

Priya:I should have atleast tried to understand your sudden change.I did a big mistake.

Pihu was silent.

Angad:Pihu...do you know why Aliya aunty talked like that to you?Simple.She is a greedy lawyer who wants more and more divorce cases.Purab uncle only told me everything.

Pihu was shocked:What?

Angad:Yes.And you easily fell into her trap.

Pihu became guilty.

Priya:Aliya can never change.But thank God...the truth has come out.

Namita told Pihu:You yourself admit that he is your luck.So don't lose him because of some stupid sacrifice when everyone supports your relationship with Angad.Losing our love is the most painful feeling.I know that.So I am advising you not to do it.

Ram became sad hearing her words as because of him Namita is in pain.

Priya also felt sad.

Pihu became emotional and looked at Angad.

Angad:I am telling you Pihu...I am not going to leave you.So if you don't come with me,I will stay with you here.Ram papa and Priya mumma have given me the freedom to stay here.

Ram:Of course yes.

Pihu smiled:Like I stay in your house,you can stay here also.Because both are our houses.Because we belong to each other.

Angad smiled:Finally...

She smiled.

Angad:But I will not forgive you for leaving me.

Pihu pulled her ears and said:Sorry...

Angad smiled holding her hand.They joined their foreheads sweetly.Everyone smiled happily.

Suddenly Dhanya said smiling:Pihu...if you do stupid sacrifice by leaving Angad again I will put you in the jail again.It's my warning.So beware.

Dhanya burst into laughter.

Everyone laughed.

Pihu looked at Angad emotionally and said:I will never leave Angad and we will never get separated.

Angad smiled.

Angad became so emotional that he embraced Pihu.She smiled.

Everyone smiled.





Ram,Priya,Lakhan and Monica took Namita to a house.She was clueless.

Namita:Whose house is this?

Ram:It's your loved one's house.

Namita was confused.

Sumeet and Parvati came from inside with a smile.Namita could not believe it.

Priya:This is Sumeet's house.

Namita was surprised.

Ram:I realized that I was wrong in judging Sumeet.He sacrificed his love for me.I will be the most heartless person if I ignore it.

Lakhan:I also misunderstood Sumeet.Later I also enquired about Sumeet as Ram bhai asked me to do so before coming into a conclusion.Thus I also realised that Sumeet is a lovely guy.He cannot lie about his love.

Ram:Lakhan only found out Sumeet's house.

Namita looked at Lakhan in disbelief.

Lakhan:Years back Monica and I left you.But our love for you did not leave our hearts.

Monica:Yes.Trust me.We both want you to be happy.That's why we supported Ram bhaiyya and Priya bhabhi and accompanied you here.

Namita became emotional.

Ram:I met Sumeet and informed him that we will be bringing you here because you belong to him also.

Namita smiled emotionally.

Namita:Papa!

Ram held her palm and kept it on Sumeet's palm.

Ram:Sumeet...like you wished from the bottom of my heart I am saying that she is yours and very happily I am handing over my daughter to you.

Sumeet and Namita became very happy.

Parvati became emotional.

Ram:But don't expect me to allow Namita to stay here before marriage itself.Only after marriage,she can stay here.

Everyone laughed.

Priya:Get married when both of you are mentally ready.

Sumeet and Namita smiled at each other romantically.

Namita looked at Parvati and touched her feet.

Parvati hugged her.

Parvati:I have always loved you and now I love you more.

Namita smiled.

Everyone smiled.

Namita told Sumeet with an emotional smile:You won Sumeet.You succeeded in winning my dad's heart.

Sumeet:We won Namita.

They smiled at each other.




Monica told Lakhan:I am so happy that finally our Nami got what she wanted..her love Sumeet.

Lakhan:I am so happy Monica.Only lucky people get true love.The others lose their lover even though they get their lover.Because they don't value their lover and prioritize their career and ego.

Monica looked at Lakhan painfully.

Monica:We were like that.We did not realize how lucky we were to get married to each other.But we wasted our precious married life by fighting with each other due to our professional ego clashes.

Lakhan:We should have kept our profession and personal life separate.

Monica:We realised our mistake very late.

Lakhan:Yes.But finally we have realized our mistake.Then why don't we try to correct our mistake?

Monica stared at Lakhan.

Monica:What do you mean LK?

Lakhan:Why don't we stay together like before?

Monica became emotional.

Monica:Are you saying it seriously?

Lakhan:Yes,I mean it Monica.

Monica:I also wanted it LK.But I did not have the courage to tell it to you fearing about your reaction.

Lakhan:If you had gathered the courage to tell me that before,we would have been together long time ago.But I am also at fault.I should have said this to you long ago.If so we would not have lost our daughter Nami.

Monica:Everything has got it's time LK.

Lakhan:Yes Monica.Maybe we are destined to stay together only in our middle age.

They smiled emotionally and embraced each other happily.

Suddenly Namita entered the house and was stunned to see them in such a position.Lakhan and Monica were surprised to see Namita and moved away from each other.

Monica:Nami....you?

Namita:Ya...you both...?

Lakhan:We both have decided to reunite.

Namita was surprised.

Namita:Really?

Monica blushed:Yes.

Namita:Congratulations.I always wanted this.But I thought...with what right I can ask you both to reunite as I was never your daughter.

Lakhan and Monica became sad.

Monica:We always considered you as our daughter and loved you immensely even though you were brought up as Ram and Priya's daughter.

Lakhan:That's why we did'nt try to snatch you from Ram and Priya.Because we knew that your happiness lied in Ram and Priya though we longed for you.

Namita became emotional.

Monica:But how come you are here Nami?We are surprised as you have never visited us before.

Namita said painfully:I came here to apologize to Lakhan chachu.That day when chachu attacked Sumeet I talked to him rudely.Now I feel guilty.I should not have talked like that.

Lakhan and Monica became emotional.

Namita:I am sorry Chachu.Please forgive me.

Lakhan:No need of apologizing Nami.We hurt you unknowingly.So we got hurt in return.Other than that nothing wrong has happened.So don't be guilty.Anyone in your place would have reacted the same way.

Namita became emotional.

Namita:Thank you so much for understanding me and not blaming me.

Namita hugged Lakhan and Monica.Lakhan and Monica became so emotional that they hugged her back as it was the first time Namita hugged them.



Prachi was looking at her's and Raghav's photograph emotionally.

Prachi:I wish everything had become like before.

Suddenly she heard the ring of the calling bell.Prachi opened the door.Her face became dull seeing Naina there.Suddenly she saw a man coming from behind and joining Naina.

Raghav who came out of his room and saw them with a surprise.

Raghav:Naina...Dev...please come inside.

They both got inside.

Prachi murmured:Who is this Dev?

Raghav:Both of you please sit.

They sat on the sofa.

Naina:Dev...this is Raghav's wife Prachi.

Dev:Namasthe!

Prachi:Namasthe!

Naina:This is Dev.My fiance who was my love since last 5 years.

Prachi was shocked:What?

Naina:Yes.Dev and I have been seeing since last 5 years.But because of the family responsibilities I had we postponed the wedding.But now we feel that it's time for us to finally tie the knot.The coming Sunday is our wedding.Please do not forget to attend our wedding.

Raghav:How can we forget our dear friend's wedding.We will surely come.

Prachi smiled:Yes sure.

Naina and Dev smiled.

Naina:Ok then we are leaving.Because we have to invite more people for our wedding.

Prachi:Without having tea or coffee how can you both leave?I don't know cooking.But I know to make tea and coffee.It's not that bad also.

Naina:We are in a hurry.That's why.We will have it next time.

Raghav:Ok.

Dev and Naina got up to go.

Suddenly Prachi hugged Naina and whispered in her ear:Sorry.

Prachi looked at her sadly.Naina smiled at her.Prachi smiled emotionally.

Dev and Naina left bidding them good-bye.

Prachi tried to walk to her room in guilt avoiding Raghav.But Raghav held her hand from behind.

Raghav:You thought that Naina loves me.But actually Naina is in love with Dev.I knew it before itself.That's why i supported her.

Prachi:Why did'nt you tell me before?

Raghav:Because Naina wanted to surprise you on the right time.

Prachi embraced him weeping:I feel guilty.I hurt Naina.

Raghav:You can correct your mistake by giving her blessings on her wedding.

Prachi smiled.

Raghav:Now onwards don't be insecure.I am only yours and you are the only girl who loves me.No other girl dares to even come near me.

Prachi smiled emotionally.He smiled.




Raghav and Prachi attended Dev-Naina's wedding.

Raghav-Prachi:Wish you both a very colourful married life.

Prachi:And both of you keep visiting us.

Dev and Naina smiled:Sure.

Sumeet and Namita got engaged in the grand function.

Pihu, Prachi,Raghav and Angad danced for them.

Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Jodi kya banayi, chu chu, chu chu



Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu









Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Aapki kripa se yeh, chu chu, chu chu

Shubh ghadi aai, chu chu, chu chu

Jiji aur jija ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu


Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Mere bhaiya jo, chup baithe hain

Dekho bhabhi yeh, kaise aithe hain

Aise bade hi bhale hain


Aise bade hi bhale hain, mana thode manchale hain

Par aap ke siva, kahi bhi naa phisle hain


Dekho dekho khud pe, chu chu, chu chu

Jiji itrayi,



Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu


Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Arae waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu


Waha waha ramji


Suno jijaji, aji aapke liye

Meri jiji ne, bade tap hain kiye

Mandiro mein kiye phere




Mandiro mein kiye phere, puja sanjh sawere

Tin lok taintis, devo ko yeh rahi ghere


Jaisi maine mangi thi, chu chu, chu chu

Waisi bhabhi pai,

Jiji aur jija ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu


Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Arae waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu


Waha waha ramji.(HAHK)

After 2 years....

Sumeet and Namita's wedding venue...

Meera arrived there with a guy.

Meera:Congrats and wish you both the best Nami and Sumeet.

Meera and Namita hugged each other happily.

Namita looked at the man near Meera.

Namita:This is your Armaan?

Meera nodded.

Namita:Hi Armaan...I have seen only your photographs.But I know you very well.

Armaan:Even I know you and Sumeet very well through Meera.

They all smiled.

Sumeet:I am happy that finally you moved on Meera.

Namita:Yes.Finally you got a nice man like Armaan.

Meera and Armaan smiled.

Meera:I thought that my heart can never be healed and I can never fall in love again.But Armaan proved me wrong.It was an arranged alliance.But Armaan succeeded in replacing my pain with happiness.He conquered my heart successfully.

Meera and Armaan looked at each other romantically.

Sumeet and Namita became happy.

Sumeet and Namita got married.





Parvati,Ram and Priya hugged both of them.

Archana and Anwar smiled.

Archana:We wished to see Haider's wedding.But...anyways our wish got fulfilled through you.

Purab told Aliya:They all have a big heart.That's why they forgave you even after you separated Angad and Pihu.So don't try to separate Sumeet and Namita to get a divorce case.

Aliya nodded.

Aliya:I know Purab.Don't worry.I will not try to separate Sumeet and Namita.

Purab smiled:Even if you try to separate them,they will not get separated as they are not fools.

Aliya kept quiet.

Lakhan and Monica went near Sumeet and Namita.

They:Wish you a happy married life Nami and Sumeet.God bless you both.

Sumeet and Namita smiled.

Lakhan and Monica moved towards Namita to hug her,but suddenly they remembered Namita not considering them as her parents and moved backward.

Namita:I may not have considered both of you as my parents.But still I loved both of you as my uncle and aunt.Uncle and aunt can hug their niece.Right?

Lakhan and Monica became so happy that they hugged Namita.Sumeet,Ram and Priya smiled seeing it.



At the wedding venue Prachi and Raghav were busy with their baby Pragati.

Raghav was carrying the baby.

Raghav:Prachi...I think Pragati is hungry.
Prachi took Pragati from Raghav and hugged her.

Prachi:Pragati beta...are you hungry?

Prachi took the milk bottle from the bag and fed Pragati.Raghav smiled.

He thought:How responsible has the childish Prachi become!



Delicious dinner was served for everyone.

Somebody offered her a drink at the party.

Pihu:No thanks.I don't drink.

Angad smiled happily.Pihu smiled at him.

Pihu:Now my first priority is you and our baby.

Angad smiled touching her stomach.

Angad:I can't wait to see our baby.

Pihu:Me too Angad.

They smiled at each other.




Sumeet and Nandita had a passionate first night.

After the romance they looked at each other lying on the bed.

Sumeet:I am lucky to get my dream girl as my wife.

Nandita:I am not a dream anymore for you.I am the biggest reality of your life.

Sumeet:Yes and that's my biggest happiness.

They smiled and embraced each other.




The end




Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,fav jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.



Edited by jasminerahul - 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#98

Very interesting update dear πŸ™‚

Lovely end to a wonderful journey ✨

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 11 months ago
#99

Aliya did all this just to get a case? How cold blooded! Good thing her intentions were revealed by her own husband.

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Posted: 11 months ago

Ram and Lakhan did a good thing. Sumeet and Namita persevered after all.

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