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Posted: 10 months ago
#41

Congratulations on your new FF


Character Sketch is Amazing 

but Yash seems Intriguing as there is nothing about him 

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Posted: 10 months ago
#42

Prologue is Fascinating 


Aarti won the dance competition 

is it Yash in the crowd ?

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Posted: 10 months ago
#43

Chapter 1 


Fascinating and so Interesting Start 


Hell I already dislike Prasant 

but Aarti also seems like a tough girl and can stand for herself 


I'm waiting for Yash and Aarti meeting 

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Posted: 10 months ago
#44

Chapter 2 


Curious Indeed !!!!


Yash is the one that saw Aarti at the dance 

is he attracted towards her and perhaps that his reason 

to seek Raamu's help to let him in Aarti's house 

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Posted: 10 months ago
#45

Chapter 3 


Interesting 


Aarti's curiosity and doubts on Yash is increasing. 

but Yash had reassured her that there is nothing to worry about 

I'm just hoping he is there to win Aarti and he is serious about her 

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Posted: 10 months ago
#46

Chapter 4


Fabulous Chapter 


I sometimes get the feeling that Yash is at Aarti's place 

to her and her Dadu

I hope it's true 

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Posted: 10 months ago
#47

Sorry for late comments 


will be waiting for Chapter 5 

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Posted: 10 months ago
#48

oh lovely another great yash arti story...

great start....

annoying prashant...bothering arti so much....for sure she is in danger with him ....his dad too must be equally arrogant...


who is yash....why did ramu kaka bring him here.....hope he is here to help not hurt the very nice dadu and arti.....they have already lost a lot...


lol...arti so smart and observant...she questions yash on many things...he is got to be careful if he does not want to get caught....

his rich ways not going to work here....


waiting eagelry to know who he is and what does he want actually

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Posted: 10 months ago
#49

Thanks for the comments... All the answers will be revealed soon....😉

Chapter 6 will be updated tomorrow...

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Posted: 10 months ago
#50

Thanks for liking the story.... Yes Aarti is way too smart and observant....

You'll soon like their bonding...

Will update soon...🥱