MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 15 Pg 79 - Page 64

Aghast FF

Created

Last reply

Replies

788

Views

34.7k

Users

105

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: ArhamRizwan

Amazing update.

Geet was scared thinking Maan will separate Advay from her.

Maan is ashamed of himself to give his love unending pain now. daadi and geet’s bond was so nice.

Geet has no guess of what her love is going through just thinking that he is here to take Advay away from her.

I hope they talk to each other and communicate what happened in past years.

Thanks you so much for always being there for my stories smiley31

@bold - with what she has seen him, she cannot imagine that such person can even be sorry for anything.

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 10


Realistic and Painful Chapter


Geet fainting every time as her blood pressure is high

while she now knows that Maan will take Advay away from her

Maan on the other hand remembers how he always made it a point to tell Geet

once the baby is born , the child will be raised by someone else

he remembers all the pain he gave Geet , and though he never went and slept

with Sam but made Geet and his family believe he went and had a night with his

mistress.

I actually feel very bad for Advay as now he is in the middle of his parents problems

Maan bringing Dadima and Meera was a great gesture on his side

but I really want Maan and Geet to talk maybe not right now as she is not in the right

frame of mind


Thanks Taahir for your continous support to my story.smiley1

@purple - That is a big question. None are in frame of mind of talks, Geet out of fear and Maan out of guilt.

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Part-10

Nice update..

Commented on blog..

responded on blog. Thank-you smiley31
tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

10

doctor ask to shift geet in hospital for her recovery

maan understand his presence push geet in this condition

geet last words clear geet’s mental condition to maan so he decide to stay away from her sight

both daadi n geet are happy to meet after long both are asking sorry

maan need to have great patience to have geet back in his life wit advy



thanks for pm n pw

smiley31

Thanks so much for always being in my stories smiley31


Both are confused and surprised with eo new ways, completely unexpected to them

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: Arijitsing

Thanks for password

Awesome update

Geet fainted again seeing advay with maan

Finally dadima and geet met with each other

Thank-you foryour comment alwayssmiley31
tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: pulvi16

Hi Dear,


Password plzzzz

Hi Pulvi,


I remember, during her complete submission days, you so actively commented. You used to be so upset with Maan.

Miss that participation form you.

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: metromasti

Awesomeeee update..... commented on blog smiley1

images (8).jpeg

Responded on blog smiley31
tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. Maan was such a devil and the torture and the hot on her self respect she had to face is not forgiveable. Geet thinking she will be separated from her son faints. Still she allows her don to meet Maan as he is his father and according to her he will be a good father. Geet condition is very delicate and since seeing Maan she fainted he decides not to come in front of her. Waiting for the next.

Thank you for your comment always and participation smiley31
tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Lovely update. Made me cry right from the beginning 😰. So painful Geet’s condition now and more the past. Horrible what Maan did to her… he fell so low ..

Geet faints coz she took too much stress. Maan initially didn’t understand why but her painful requesting not to take her son away from him, how is he still not able to cry for his sin! Glad atleast he had the shame to recollect what all he did to her and why she fainted again. He understood that she feels he will take him away, going by the number of times he threatened her in the past. He should pay for his sin. What torture and insult. He used her in the name or marriage and child. He acted obsessed with Geet bearing a child, and kept reminding her of how he is going to snatch it from her. He couldn’t relate her going away to her pregnancy, because some other kaand seems to have happened in between their attempts for kid and her escape. She is so stressed now, poor poor girl. How will he make her know what he is repenting now? It’s going to be so difficult ahead what with him not even wanting to try because he thinks he deserves to stay away from her. Very eager for next… also waiting for other ff updates

Thank yousmiley31 for your heartfelt comment once again. Always eagerly wait for your comment because it's so full of heart.

@Pink - a big question because he decided to stay away from her for her. you answered in @blue.


This is the story of pain, regrets, penance, forgiveness and love. This will mostly me emotional ride story. Physical part of Maaneet is far away for now. But stay tunedsmiley27


I read, you are busy on personal front. Yes personal life is above these fictions so take care of that.

Thanks for letting know smiley1 No worries, take your time to comment. i will always enjoy whenever you post.smiley31

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: maanshi

Commented on blog


Thanks for update

Thank you dear for your awesome comment smiley31

Responded on blog

Top