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Shiva confessed but now he has to convince Raavi all over again.

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Kareeb ke Rishtey...Close relationships...Part 8(Riya Sharma -Sahil Uppal,AbraGun version)




Lakshmi was making sweets.

Arjun was lost in her.

Arjun:You are very sweet like these sweets Lakshmi.

Lakshmi:Stop flirting with me Arjun.We are old.

Arjun:Who is old?You maybe old.I am not old.

Lakshmi frowned at him:You called me old?

Arjun:Yes.But I did'nt complete my sentence.You look very young and beautiful in this age also.

Lakshmi blushed.

Lakshmi:When I make Diwali sweets I remember Sona.She used to love Diwali sweets.If she was here,I would have fed her all these sweets.

Arjun said romantically:Now she is not here.So feed me these sweets.

Lakshmi blushed.



Diwali puja at Rohit's house....

Sonakshi's parents Yash and Latika came.

Sonakshi,Raavi,Rohit and Pulkit went near them for their blessings.

Suddenly their eyes fell on Pooja who was helping Veena in arrangements.

Yash:Who is she?

Rohit:She is Sonakshi's friend's daughter from Mumbai.

Yash and Latika got confused.

Rohit went away.

Yash:Friend?

Sona:Papa...she is Lakshmi di's daughter.

Yash and Latika were shocked:What?

Sonakshi explained to them everything.

Pooja came there.

Latika caressed her tearfully.Pooja just looked at her without understanding anything.

Latika:You remind me of my Lakshmi.

Pooja was stunned.

Yash:We are your Nana Nani.

Pooja became emotional.Pooja struggled hard to control her tears.

She touched their feet.

Yash:God bless you beta.But we don't know whether we deserve to bless you as we did injustice to your mother.But we regret every single second.In her absence we realized our mistake.

Latika:How is Lakshmi?We are missing her.

Pooja:My mother forgave you long ago because she loved both of you very much.She also longs to see you both.

Yash-Latika became emotional.

Yash:How is Arjun?

Pooja:Dad is also fine.

Yash:Please request him to forgive me.

Pooja nodded emotionally.

Pooja:Dad and mom will be very happy if they come to know that you both have accepted them.

Yash-Latika smiled emotionally.

Pooja:But please be patient.Let me make things alright.Till then please hide the fact that I am your grand daughter.Please pretend that I am Sona Maasi's friend's daughter.

Latika:Ok.But will these people change?

Pooja:I don't know.But I care only about Rohit maasad.If he changes his mindset,he himself will allow mom and Maasi to unite.And I will make sure that he will change.

Raavi:Papa has changed a lot.He has softened a lot.

Yash-Latika were surprised:Really?

Sonakshi,Raavi,Pulkit:Yes.

They were very happy.

Everyone attended the Diwali puja happily.


Raavi was lighting lamps with Sonakshi.

Raavi:Maa,what if someone confesses that he had lied to us once and ask for apology?

Sonakshi:That means that person is genuine and he repents.Otherwise he would not have confessed his mistakes and apologized.He deserves second chance.

Raavi remembered Shiva telling her emotionally that he is not a cheater.

Raavi thought:Guess Shiva was right.I misunderstood him.

Sona:Why did you ask so Raavi?Did your friend apologize?

Raavi:Yes Maa.

Raavi hugged Sonakshi and said:Thank you very much Maa for guiding me and showing me the right path.

Sonakshi smiled:As a mother I will always give you right advises.

Raavi smiled.


After the Diwali celebration Pulkit left home.


Pooja called Arjun-Lakshmi secretly.

Pooja:Happy Diwali mom dad.

Arjun-Lakshmi:Happy Diwali Pooja.

Pooja:I have a big surprise for you both.It will be the best Diwali gift for you both.

Arjun-Lakshmi were excited.

Lakshmi asked her with excitement:What's that beta?

Arjun:Hope it's not a bomb.

Pooja:Dad...stop teasing me.

Arjun laughed.

Pooja told them about meeting Yash-Latika and how they regret what they did to them and that they long to see them.

Arjun-Lakshmi became very happy.

Lakshmi became very emotional.

Lakshmi:I miss them.I want to see them.I want to get loved by them.

Arjun caressed her and said:Lakshmi,wait for some more time.Then you can meet them.Right?

Pooja:Exactly.So don't waste your time by crying mom.

Arjun wiped Lakshmi's tears.


The next day in college as soon as Shiva saw Raavi,he ran towards her.

Shiva:Raavi,I apologize to you again.Please talk to me.If you are angry,shout at me.But please don't stop talking to me.I can't bear it.

Raavi felt sad seeing his restlessness.

Raavi:Shiva....

Shiva looked at her silently.

Raavi:I forgave you.

Shiva became very happy.

Shiva:Thank you so much Raavi.I can't tell you how happy I am.You really made me happy.

Raavi:I am also sorry for misunderstanding you.I should have understood that you apologized to me only because you had a pure heart.

Shiva smiled emotionally.

Shiva:It's not your fault Raavi.Anyone in your place would have misunderstood me.

Raavi was silent.

Shiva:Raavi...can we be friends?

Raavi became nervous for a moment.She wanted to be his friend,at the same time because of her family pressure,she was scared to even talk to him.

Shiva:You are scared to be my friend because your father told you not to mingle with boys.Right?

Raavi was stunned as Shiva understood why she was running away from him.

Shiva:I am not forcing you.But I will not do anything which makes your father feel that you ruined their trust in you.

Raavi wanted to change the topic as it was a difficult situation for her.

Raavi:Shiva,I need to go to class.

She walked away.Shiva became dull.



Raavi told Pooja about Shiva wanting to be her friend.

Pooja:I think you should accept his friendship Raavi.

Raavi:But Papa...

Pooja:Raavi...true friendship happens very rarely.My friendship with Aarav is one among them.Shiva is a true friend.You should not lose true friendship because of fear.

Raavi nodded with a smile.Pooja smiled.

Raavi:Can I ask you something Pooja?Do you love Aarav?

Pooja remembered Aarav risking his life to save her.

Pooja blushed.

Raavi noticed it.

Raavi:Will you love Aarav if he loves you?

Pooja:Of course yes.How can I reject the love of a nice boy like Aarav?

Raavi:Do you have the guts to love Aarav when you think about your family?

Pooja:Yes,I have the guts to fall in love.Pyar kiya to darna kya?Why should we afraid if we love someone?My family will support me for sure.My parents also had love marriage and they believe in love.So I am not worried about their reaction.

Raavi smiled.

Raavi thought:Pooja is so lucky to have such supportive parents.



Pooja and Aarav walked around dreaming of each other.

Finally they bumped into each other.

They were very happy to see each other as they were feeling romantic with each other.

Aarav:Pooja!

Pooja:Aarav!

Aarav:Pooja,I want to tell you something.

Pooja blushed:Say Aarav.

Aarav:I think you are not just a friend for me.Your position in my heart is beyond that. Can you be more than a friend to me?

Pooja blushed.

Pooja:First you tell me what is more than friendship.

Aarav looked at her deeply and said:More than friendship means...love.More than a friend means the lover with whom we share our life with.Will you be my life partner?

Pooja kept her hand on his shoulder and chest romantically.She looked at his eyes and said:I will be more than a friend to you who will share your life with.Because I love you Aarav.

Aarav said in an intense tone:I love you Pooja.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Slowly he embraced her from behind.

They held their hands together and danced romantically.



Pooja rang up Arjun and Lakshmi.

Pooja:Mom...dad...you will be surprised to hear something.

Arjun:What's the next surprise Pooja?Tell us soon.We are eager to hear it.

Pooja:I am in love with my best friend Aarav.

Lakshmi:Not surprised.Knowing about your friendship with Aarav,we both had expected it.

Pooja was surprised:Really?

Arjun:Ya.Finally our Princess got her Prince Charming.

Pooja became shy.



Pooja said this to Raavi and Sonakshi.

Raavi:I am happy for you Pooja.You are lucky.Very few people are lucky to get true love.

Sonakshi kissed Pooja.

Sona:I am happy that you got your true love like your mother got.God bless you beta.

Pooja smiled.



Raavi went near Shiva.Shiva was surprised as it was the first time that Raavi came towards him.Usually it's Shiva who always goes near her.

Shiva felt very happy.

Shiva:Raavi!

Raavi:Shiva..you said that you want to be my friend.Now also do you want to be my friend?

Shiva:Of course yes Raavi.Because your friendship is the more precious for me.

Raavi smiled happily.

Raavi:I also want to be your friend.Will you be my friend?

Shiva was surprised.

Shiva:I had become your friend long ago.It's just that you were pending to be my friend.

Raavi:It's not pending anymore as I have accepted your friendship.

Shiva became so happy that he jumped with joy.Raavi laughed seeing his childishness.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Lakshmi and Arjun scene was nice, lovely and romantic. Yash and Latika getting to know about their relation with Pooja was emotional. Good that they realized that they did injustice to Lakshmi. Sonakshi Raavi bonding and scene was amazing. Lakshmi Arjun getting to know about Yash and Latika’s acceptance was nice. Still Raavi is hesitating for frndshp, I wonder how would Rohit react once he gets to know about Raavi mingling with Shiva. Hopefully Raavi Shiva frndshp scenes would be seen sooner now that Pooja advised her to befriend Shiva. Hope Raavi also gets support of Rohit like Pooja has of both her parents. Pooja Aarav proposal scene was romantic, hug was cute. As expected, Lakshmi Arjun are happy for Pooja. Raavi accepting Shiva’s friendship was good, Shiva jumping in joy was funny. Perfect pi z. Waiting for next.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Pooja got to meet her nana and nani. So many years missed due to useless conventions.

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#65

Raavi is trying to give Shiva a chance. Sona's guidance helped even more.

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Raavi has forgiven Shiva but friendship with him is still a difficult concept for her.

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Pooja not only has her love, she has support from her parents.

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Finally. Raavi got the courage to reach out to Shiva and offer friendship.

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Sorry for the double post.

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Kareeb ke Rishtey...Close relationships...Part 9(Riya Sharma -Sahil Uppal,AbraGun version)



Aarav and Pooja went for a romantic car drive.

When they reached the destination,Pooja relaxed leaning against the car while Aarav sat down humming a romantic song for Pooja.

Then Pooja sat on his lap and had a romantic moment with him.

Aarav took Pooja home secretly and got his mother's blessings.His mother Smita was very happy for both of them.The trio clicked pictures together.

Aarav-Pooja played with Aarav's cute dogs.

Aarav-Pooja went to a restaurant and had a romantic lunch.

Then they had cute fun moments there.

Pooja became very friendly with Smita.Aarav,Pooja and Smita had a lot of lovely moments together whenever Pooja visited their house secretly.



After a month....

Shiva bought 2 cups of coffee from the college canteen for himself and Raavi.He gave one cup to Raavi.

He sipped the coffee and showed a weird expression.

Shiva:Yuck!

Raavi:What happened Shiva?

Shiva:My coffee has no suger in it.

Raavi:How is it possible?My coffee is sweet.

Shiva:You check and see whether it's sweet or tasteless.

Raavi took a sip from his cup.

Raavi:It's sweet.I think you had something sweet before drinking coffee.That's why you don't feel it's sweetness.

Shiva:No,I did not have any sweet.

Shiva sipped the coffee.Then he smiled at Raavi.

Shiva:Now it's sweet.Because you tasted it.

Raavi became dull.

Raavi:Shiva,why do you talk like a typical lover?

Shiva:Because I have become a lover.

Raavi:What?

Shiva:I was always having a soft corner towards you.May be because you were different from others.Your friendship made me happy.Your absence made me mad.I realized that you had conquered my heart.You made me a lover.I love you Raavi.

Raavi was shocked.

Raavi:Please stop this Shiva.I have not seen you that way.

Shiva became upset.

Shiva:But Raavi..your eyes say something else.Your eyes say that you are affectionate towards me.

Raavi:No Shiva.My eyes may be lying to you.

Shiva:Not your eyes,but your tongue is lying.

Raavi:Please Shiva,don't make it difficult for me.My father will not accept this relationship.Our family is against intercaste marriages.He won't even accept our friendship.I can't go against my father.He might even kill you and I don't want to lose you because of any love relationship.

Shiva:You are scared to lose me.This shows that you also love me.This is enough for me.

Raavi became emotional.

Shiva:Now that I know what's in your heart,I will get you for sure.

Raavi was shocked.

The determined Shiva walked away.Raavi became tensed.



Shiva told about Raavi to his parents Gautam and Dhara.

Gautam:Our son is in love Dhara.

Dhara:I am so happy for you Shiva.

Shiva said in a sad tone:But Raavi's family may not agree.

Gautam:Don't worry.We will officially bring proposal to Raavi's house.Then they won't object as they will know the seriousness of your love.

Shiva was relieved.



Shiva,Gautam and Dhara went to Raavi's house with the proposal.Yash was also there as he had visited them.

Gautam:I am Gautam Pandya and she is my wife Dhara Pandya.We run a shop called 'Pandya Store'.This is our son Shiva.He studies with Raavi.He likes Raavi.He would like to marry Raavi after studies.

All were shocked.

Raavi could not believe that Shiva's parents came with the proposal.Rohit got angry.

Rohit:How dare you get the courage to bring a proposal to my daughter despite of belonging to another caste?

Gautam,Dhara and Shiva were shocked.

Gautam:In this generation who gives importance to caste?

Naren:We give importance to caste.Our village gives importance to caste.

Gautam and Dhara became upset.

Raavi whispered to Shiva emotionally:Shiva,I told you how my family will react to our relationship.Then why did you do this?Now they will not even allow us to be friends.

Shiva became upset.

Shiva:Raavi...I...

Seeing Raavi and Shiva talking to each other,Rohit slapped Raavi.Raavi started sobbing.Shiva became very upset.

Rohit:I told you to avoid boys.But behind my back you were loving a boy from another community.How dare you Raavi?

Sonakshi became upset and requested Rohit:Please Rohit..don't hurt Raavi.

Rohit:Stop advising me Sonakshi.

Sonakshi became upset.

Yash became upset.

Yash:Rohit,years back i did a mistake to my daughter Lakshmi by not accepting her relationship with the person she loved just because he belonged to another caste.I regret it now.You please don't repeat the mistake I did years back.

Naren got angry:What did you mean by you did a mistake?You think that Lakshmi's lover was better than Rohit?

Yash:Lakshmi is already married.So it's better not to compare Rohit with her husband Arjun.For Lakshmi,her husband would be better.Right?

Naren:Yash!

Rohit:You both please stop it.I don't want to discuss about Lakshmi and her husband.This is my daughter's matter.How did she get spoiled?

Shiva:Uncle,please don't say like that about Raavi.Raavi has not broken your trust in her.If so,she would have accepted my love.But she rejected my proposal in college.She told me that she will not go against you.She loves you that much.Please don't misunderstand her.

Rohit was shocked.

Shiva:I am leaving.I will not keep in touch with Raavi like you wish.But please don't hurt her.It's my request.

Gautam and Dhara folded their hands painfully.

Gautam:If we are at fault,please forgive us.

Dhara:But please consider our children's love.

Rohit turned off his face angrily.They felt insulted and hurt by Rohit's behaviour.

Shiva left with his parents painfully.

Naren:Rohit,today itself you have to fix Raavi's wedding.Otherwise she will go out of control.

Sonakshi and Raavi were shocked.

Sonakshi:How can you conduct Raavi's wedding in a hurry?

Naren:Daughters in law should keep their mouth shut.

Sona:But papaji,this is my daughter's matter.

Veena:Sonakshi,just obey elders instead of arguing with them.

Sonakshi became upset.

Naren:Rohit,2 days back Raghuveer Kapoor had brought his son's proposal for Raavi.Just say 'yes' to him now.

Rohit:But Papaji...how can we just say 'yes' to them like that?

Naren:Are you talking like your wife like a spineless husband?They are well settled.What else do you want.Just say 'yes' to them.

Rohit:Ok papaji.



After some time Rohit went to Raavi's room.She stood up seeing him in tension.

Rohit:I misunderstood you.Sorry beta.

It was his first 'sorry' to her.She could not believe her ears.She looked at him in disbelief.

Raavi:Papa!Please don't say 'sorry' to me.

Rohit:Raavi,I have fixed your marriage.

Raavi was shattered.

Raavi:Papa,my college is not over yet.A few more months are left.

Rohit:Raavi,it's better to get married now.Otherwise boys like Shiva will be after you and we won't get peace of mind.So you get ready to get married.

Raavi nodded tearfully.

Rohit went out.

Raavi burst into tears.



Pooja who had gone out with Aarav returned home and entered Raavi's room.

Pooja was shocked to see Raavi crying.

Pooja:What happened Raavi?

Raavi told her everything.

Pooja was shocked.

Pooja:I will talk to Rohit Maasad now.

Raavi:Please Pooja...I beg you.Please don't talk to papa about this.Things will become worse now.Please....

Pooja nodded tearfully.

Pooja:I failed to change Rohit Maasad.He is still the same.Now what will I do?

Pooja and Raavi hugged each other and cried.

Pooja informed this to Lakshmi and Arjun.

They were shocked and upset.

Lakshmi cried:What happened Arjun?Why the history is repeating?I could atleast get my love.But Raavi lost her love because of her narrow minded family.

Arjun:This is called fate.We can't change it Lakshmi.Some people can't be changed even by God.But our Pooja should get her love.

Lakshmi embraced Arjun and cried.

Raavi's engagement hall....

The bridegroom Rohan had not reached there though his father Raghuveer was present there.

Rohit:Where is Rohan?

Raghuveer became dull.

Raghu:He will come now.He has gone to the salon.

Rohit:Ok.

Kapoors noticed that Sonakshi was missing.

Rohit:Where is Sonakshi?

Naren:Such an irresponsible mother!

Veena:Rohit,we will search for her.She is a nuisance.

Rani:Sonakshi wants to create drama.So she must be hiding here.

Pooja was getting angry.

Pooja thought:I wish I could slam their mouths.

Finally Sonakshi reached there with Shiva.All were shocked to see Sonakshi with Shiva.All were shocked to see her condition.She was deeply injured.

Raavi wept:Maa,what happened to you?How did this happen?

Pooja:Aunty,are you alright?

Rohit:Sona,tell me who did this to you?





Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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