Kareeb ke Rishtey...RuSha, OmKar Mayura, RoNakshi Version - Page 2

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Posted: 1 years ago
#11

Sona raising questions on herself and Raavi was unexpected. This was a very bad plan to entrust ppl to tease Raavi and gain her trust, but it was very much expected that she won’t talk much, are Raavi and Pooja going to be friends later? I hope so, this reminds me of Swara and Ragini where Ragini was raised with fear and Swara with love. Sonakshi is right but Raavi is also right that she shouldn’t disobey her dad, but the ones who are under strictness also take some drastic steps, even the ones who are raised with lot of love do that. Fb scene of sisters was funny. So Pooja is going to change Rohit, interesting. Aarav Pooja scene was cute, waiting for next. Perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Why does Rani fight with her husband if she is such a believer in old ways?

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Shiva will get Dev to get Raavi to talk?

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Thank u Salley and Coderlady.






Kareeb ke Rishtey...Close relationships...Part 3(Riya Sharma -Sahil Uppal,AbraGun version)



Kareeb ke Rishtey...Close relationships..Part3

Pooja rang the calling bell.Somebody opened the door.Pooja looked at that person.

It was Sonakshi.

Pooja thought:Is this Sonakshi Maasi?I can't understand it.

Sona:Who are you beta?

Pooja thought:I can't tell her who I am without knowing whether it's Sonakshi maasi or not.If Rohit Maasad is here,it will be a problem also.

Pooja:Rohit uncle is there at home?

Sona:No.Actually Rohit and my in laws have gone for a wedding.

Pooja thought:That means this is Sonakshi maasi.I am so happy that nobody else is there at home.Thank God!

Sona:You did'nt tell me who you are.How do you know Rohit?

Pooja:I...Sonakshi maasi...

Sonakshi was stunned.

Sonakshi:Maasi?

Pooja nodded.

Sonakshi's lips shivered:Are you my niece?Are you Lakshmi didi's daughter?

Pooja:Yes Maasi.I am your Lakshmi didi's daughter Pooja.

Sonakshi became emotional.

Sona:Who else will call me Maasi?

Sonakshi hugged Pooja.Pooja hugged her back.

Sona:You come inside.

They both got inside and Sonakshi closed the door.

Sona:How are Lakshmi didi and Arjun jeeju?

Pooja:They both are happy.It's just that mom is missing you.She is sad without you.

Sona:Even I miss didi.

Pooja:You both crave to meet each other.And I have come here to meet you both.

Sonakshi:But...

Pooja:You maybe scared of Rohit Maasad and your in laws.But trust me.I will make everything alright.Rohit Maasad himself will unite you both.

Sona:Rohit and his parents won't change.

Pooja:Maasi...I am telling you that I will make everything alright.Please trust your niece.

Sonakshi nodded with a smile.

Pooja:Do I have any sister or brother?

Sonakshi smiled:Yes.You have a sister named Raavi and a brother named Pulkit.Pulkit is studying in Hyderabad for MD.

Raavi came there calling Sonakshi:Maa!

Raavi and Pooja looked at each other.

Sonakshi:This is your sister Raavi.

Pooja got excited and hugged Raavi:Hi Raavi.

Raavi was confused.

Raavi:Sister?

Sonakshi:Yes.She is my sister Lakshmi's daughter Pooja.

Raavi was surprised:What?My sister?

Pooja:Yes,we are sisters.

Raavi:I longed to have a sister and finally I got a sister.I am so happy.

Raavi hugged Pooja.

Pooja:I will be staying here for more than a month.

Suddenly Raavi's face became dull.

Raavi:But how will papa allow it?Papa,dada,dadi,Rani bua..everyone hates your mother.

Pooja:I know that.Don't let them know that I am your aunt's daughter.

Sonakshi:I will tell some lie to Rohit.

Raavi:Maa,what if they understand that you are lying?

Sonakshi became upset.

Pooja:We will think about it later.Right now a lie is needed for me to stay here.

Sonakshi and Raavi nodded.

Pooja:Don't you want to talk to mom?Now no one is there at home.So you can talk to her without any tension.

Sonakshi replied emotionally:Yes beta.

Pooja made a call to Lakshmi.Lakshmi picked up the phone.

Immediately Pooja gave the phone to Sonakshi.

Lakshmi was tensed.

Lakshmi:Pooja!Did you reach there?

Sonakshi:Didi!

For a moment Lakshmi became numb.

Her lips shivered:Sona!

Sona:I am your Sona.

Tears rolled down the cheeks of both the ladies.

Sona:How are you didi?

Lakshmi:I am very happy with Arjun.How are you?How is Rohit to you?

Sona:Rohit...to be frank I could'nt understand him even after living with him for many years.

Lakshmi felt upset.

Lakshmi:He loves you.Right?

Sona:I don't know didi.

Lakshmi felt sad.

Sona:I am glad that atleast you got your happiness.Do you still dance didi?

Lakshmi:Yes Sona.I take dance classes for children.

Sona:I am happy that jeeju allowed you to do what you like.

Lakshmi smiled:Yes,Arjun is very supportive.You also loved dancing like me.Do you dance now?

Sonakshi became sad.

Sona:After marriage,I stopped dancing.Here everyone thinks that dance is not good for married women of good families.

Lakshmi became dull.

Lakshmi:How are our parents?

Sona:Papa and Maa have changed didi.Seeing my suffocating life and also since they are missing you,they started feeling that they did wrong to you.

Lakshmi was surprised:Really?I am dying to see them.

Pooja took the phone from Sonakshi and told Lakshmi:Mom,chill...after I bring changes in this house,you and papa can come here and meet the whole family.

Lakshmi smiled.

Lakshmi:Did you meet Rohit?Did he allow you to stay there?

Pooja:Not yet mom.He has gone out.But I am sure that he will allow me to stay here.Till then you relax mom.By the way I got a sister here.Sonakshi maasi's daughter Raavi.

Lakshmi:O!I am dying to see my niece.Like Sona could meet you,I want to hug my niece.

Raavi:Even I am dying to meet my aunt.

Pooja:Be patient guys.Everything will happen.

They smiled.


After the phone call ended,Arjun came home.

Lakshmi went near him.

Lakshmi:Arjun..Pooja met Sona.

Arjun:Thank God that everything is going smoothly.

Lakshmi:Rohit was not there.So I talked to Sonakshi on the phone after years.I feel so happy.

Arjun became very happy.

Arjun:So did you both gossip?

Lakshmi:Gossip?How dare you accuse us of gossiping?

Don't talk nonsense.

Arjun smiled:Ok sorry baba.

Lakshmi smiled.


Rohit,Naren,Veena and Rani reached home.

They were stunned to see Pooja there.

Naren:Who is this?

All were tensed.

Sonakshi:She is Pooja.My friend Radhika's daughter from Mumbai.Actually Radhika and her husband have gone abroad for their elder sister's delivery.They will have to stay there for more than a month to look after their daughter as she had caesarean. Since Pooja was alone,they sent her here.Till her parents return,can Pooja stay here?Please...

Rani:Friend's daughter?I find it quite fishy.

Sonakshi,Pooja and Raavi got tensed.

Sonakshi:Why is it so fishy Rani di?What is wrong in helping a girl who is alone?Girls are not safe when they stay in a big city like Mumbai.

Rohit:Rani di..Sona is right.Girls are not safe when they stay alone.So let Pooja stay here.

Veena:We are over protective about Raavi.The same way Pooja's parents will also be protective about her.That's why they sent her here.

Sonakshi,Raavi and Pooja were relieved.

Rani:But Rohit...how can we make a stranger stay here?

Sonakshi became upset.

Sonakshi:Pooja is not a stranger.She is my friend's daughter.Radhika and I studied together till she got married and moved to Mumbai.

Rohit held Sonakshi's hands and said:Sonakshi,you please keep quiet for some time.

Rohit looked at Rani.

Rohit:Sonakshi is right.

Rani:But how can you listen to Sonakshi?Be manly Rohit.

Sonakshi ,Raavi and Pooja got irritated.

Pooja thought:This lady is so irritating.

Rohit:I am not spineless to listen to my wife.

Pooja thought:He thinks that listening to the wife is spineless.How regressive!

Rohit:But Pooja is a young girl like our Raavi.So I support Sonakshi in this.Please Rani di...please don't oppose it.

Naren:Yes.Rohit is right.

Rani became dull while Sonakshi smiled.

Pooja smiled:Thank you Rohit uncle.You are so sweet.

She hugged him.All were stunned.Rohit did not know how to react.

Naren:A grown up girl is hugging a man?

Pooja:I think in this village,grown up girls do not hug even their father.But in our place,we hug our father also.Rohit uncle is like my own uncle.That's why I hugged him.I felt a fatherly affection towards him.Sorry if I hurt you all.

Naren:Girls have to stay in limits.Otherwise they will get spoiled.So we have always kept a distance between us and Raavi.

Rohit:Leave it papa.Pooja is from a city.We can't change her in a day.And she is just a guest here for some days.So just ignore it.

Naren,Veena and Rani became dull while Sonakshi,Raavi and Pooja smiled.Naren,Veena and Rohit walked away.

Pooja whispered to Sonakshi:Rohit Maasad is not such a big kadoos.He has been brainwashed by his family.Otherwise he is good at heart.

Sonakshi smiled.



In the bedroom...

Sonakshi to Rohit:Thank you Rohit for letting Pooja stay here.

Rohit:Why are you thanking me for this?

Sonakshi:You supported my decision against your family member.

Rohit:Not because it was your decision,but because Pooja is a small girl like Raavi.So don't think that I supported you.

Sonakshi became dull.

Sonakshi:If you had not allowed Pooja to stay here,the poor girl would have been staying alone.So thank you.

Rohit answered roughly:Ok ok.Now you sleep.I feel sleepy.

He lay down on the bed to sleep.Sonakshi smiled slightly.


The next day Pooja met Aarav and told him everything.

Aarav:You fooled Rohit uncle?Poor guy does'nt know who he allowed to stay there and the one he permitted to stay there is going to change his life.

Pooja and Aarav laughed.

Aarav:But what if he catches you red handed and beat me also for supporting you in this game?

Pooja kept his palm on his mouth.

Pooja:You stupid!If you say stupidity,I will seal your mouth.

Aarav showed a sad expression.Seeing that Pooja smiled.

Pooja:You look so cute.

She removed her palm from his mouth.

Aarav:You find me cute when I am sad?I was worried that I could not speak when you closed my mouth.

Pooja:Kiddo...you are pretending to be a kid.You are behaving as if I closed your mouth with fevicol.

Aarav:Yes,i was pretending.I know that though you seem to be cheerful,inside your mind you are tensed about executing your plan.So I pretended to be like that to make you laugh.

Pooja:You read my mind though you just met me one day ago.

Aarav:Maybe because you are an open book to me.

Pooja:I don't know why.In our first meeting itself you made me so comfortable that I did'nt feel that we just met yesterday.

Aarav:Some friendships are like that.

They smiled at each other.



In college....

Shiva walked after Raavi seeing her.

Shiva:Hey Raavi!

Raavi looked at him.

Shiva:The last day we talked a lot.I mean I talked a lot to you.Still you are not minding me.

Raavi was silent.

Raavi thought:Maa had told me not to ignore Shiva as he helped me.

Raavi:Sorry.

Shiva:Just one word.Why are you so stingy when it comes to talking?

Raavi thought:Even one is too much from me as papa restricted me from talking to boys.

Shiva:Anyways...since we mingled with each other,shall we be friends?

Raavi became nervous.

She thought:Shiva is expecting too much from me.He helped me.So I feel bad to reject his friendship.But I am helpless.

Shiva:Say Raavi.Shall we be friends?

Raavi nodded painfully and walked away.Shiva felt upset.

Shiva:Why she does'nt want my friendship?But why did I feel that she was upset while rejecting my friendship?Maybe because she is not comfortable with me.I have to make her more comfortable so that I will be able to gain her trust.Then she will make friends with me.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Pooja Sona meeting was emotional, wow so finally Pooja Raavimet, I hope she makes Raavi carefree as well. So they r going to lie to Rohit. Andfinally the sisters too had a talk. Everything is going well for now. I find Rohit’sfamily very irritating. Arjun Lakshmi scene was cute. Even Rohit is irritating.Aarav Pooja became close already. When we say so, we shake her head and not nod,sad that she rejected his friendship, waiting for next, is the next update comingtoday?

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Thank u Salley.




Kareeb ke Rishtey...Close relationships...Part 4(Riya Sharma -Sahil Uppal,AbraGun version)

Raavi was going through a book and getting crazy.

Raavi:This is so tough.

Pooja sat near her.

Pooja:What happened Raavi?

Raavi:Actually i find this portion tough.

Pooja:If you don't mind,can I help you?

Raavi was surprised:Really?

Pooja:Yes.I have completed my post graduation.

Raavi:You were working?

Pooja:Ya..I was.I resigned my job and was looking for better opportunities.Then I came here.When I return to Mumbai,I will search for another job.

Raavi:So good that you can work.I don't think I will be able to work.Papa won't allow it.Dada and dadi think that women need not work.

Pooja:But what if your husband allows you to work?

Raavi:I don't think papa will find such a supportive husband for me as he himself is not supportive.

Pooja:Your fate can be different.So chill.Anyways..I will teach you.

Pooja started teaching her the difficult portion.Raavi became very happy.



All were sitting for dinner.Pooja came:Hi everyone.

Nobody responded.

She dragged the chair towards the table and sat.The noise caused due to that irritated Rohit,Naren,Veena and Rani.

Naren:Don't make noise.That's not allowed here.

Pooja:Sorry,but how to move the chair without making noise?Some kind of noise will be there.Right?

Rohit,Naren,Veena and Rani stared at Pooja.

Rani:Are you back answering or making fun of us?

Sonakshi and Raavi became dull.

Pooja:I did'nt make fun of anyone.I just asked a doubt.

Veena:You start eating Pooja.

Pooja:Yes aunty.

Everyone started eating.Pooja saw a dish in Raavi's plate.

Pooja:Wow,I love this.

Pooja took it from Raavi's plate and put it in her mouth.

Veena:What's this Pooja?Taking food from other's plate is a bad manner.

Pooja:Sorry aunty.I take food from my dad and mom's plates.

Rani:So your parents have not taught you manners?

Pooja got hurt.Sonakshi asked her to calm down through facial expression.

Pooja tried to change the topic by asking a question to everyone.

Pooja:Well..what food items are your favourite?

Nobody replied.

Pooja:Which movies have you seen recently?

Nobody replied.

Pooja:Raavi,shall we both go for a movie?

They gave a shocking expression.

Naren:Girls should not go to the theatre.It's not good.

Pooja:Why?Because there are boys?

Naren:Yes.Boys and girls should not mix up.

Pooja thought:Such narrow minded people!They think that boys are aliens and girls will get ruined if they watch movies in the theatre with stranger men.

Pooja:But we are not talking to the strangers in the theatres.We are just going to the theatre to watch movies.

Rohit:Pooja,while eating food nobody is allowed to talk.So you better eat your food silently.

Pooja nodded.

Pooja thought:Having food with these people is boring.



Before going to sleep Pooja told Sonakshi:I understood one thing.It's Naren uncle and Veena aunty who made Rohit Maasad like this.And that Rani aunty is damn irritating.I feel like kicking her out.If she leaves this house,half of the problems will be over.

Sona:Rani has fought with her husband and in laws.So she will be here itself as a head ache.

Pooja:Let's see.



While walking in the college corridor,Raavi's leg slipped and she fell down.She was finding it difficult to get up as her foot had sprained due to the fall.

Shiva who came there was shocked to see Raavi on the floor.

Shiva:Raavi,what happened?

Raavi was keeping silent.

Shiva:Atleast now you open your mouth and say something?

After a lot of hesitation,Raavi said:I fell down and my foot got strained.

Shiva:Show me your foot.

Raavi was stunned.

Raavi:What are you saying?How can I show my foot to you?

Shiva:Why not?

Raavi:You are a boy and I am a girl.

Shiva:Oh no!You think that I am that sort of a boy who takes advantage of girls?I don't believe this.

Raavi felt bad.

Raavi:No,I did'nt mean it.But I...

Shiva:Don't be scared Raavi.I will not touch with a bad intention.I promise.You can trust me.

Raavi thought:It's not because i don't trust you Shiva.It's because I am scared of my dad.

Shiva held her foot and twisted it.

Raavi moaned in pain:Ahhh...

Suddenly she realized that her sprain has disappeared.

Shiva massaged her foot.Unknowingly a smile appeared on Raavi's face.

Shiva:Are you feeling better now?

Raavi:Yes Shiva.Thank you.

Shiva:No mention.Because whether you consider me as your friend or not,I consider you as my friend.

Raavi smiled.They shared a sweet eye lock.

Suddenly Raavi realized what she was doing.Immediately she got up from the floor.

Raavi:We have to go to the classroom.The class will start now.

Shiva nodded.Raavi walked to her classroom and Shiva followed her.



Lakshmi was dancing and teaching dance to her students.

Arjun was lost in Lakshmi's beautiful classical dance.After the class got over,Arjun went near Lakshmi.

Arjun:Hello my beautiful teacher...your dance was very beautiful.

Lakshmi:Thank you my dear admirer.

Arjun:I am proud of my wife seeing the beautiful dance.

Lakshmi:Sonakshi used to dance very well.But her husband considers her dancing passion as a shame to the family.Not everyone gets a supportive husband like you.I wish Sonakshi could resume dancing and Rohit supports it.

Arjun caressed her and said:Everything will be alright Lakshmi.Our daughter Pooja is smart enough to do that.

Lakshmi smiled emotionally.



Aarav and Pooja were looking at the beautiful trees,plants and flowers there.

Pooja:Really this place is very beautiful.This beauty can't be found in a big city like Mumbai.

Aarav:Villages are very beautiful.That's why.

Pooja:Yes.But I wish the minds of these villagers also had become beautiful like this place.

Aarav:Most of them are narrow minded and against intercaste love marriages.But we can't change everyone's mindset.

Pooja:You are right.But I wish to change the mind set of Sonakshi maasi's family.

While walking Pooja said:I am strong.So I will change them.

Suddenly Pooja slipped and Aarav caught her by her waist suddenly.

Aarav:You said that you are strong.Then why did you fall?

Pooja smiled shyly.

Pooja:Maybe because I am a falling queen.But still I am a Queen.Right?

They both giggled.

Suddenly Pooja became unconsious.Aarav got scared and worried.

He cupped her face in his palm.

Aarav:Pooja...open your eyes.

Pooja opened her eyes and winked at him.

Pooja:I was just fooling you Aarav.Look at your eyes.How scared you were!

Aarav was embarrassed.

Aarav:You..!

They both laughed.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Raavi Pooja scene was lovely. Yes Pooja is right whole familyis boring. I hate Rani. Shiva caring for Raavi was nice. Lakshmi and Arjun scenewas romantic. Pooja falling in Aarav’s arms was cute. Pooja acting to be unconsciouswas funny. Waiting for next. Perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#18

Why is Rohit so sore about Lakshmi? Its not like he was in love or anything.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#19

Was it a question of ego? It must have hurt their ego when Lakshmi left.

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Raavi is too scared for her own good. But thats how she was brought up.

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