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Members of the core team. 

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte. 

He is a no nonsense cop. He is second in command of the ETF. Left his house to fulfill his dream of becoming a cop. Loves his wife Roshini very much but lost her in a car accident. Now his only reason to live is his 5 years old daughter Suhana. Best friend of Sameer Rathore. 


ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathore. 

He is a no nonsense cop. He is chief of the ETF. Left his house to fulfill his dream of becoming a cop. is attracted towards Ayesha. Best friend of Arjun and Chachu of Suhana. Consider Roshini and Riya as his sisters. 


SI Riya Mukharjee. 

She is a beautiful and bubbly cop. She is a research specialist. She is an orphan. Adopted Arav and loves with him alot. Is in coma from 1 year after gulping X-zora 2 virus. ETF men take care of her and Arav.


Shreekant Sen. 

He is a tech expert of the ETF. Best friend of Chotu and Riya. His laptop is his jaan. Mamu of Arav and Suhana. Is attracted towards Liza. 


Chandrakant Patil. 

He is the commando of the ETF. Best friend of Shree and Riya. In love with his 11:30 wali. Food is his first love. Mamu of Suhana and Arav. 

Suhana Arjun Rawte. 

She is 5 years old. She loves her father the most. She is the crime partner of her Shree mamu. Loves Arav as her own brother. She sometimes misses her mother.

Arav Mukherjee. He is a 1 and half year old boy. He has recently started speaking and calls Arjun Baba as Suhana calls the same to him. 

After Xzora incident All ETF men started living together in Arjun's house to take care of Riya and Arav. Three new girls come in ETF but they don't know about Riya and Arav and even Suhana. They don't even know that they all live together. In this one year all ETF men come very close to each other. Choree started calling samjun as Bhai off duty. 

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Ayesha Kapoor.

She is an encounter specialist of the ETF. Known as Nadiya in the underworld. Best Friend of Lisa and Sakshi and good friend of Choree. Attracted towards Sameer. 

Lisa D'Cruz. 

She is a forensic expert of the ETF. She shares a Tom and Jerry relationship with Shree. Best friend of Ayesha and Sakshi. 

Sakshi Anand. 

She is an ex crime reporter. She is a bubbly and beautiful girl. All think that she likes Arjun but for her he is only her senior who she wants to smile. Best friend of Ayesha and Lisa. Hiding a secret from all.

After great performance by the ETF commissioner sir decided to start a unit 2 of the ETF to reduce their burden and increase the power of the police.

Members of ETF unit 2. 

ACP Sameer Maheshwari.

He is an honest and hardworking cop. He is only serious at the time of duty. Loves his friends and team just like his family. He is chief of ETF unit 2. Married to Naina Agarwal. No one knows about their marriage other than family and commissioner sir. Best friend of Sanjay and Raghav. Wants to take revenge from Sikander for his parents death. 

ACP Sanjay Kumar. 

He is an honest and hardworking cop. He is only serious at the time of duty. Loves his friends and team just like his family. He is second in command of ETF unit 2. Fiance of Swati. Best friend of Sameer and Raghav. Help him in his mission. 

SI Naina Maheshwari. 

She is an honest and hardworking cop. She is an encounter specialist and third in command of ETF unit 2. Married to Sameer and loves him to the core. No one knows about their marriage other than family and commissioner sir. Treats her friends like family. Helps Sameer in his mission against Sikander. Best friend of Swati and Preeti. 

Swati Patel. 

She is a research specialist of ETF unit 2. Fiance of Sanjay. Consider Sameer and Raghav as her brothers. Help Sameer in his mission. Best friend of Naina and Preeti.

Raghav Malhotra. 

He is a tech expert of ETF unit 2. Loves Preeti. Best friend of Sameer and Sanjay. Help Sameer in his mission. 

Preeti Agarwal. 

She is a forensic expert of ETF unit 2. Loves Raghav. Best friend of Naina and Swati. Helps Sameer in his mission. 

Purab Kapoor. 

He is commando of ETF unit 2. He will meet the ETF unit 2 soon. 

More will get to know about him in the future. Whole unit 2 except for Purab know each other and are best friends. No one in the department except for the commissioner knows this. They always go on mission together as they are the best team when together. 


Index:- 

Chapter 1 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162395729

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Face recognition:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162467981


Chapter 2 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163184740


Chapter 3:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163293205


Chapter 4:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163344923


Chapter 5 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163419640


Chapter 6 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163610257


Chapter 7 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163658777


Chapter 8 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163723114


Chapter 9 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163808985


Chapter 10 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165038350


Chapter 11:-  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165135571

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Chapter 1

ETF office conference room. 


A boy with curly hairs was sitting in front of his laptop. He was admiring the wallpaper. It was a picture of a girl in her mid twenties standing on knees with a baby girl of around 4 year and a baby boy of three months. The three of them were looking perfect with their magical smiles. A girl come there and was not amazed to see him like that. She have always observed him doing the same many times. She was curious to know the people in the picture were. 


Girl : Hey Specky Sen kya kar rahe ho?


Boy : Tumse matlab Ms. Lizard. 


Girl : Hey don't call me that. 


Boy : So you too don't call me Specky. 


(You all guessed it right the boy is Shree and the girl is Lisa.) 

They were about to continue when Chotu enter the conference room with Ayesha. 


Ayesha : Tum dono phir shuru ho gaye?


Chotu : Ayesha in dono se aur umid bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai. 


Shree : Chotu maine kuch nahi kiya hai. Main toh laptop mein chup chap kaam kar raha tha. Yeh Lizard ne hi shuru kiya. 


Lisa : Maine kaha na mujhe Lizard mat bulao you...


She was not able to continue as they saw Sameer and Arjun entering the conference room with Commissioner followed by Sakshi. They all salute commissioner and he nodded in return. 


Sam : Kya hua sir koi naya case? 


All juniors made faces as recently they have solved 2 case back to back and wanted some rest. 


Commissioner : Nahi naya case nahi hai. Par ek achi news hai. 


Arjun : Kya sir ?


Commissioner : Jaise ki aap log jante hai phicle ek saal mein ETF ne bahut hi acha perform kiya hai. ETF sirf a intiative tha police force ki power badhane ka and I can see that we are very much successful in it. So department ne yeh decide kiya hai ki ETF mein ek aur unti add ki jayegi. Orginal team unit 1 hi rahe gi. Unti 2 mein ek puri new team form hogi. Dono individually kaam karegi and jarurat padne par collaboration karegi. 


All smiles hearing the news. Juniors were dancing in mind because now their work load will be reduced due to add of new team. 


Commissioner : And one more thing Sakshi yeh baat tumhare liye hai.


Sakshi : Kya sir?


Commissioner : Tumhe unit 1 se saath saath unit 2 par bhi article likhne hoge. Unke saath tum investigation ke time nahi jaogi toh chalega but you have to coordinate with them about the progress of the case. 


Sakshi : Ok sir. 


Arjun : Sir nayi team kab join kar rahi hai?


Commissioner : Ek do din mein. Jaise hi sari formalities puri ho jati hai. Aur ha unti 2 2nd floor use karegi toh 1st floor pura unit 1 ka hai. 


Sam : Sir unit 2 ke chief ka naam kya hai?


Commissioner : Ab isse coincidence bol lo ya destiny Uska naam bhi Sameer hi hai. ACP Sameer Maheshwari. 


Shree : Sir yeh kahi wahi ACP Sameer Maheshwari toh nahi jisne bahut choti umar mein hi bahut hi crucial case ko handle kiya hai?


Commissioner : Haan Shree yeh wahi hai. (looking at his watch) Okk toh ab main chalta hu. Jai hind!!


Team : Jai hind sir. 


Commissioner left and Samjun to left to their cabins. All of them took their seats. Sakshi started sulking. 


Chotu : Kya hua Sakshi??


Sakshi : Tum logo ne suna nahi ab mujhe unit 2 ke bhi articles likhne hoge. Pehle hi kya kam kaam tha yaha ki sir ne aur badha diya. 


Ayesha : Tum tension met lo Sakshi starting mein problem hogi baad mein adat pad jayegi. 


Chotu : Main toh yeh soch raha hu ki unit 2 ka chief and second in command bhi Rathord sir aur Arjun sir ki tarah khadus nikale toh?

(Choree bas girls ke samne mein mein samjun ko khadus aur akdu bolte hai.) 


Shree : Haan na aur ek toh chief ka naam bhi Sameer hai. 


Lisa : Are ab jane do aur unit 2 ke welcome ki tayari karte hai na. Unhe bhi toh pata chale ETF kya chiz hai. 


All agree with her and started think about plan but they soon got interpret as Rathord told them to complete the paper work and go home. 


On the other side. 


5 friends were talking on a conference call. 


Boy : Tum charo ek din mujhe marwa kar hi manoge na?


Boy 2 : Kyu bhai hum logo ne kya kiya?


Boy : (imitating him) Kya kiya? Tum log mujhe yaad nahi dila sakte the ki kal Maina ka birthday hai?


Girl : Humein laga tujhe yaad hoga. 


Boy : Mujhe last week tak yaad tha par achanak se wo ETF mein transfer ke chakkar mein main bhul gaya. 


Girl 2 : Acha ab yeh bato ki Naina kaha hai. 


Boy : Wo abhi market gai hai grocery lene. 


Girl 2 : Toh suno mere pass ek idea hai. (She explains him the plan.) 


Boy : Waha Preeti kya idea diya hai tu toh best hai. 


Preeti : Tell me something I don't know jiju. 


(So the Friends are Sameer, Sanjay, Raghav, Swati and Preeti.)


Sanjay : Chal chal ab hawa mein mat ud. 


Sameer : Waise tum log ho kaha abhi tak wapas nahi aaye. 


Raghav : Are yaar aaj nahi pahuch payege. Kal na hamesha wali jagah milte hai har saal ki tarah. 


Swati : For your kind information kal hum sabko ETF mein report karna hai. Toh kal humein humara ritual todna hoga. 


Sameer : Nahi Swati kuch bhi ho jaye hum log apna ritual kabhi nahi todenge. 


Preeti : Magar kaise??


Sameer : Commissioner sir ka favourite hone ka kuch toh fayada hona chahiye ke nahi, kyu Munna?


Sanjay : Sahi kaha mere bhai. 


Raghav : Toh thik hai kal milte hai hamesha wali jagah par. 


Sameer : Toh ab main rakhta hu mujhe bahut kaam hai kal milte hai. Byeee..


All : byee. 


Other hand.


A girl in her mid twenties was lying on bed and her two friends were sitting near her. One on bed and other one on a stool beside the bed. They were sharing all the happening of the day with her. They were happy yet sad. 


Boy : Yaar Rii aur tujhe kitna sona hai haan? 1 saal se bas soi hai utne ka toh naam hi nahi le rahi tu. 


Boy 2 : Haan, pata hai humara Arav kitna bada ho gaya hai. Bolne laga hai tera beta. Aaj usne apna pehla word bola. 


( Yes the girl was Riya nd the boys are Choree.) 


Chotu : (with tears in his eyes) Humare liye na sahi par apne Arav ke liye toh uth ja. Usse jarurat hai uske maa ki. Jab bhi tujhe aise dekhta haina toh rone lagta hai. 


Shree : (crying) Please Rii jaldi uth na hum tujhe bahut miss kar rahe hai. 


Sam enter the room and saw them crying. 


Sam : (tensed) Kya hua tum dono ko?


Shree : Sir aap kahiye na Rii uthne ke liye. Kahiye na iss ki bahut so liya bahut kar liya aram ab toh uth jaye. 


Chotu : Haan sir boliye na usse ki agar humse naraz hai toh gussa bichare Arav par kyu nikal rahi hai yeh. 


Sam :(consoling them) Dekho Shree aur Chotu hum log aise himmat nahi haar sakte. Hum logo ko Riya ki himmat bana hai na ki kamzori. Wo jald hi thik ho jayegi aur apna dialogue bolegi. 


Arjun : (entering the room) Aurat ki kabiliyat par kabhi shaq nahi karna chahiye. 


Shree and Chotu got up from their seats and four of them had a group hug. Praying for their Riya to recover soon. 


That's it for the 1st chapter. 


How was the chapter. 


Please do like and comment. 

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Nice part... Waiting for more dear....

Update next part soon please....😊😊😊


Awesome start..,🥳🥳🥳🥳

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Loved it Riya 🤗 

awesome and interesting start

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon🤗