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Posted: 6 months ago

Nice update per sorry if I hurt u yeh story ariya se zyada ab arjun ke bhai ki lag rahi hai jo kaam arjun aur uski team ko karna tha woh sam kar raha hai order de raha hai arjun riya rathod sirf sir hila rahe hai waiting for nxt dear and thanks for pm

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Posted: 6 months ago

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 months ago

Very nice part. I hope Sameer arjun ka relationship jaldi thik ho jaye

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Posted: 6 months ago

Teaser

Riya :- I love you Arjun kya aap mujhe, humare rishte ko ek chance denge. Kya aap mujhe aur Arav ko apni aur Soha ki zindagi mein choti si jagah denge? Kya aap mujhse Shadi karenge. Kya aap mujhe apki pati aur Soha ki maa ke roop main swekar karenge.


Arjun : Pyaar ka toh nahi pata par pasand jarur karne laga hum mein tumhe Riya. Humare rishte ko ek muka dena chahta hu main. Main nahi janta ki main tumhe Roshni jitna pyaar kar pauga bhi kya nahi par humare rishte ko puri tarah nibhane vaada karta hu. Haan main tumse shadi karunga. So, Miss Mukharjee, will you accept me as your husband and father of Arav?


Riya nodded her head with tears in her eyes. Choree and Sameer were excitedly jumping around them while Ayesha and Liza were too shocked to react.





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Posted: 6 months ago

Beautiful ❤️ teaser

Waiting for the update 😃

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Posted: 6 months ago

Beautiful Teaser dear eagerly waiting for update and thanks for pm

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Posted: 6 months ago

Sirf teaser se kaam nahi chalne wala hai, pehle toh yeh baat achhe se samajhlo tum. Waise hi 2 ya 3 week mein bas ek hi update deti ho, aur ab iss baar last update diye huye more than 13 days toh ho hi chuki hai. Phir bhi de rahi ho, toh only yeh shockingly beautiful teaser!!! Matlab hamare liye waiting period kya aur lamba karne wali ho?

Jaldi jaldi update post kar do, warna phir hume tumhe Arjun ke style mein samjhana padhega.....

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Posted: 5 months ago

Chapter 12


Riya was sitting on her desk lost in her thoughts. Samjun and Choree came there knowing that she will be tense.


Arjun : (keeping his hand on her shoulder) Riya...


She came out of her trance.


Riya : Huh... Haan Arjun.


Arjun : Pareshan ho?


Riya : Pareshan kaisa na hou?


Shree : Rii tu tension mat le hum haina.


Riya : Agar unhe sach pata chal gaya ki...


Sameer : Nahi kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega.


Riya : Mujhe dar lag raha hai.


Arjun : Jab tak hum log saath hai tab tak tumhe darne ki jarurat nahi hai.


Chotu : Haa chal ghar chalte hai Aai aur bache humari raha dekh rahe honge.


Riya nodded with a small smile. They all packed up and went out. Sameer and Choree in one car while Ariya in another. Arjun was silently driving while Riya was lost in her thoughts. Arjun looked at her and signed.


Arjun : Pucho Riya kya puchna hai.


Riya's trance broke and she looked at him startled.


Riya : huh.. ku.. kuch nahi puchna hai mujhe.


Arjun : Tumhara chehra dekh ke bata sakta hu ki tumhare dimaag mein sawal hai ki kuch aur.


Riya :(signed) Aaj sab Arhaan sab ko orders de raha tha and plan discuss kar raha the tab aapne kuch kyu nahi bola? Obviously Patan ki baat ko chod kar.


Arjun : Wahi kar raha hu jo tumne mujhe kaha tha.


Riya : Uhh.. main kuch samjhi nahi.


Arjun : Waqt.... Waqt de raha hu usse, mujhe hum dono ko. Aaj itni saalo baad hum dono aamne samne aaye hai apni asli pechan ke saath. Usse absorb hone waqt lagega.(with teary eyes) Aur sach kahu main abhi tak yeh maan hi nahi paya hu ki mere Aai baba ab iss duniya mein... (He sob a little) Aur mera chota sa Aru jisse main itna pyaar karta hu wo mujhse sabse jyada nafrat karta hai.


He couldn't take it anymore and started crying. Riya immediately applied the handbrake pull off their seatbelts. She hugged him and let him cry in her embrace. Seeing him breaking into pieces broke her heart too. After his sobbing subsided she opened the door of the car and got down. He followed her suit as he understood what she wanted and he was thankful for that. She took the driving seat and started driving after they secured the seatbelts.


When they reached home they saw that Sameer and Choree had already changed and we're playing with Soha and Arav. Soha and Arav were riding on Chotu's back while Sameer was holding them and Shree was busy making their video. The kids were giggling. A wide smile made its way on their faces. Soha saw them and shouted happily.


Soha : Rii baba....


Soha climbs down from Chotu's back and runs to them. Arjun thought that she was coming hug him but luck was not him side. She directly went and hugged Riya by her waist.


Soha : I missed you so much Rii.


Riya : (hugged her back) I missed you to my doll.


Arjun : (little jealous) Haan haan miss toh sirf Ri ko hi kiya, main hu kon jo mujhe miss kare.


As if on cue Arav called him.


Arav : Baba...


Arjun :(happily) Dekha sirf Arav hi mujhe pyaar karta hai.


Arjun went and lifted him up in his arms and kissed his cheek, earning a giggle and wet kiss on his cheek. All laughed looking at the exchange while Riya and Sameer felt relief as they watched Arjun laugh wholeheartedly after the traumatic revelation. After dinner Choree and Soha went to play video games while Riya was helping Aai in winding up the kitchen.


Arjun was making Arav sleep as the latter was not ready to leave his side. Sameer was standing in the gazebo lost in his thoughts. As Arjun entered the gazebo he saw him lost. He understood what he was thinking as he had gone through this feeling himself.


Arjun : Bata de usse.


Sam : (coming out of his trance) Huhh... What!!


Arjun : Maine kaha bata de usse.


Sam : (confused) Main kuch samjha nahi. Kise kya batadu?


Arjun : Tu sach mein itna bewakuf hai ki banane ki koshish kar raha hai? Main yeh bol raha hu ki Ayesha ko apne dil ki baat batade.


Sam : Mere dil mein kuch nahi hai. (Arjun narrowed his eyes and Sameer gave up) Ok haa but kya yeh abhi kehna thik hoga?


Arjun : (keeping his hand on his shoulder) Dekh bhai jab apne dil ki baat bolni ho toh sahi samay ka intezar nahi karna chahiye. Jis samay tujhe Teri feelings samjh aaye wahi sahi samay hota hai. Aur tu yeh mat soch ki agar tu usse abhi bata dega toh wo kamzor pad jayegi. Balki yeh soch agar tu usse batayega toh usse mein kitni himmat aayegi yeh soch kar ki koi hai jo uska intezaar kar raha hai. Koi hai jo usse bahut pyaar karta hai aur har waqt uske salamati ki dua mangta hai.


Sam : Dua? Bhai tu kabse yeh Dua aur prayers mein aapne laga?


Arjun : Tu yeh sab chod aur bata ki tu usse propose kar raha hai ki main usse propose kar du meri bhabhi banne ke liye.


Sam : (Joining his in front of him) Rehne de mere baap main hi usse kal subh jaa kar propose kar dunga. Haan but uske baad main usse apni family se milvauga.


Arjun : Bhai humein sirf 2 din ki chutti mili hai, agar tu Jaipur gaya aur wo bhi Ayesha ko lekar toh main bol raha hu mission khatam hone tak tum logo ko waha se hilne bhi nahi denge.


Sam : Stupid main Jaipur wali nahi meri yaha wali family ki baat kar raha hu.


Arjun made a 'o' face shape and then smile. They both hug each other. Unknown to them someone else was hearing their conversation. The person smiled and left from there.


Other side with Super six.


After reaching home, the girls went to freshen up while the boys ordered food as they knew that no one would be in the mood to cook something. After the girls, the boys went to freshen up. They were silently having dinner when Naina spoke.


Naina : Main kya soch rahi thi ki break mil hi gaya hai toh kyu na hum sab log Pune hoke aa gaye.


Sameer agreed to this idea. Swapree and mundit looked at each other and signed about something to each other.


Munna : Nahi bhabhi Aap aur Sameer hoke aao humara maan nahi hai.


The other three agreed with him.


Sam : Are aise kaise maan nahi hai. Aur tum logo ne aaj tak Pune ke liye kabhi mana nahi kiya hai. Aaj kya hua?


Pandit : Kuch nahi bhai humara mission itna pass aa gaya hai isliye apne khabriyo se aaj kal mein milne wale hai unse baat karni hai. Ab bhabhi itne din ke liye jane wali hai kuch samay unke saath bhi bita. Puri baraat kyu saath mein le kar jaa raha hai.


Munna : (teasing) Yaa tu itni jaldi bore ho gaye humari bhabhi se ke bhai tu kahi bhi uske saath akele nahi jaa sakta?


Sam : Teri toh.... Aaj tujhe nahi chodunga kamini.


Sameer stood up to beat Munna and as if on cue Munna got up and started running way from him. Others started laughing while Naina looked relieved.


Precap :-

Sameer proposes to Ayesha. Samaina travelling to Pune.


Edited by riyuuu33 - 5 months ago
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