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A strange mental asylum Part 2



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A strange mental asylum Part 2(ShreNal version)

Reyaansh was walking on the corridor looking at the 4 walls.

Suddenly he heard a screaming sound.He was shocked.He followed the sound and reached near a room.

Reyaansh:Somebody is here.But who?

He saw an antique cupboard near by and searched for the key there.But he could not find anything.He shook the cupboard.A key fell down from the top of the cupboard.Reyaansh took the key with a smile.

He opened the door and went inside the room.The room looked very strange.It was completely dark.

Suddenly he heard a voice.He was shocked.

"Doctor".

Reyaansh turned back in shock.He could'nt see her face in darkness.He took the torch from the pocket and switched it on.Then he looked at her face.He was shocked to see that middle aged woman.

She was Shubhavi.

Shubhavi:I am Shubhavi.Did anyone see you coming here?

Reyaansh:No.

Shubhavi:Good.Don't tell anyone that you saw me here.I have been kept in captive here.Pretend as if you did'nt see me here.Otherwise you will be in danger.

Reyaansh was shocked.

Shubhavi:Did you meet Nitya?

Reyaansh:Yes.

Shubhavi:She was not like this before.After coming here,her condition is very bad.Tej turned her like this.

Reyaansh:How did Nitya land up here?

Shubhavi told him about Nitya murdering her family members.Reyaansh was shocked.

Shubhavi held his hand and requested him:Please save Nitya from here.It's a request.

Reyaansh:I promise you that I will rescue her from here.

Shubhavi smiled emotionally.

Reyaansh walked back to his room after locking that room.

He remembered Tej talking about hypnotism and removing memories from his patients' minds.

Reyaansh:So that's what he did to Nitya.



Reyaansh went towards Nitya's cell and looked at the guard.

Reyaansh:Open the door.

Guard:But...

Reyaansh:I said..open.

The guard opened the door.Reyaansh went inside.Seeing him,Nitya raised her hands to push him.But Reyaansh held her hands stopping her from attacking him.

Reyaansh:I did not ask you anything.Then why are you attacking me?

She was silent.

Reyaansh:Trust me.I have no intention to hurt you.So don't be angry with me.Consider me as your friend.

Nitya was silent.But her face was calm.She looked at him softly.



Nitya got dressed in a neat dress.Her hair was combed and tied properly.It was all done by Rani.

Reyaansh:Rani,thank you very much for dressing up Nitya.

Rani smiled:Thank you Doctor.I was a beautician.I was missing my work after coming here.Because of you,I could do that again.Thanks to you doctor.

Reyaansh:Why did you stop working?Why are you here?

Rani became sad.

Rani:All are saying that I am mental.That's why I am here.

Reyaansh thought:Dr.Tej and Swetlana claim that they treat the patients as their family members.Then why the hell are they telling their patients that they are mad?

Dr.Tej came there.He was shocked to see Nitya there.

While Tej was looking at Nitya,Reyaansh said:Look at Nitya.Does'nt she look fresh now?Till now she was looking gloomy because of your wrong treatment.But now I am here.So she looks better now.

Tej was silent.He looked at Nitya emotionally and caressed her.Nitya did not react.

Rani whispered to Nitya:That doctor is really sweet.Right?

Nitya looked at Reyaansh sweetly.

Reyaansh smiled at her.Slowly Nitya smiled at him.




Tej was in his room.Swetlana sat close to him.

Swetlana:Tej,Dr.Reyaansh is trying to outsmart us.It's dangerous.If he finds out about Nitya,we will be caught.

Tej:Dr.Reyaansh cannot find anything about Nitya as she herself does'nt remember anything about herself.I took 5 years to erase her memories.So whatever he tries,he won't be able to bring her memories back.

Swetlana smirked.



Flash back...

Shubhavi visited the hospital with Nitya.

Shubhavi asked Tej:Doctor,do you remember Alekh Mittal?

Tej:Of course yes.He has helped me a lot financially to build my hospital.I owe to him.He helped me just because I was his school mate and the hospital was for a good purpose.I had told him that I am so grateful to him that he can approach me whenever he wants help from me.Where is Mr.Alekh?

Shubhavi said painfully:Recently he passed away.

Tej was shocked.

Tej:Oh..I am sorry.

Shubhavi:Nitya has mental illness since childhood after an accident.Though she survived the accident,her mental level changed.So she can't live alone despite of being very rich.We have no one to look after her. I don't know how long I will live.Alekhji told me that if anything happens to us,you can be trusted.So I request you to look after her like your own daughter.

Tej was shocked.

Shubhavi gave him a document.

Shubhavi:These are her property papers.All the wealth are in her name.

Tej:I promise you that I will look after Nitya like my own daughter.

Shubhavi smiled emotionally:Thank you Doctor.

Tej:Well...what is Nitya's exact mental condition?

Shubhavi shed tears.

Shubhavi:She killed her own family members.

Tej was shocked.

Shubhavi:Please don't refuse to take her responsibility because of her mental condition.It's a request.

Tej:Don't worry.I am a doctor who treats dangerous mental patients.So it's not an issue for me.I will cure Nitya also.

Shubhavi smiled:Thank you so much.

Tej smiled.



Present...

Tej:I took Nitya's responsibility only because she is rich.Now all her wealth is mine.

Swetlana:Ours...

Tej:Yes..ours.

They laughed.

Nitya was staring at her palms.

Reyaansh went near her.

Reyaansh:Why are you looking at her palms like this?

Nitya:My palms are full of blood.I don't know from where the blood is coming from.

Reyaansh looked at her palms.The hands had no blood stains on them.

Reyaansh:There is nothing on your hands.No blood at all.

Nitya said angrily:I told you that there is blood.

Reyaansh thought:Nitya won't believe it if I say so as her eyes are cheating her.

Reyaansh held her hand and led her to the washroom.He washed her hands.

Reyaansh:See...I washed your hands.Now they are clean.


Nitya looked at her palms.Then she smiled at him.

Nitya:Yes,now there is no blood.

Reyaansh smiled.



After some time,another man entered Nitya's room.

"Nitya",he called her.She looked at him.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part

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Continue soon 🤗😌🙏

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Hello thanks for the pm


Wonderful update

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Why is Shubhavi being held captive? She must know what is happening there.

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Nitya's memories have been erased, or have they? What are these people up to?

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Nitya is rich and these guys must want to control the money.

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Who is in Nitya's room? Is it Tej?

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Part 2


Fabulous and so Interesting Update

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A strange mental asylum Part 3

A strange mental asylum Part 3(ShreNal version)

Another man entered Nitya's room.

"Nitya",he called her.She looked at him.

He was another patient named Jeev who lives there.

Jeev:I am so happy that you are out of the cell.Now I can come and see you at any time.

Nitya was silent.

His face became dull.

Jeev:Even though i told you that I will come and meet you frequently why are you not even smiling?

Nitya felt bad seeing him sad.

She smiled at Jeev:Jeev!

Jeev looked at her.Seeing her smile at him,Jeev became happy and smiled at her.





Reyaansh was reading a diary.

Reyaansh remembered how he found this diary from Nitya's bag when he checked her bag.He did this when Nitya was busy with Rani.

He saw a photograph in the diary.

"I am Alekh Mittal.I had everything in my life.Wealth,a loving wife..but my only pain was my daughter's Nitya's mental illness post her accident.But still I am not depressed as I got my daughter alive even after a major accident.My brothers Andy..Giriraj and their wives Sumitra and Chitra hated Nitya and tagged her as a mental patient.They wanted me to throw out Nitya.But I never did it.My Nitya is my jewel".

From a far distance Reyaansh saw Jeev and Nitya smiling at each other.

They were cracking jokes and laughing too.

Reyaansh read some sentences in Alekh's diary.

"My Nitya will get her true love.Maybe he is the one who is meant for my daughter.Because mentally he is same as her".

Reyaansh looked at Nitya and Jeev emotionally.




Reyaansh was standing near the river thinking of Nitya.

Suddenly he felt someone trying to strangle him.He tried to remove those hands off his neck.But during that struggle he fell into the river.But he swam and came back to the shore.

Reyaansh:Who tried to kill me?I am sure that he is a goon sent by Dr.Tej to kill me.

Dr.Tej and Swetlana are scared of me.That's a good sign.

Reyaansh smirked.




Reyaansh was in his room.Surprisingly Nitya came to his room.He was surprised to see Nitya.

Reyaansh:Nitya!Why are you here?

Nitya:I felt like seeing you.

Reyaansh smiled:Why?

Nitya blushed:I ..I don't know.

He smiled.

Suddenly hearing the thunder sound,Nitya hugged him in fear.

He was smiled at her gesture and embraced her back.

Nitya:I feel scared.

Reyaansh:No need to be scared.It's only a thunder.

Slowly Nitya looked at him in relief.

Reyaansh took Alekh's photograph and showed it to her.

Reyaansh:Can you recognize him?

Nitya became emotional.

Nitya:Papa..

Reyaansh smiled.

Reyaansh:Actually what happened that day?Do you remember anything?I don't think you can kill anyone.I am sure that someone else did the murder.Do you remember who did those murders?

Nitya was silent.

Reyaansh:If you don't remember anything,it's ok.Anyways it's night.You sleep.

Reyaansh took her to her bedroom and laid her on the bed.

Reyaansh:Good night!

Nitya:Good night.

Nitya closed her eyes and slept.




Reyaansh was in his bedroom.To his shock,Swetlana came inside.

Reyaansh:Why are you here at midnight Swetlana?

Swetlana:I realized that you have not slept yet.Guess you have a sleepless night.So I thought to give you a company.

Swetlana went very close to him in a seductive manner pulling him closer to her.

Swetlana:I am willing to do anything for you.But in return just write a good report about our service in this mental asylum.

Reyaansh smiled at her.She smiled in a seductive manner taking his smile as a 'yes' to her demand.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Jeev likes Nitya? Does anyone know?

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